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Kaanchi: just an act?? By Annie Part 13

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Hi my lovely readers.. I love reading ur comments everyday.. Thank u soo much for all the love.. I love you guys soo much.. A big hug from me.

So,lets start the episode….

It’s 12 in the night. Its raining a lot outside. Including Saanchi’s fear the thunder strikes. Suddenly Kabir feels a pressure against his back. He sees Saanchi clinging to his back. He moves away from her. After a second he sees her again. This time he moved to the edge of the bed. She came again.

Kabir: Saanchi, I noticed u are over sized but I think u have already taken enough space. Would u pls move? One more step and I will fall out of the bed.

Saanchi: Its the thunder strikes again and I am scared.

Kabir: Move away.. I can’t sleep like this.

Saanchi: And why did u call me over sized? I saw the BMI chart. My weight is all right.

Kabir: Firstly ur reaction passed its reacting time. i called u over sized 5 minutes ago. Secondly, BMI is just an average. It doesn’t work for everyone.

Saanchi: how did I become fat suddenly at this hour of the night?

Kabir: U were this way. I just didn’t say it earlier.

Kabir wanted to save himself from Saanchi’s useless talks so he tucked headphones into his ears. Saanchi keeps ranting for a while.

Saanchi: Are u listening to me Kabir?(Kabir doesn’t reply. She checks and sees headphones) he slept already. I think listening to songs is a good idea. That way I won’t be scared.

Next morning…

It was the last day of the trip and free-day. Everyone decided to take a trip to the beach. Suddenly veer came holding two tickets in his hand.

Veer: Kabir sir, look What I got for you?

Kabir: what is this?

Veer: This a ticket for the couple game that will be held within an hour. I thought u and Dr.Saanchi would like one.

Kabir: Thanks..but, no. We are not going.

Veer pouts and turns..

Kabir: In other words, give it to me. I will ask Saanchi. She might wanna go.

Veer: yes, sure. Dr.kabir.

Kabir: By the way, did u see her anywhere?

Veer: I saw her talking to a crying lady sometime back. The lady was wearing a black saree, was middle aged and was holding a photo. Looks like u are already missing ur wife. How cute!!! Before u scold me let me tell today is our off so u can’t punish me.

Veer runs away like a kid and kabir gets thinking.

Kabir: I hope she didn’t get into any trouble.

Kabir walks and sees an women like veer described. He thinks to talk to her. He takes out his phone and opens up a photo of saanchi.

Kabir: Excuse me ma’am but did u see her?

Women: Yes. Actually my grand daughter got lost in the woods. While picking up her ball. When I looked and couldn’t find her this nice girl offered to help. But now both are not coming back.

Kabir: knew it. This girl is always looking for trouble. She is scared of scorpions, dogs, thunders and every single stupid things in the world. But isn’t scared of what she should fear.

He goes inside the creeps and jungle like place away from the beach. He looks on and on. Suddenly he sees blood droplets forming a trail.

Kabir: blood?? Saanchi pls be okay.

He follows the trail and hears noises from a distance. He sees Saanchi covering a little girl behind her as blood is profusely dropping from her head. Two men are lying on the ground and one is pointing a knife at saanchi. Saanchi is carrying a branch like wooden stick.

Kabir: Saanchi!!!

Kabir runs and holds Saanchi as she starts collapsing on his shoulders due to loss of blood. Kabir stops the knife by grabbing with his palm. Keeping Saanchi in shoulders he kicks the thugs..

Author note: Any hero is nearly incomplete if he doesn’t have
a heroic fight scene..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

The thug collapses and Kabir lifts saanchi up with his arms and leaves the place with the little girl. Seeing saanchi weak like this is making his heart cry out. He wanted to shed tears instead he held with back. Waters just glittered in his eyes but didn’t fall from his cheek. The little girl got back to the lady as Kabir took saanchi back to others.

Kabir: Dr.Veer, Dr. Pragya.. I want u both to bring out the car. We have to take saanchi to hospital.

Both of them come out with all the noise and sees nearly unconscious Saanchi in his arms. Both of them nods and takes keys from Kabir. They take her to the hospital. Kabir shows his doctor’s license and asks for permission to give saanchi’s case to him. Saanchi is taken to the cabin as Kabir comes out after giving her bandages.

Kabir: Dr. Saanchi lost too much of blood. We need blood donation. Who knows her blood group here?

Isha: sir, its O+.

Kabir: I need people with O+ blood group to go the blood bank sector and donate ur blood.

After treatment… Saanchi’s aids are done. She is on the hospital bed.. Most probably will get regain her sense within an hour. Kabir sits on a chair beside her. He holds her hand and falls asleep near her.

Isha: Hey, did any of u notice Dr.Kabir’s eyes a little watery when Saanchi was bleeding.

Pragya: Dr.kabir and tears.. The earth will get destroyed but that will never happen.

Saanchi open her eyes and sees Kabir asleep near her bed. She smiles and ruffles his hair. He gets up.

Kabir: Finally u are awake.. I had to ask why the hell did u go in a far unknown place without permission?see what happened now? Really saanchi.. U are afraid of the most silliest thing I know. What happens to u r phobia when u acted Mother India? Where does ur fear drain when u fight with real dangerous thing. Just think, if I hadn’t reached.. Those thugs could do anything.From now on, u will take my permission before wandering off or at least tell me..

Saanchi smiles seeing his concern for her.

Kabir: why are u smiling for? I think the head injury made u mentally unstable.

Saanchi: sorry.. But those thugs were kidnapping the girl. I had to do something.

Kabir: why didn’t u call me?

Saanchi: becoz, I didn’t want you to get into trouble.

Kabir: same.. I don’t want u to get into trouble but u do always. At hospital I have to argue with higher ups for ur against authority act.. Here again u started pulling off reckless acts.

Saanchi notices his bandaged hand..

Saanchi: huh? What happened to ur hand?

Kabir: leave my hand.. And think about urself.

He gives her medicine and tells her to rest.

Saanchi: Thanks.. But I still need to what happened to ur hand?

Kabir: I tried to stop the thugs. Now if u care about me as u said pls keep urself safe and nothing will happen to me too.

Precap: Kabir ignores Saanchi and he tries to pacify her.

Sorry, for the super boring episode but next ones will be cute.. Promise!!! We will see a khadoos Kabir and a caring kabir at the same time.. Keep commenting and keep loving.

70 Comments
  1. Superb episode.
    Loved it.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  2. Amazing update… eagerly waiting for next update… pls post next update soon…

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  3. Swetatitli

    Super cool episode. Keep writing dear. Amazing 😘😘😘

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  4. AnahitaAnnie

    Guys in the precap should be “she tries pacify him”.

    1. Otakustuff

      Hey how do i make something in bold? Because I just copy pasted the post of plot which had some parts in bold and italics and it is not the same as i had originally written. The post i submitted is just plain without bold or italics. What do I do?

      1. AnahitaAnnie

        As I told earlier.. We can’t work with the style..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

      2. AnahitaAnnie

        TU only posts “plain letters”.

  5. AnahitaAnnie

    Sanyukta.. The links for ur sister.. Tell her I gave her a hug from me..

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/10161/?profiletab=posts

    1. Thank u.

      1. AnahitaAnnie

        Welcome 😘

  6. The episode was good but need some little more twist,suspense and drama…. But, overall, hats off to you…. Expecting a lot from you Annie. Please, update your next episode soon… Eagerly waiting…. ☺☺☺

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. And yep twists are on the way.Thanks for reading..😘😘

  7. Otakustuff

    Loved the NECESSARY Heroic act Annie….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..waiting for next update!

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  8. Super dr,waiting for next update..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  9. Trisha139

    Wow too good annie…your ff is one of my fav…specially that fat partt was so cute…continue soon dear …love this one

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words.. And ur writings are my fabs.its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  10. Aji

    Nice one again.weldone πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

      1. Aji

        Thank u.

  11. you rocked it annie..waiting for next one

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  12. Abhilasha

    It wasnt boring dear….. In fact it was really good……. And waiting for next ep. ur each episode is different in its own way!

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘.. And Abhilasha u are a really very cute person..love ur comments.

  13. nice episode

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  14. The episode was short but really cute…..could not think of kabir crying
    Though it was short I think it was necessary for the upcoming episode

    Like the way u write….actually I am in love with it

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘and I am in love with ur comments.

  15. Richa1496

    Annie again u nailed it… You are truly a great writer and your ff are best…. And I waana give you a hug…. You are great…. And your ff are superb… You are the best writer and your ff are best in all….

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘and return hugs.. And Richa are one of the sweetest persons I know in TU

  16. This is not at all boring infact it is super entertaining. Interesting precap😊

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  17. Tharu

    It is not boring at all in fact it is awesome..Loved it.. Waiting for the next part..*teddy bear hug

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Firstly return big hug di!!! Love u soo much..Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  18. Awesome episode as usual.πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    Kabeer u said right,Saanchi is scared of siliest things but do not think at once of becoming Mother India.😁😁😁😁😁If something happened to u,than what about my brother,he become Devdas.😭😭😭😭

    And ya my sis is reading all ff of urs.πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
    And,she is loving it.
    😍😍😍

    This episode is just superrrrrrrrrrrrr.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    And ya i have a wish i want to see Saanchi’s bonding with Kusum(her mother- in- law).

    I want to see Saanchi and Kusum on the
    sameside teasing Kabeer.Kusum tell Saanchi about mischievous nature of Kabeer in his childhood.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    I definitely love to read this.keep writing dear.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Kabir as a devdas.. Woow Thats a funny thought.. And Sanyukta I am soo happy that ur sister liked it.. Amd its really cute to see a sister-bro relation among u and Kabir.. U would make a great sis..

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

      And I will be sure to add all the Kusum and Saanchi scenes.. Thanks a lot for the great suggestion.. Love u 😘

  19. no it was interesting dear

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  20. annie dear, u r amazing as alwz…….. the episode was osm, i want to see the bonding between kusum & sanchi, kusum revealing kabir’s mischief during his childhood days & how he has turned out to be khadoos now ……..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Riya u are a really awesome person.. And ur idea is amazing.. I will be sure to add Kusum and Saanchi scene on Kabir.. Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘 love u..

  21. eagerly waiting for ur next update dear……..

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon..

  22. Amazing Annie πŸ™‚

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  23. Nice part waiting for the next one

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  24. Misbah4

    Amazing………😘😘😘😘 Plz post next episode fast😍

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  25. Pallavishah

    Perfect epi Annie
    I am loving it😘😘

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  26. As always best 😘😘Annie…one request… Add some intense romance plz 😜😜😜

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘.. And romance will be here soon.

  27. Its an amazing episode loved it

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  28. Lovely episode thanks for bringing emotional and caring side of kabir in episodeπŸ˜‡

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  29. WOWWWW!!! it’s for both- ff as well as uπŸ˜ƒ getting so many AP’s at your age must mean u r a genius… Wow dear keep up ur hard workπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ also keep up with your writing!! I was really amazed by how much schooling varies in here n there. So what do you want to become?
    Hahahaha I know my questions never endπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ but frankly m loving communicating with you even if it’s thru comments…. N u can also ask me anything you want (provided u do want to ask,no pressures πŸ˜‹)
    N yes…. I have meant to say this from a long time- I am also an anime lover,so is my bff,not to mention she was the one who introduced me to it!!! 😊😊😊

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Aww krysty its been great talking with u.. Loved ur questions and I felt soo good while answering them.. Secondly Now I am asking u.. Which grade u read in? What do u want to become? Do u have any siblings? If u wish u could register and we could talk in PM.

      Anyways coming back to me, I wanna become a doctor. Thats nearly everybody’s dream but for me its a challenge. Harvard Medical school is the best medical university in the entire world. And I want to face the challenge to get in their and fight for it.. So a doctor..and a big hugh five on both of us being anime watchers.. Which animes to did u watch? Last but not the least.. Convey my Hi to ur bff.. And love u a lot..

  30. hey I m new here..m also a kanchi fan…this part is awesome

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Welcome to TU Meghna.. A big welcome hug to u..thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

  31. Annie I can’t wait now when r u going to update 😳

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot for ur sweet words. Its really empowering.. Currently I am at a overnight field trip and its 12 AM. I will reach home tomorrow morning and try to post soon.. Thanks for reading..😘😘

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