kahin Teri khamoshiyan jeet na jaaye pyaar se episode-12

Hey its me weirdsister…wid d 12th epi….I wanted to post it on a weekend where morend more ppl could read it…but I couldn’t wait…so here I m…plz don’t make me regret it…nd comment…!! Nd plz give ur suggestions abt when do u want me to post d next epi….

A new day starts for Shravan nd Suman…after a night full of dreams…now is d time to change them into reality….
Suman has just come out after bath….when her phone rings…..its Shravan…. A smile plays on her lips….

Suman: Good morning… Mr. Malhotra…
Shravan: Good morning Ms. Kashyap… What a pleasant day it is…I m sure d night would be even more beautiful….I was thinking that y not enjoy d beauty together….I want to meet u at night…address I will send it to u….no ifs nd buts…nd yeah…plz check ur shopping bags..u will find something which u will think is not urs….but plz wear that nd come….I will wait for u….
Before Suman could speak anything…Shravan cut d phone….
Suman: What a strange person this man is…didn’t even wait for my reply….anyway let’s check… What is there in my shopping bag which he wants me to wear….
She goes in her room nd checks her bag…nd finds a gift inside it…she takes it out…there’s a card stuck to it….which reads
‘ What lies beneath is very simple…but I hve learnt that simplicity is d new beauty….wear it nd make it look more elegant…’
Suman is surprised nd wonders..when did Shravan do all this….she opens it nd finds a d same black dress…which she liked at d mall…with it is a small heart shaped pendant….
Suman: Not bad Mr. Malhotra…..

Finally d night has arrived…D sky is black….nd d moon shines in it….there’s a certain beauty in d darkness…a certain melody in d silence….

Suman arrives at d address given by Shravan…wearing d same black dress nd d pendant around her neck…her heart shaped silver earrings r matching wid d pendant…she has done her hair in a beautiful loose braid….giving her a perfect look…..

She entered place…it was dark….then she saw a spotlight fall ten metres ahead of her….she walked up till there….then she looks around but doesn’t not find anyone….she turns to go…..then she hears a voice…a voice which she was longing to hear….she hears Shravan’s voice….

Shravan: D day when I met u…..
It seemed like my life came back to me….
From the time I laid my eyes on u….that was all they wanted to c…..
I never imagined that there could be a girl who could mean my life to me….u became that girl….u made me feel alive….ur eyes…they always fascinated me…now I know y…they r so deep…that it feels I can get lost in them forever…nd never come back….U taught me abt d value of love….what it means to fear losing somebody….I learnt that when I thought I’d loose u forever….I held u so tightly.. I was not ready to let u go….coz I feared that if I loose u…I’d loose myself..coz u r my life….I did…nd will always protect u from all I can…..don’t thing I m someone great…I m a selfish person….. I m doing this for myself….coz what would be my life without u…..when I can’t c that smile of urs….when I cannot hold that hand of urs…when I cannot feel that scent of urs….when I can’t look into those eyes of urs….which mean d world to me….Ms. Suman kashyap….

Suman sees Shravan walking towards her….he is wearing black pants….white shirt nd black blazer….he is coming closer to her…..finally he stands in front of her….

Shravan: I really like ur surname….Kashyap…its really classy u know….but I think…Malhotra suits u better….So Ms. Suman Kashyap…y not change d surname to Malhotra

He kneels down… Nd holds out a beautiful diamond ring….heart shaped…just like her pendant

Shravan: Will u marry me…? I love u more than u can imagine… More than u can think of…or more than u can even dream of…I loved u…I love u…nd I will always keep loving u……

Suman has listened all this…she couldn’t be happier…Finally her life is complete….Finally she is complete….

Suman: Mr. Malhotra… U said so much…now I m a lawyer…give me a chance to counterattack….
I love u nd I always will..till eternity…..I always thought that there could be no one who could hve loved me more than my parents… But I guess I m wrong….u love me equally…or even more…words would be too less to describe… How grateful I m to u..for giving my life back to me….for making me complete…for bearing my pain wid me……for being there for me…always….protecting me from all u could….Life is so precious…coz we hve only one…nd I always wanted to live it wid a person….who would make it worth it….nd today I guess I hve found that person…..
She smiles….

Shravan: So what’s ur answer my love…?
Suman: Of course yes…
Shravan makes her wear d ring….nd gets up….
Suddenly d platform on which they were standing…starts moving up…Suman is disbalanced by d sudden movement….she is about to fall..when Shravan holds…nd brings her close to him….her hands on his chest….his face leaning towards her….

Shravan: I just now told.. That I will always protect u from all I can…..

There’s a shower of rose petals over them…Suman looks up delighted…..they both hug…enjoying each others company….they r at a some height….. When suddenly d ground lights up…not d whole ground but only some places…nd finally Suman makes out that they r lights…nd something is written…’ I love u’….in d darkness..d words shine beautifully….Suman looks up at Shravan…who is smiling….
Suman: I love u too….!
Nd stands on her toes nd lands a kiss on Shravan’s cheek….!
Shravan: This is not fair….I did so much…nd u r kissing me on d cheek….I want a kiss here…
Shravan puts a finger on his lips….nd acts to be upset….
Suman: U hve to wait for that Mr. Malhotra….
Shravan still looks upset….
Suman: Shravan…look here…OK tell me anything else…I will do that for u….
Shravan: Promise?
Suman: Yes…promise….
Shravan: I want to dance to wid u…now….
Suman: Now…here? there’s no music….
Suddenly a piano starts playing…Suman looks at Shravan surprised….
Shravan: What do u think…I hve planned for everything ‘ Sweetheart’

Shravan asks for Suman’s hand….she gives it to him…he puts his another hand on her waist…nd she puts her hand on his shoulder….they start dancing…. They keep staring in each other’s eyes….coz in them they c each other’s love….

44 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    OMG!!!! I guess the best love confession ever…so emotional, so romantic, I mean what not? Just too glad u r back and love this ff forever??

  2. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    sooo romantic yarr…. awwwww
    really loved it yaarrrrr.,..
    shravan’s lines,were jst out of d wrld…..
    n so were d lines of suman…. special clap fr d dialogues….. keep wrtng….

  3. Nandu

    Awesome weirdsister. And thanks ki you posted it today instead of weekend. So no regrets! You surely a beautiful writer.

  4. Anamika

    ???I had tears in my eyes on shravu’s confession …… u described it so …… dun have the word to explain …. jus mindblowing…… ??

  5. Marie

    |Registered Member

    OMG….! πŸ˜€ u were asking dat if anyone want u to continue..??
    Ofcourse yr….!!!!! πŸ˜€ it’s was fantastic n lovely ep….!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    U r out of d world πŸ˜€ !! I mean not alien hahhahah I mean ur imagination is out of d world dear…!! Loved it to d core….
    Or haan…plzzzzz post next ep ASAP ASAP !!
    Take care…

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Awwww ???? … what a romantic ep dear … I can clearly imagine all the things that u described … it’s just fab dear ??? … I m short of words .. nd the proposal… OMG .. u portrayed everything sooooooo nicely… really me apki fan ho gyi hun … very very nice .. ???

  7. Harshitha

    Okay this is the first time since I am commenting so of course u won’t know but I have been reading ur story from time u started it , it is so amazing like seriously I mean it just one of the best stories pls don’t stop keep continuing u did a great job ??????☺️

  8. sona

    Sis…u rocked..amazing dialogues..I loved each and evryline..u wrote it so…perfectly…I just wana..give u a hug..to apploud u fir u huge success in writing ffs..
    Really ..yaar loved it☺☺☺??????

  9. sona

    Sis…u rocked..amazing dialogues..I loved each and evryline..u wrote it so…perfectly…I just wana..give u a hug..to apploud u for ur huge success in writing such a beautiful lovely..ffs..
    Really ..yaar loved it☺☺☺??????

  10. Naina

    Wow wow wow too good what a confession amazing ……… U r really great weirdsister….hey by the way whats ur real name i dont think weirdsister is a name?????????? is it???????????

  11. Naina

    Wow wow wow amazing yar too good what a confession i just love it…….u r great weirdsister….by the way what’s ur real name????? I don’t think weirdsister is a name ?????? is it???? ???????

  12. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Uff uff uff WS do I need to say anything… All have already said everything… First of all sorry for being late I was not at home tilllm evening and when I came the site was not working….
    I loved it yr mujhe yeh batao ki kaunsi dictionary se words dhoond ke laati ho…I mean such amazing words I have always said and will say again that u r just amazing I loved it to the core dear.. Mazza aa gya padh ke….yr thoda precap bhi de diya kari. Itna suspense nhi rakhte logon ko neend nhi aati..
    I m very sad that the episode ended I never wanted it to end….soo cute the dialogues shravan said were amazing u r mind blowing dear…keep it up…love u loads??

  13. Nazia

    Wowwww!!!!!! Loved it. Shravan is sooo naughty! Pata nahi serial mein esa kaab hoga! But tumne jo sab likha wo imagine karke hi kitna romantic lagta hai! Amazing!!!!

  14. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Well well as khushi said that there is nothing reaming to say becoz everyone has already said everything……

    I,ll just say that hats off yar u just nalied it….epi was out of world the dailogues the emotions amazing ws….
    Hahahaha i love sharvan way of purpose that kyshp is good but malhothra is better…u simply rocked it……

    And sorry for being late yesterday website was off and today my evo is not working πŸ™

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