Kaanchi: just an act?? By Annie Part 5

Hi everyone.. Hope u are enjoying this ff.. Now, some credits I wanted to give.. Firstly, the concept of the rain and date were suggested by Hafi.. A big thanks for that… And the credits for the descriptions of the date goes to my parents.. These romantic ideas aren’t all my idea actually.. I have been picking parts form my parent’s dates when they were dating but the rain part was my idea though.Since, I am not a romantic person.. At least that’s what my mom and dad and friends tell me ?..

Moving on with date part 2….

Saanchi’s POV…

We walk to the dance floor hand in hand.. As I stand in one side.. I really feel uncomfortable now after all that Isha and Pragya did. Those two’s death are written on my hands..

Kabir: so, I think we should just stand and watch until the party is over.

Saanchi: I agree since I have no idea how to dance..

At that time someone tap’s kabir in the shoulder..

Akash: long time, no see kabir.. I hope u remember ur old friend.

Kabir: oh hey Akash.. Surprised to find u here.

Akash: I am with my wife.. This is ur fiance I presume (points at saanchi) i heard about ur wedding in the news.

Saanchi: Hi, I am Saanchi Agarwal..(shakes her hand with Ajash and his wife)

Kabir: So, guess u know everything.. The media doesn’t spare a single chance to make people’s personal affairs public.

Akash: true.. But why are u both standing idle? Its a dance floor.. Both of u should get on and enjoy.

Saanchi: sorry.. We don’t know how to dance.. (Smiles)

Akash: kabir didn’t tell u that he is an awesome dance partner.. Come on u shouldn’t hide things from her..

Saanchi: but we…(stops as kabir gives a squeeze to her hand.. She gets the signal and stops)

Kabir: u shouldn’t protest much.. U don’t want people to get the wrong idea. Come on.. Lets just to the dance..

Both of them mixes with the other couples.. Saanchi keeps one of the hand over Kabir’s shoulder and intertwines the other with kabir’s hand.. One of kabir’s hand slides through saanchi’s waist as both of them sways through the music…

Saanchi:(while dancing) So, kabir what else talents do u have except being an exceptional doctor, dancer and person?

Kabir: I guess nothing more.. Usually much people don’t know that I could dance.. Its something I used to do in my college years.

Suddenly, saanchi trips but kabir holds her.. They have an eyelock as Saanchi’s hand are behind kabir’s neck for support and kabir’s hand around her waist to fall her from falling… Both of them get up and compose themselves.. Saanchi unknowingly blushes due to the proximity..  Kabir notices her…

Kabir: why did u go all red suddenly?

Saanchi: I guess…(looks for a excuse) don’t u think its a bit too hot here.

Kabir: no.. I think its rather cold. The AC’ s are on high speed.

Saanchi: I think we should leave from here now.. The party is near its completion..

Both of them get out to see that its rains..drizzling sounds and a huge amount of rain.

Kabir: its started raining.. And our car is far.. We will get wet by the time we get to the parking lot..(looks at saanchi going out in the rain) saanchi.. What are u doing? Come back..

Saanchi:(plays with the rain drops) no, after a long time I am getting drenched.. U should come too.. Its fun.

Kabir: u will get sick.. And u are a doctor.. Staying wet for a long time will make u catch a cold.. Come back.

Saanchi: pls pls.. Let me stay for a little while.. I promise nothing will happen.

Kabir stands leaning on a pillar and watched Saanchi enjoying the rain.. He admires her.. Playing with rain drops and enjoying nature to the fullest.. A unacquainted urge run through his body.. He couldn’t understand what but he felt different..

Suddenly he saw some men eyeing in saanchi from afar.. Saanchi was oblivious to fact and didn’t notice.. Before the men could make any move Kabir ran and hugged Saanchi from behind.. Saanchi got surprised feeling a pressure in her back and a pair of arms wrapping around her waist..

Saanchi: kabir, what are u doing?

Kabir: stand still.. Some people were watching u in a improper way thinking at u were alone.. I just did this to show them u are MINE..

Kabir realises what he said and releases saanchi from his grip..

Kabir: that came out the wrong way..l meant to say that I wanted to show them that u are not alone.. Ah, u know getting drenched in the rain is not that bad either..(diverts the topic)

Saanch: i told u.. U would enjoy with.. Lets stay here for a while.

Suddenly, the thunder strikes.. Saanchi does a low scream and hugs kabir.. Shivering.. She breaks apart and looks with timid eyes at kabir.. And surprisingly she got red again..

Kabir: Are u drunk? First u are getting all red for no reasons.. Secondly the doctor who fights with the administration for justice is sacred of a lightening strike..

Saanchi: people might die due to the electric shock.. It think we stayed in the rain enough.. We should probably head back..

Both of them go as Kabir drops saanchi to the hostel…

Kabir: its late at night.. Let me walk u to ur room..

Saanchi: no thank u.. I can manage.. U should probably go home quickly and change.

Kabir: no.. I will come with u..

Both of them start walking to the dorm.. Veer notices some noice and slowly gets up.. He slightly opens the door to peek in the corridor.. He sees Saanchi and Kabir at the corridor.

Saanchi: Thank u kabir for accompanying me and understanding my situation.. I had a great time..

Kabir: the concept of the date was ur idea so I guess I should thank u.. I really did get to know u and ur fear of the lightning.. And of course ur weird characteristic of getting red suddenly.

Saanchi pouts.. Kabir bids a good bye and leaves.

Veer:(from his room) what were they doing at this time of the night? And miss golpappa calls Dr. Kabir just kabir.. When did that happen? How come I didn’t notice this two getting so close in such a short time? I will confront her tomorrow in the morning…

Next morning….

Saanchi comes to class.. As the head intern she distributes file to everyone sneezing and coughing..

Veer: what happened miss golpappa? Did u catch a cold?

Riya: I think she ate ice cream instead of golgappa and her body couldn’t handle it..(laughs with veer)

Pragya looks at Saanchi at concern while Isha smirks.. After all.. She was awake last night who saw Saanchi drenched.. After sometime Kabir comes inside the classroom..

To everyone surprise Kabir is sneezing and coughing too.. There is no doubt in everyone’s mind that Saanchi and Kabir were together yesterday.. All the interns look at the sneezing couple in amusement..

Kabir: (sneezes) why are u all looking like that?

Veer: Kabir sir, we were just wondering.. How u and saanchi were perfectly fit yesterday and both of u are sick today. That too at the same time..(makes a suspicious look)

Kabir: our health shouldn’t be the concern of anyone..(coughs) u have been assigned ur departments. Go and work.

Saanchi and kabir looks at each other and again shifts their eye from embarrassments.. All we know is a certain two people were burning in jealousy.. Veer and Riya..

Precap: saanchi argues with Riya as she tries to get close to Kabir and the engagement..

Wedding is coming soon.. U guys.. Hold onto ur seats and enjoy.. Pls put ur opinions about how much u liked the date…

Will be back soon…

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  1. just fab dear write next epi as soon as possible pls request
    and ya pls don’t forget to add more twist and romantic scenes and jealous

  2. Lovely episode loved kanchi chemistry

  3. Very nice episode. Enjoyed each and every bit.

  4. Nice episode dude…hey i dont want saachi to be possissive on kabir…show somethings like saachi trusting kabir with no doubt..nice rain scene and dance scene…waiting eagerly for next update…plz post asap….

  5. wow wow what an episode…what an awesome date scene…you nailed it..and the dance part and sanchi drenching and enjoying in rain and kabir protection it cool and hot…ur idea was really fabulous …and two of them cughing is really nice…
    you rock it….
    i want more from your update…
    one humble request can you write os about kanchi…please..if you have time means
    anyways i am eagerly waiting for next one with more kanchi romance

  6. Awesome……

  7. and also i want kanchi nok joke..and funny side of dr.kabir which was never seen..

  8. Wowww amazing episode

  9. Just a blast? I crying…rain scene should be in the real show?? I want to see vikram n swarda creating magic onscreen??
    thnk u so much annie…for this?

  10. Trisha139

    Wow annie this was just fabulous loved each part and specially that “you are mine ”
    Eager for the next part dear

  11. Mishty

    Nice update

  12. Swetatitli

    Such a nice ch yaar.how romantic it must be when kabir huged saanchi from behind. ???.Annie ur episodes are just perfect. I don’t know how tell but ur just a mind blowing writer.????keep writing dear.

  13. As I already said your ff are best….. I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR FF……. Superb… Can’t wait for next ff…. You are truly amazing and good writer…

  14. It’s amazing
    Ur FFs are always fantastic
    Their date was amazing

  15. How romantic plzz update soon

  16. Really enjoyed it waiting for the next

  17. fantastic job but i wanna see kabir getting jealous more and more and he should show his right on sanchi in front of veer .

  18. They make such a cute couple waiting eagerly for the next part

  19. VINAL

    Amazing ,,,enjoyed every part
    Keep posting

  20. Amazing update… eagerly waiting for next update… pls post next update soon…

  21. Abhilasha

    Wowwwwwwwww…… ???????????u r making me crazy with ur superb EP. I m just mad for it…. Loved ittooooo much!!!

  22. Misbah4

    Awesome… Episode…. U nailed it yaar?? loved kaanchi’s hug… Plz post next episode soon…. And plz put some marriage rituals… Such as haldi… Mehendi.. Sangeet etc….

  23. Otakustuff

    Great as always! Loved it???

  24. Wow the episode is superb .please early post update next episode and the story is very nice

  25. Lovely episode plzz introduce some more veer sanchi scene so that Kabir could be jealous before marriage.

  26. Episode is very nice please update a next chapter early

  27. Awesome as usual.I loved it.?????

    Hey,did Saanchi revealed her identity in front of Kabeer?I missed that part.I want to know dear.
    And u asked about Kabeer’s surname suggestion na I was soo busy that day so i was not able to comment.

    I think if she didn’t revealled her identity in
    front of Kabeer then

    When Saachi revealled her id in front of Kabeer she was shocked to see Dr.Kabeer
    smiling.She asked him the reason of
    smiling as she was telling him the
    truth.Then Dr.Kabeer told her that he already knew that bcoz Saanchi Aggarwal is her sister.

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