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Kaachi forever – OS

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Hii guys…am back…plz leave ur comments…

After lots of struggle and problems kaachi got married…saachi is still an intern…They both shared same room,same bed and everything even they confessed their love for eachother in a romatic date but still didnt consumate their maariage..barelly they both share a hug during emotional times but not romantocally…and they both didnt even think about that…both were taking care of each other…if one gets hurt other will feel the pain…kabir became very kind and soft towards her…he had not even raised voice against her…he always stood for her in every situation…saachi to was very innocent…kabir treated her like a child…always took care of her…slowly he even stopped to give advice…but in sdch he was the same khadoos with everyone except saachi…

In sdch:
Dr.kabir-there is a party in dr.malhotra’s house for opening new cancer center co everyone must attend…
All-s sir…
Evening in party…
Saachi is wearing a red saree with black velvet border and back low neck with waist slightly visible…
Kabir is wearing a black and red combination suit…He was just mesmerised by her beauty…both were looking breath taking…
After the party both went home…
Kabir went to freshenup first…saachi went near pool and was seeing the pool waiting for kabir to come out so that she can go and freshen up…kabir came out and saw saachi near pool side through window…saachi felt a warmness on her back…she was startled by sudden back hug of kabir…slowly she tried to move but kabir was not in any mood to leave her…he nuzzled in her neck crook and gave a wet kiss on her shoulder…saachi felt a shiver run through her spine…slowly kabir moved to kiss her lips but be4 that saachi pushed him and he fell in the pool…He came out…
Saachi:am sorry kabir…r u ok?
Kabir stared at her angryly and went away…when saachi came to room after freshenup she saw kabir already slept…she slowly kissed his forhead and slept beside him…
Next day morning:
Before saachi could get up kabir went to hospital…saachi felt bad…she too got ready and went …

In class:
Kabir:all ur duties r assisgned so go and cntnu…saying this he left the class without giving any glance to saachi…
Ishpra noticed this and asked her…
Saachi said everything to them…
Isha:are u mad saachi?
Pra:seriously saachi,how can u do like that…
Isha:he asked only which u can give him saachi…but u didnt understand him…
Pra:ok let the past go,now go and speak with him and say sorry…
Saachi:but he is not even looking at me,wat to do…
Pra:go and do anything but solve this problem as soon as possible…
Saachi went and knocked dr.kabir’s cabin…
Kabir-come in…
Saachi-I want to speak with you…
Kabir-am busy dr.saachi
Saachi had tears in her eyes as this was the 1st time after maariage he is calling her as
dr.saachi…saachi silently left from there…kabir too felt bad for avoiding her…that day fully saachi tried to speak with him but he ignored her completly…

Night:
Kabir came home late and saw saachi waiting for him…he was about ask but stopped and went straightly to their room…saachi came to him…
Saachi-kabir please speak with with me,am sorry,plzzzz…
Kabir didnt give any ear to her and started to work in his laptop sitting on the bed…saachi came near him…tears were continuosly coming from her eyes…
Saachi-kabir please,i plead you speak with me,scold me,beat me but please dont avoid me…
Still kabir was looking at laptop cntnuing his work…
Saachi-fine,u want me right,do whatever you want with me,do whatever u need,i wont stop you…
Saying this she removed the pin from from her saree pallu and was about to take her saree off but b4 that kabir stopped her…
Kabir-are you mad saachi?why are doing like this?
Saachi(crying terribly)-for you kabir,i cant take ur
ignorance,i cant stay away from you…to get ur love am ready to do anything even to die…
Kabir hugged her tightly…
Kabir-dont you even dare to think like that,how will i live without you…
Saachi(crying)’am sorry,please dont hate me…saying this she fainted in his arms…
Kabir checked her and came to know from servants that she didnt eat anything since morning… While sleeping she murmured “am sorry kabir,plz dont hate me”continously…he felt guilt and bad for his behaviour towards her…

Next day kaachi reached the hospital…saachi thought kabir is still angry on her and went to class…kabir assigned duties to everyone and saw saachi but unaware of this saachi was looking down..then he dispersed everyone and went to his cabin…
Nurse-dr.saachi,dr.kabir called you to his cabin…
Saachi knocked the door…
Kabir(smiled)-come in…
Saachi went inside and stood silently with eyes down…kabir went and locked the door inside…
Saachi was about to tell sorry but be4 that kabir intrepted…
Kabir-am sorry saachi…
Saachi-no,its my mistake,i must have not stopped you…(still looking down)…
Kabir-no saachi,i should have compelled you…
Saachi-no kabir,am at fault,its not ur mistake sorry…
Kabir-no saachi,i didnt think about you that time i was just lost …am sorry…
Again saachi was about to tell something but kabit stopped her…
Kabir-enough of this sorry game saachi…u can continue ur work…and i wont compul you,if not now then someother time that too only if u r comfortable…if u dont want that to happen also no problem,we will leave that idea…bcoz i believe in our heart relation more physical relation…but remember i’ll always love you no matter whatever it is…
Saachi just went and locked her lips with his…
Kabir was shocked to the core…but slowly he came out of shock and started to reciprocate… the kiss changed into a wild passionate one…due to lack of oxygen they both broke apart unwillingly…saachi was blushing heavily…
Kabir(teasingly)-wowwww…i never know that sweet wife is this much wild…
Saachi ran out hurridly blushing…that day fully both were working physically but mentally they were thinking about each other and their first
kiss…
LOVE THE ONE WHO HURT YOU…BUT…NEVER HURT THE ONE WHO LOVE YOU…😍😍😍😍😍

Please pour ur comments guys…whether Positive or negative no problem…
TATA BUBYE…
TAKE CARE…WILL MEET ON AUGUST 15 WITH NEW OS…
WITH LOVE
ME…😜😜😜

43 Comments
  1. Wnt u write ur ff?

    1. Lavithra

      Sry dear but i cant understand…if u r asking whether i’ll write ff or not means my answer is no…SORRY…

  2. Sorry guys,there is lots of grammatical and spelling mistakes….please bear…

  3. Swetatitli

    Ur stories r so gud that I can’t express it in words.keep writing dear 😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you very much swetatili…πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  4. Wnt u cntinue ur ff?

    1. Lavithra

      That 3s got over maya and my clg also started so i wont be able to write…sorry…πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯

  5. Awesome and lovely😍😍😍

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you aafia…πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  6. Richa1496

    Awsm….Superb OS… You are queen of os.. I am failing to get words…. You are great writer and your os was outstanding….. Loved it a lot 😊

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you very much richa…ur comment is just making me to jump…😊😊😊

  7. Just awesome, superb.
    It’s amazing.
    Loved it.

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you QVZRQE3M…😊😊😊

  8. omg, the os is sooo romantic, bang-on……..wow, superbbb, osm, too good,can’t stop smiling while reading this…… preetha dear, u r an amazing writer, keep writing in this way and we gonna keep loving u, eagerly waiting for the next………..

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you very much riya…ur comment is really encouraging…thanks dear…surely will try to post…😊😊😊

  9. This one is awesome pls I need one more PS continued this..

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you prema…surely will try to write more dear…😊😊😊

  10. RuCh23

    WOW…. Just wow it is sooo romantic best os ever nicely done keep it up

    1. Lavithra

      Thank you very much ruch23…😊😊😊

  11. Lavithra

    Guys may i know what happened to be_witch…bcoz its really long time but still now she didnt update her ff…what happened???…😐😐😐

  12. Plz give more scenes of sanbir fight and ignorance plz there will be twist in end and today’s epi was wonderful i like it so much

    1. Hey dude its not an ff yaar but os..and thank you very much for ur comment hira…😊😊😊

  13. AnahitaAnnie

    OMG!!! That was soo cute. i loved it. It was a really nice concept. I loved the way u upheld the difference between love and lust. It was soo adorable. I can’t wait for August now.. Love ur writing.. Can’t wait to get more from you.😘

    1. Dude till now i was waiting for ur and trisha’s comment…thank you very much annie dear…and am waiting very eagerly for ur ff…😊😊😊😊😊

  14. nice dear keep writing

    1. Thanks shreya😊😊😊

  15. Trisha139

    Lavithra this is so perfect I mean I just don’t have words ….you are mind blowing …this one was simple light hearted and I just loved it to the core ….I didn’t knew you are this perfect πŸ€—…I have a
    Little request can you post that OS on 10 th of August …if possible only then thts my brthdy just bcz of tht…

    1. Thank you very much trisha…am sorry yaar i cant post on 10th…bcoz thats my 1st day in clg…adv happy bday dear…😊😊😊😊😊

  16. Nice one

    1. Thank u vasundhra😊😊😊

  17. Its really nice

    1. Thank u amna😊😊😊😊

  18. Vry nice

    1. Thanks sanju😊😊😊

  19. wow its so super and cool..
    i want more os from u
    lavanya which department are u

    1. Thanks sundari😊😊😊

    2. B.E- EC…

  20. superb episode I hope CVS ko bhi samaj aa jaye or vo SDCH me bhi kanchi ( kabeer and sanchi ) ko ek karde plz.

    1. Thanks parul😊😊😊

  21. Good one..😊

    1. Thanks isha😊😊😊

  22. VINAL

    Super duper ,Amazing ,lovely

    1. Thank u vinal…😊😊😊

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