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Kaira : Perfectly Imperfect by Vrushy ( Chapter 10)

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Hello Everyone.
Chapter 10
Naira, Karthik and the baby.

Naira was in a kid’s dance work shop. She had come to unwind here, away from the reality of her life. She was going to get married soon with or without her consent and this was the best way she could spend her leftover freedom. The kids were ever charming, laughing, smiling and playing. She forgot herself in their joyous zeal.

The youngest of them all was sitting in her lap, the kid was a two years old. He had tagged along with his seven year old sister. Attached to her foot in a tight grip of arms. He wouldn’t let go even with his mother’s reprimands and dragging. The mother finally gave up trying. Naira assured the mother that, she would look after her baby.

The mother trusting her, gave the baby’s necessity bag to her. Reminding her of all the things in it.Milk, warm water, diapers and everything.

Right now, he forgot his sister and got attached to Naira.He was all cute with dazzling dimples and smiles. He was really small but he walked so fast. Here and there. Round and round in circle.

The kid’s name was Aaryan.

Little Aaryan now pulled at her dress. It was a half sleeved floral patterned one. A peach floral dress, which reached up to her knees, leaving her legs bare. She had straightened her tresses in a smooth shiny lines,Naira had let it fall all around her shoulders in waves.

There were lot of other volunteers like her, helping the kids with the dancing or babysitting the little ones. The hall vibrated with it. Her smiling eyes moved all along, moving and gliding.

Naira’s eyes widened a little, spotting and recognising.As her heart went into an overdrive, her breath shortened, her gaze went back to the black suited man, leaning his back on the wall, his eyes observing her through the distance of the little crowd.

It was five days, four nights, six hours, twenty five minutes and a whole lot of fifty seconds passed since she last saw him. Her mind reflected immediately a picture as a graphic video of their kiss.

Right now, he moved away from the wall and sauntered forward. Towards her. The throng of little crowd moved away from his space giving him way to walk. Even the people around him melted away, that was something mystical about him.

Naira was clutching Aaryan so tight over his waist that he started squirming and pulling at her hand. She looked down at him and loosened her hold, and hurried up, putting him on her right hip.

Aaryan stopped at his mumblings and stared at the approaching stranger in a fix of a gaze.

She saw him step forward into her space.

Naira was finding it hard to figure him out.

That’s when he said something which made her head jerk back.

“We need to grab our rings.”He whispered down at her, his gaze sliding all over her face, and travelled to look at Aaryan in her arms.

Grab what ?!! Rings, what ?!!

“What rings ?!!” She asked confused, her both eyebrows raised up.

He tilted his head to the side.

“Our engagement rings.”He muttered down at her, a little amused.

A little gasp escaped her lips. Engagement rings ?!! Their engagement rings.

No, hello. No,hi. No, how are you.No, enquiry about her well being. No, telling her that she looked nice. No, smile. No, endearing word. Just straight out say what you want and get out.But what else could she expect from him.

His brows furrowed as his lips moved. He was saying something. Naira shook her mind and came back to consciousness.

“What ?!!”She asked stupidly.

He sighed down at her.

“We need to leave. Right now.”He muttered, annoyed.

“But I can’t come.”She let out the words more dumbly.

His brows furrowed again.

“Why ?!!” He asked.

”I’m baby sitting him.”She mumbled.

Her gaze went back to his, but her eyes sharpened and frowned when she saw Karthik , her soon to be a fiancé stare at Aaryan.

“You are coming with me. Right now.”He clipped, his gaze sharpening on Aaryan again.

Naira sighed heavily. Of course he would order her around. If she wouldn’t agree with him, a huge scene he would create.

“Fine.”She fumed, and moved Aaryan towards him from her arms.

”Hold him a second. I will grab his bag.”She muttered annoyed.

Aaryan, the little intelligent fellow already knowing that there is some connection between them, trustingly spread his arms around Karthik, waiting for him to hold him.

Naira would have laughed at Karthik’s comical frozen figure looking at Aaryan in a kind of a horror.

“What do I do with it ?!!”He asked, looking bewildered.

Naira’s anger rose up.

“Just hold him.”She thrust Aaryan in his arms.

”And his name is Aaryan and not an ‘it’.”She muttered on fuming and turned around.

She walked to the table and grabbed his bag, and just as she turned around, her gaze froze on the two of them. Karthik was staring at Aaryan in a stance, and Aaryan was looking back at him just as curious, in a wide eyed stare.

God knows how was she going to deal with two adorable but head strong boys at a same time.

Precap : The baby sitting factor.
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Can’t believe that its already the 10th Chapter of this FF. Thanks to all of you for loving and supporting me. I know that many of you didn’t like this FF as compared to my previous one but I am trying to make it more interesting.

Most of you guys might not realize this, but you guys are the reason I write. I know everyone’s busy and most of you are stuck with the boards, but it means a lot when you make time to at least comment a single word.

When I finished “Yaha waha hai tu” I had received immense amount of love. So, I thought I’ll be more confident with my next piece of work, but it was the exact opposite. It really matters to me when you put forth suggestions or appreciation.

Frankly, I was really not in the mood to continue, and I even forgot the storyline. I had decided to quit.But then there were some of you who asked me about when am I going to write another Chapter of this FF. It really touched my heart and I realised that some of you really want to read this story. Therefore, I decided to continue with it.

I am sorry for such a long and boring author’s note which had nothing to do with the story or the plot but then I was just so overwhelmed of completing 10 chapters of one more FF of mine. Again thanks a lot to all of you and love you all. You all mean a lot to me.

Do comment. Keep smiling. Keep watching Yrkkh !!

55 Comments
  1. Dude nice plot…..and storyline….I’m loving it….I’m waiting for you next update…….and love you lots..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next Chapter soon.
      Love you too !!

  2. Ekta23

    Vrushy I know this is the first time I am commenting on ur story ….But trust me girl the only thing that brought me here was ur ff …I eagerly wait for ur chapter to be posted the entire day and now also I know u won’t believe but I logged in and read ur update first and then went through the response on my ff …So all in all I want to say is keep writing …My day is incomplete without ur ff 😘

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked my work.
      Also thanks for commenting. It means a lot to me.
      Which FF do you write ?!! Do tell. Even I would love to read your work.
      Thanks again for all the appreciation.

      1. Ekta23

        The girl he never noticed

      2. Vrushy

        I will surely read it !!

  3. Yeah..super update.
    Totally love it , Vrushy
    Seriously cant wait for nxt chapter and im becoming greedy asking for more..
    Will be waiting patiently..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Don’t worry, I won’t make you wait for too long.
      Will post the next Chapter soon !!

  4. Hi vrushy I am really for not commenting in u r new ff….I was busy in work….today I read all the episodes of this ff….and u done a great job…. don’t loose hope….we all are here to encourage u…..so just continue the ff…..and I m eagerly waiting for u r next episode…… please update soon

    1. Vrushy

      Hii Rishika.
      No worries. I was just feeling bad due to less number of comments.
      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked my work.
      Yeah, its because of readers like you that I still writting it.
      Will post the next Chapter soon !!

  5. Vinni05

    Firstly congrats on ur 10 chapter
    It was really nyc ff I’m loving & it’s different just loved it
    Eagerly waiting for next chapter dear

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next Chapter soon.

  6. u wrote very well..infact it’s really superb..
    bas thoda Hindi m bhi likhoge to or BHT jada acha lagega..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Actually my hindi is not that good therefore I prefer to write in english !!

      1. BHT itni jada HM nhi smjh pate..bt v luv ur writing.. thoda asaan language m likhna ab plzzz

  7. Congraulation Vrushy…for the 10 chapters…
    I am happy that our comments encourage you…
    Today’s episode was…well…cute…really cute….
    I loved the part where Karthik calles Aryan it…ahahhaah
    I was thinking of a phrase to describe Karthik…and the first phrase that came in my head was….control freak…
    Overall it was amazing..
    Keep writing
    Love you

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Yeah, your comments provide a great amount of motivation.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Well yeah, the phrase given by you is perfect for Karthik.
      Yup, will keep writing.
      Love you too !!

  8. Come on vrushy who told you we didn’t like it??
    It’s awesome!!
    And you know what you’re getting better day by day!!!
    In fact you are the best!!
    And this FF is the best!!!
    Plz post the next episode soon just can’t wait!!!

    1. Vrushy

      The less response hinted that many of my previous readers didn’t like this story.
      Thank you for your appreciation 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Yup, will post next Chapter soon !!

  9. I hate dis stupid shivangi

    1. Vrushy

      Please don’t show your hatered here. Not the right place !!

  10. I really like this
    When r u updating the next one
    Update soon 😘😘👍😁😜

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next Chapter soon.

  11. Reyaa

    Nice one … I just read all parts n love them continue ur work girl u r too good best of luck

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad thag you liked it.
      Even your FF is awsome !!

      1. Reyaa

        Thanks… I will update mine on Sunday pls do read

      2. Vrushy

        Yup, will surely read it.

  12. hi vrushy
    the chapter was awesomeeeeee but plzz we want long chapters plzzz if u can plzzz dont mindd.this chapter was small all the others was long
    plzz upload the other chapter fast cant wait more u are going awesomeeeeee seriously mind blowing and fantastic
    lets hope the best

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Actually nowadays I am writting another new FF as well so I get less time for this one but will try to make the chapters longer.
      Yup, will post next Chapter soon.
      Thanks again for all the love and appreciation !!

  13. Tvfan1

    Sorry for not commenting in the last few chapters as I was busy with work..as usual..
    I will be free after 9th.
    I did read then though
    Congrats on 10 th episode!!!!!
    Do post more often ad the track is soo interesting now

    Aryan is soo cute…

    Anyway don’t worry about others. U carry on..Becoz we r with u..from the beginning to the end!!

    P.S- is Yrkkh the only show u Watch currently?
    Not counting the ones uve quitted!!

    1. Vrushy

      No worries. I am glad that yoh are back.
      All the best for your exams. Do well and make us proud.
      Thanks for your appreciation 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Yup, its because of readers like you that I am still writtinv this story.
      Ps : I watch behadh, Yrkkh and ishqbaaz.

  14. congratulations for 10 chapter…..I don’t know about others but I love it as I love your previous ff yaha waha hai tu….this is complete different love story of kaira….jaise mai ek expect kar rahi thi n u r writing this…u r my favorite….don’t loose hopes …..I would really like to read more…keep writing…..

    btw chappy was awesome…
    eagerly want to know how kaira will done their engagement shopping with cutie aaryan…update soon

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked my work. Also thanks for liking ” Yaha waha hai tu”.
      Your comment means a lot to me.
      Yup, will post next Chapter soon which includes their shopping !!

  15. Lasyashree.10

    Great one vrushy!!! Loved it dear good one ☝️

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you hales 🙂
      Glad that you liked it !!

      1. Lasyashree.10

        Vrushy I’m lasya not hales di😂

      2. Vrushy

        Sorry lasya 😛 😛 😛

  16. First I want to apologise for not commenting yet😔as I had read all the chappies of this FF bt after reading ur author’s note I must say plz don’t stop it
    I’m luving this FF❤. it’s not less than the last one it’s just more Than it. I’m enjoying it and as always EGARLEY waiting for the next one😊☺

    1. Vrushy

      No need to apologise.
      Thank you for the appreciation 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Also thanks for commenting.
      Yup, will post next Chapter soon !!

  17. Aadi

    Hi di !
    Ur ff is as usual awesome leaving me mesmerized with the scenes and every attempt to applause look smaller !
    Sorry for not being able to comment in many chapters .

    1. Vrushy

      Hii aadi.
      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Your comment means a lot to me.
      No worries. No need to apologise !!

  18. Firstly, congrats for the 10th episode. Loved each and every episode till this.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.

  19. Fenil

    Simply Superb Chapter.
    Congrats Finally Ur ff reached to 2 Digits
    I don’t want say anything becoz u already know Vrushy .

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Love you, fenil !!

  20. Also, do not lose hope. Your ff is the best among all. I not only like this ff, but love it. I eagerly wait for its every episode. Please do continue it. Do not even think of stopping it. Wish this reaches 50 episodes and more.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you for the appreciation 🙂

  21. Good one

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

  22. Amazing writing 👌🏽

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

  23. Hales

    Vrushy! Ur author’s note always tells us about how u feel about ur readers so its never ever boring….n ur this ff has a diff story n a unique one indeed thts the best part!
    I can really imagine kartik like this n trust me imagining him like this makes him more tempting n handsome!
    Nyc story line to start a new ff!
    Today’s chapter was so cute …cant wait for the next where a two year old brings out the innocence in kartik infront of naira😀😉
    U r doing gr8 …just keep it up ….m with u 😘😘

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you hales 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Your comment means a lot to me.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank You 🙂

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