KAHI UNKAHI – Episode 3 “What’s my identity”

“What’s my identity”

Sonakshi is talking on phone to her maa…in the Hospital Yard !
Asha: Sona, these are great people…..even they agree on your working after marriage…Sona !!…understand na beta ….
Sonakshi: Maa…… I am not in mood…
Asha: Sona, you need mood to marry?
Sonakshi: Maa, I have important client…I will talk you later….
Asha: Sona listen….
Sonakshi disconnects the call and takes sigh of relief !!!

Sonakshi looks at the hospital patients walking in the yard, kids playing with skipping rope..
She too joins them and jumps with the kids….

Dev is looking at the bracelet and the tiffin…
Dev: So miss. Sona….you know my name…you know my taste also….what I have with you…that you got connected to me….so well…
He moves with bracelet to his cabin’s window…..
He looks out and sees Sonakshi jumping…He runs like Usain Bolt from lobby to stairs and then into the yard…he pulles her arm and with that everyone stops…

Dev: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???
Sonakshi (all shocked with the situation) in low voice: I am playing with kids……whats wrong with you…?
Dev: what is wrong with me….i am dying in your worry…I spend last night only thinking about you and you say…whats wrong with me…..why don’t you take your state seriously….you have…..
And he stops as he knows well or should I say he considers that she don’t want to express any one that she have a hole in her heart…

Dev: I am sorry !….I….
Sonakshi leaves the place…she wasn’t upset with what dev did…but with herself because she lead him to do so…..because of her he considers that she is sick….deadly sick !
Sonakshi is sitting at the canteen and drinking her coffee….thinking about all the mess she created…
Dev comes there…everyone is all stunned to see Dr. Dixit suddenly in canteen…
Dev excuses himself from all the questions and make his way to Sonakshi’s table…
Sonakshi looks at him…and bows down to her cup
Dev: I said…I am sorry !
Sonakshi: No….Please……I know it was my mistake…

She meant about the identity mess and he took her for the last incident….
Dev: I know you always want to portray normal….but you are not…..understand this…

This is the first time they are going to converse…like converse…because usually he says or should I say questions and she admires him….and the defense lawyer Satakshi answers

Sonakshi: What you said outside….was it true…..??
Dev: about what?
Sonakshi: about spending whole night thinking about me…..
Dev: yah !…i want to treat you well…I take my patients in my life….and just get into theirs…
And she was sad to know that…not because he was devoted to his job….but because he was thinking about her …he was thinking about her state…..Srishti’s state !

Dev: So…you want to be normal always…..hmm?
Sonakshi doesn’t reply…
Dev: Srishti… !!!
Dev touches her hand to take her out from her thinking….
Sonakshi just looks at him….like he was in her thought and he is in her thoughts….

Dev: you heard what I said….
Sonakshi(her mind): Never…I could never hear you….beacause when I look at you…I am in your eyes….and after that we are in our dream world….and rest is unsaid….
Dev: I asked…you always want to be normal….
Sonakshi: yah ! Normal….always….
Dev: So….will this person go for dinner with me….
Sonakshi hesitates first …but we all know she is Sonakshi…out spoken …straight
Sonakshi: Sorry …but I can’t…
Sonakshi gets up from the table….to leave…

He holds her hand to stop…it was knew for him…asking about dinner date first time and also being refused… !
But then leaves her hand….as he knew it was too much for two people…who had barely any conversation

Dev: But why…?
Sonakshi: Because normal people usually dinner with people they know….not strangers…
Dev: We are not strangers….
Sonakshi: Then who are we….
Dev acts like that is question is very silly …..he know the answer but then he had nothing to reply…who are they?
Dev: I am your doctor and you are my patient…
Sonakshi: simply….STRANGERS !
Sonakshi leaves the place…

Sonakshi reaches her cabin…
Satakshi looks at her….a friend in need a friend indeed
Satakshi: su thiu..? (what happened)
Soankshi: Dr. Dev’s matthar kharab !! (Dr. Dev is mad…)
Satakshi: Sona, what happened?….tell me…!!
Sonakshi: he asked for dinner…
Satakshi: date?
Sonakshi not really like a date….or tu cupid banne ki koshish mat kar…(and you don’t try to be cupid)
Satakshi: I am not trying to be cupid…I am just asking you normal question…ohk tell me do you like him…?
Sonakshi: Like…?….I didn’t thought about that….
Satakshi: He was wearing yellow yesterday…he looked handsome…isn’t it..?
Sonakshi: he was wearing grey……and where does that came from…

Sonakshi realizes it was a trick of satakshi just to get her on her point….
Satakshi: which color I wore yesterday….
Sonakshi: what kind of question is this….?….come to the point…
Satakshi: Point…I don’t know….you have to understand…what is bothering you sooo much …that you lied to him…or….what if he got to know the truth…
Satakshi leaves Sona…self realsiing session…
Sonakshi is in her cabin…when dev enters…
Sonakshi had her back towards him…
Dev: you here…?
Sonakshi can’t recognize his voice….
Sonakshi: where I will be…this is my cabin… !
And she turns and finds dev with his questioning eyes…

Precap: Dev comes to return the tiffin !

To all those people who thought why i am not getting…DEVAKSHI- BREAK KE BAAD… Guys ! what we had in our dreams is already done….Devakshi united and Ishwari accepted them…I need time to get something new…..The story will continue from the left track only….But i need time to keep my uniqueness and creativity alive !!!
It will be back wit ha BANG ON !!!

Till then love, like or admire my this creation….

Hope you will do justice with my hardwork !!!

49 comments

  1. krish

    this is my cabin…and turns…hmm interesting…may be dev will not know this secret so soon I think so…let’s see…and waiting fr break ke baad to return with a bang…..waiting fr kahi unkahi nxt episode…

  2. Ngkrishnakumari

    Finally dev know who is the person the person that had he care more than
    Thanks for upadating ur ff daily

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      I do upload on time even sometimes at 6 in evening but these TU…review so late and update it 11 or sometimes 12 at nyt 🙁
      Well ! Thanks for reading 🙂

  3. Sharica

    |Registered Member

    Ur stories always beautiful. i stay up till late night to read ur stories cuz i want to read it first. Anyways take time but don’t take a very long time as we all the fans are eagerly waiting for next epi of BREAK KE BAAD.

  4. Varsha94

    |Registered Member

    Soo ur giving title to each episode.. “That’s unique..” 😘👍.. And Dev s soo caring.. Awwww… How sweet… Sona ko toh abi se crush hogaya..😚😚…aur matlb kya dev ko pata chalgaya ki yeh Sona hai aur shrishti nai..waiting for the suspense to break..nd yeah..will b waiting for “Break ke baad”..🙇🙇.. Take ur own time.. And break ur own recrds with the season.2 of it…💙💜💚💛💗💕😍

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      So finally …someone noticed that i am naming every episode…so that it will be remembered well in the readers memory…
      I am also desperate to bring back break ke baad…
      I wanted to tell you smthng…you know i posted the promo of break ke baad season 1 on the indiaforums…i got 8 replies all with positive reviews…and my name is in hall of fame in 2 hours…I am like …..What??????????????…..I logged on it just in the morning…and here i land up at….ehheheh 🙂 🙂

      • Varsha94

        |Registered Member

        Wowww… R u serious.. Feeling awesome.. U know.. More than u I feel happy for BREAK KE BAAD… coz I feel like its my very own ff… Many many congratulations ..👌👍.. Waiting for season 2 with the bang…ur very sweet…😍💙💜💚💛💗💕

      • Varsha94

        |Registered Member

        Wowwww… R u serious.. That’s awesome… U know.. More than u I feel proud of BREAK KE BAAD.. As I feel like its my very own ff.. 😚… Many many congratulations To u… 👌👍😍💙💜💚💛💗

      • Priya9876

        |Registered Member

        I also noticed ur title name….
        Congratulations yaar … Soo excited too know in details….

        In indiaforoum, there is also an option to post anything????

      • 4nshika

        |Author

        @Priya9876: Yah… New topic karke hota h …try karo…na mile toh btana… i will guide you… !!
        And @Varsha94: It is yours darling !…Copyrights me sharing mein tumhara name dal dn ???

      • Varsha94

        |Registered Member

        Nai nai.. Efforts toh saare tumhare hain na..😇 Mai toh feeling wise bata rai Thi ki woh ff mera apna Sa lagta hai… 😍😊

  5. SAGAA

    Hai…4anshika….ur ff is a quite intresting….its gud to see a new track for DEVAKSHI….Nice and keep continue this….

  6. Sumaiya Sumi

    Superb story line. but wat will b dev’s reaction when he got to know that sonakshi is not a patient…. Eagerly waiting for the next

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      Hahhah…biting nails is a bad habit….no no no !!
      Thanks for liking it and whatever will dev do… he will do here only…you will come to know

  7. Priya9876

    |Registered Member

    Again superb 👌👌
    Kyaaa dev KO pata chal gya???? Srishti is Dr.sonakshi bose ???
    Hmm quite interesting…

    Hey Anshika dats true Ki I”ll miss madly break k baad but Dear don’t take any Kind of stress nd take ur time….
    I’LL wait for ur season 2 😍❤

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      I too miss writing BREAK KE BAAD… with those intense emotions but…you know its better too be silent before creating something very big… !! and this is going to be huge !!….
      Thanks you so much for understanding as you always do..

  8. Azzuu

    Again Wow superb
    But plz write little Long
    And kya confusión hai
    Hope dev ko pata Chal jaye Ki srishti (sona) hi sonakshi hai aur sonakshi hi sona hai
    Update asap
    Plz update on weekends also

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      Srishti, Sonakshi, Sona….the nation wants know,….who are these girls….
      Thankq sooo much…
      Mera har lamba episode chota padd jata kya karun….Ek mein sab likh dalun 😛 😛

  9. Esme

    |Registered Member

    What ??? Dev asked fr a dinner date….waah…..kaash aisa ‘asli’ show mein ho paata shuru mein hi….hey do u remember that episode. …minister’s pary…first Devakshi dance. …..my one of favourite episodes….I have downloaded it n have watched more than 5 times…..whatz ur favourite episode anshika ?????

    • 4nshika

      |Author

      I Love every bit of it….Initially i used to love every scene that had devakshi…but the loving was too much soo i watch them more than 100 times…literally…now that state is that…i crave for new love scenes cause i m all bored with past ones and i actually have summerised all their dialogues…
      But since you asked and i have to mention one i would say…..The anticipation… dev’s realisation part is my fav…that’s all i cn say

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