kahin Teri khamoshiyan jeet na jaaye pyaar se episode-14 (second last episode)

Hello ppl…frankly speaking…m a bit dissapointed…my last epi was d third last epi….nd I expected more comments….but its fine…plz comment after reading this.. This one nd next one r vry vry close to my heart…so plz plz comment…

A week has passed….so its d marriage day for Shravan nd Suman….
A church is shown….Shravan is waiting wid d priest..for Suman to arrive….Shravan is looking damn hot …..in black tuxedo..his smile providing him his usual charm…..his perfect physique is as usual attracting….any lady can fall on her knees for his charm nd personality…..
finally d lady for whom he fell for arrives..looking no less gorgeous than a fairy….she is wearing a white gown…sleeveless…it is plain except d beautiful silver neck work….it is long…nd is flowing behind her as she walks….she has done her hair in a stylish bun…letting some of her curls fall down to her face….her dark eyes r seen through d netted veil that covers them…nd her head….she is carrying a bouquet of beautiful lilies in her hands…which r covered wid long white gloves…..she is looking like an angel…
Suman nd Shravan both r lost in each other…..when finally priest breaks their eyelock….
Priest: So bride nd groom r here…so let us start wid d marriage ceremony….
Shravan nd Suman say together: Yes
So d marriage ceremony begins….
They exchange vows happily…promising each other that they will always be there for d other…as always….in happiness….in sadness….
Then they exchange rings happily….smiling at each other…coz they know that now they r only each other’s nd nobody can separate them….
Then they come closer for a Kiss….nd finally they let go of all that they had held in these days…they let themselves feel each others lips….Shravan has picked Suman in his arms….nd is half hugging her just their faces r inches away frim each other’s….he keeps looking at her lovingly even after d kiss….he feels like he has held d world in his arms….how happy they both r ….in each other’s company…finally they both hve found d partners who complete them….they both hve found their better halves….
Finally their marriage is complete…d priest blesses them…they can’t stop looking at each other…they can’t let go each other’s hand….They start to leave d church…when suddenly Suman says: Hey u go ahead…I m just coming in a moment….
Shravan: Hey…I just got u…nd now u want me to leave u?
Suman: Nothing like that…just go…I will come in five minutes…wait outside….
Shravan: Ok wifey…
They both smile at each other as shravan goes from there….
Now Suman is alone….she wanted to be alone for some time…wid God… She wanted to thank him for everything…..so she goes near Him…nd says
Suman: Oh God… I couldn’t hve asked for more from u…u gave me all I could ever get….u gave me another life…..u gave me Shravan…I love him so so much….but I guess I can never love him as much as he loves me….he has always been there for me….saving me from all dangers….I promise to u…that even I will never leave his side…nd protect him from all I can….

Meanwhile…shravan is standing outside d church…..he is busy on his phone…..he doesn’t notice someone….who is standing near him..he has his back towards him ..he is wid a blanket covering him….only his eyes can be seen….d guy is moving towards shravan…slowly…nd quietly…
Suman comes out nd sees that guy coming towards Shravan….she suddenly sees a knife is which he is hiding under d blanket…she at once understands who he is….she knows wat he is here for….but she wouldn’t let that happen….d guy is coming close to Shravan…. Suman recalls all their moments….d promise which she just made…she knows she cannot shout shravan’s name…otherwise d guy would just finish his work…he is too close to Shravan ….so she knows that she has to do it….she closes her eyes….nd all d memories flash before them…d moments wid Shravan…their marriage….their love …..then she starts running towards him…wid all might she can find…tears rolling down her cheeks….d guys also starts running….Shravan turns around to check where d sound came from….he sees d guys…his knife out….he moves his hand to stab Shravan…. Shravan gets ready to take d blow…..when suddenly…he sees d knife stabbing his life wid his own eyes……Suman has come in between….d knife in d her stomach…d red blood spreading over her white dress….meanwhile d blanket falls from d guys face…he is none other than Rohit…holding d knife wid Suman’s blood in his hand…he starts to run….Shravan stands to chase him…when Suman calls out his name…she starts to fall…but Shravan holds her…nd sits on d ground wid her head in his lap…..tears in his eyes….
Shravan: Suman…y did u do this….y…..nothing will happen to u…..look at me…nothing will happen to u….we can’t let silence win over our love….we can’t let death win over our love….u understand…..
Suman whispers slowly…Shravan brings his face close….
Suman: I told…I will love u till eternity…no matter what….but I don’t want to c u crying in my last moments….
Shravan shakes his head at this…
Shravan: What r u saying…u r not going to leave me…u r not going anywhere u understand…u r my life…u can’t leave me….
Suman: How less time we got….to love ….to show our love….but don’t worry…I will be wid u forever….
Shravan nods…..nd holds her close….her face in his hands..when she whispers…..looking into his eyes…while he stares in her dark ones….
Suman: Forever…
Shravan: Forever…..

I know many of u hve many questions to ask me….but I would request u to wait for d next epi…I think u will get most of d ansss

47 comments

  1. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    OMG !!!!! Fully power pack ep wid emotions nd romance 😊😊 … I m very much waiting for the next part …. nd after ending this ff plzzzz start a new one bcz u r tooooooooooooo guddd dear WS … nd m pretty sure that u won’t let suman die …. henaa !!! …
    Post ASAP ASAP… eaaaaaaaaagerly waitinggggggg … πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow wo <3 weird sis yr…!! It WS awesome seriously no words to explain how much I loved it……!! <3 <3 jis tarhaan tum ne un ke looks ko define Kia OMG I can imagine in my mind evrything n guess wat it's amazing….!!
    Ur imagination is beyond d world yr…!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Hahahah I knw sumo ko kuch nai hoga bs m depretly waiting fr last ep…!!
    Bs yr tumhari tareeef Mai words khatam ho gai is liay bs yahi kahooon gi ke god bless u n keeps u happy always…!!! πŸ˜€ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€
    Plzz plz plzz post ASAP ASAP ASAP.!!!!!!!! <3
    Love u dear..!

  3. Anamika

    M a bit emotional yr… So won’t say much …..hope sumo will not die…. I r an awesome writer… Come back with a new oneπŸ˜”πŸ˜˜

  4. sona

    Sis…it was so..emotional….I loved it..☺☺
    U did a great job..I can see it in the way u described the things..story..☺☺☺😍😍😍
    Love u yaar..
    Pls..post the next one soon..
    Its a request☺☺☺

  5. Shiny

    Yaar i am dumbstruck…d way u explained each other was just awsm..each n every bit can b imagined…n it ended in an emotional way….i hope she doesn’t die…anyway i am desperately waiting for next episode

  6. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    hi WS… i was shoked a lotttt….
    so sad fr shraman… bahut hi emotional epi tha…. reallyyyy….
    post nxt epi asap….

  7. Nandu

    Oh god di! After reading ur xommenta to read ur title and then read the last two lines as well again and i understood wht u meant. Fantabulous. Kya dimaag lagaya hai apne – kahi teri khamoshiyan jeet na jaye pyaar se aur fir wo forever wala part aur jaha tak i understood it apke title mai khamoshiyaan kahi marne ke silence ke liye toa nhi hai. Keep writing. Ur awesome. Lots of love and yes this epi was indeed emotinal and us close to even my heart. Ooops zada lamba ho gaya. Keep writing post the next part. Lots of love and wishes for you.

    • Nandu

      And yes no worries u will definetely get loads of comments. Dont feel sad for it and yes remember ki is sitenpe there are lots and lots and lots of silent readers. So dont be sad. Keep posting regularly.love

      • Nandu

        Call me nandini. Wink
        Thanks sab daily soaps ki badaulat hai. Me too love u lots and lots. And yes see this time some SR have even commentes. See my wishes cane true. Joking. So dont feel disheartened for such a petty issue, ok di? U will definetely get lots and lots if comments. And yes if i understood it well then is sumo gonna die? Keep writin.

  8. pretty preeti

    Hey WS its me preeti what an emotional epi I m just mad after reading it it was really a sweet one meri sumo Bach jayegi ki nhi I wanted to know
    Post soon
    Felling bad that it was second last epi but I loved it very very much

  9. Luv ur ff

    Okkkk so i,m cmntng for first time i knw i shold cmnt but…..
    First of all i wanted to tell that ur tittle is amazing and now i,m dieing to knw what will happen next so plzzzz post soon……

    And u must knw tht there are many sileent readers who read ur ff but cant cmnt lyk me :-/ so never get dis hearted by less cmnts i lv ur ff ur writing is amazing plzzz comeback soon with new ff πŸ™‚

  10. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Arre yr first of all so sorry for being late….I was soo busy with studies I read it earlier but was not able to comment u r just out of the world yr.. The way u portrayed the scenes it was amazing just fabulous I was left spell bound and the last scene uff almost got tears in my eyes
    Yes u r right so many questions r there in my mind but no worries I will wait for the next episode
    But yr it’s a request don’t make it a sad ending dear plz it’s a request otherwise the choice is urs only dear love u loads
    P.S this is from sumo di also

  11. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    Well wat to say.. I followed dis story from bigining n m very much attached to it.. Dis part was emotional .. I hope it has a happy ending … N plz post ur last ep after 24 .. I ll be free till den.. Coz I don’t wanna miss d last part.. Okay?

  12. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    knock knock may i come in???? πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

    epi was superb fantastic out of the world but last part left me confused i,m not able to make out any thing i,ll just hope for happy ending…
    Fingers crossed
    πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜›
    and what to say abt ur description power its amazing u describe everything from strt to end so beautifully πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ just loved it post last epi soon

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh thank you so so much angel…for taking out time nd reading it for me….don’t worry..ur confusion will get over in d next epi…I will post a after 24th…when sumo becomes free…!!
      πŸ™‚

  13. Pri

    Ur ff was treat to read it was awsome from start to end waiting for last epi post soon

    Keep writing!!!!!!!!

  14. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Hey ws how r u???
    Sorry for replying u here i can only read the msg not reply becoz of my stupid cell… Anyways let it be..
    Thing is i,m not seem to be fully free till oct like these 2 mnths headache πŸ™ so plz dont delay ur epi post it soon i,ll surely read and cmnt as soon as i,ll get some time do send me link plz πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    lots of love…..

    Love u all πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • WeirdSister

      |Author

      Oh angel Thank you so much for cooperating…. Luv u too…I will definetly send u d link…don’t worry…all d best..!!
      πŸ™‚

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