kahin Teri khamoshiyan jeet na jaaye pyaar se episode-11

Hello ppl…this is epi 11…many ppl hve commented that I shouldn’t end it so soon….in 15 epis…but story demands it…if possible I will extend it to 1 or 2 more epis…but till then..keep commenting…

Shravan nd Suman.. Proceed to hve their breakfast…

Suman: Oh wow great…so everything is ready….let’s go nd hve some food…I m really dying of hunger…..
Shravan is interrupted in his thoughts….
Shravan: Yaah….Yaah let’s go…
They both get seated at d dining table….nd start having d food….
Suman: Wow….amazing Shravan… I never knew u could cook so well…..! Not bad huh…
Shravan smiles at her…..
They both finish their food….
Suman: So what’s ur plan for d day…?
Shravan: Nothing much…I really dunno wat will I be doing at home….probably studying d cases…
Suman: Today u don’t hve to go to work?
Shravan: Today is Sunday…stupid girl…
Suman: Oh I totally forgot…. So y don’t u stay back….?
Shravan: Wat is ur plan..?
He asks naughtily….
Suman hits him wid a pillow….
Suman: Friends don’t need a plan….!
Shravan: Ok..I will stay back…anyway I do not wish to leave u alone….u keep doing something to hurt urself…
Suman: Yaah Yaah I get it…no need to remind me again n again….

They both sit down on d couch….
Suman: OK let’s make a plan for d day….
Shravan: I guess…just now someone told…friends don’t need a plan….
Suman: Who said….I never did….anyway…so how do u wanna spend d day?
Shravan thinks: This girl…she will never accept her mistake….

They both make their plan for d day….
They start by going shopping nd planning to do lunch outside….
They both r at a mall….trying different clothes….
Shravan moves around….nd sees a beautiful black dress….frock style…..plain…simple…but it has its own elegance…just like Suman…. He moves towards d dress to hve a closer look….he thinks that it will definitely suit Suman…..
He goes to Suman wid d dress…..
Shravan: Hey Suman… Y don’t u try this one….this would look gorgeous on u….
Suman hesitates but finally agrees…
Suman comes out wearing it…Shravan had guessed right….it was plain… simple….but Suman made it look elegant…..
Shravan: Perfect….u look gorgeous….come I will buy it for u….
Suman: No….u will not buy.. I will
Shravan: Y do u think I brought this dress for u…of course I will buy it for u…
Suman: Then leave it…I don’t want it…
Shravan is angry… But he buys it without Suman knowing it…..
They both shop for a while….nd hve their food….

They r back at Suman’s place….they r sitting on d couch….nd flipping through d TV channels….when suddenly Shravan says….
Shravan: Hey look tthere’s a horror movie starting in 5 mins….let’s get everything ready….
He goes to switch off d lights…nd get popcorn which they bought at d mall..
Suman: can we watch something else…I don’t like horror movies….
Shravan: U don’t like…or u r scared…?
Suman tries to hide her fear…
Suman: No no nothing like that….I was just suggesting…let us watch…..

The movie starts….after some time…a very frightening scene comes….Suman screams….nd hugs Shravan from side….her head resting on his shoulders…her hand on his chest….she looks up to find Shravan looking down at her….their faces r just inches away…Suman is lost into those brown eyes of Shravan… Nd Shravan is also lost in those dark ones…

After a while…their eye lock is broken when d commercials come up on d TV…
Shravan starts laughing….: Oh my god Suman….so u r scared of horror movies…now I know….
Suman: No no…nothing like that….it was just that…that scene was a bit disgusting….
Shravan: Really….?..anyway its fine…u can hold my hand if u wish too….after all if u get heart attack or something…d blame will come on me…..
Suman : No need…I m fine….
Once d movie starts….Suman quietly slips her hand over Shravan’s….Shravan notices this nd smiles….their fingers r intertwined….
Nd so r their hearts….both of them know…wat place d other holds in their life….its just that…they can’t look into each others eyes nd say so….from d time they met each other….its like…their lives changed….they learnt to dream nd believe in them…hoping that one day….they will come true…hoping that one day…they will accept their feelings for each other…..

Suman nd Shravan r at their own houses…remembering d day which they spent wid each other….recalling every moment….they both look at d pictures they clicked….d moments they tried to capture….but still it wasn’t enough…..
They both r thinking about each other….
Shravan: Yesterday…when I thought I’d loose her forever…I don’t know y…but I felt like my heart ached to c that smile of hers..when I first met her…I tried to find d answers to my questions….about y my heart skipped a beat..when I saw her….y I felt d pain when she got hurt….. Y I felt that I had a connection wid her…..y it seemed like she was that moon of my darkness….I think I hve got d answers now….d fear of loosing her has told me wat place she holds in my life….she is my life….I love her..I love her so much…that I just can’t afford to loose her…..tomorrow is d day…when I will c I’m those dark eyes…nd tell what I feel for her…

Suman: Shravan Malhotra…u r more than a friend in my life….when I try to look into those eyes of urs….I c something more than care….I c love….nd I know u love me…maybe u hve not realised it yet…but I hve…nd I love u equally…d comfort which I find when I m wid u….d assurance I get when I hold that hand of urs….I hve realised that d love which I c in ur eyes…is d reflection of mine….. I love u…nd I always will..no matter what happens….I always will…..

34 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    I’ve surely bcm ur fan….the way u portray how love is….it’s really beyond imagination….jus too good…

  2. Nandu

    Just loved it. Superrr. I could imagine all the things as if they were happening in front of me. Keep up the good work.

  3. Khushi

    Uff u killed me today…..kya dhamakedar episode tha….. U r just amazing WS…..m speechless…. Don’t know what to say exceptional work yr…..itna romantic tha yr…atlast dono ko pta chal gya ki dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai…. Keep it up yr and post soon

  4. Marie

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    Yr wat to say it ws best best best…!! πŸ˜€ loved it to d core plzzzz plzz post nxt 1 asap n awwww u r ending it ……..
    Plz cm bck with another one πŸ™‚

  5. MissAaira

    Nooooooo pls dont end ur ff..i juz love it sssooooooooo muchhhbhhh
    Alll the episodes are juzz fantasticcc❀❀❀❀❀

  6. Nazia

    Wow! Ur writings,thoughts-everything is soo awesum!
    Um first commenting on it after reading all ur epi..s. Must say the cases were soo interesting! I felt as if they were real ones. U shud study law! And ur litterature is so good I mean the way u describe is really amazing. Really loved it. Plz post next ff sooooon!

  7. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Ws u r amazing yar seriously the way u describe the feelings of ur characters is amazing and i really mean it

    and bara wala sorry for late i,m suffering from shortage of free time πŸ˜‰

    but i loved the epi hahahaha that movie part and dress wala part were awsome

    post next one soon πŸ™‚

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