kaala teeka : an unusual story (Episode 23)

hello guys. For the first time i have got 12 comment[ excluding my reply]. I am soo happy. Ur comments mean so much to me. Guys i have thought that i would reply to ur comment before my episodes.
PINKISTAR:thaank u soo much for having the hope. I am sorry as i was busy i couldn’t upload. Ur comment made my day. Thank u so much.
MARIYAH:Thank u so much di u read my ff.
FIZA:Thank u fiza di.
FATARAJO:Thank u di. Hope u like more.
AISH:i would try my best to upload.
AYESHA:Hey ayesha. I haven’t written anyother ff than this. So it might be a small misunderstanding.
SANJANA:Gey sanjana di thanks for ur comment.

Episode – 23
Leela brings rachna in. Leela makes rachna sit beside yug. Abhi[yug’s friend] dances on the song ghani bawri. she makes yug and rachna to dance. All dance. Later its my for engagement. Yug and rachna exchang their rings. All clap. Suddenly the lights go of. A spotlight lights on sharmila.
SHARMILA- my heartful thanks to everybody who came to attend my dashing bro’s and my beautiful to-be bhabhi’s engagement. Now a surprise is there for these.
Sharmila starts to count.
A bang sound is made. Fire crackes burst. And a paper rolls down from the top of the ceiling. In the paper it is written:
All congratulate yug and rachna.
MANJIRI-congratulations yug.
And when see is about to see rachna and congratulate her she goes of with her friends. Manjiri gets upset.
KAALI- congo yug. Thanks fr inviting. I think we should be get going.
Manjiri and kaali leave.

Gaur is online on friendzbook. Suddenly the goes off after she reloads the page she sees a pic of yug with his engagement ring typed:-
Sorry girls I’m engaged :P:P:)
Gauri gets angry seeingthis. She takes a knife and pierces in a pillow repeatedly mumbling yug’s name.

PRECAP: kaali and yug have a candle light dinner.

Credit to: saasha


  1. Pinkistar

    Good amazing u know wht I usually was a silent reader but sometimes I comment when I read ur ff it was good nd usually I don’t use to get reply back so I stopped I luv kaala teeka serial when I opened this page I saw ur ff it was really good…… ? nd dear plz make it a bit longer if possible

  2. KaYu

    Ur ff is better than the actual story..
    K love it alot..
    Keep writing and entertain us ?

  3. Omg Saasha loved it so much yaar <3 sorry for late reply I thought you are going to post on 7th July so I didn't come here on the kaala theeka page as I stopped watching kaala theeka…loved it saasha.
    I especially loved the A NEW LIFE STARTS it was so nice btw the scene 2 was kind of creepy and interesting I can not wait for episode 24

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