Just be with me…Episode 17 (last part)

Thanks to all of u as u liked my work so much. Here is the 17th part hope u enjoy it.
There you go!!!

“doctor plzz save my child”
“see we can’t say anything until the operation completes” “the bullet had passed right below his heart it’s a very risky operation”
The faint voices of bauji’s pleading were echoing in bride’s ear she was still in her wedding attire with mangalsutra on her neck indicating her husbands authority on her and the red color in her maang sighn of getting married but the red mark which she carried in her maang was of blood instead of sindoor “it was the blood of her husband” She stood motionless, lost in her thoughts as she was staring from little window of the operation theatre at the motionless figure lying on the bed. The hands which were always there for her support was now lying in a stationary position. The eyes which can’t bear her pain were not even blinking. The legs which always rushed to save Her when ever she was in trouble were not moving. She was going through the most loneliest moment of her life, she was watching her whole world falling apart, her bihaan struggling between life and death, but all she could do is to stare blankly. He was getting dressed for operation she came to her senses as the nurse drew the curtain and blocked her view. She felt as if someone have taken her heart out.

“how dare she Prevent her from gazing at her husband”
Anger replaced blood in her veins suddenly she started banging on the door “open the door” “bihaan” “let me stay with him” She was screaming, crying and pleading to let her inside.
The family members realized that she is not in her senses.
“thapki hold on child. Calm down” poonam and krishnkant Said trying to drag her away from the door. But her mind wouldn’t listen to any of their talks.
“open the door. He needs me. Let me Be with him” “plzz” She was screaming like an insane person trying hard to get out of her father’s strong hold.
Dadi maa and vasu broke down on seeing her miserable state. Dhruv came to rescue.
“thapki hoosh mai aaoo” Dhruv held her by shoulder tightly. “look at me he will be alright” But Her mind wouldn’t accept any kind of explanation.
Her blurred vison cleared as dhruv Splashed a glass of cold water on her face. She was trying hard to focus on the voices on her surrounding. She was breathing heavily. Dhruv supported her to sit-down on the chair.

“thapki look at me everything is gonna be fine” “he’ll gonna be fine” “have faith on god” She looked at him a fresh set of tears flowed down her cheeks.
“have faith on bihaan” “have faith on ur love” “he’ll be alright trust me” dhruv cupped her face.
Aditi sat beside him and kept a comfortable hand on his shoulder and thanked him.
Thapki remembered her moments that bihaan have spent with her. His bravery, his courage, his care for his family, his care for her and most of all his selflessness how he had suffered the hatred of his whole family just to save his maa’s pride.
“he is a fighter” she murmured
“yes” “ He will fight……for me” “because he is bihaan pandey” she said aloud to herself with a determined look on her face. Bauji nodded at her while she was wiping her tears.

“doctor how’s bihaan. He is fine right” bauji held doctor hand when he came out of operation theatre
“we can’t say anything until and unless he get conscious. We are trying our best” doctor gave an apologetic look to dhruv who was completely broken.
“mera bihaan hi kyu” “why does he always suffer” Dadi siad her eyes clearly describing her pain. Not only dadi each and every family member was hopeless crying and praying for him as he was the apple of their eye.

Vasu quietly went to thapki who was standing her hands folded infront of the small idol of krishna kept at the reception of the hospital.
Her eyes were gazing blankly at the idol but her heart was tried of praying.
She Got startled as she felt vasu’s hand on her shoulder. She quietly took a glance at her and got her answer. Vasu caressed her face “thapki plzz bring my son back” she said with hope in her eyes.

Thapki hurriedly opened the door and found him lying like life less body. She couldn’t step into the operation room on just seeing his very condition. Her Legs felt heavy not ready to move from its place. A feeble breeze touched her face and bought her back to her senses. She found herself on the doorstep “no….u have to be strong your bihaan needs u” “u can’t go weak” she argued with her heart. She slowly approached him and sat beside him on bed.
“bihaan” she whispered while taking his hand in her. His whole body was pierced with needles. Her eyes Couldn’t take his pain anymore and were cursing themselves for not being closed before watching him in this state. “bihaan open Ur eyes” “plzz bihaan plzz” she sobbed while moving her hands through his hairs. “u said u love me” “then why are u bearing all the pain alone” “this is not fair U promised me that we will share every pain every sorrow, every happiness 50:50” “where is my share” she shook his lifeless body.
“get up u idiot” “are u listening” she screamed. “I love u bihaan I can’t even take a breath with out u” “no one can separate us” she took his hand in her chest “not even god” she whispered. The family was witnessing the scene from the window.

She stood up in anger. “if u are not listening to me then I am coming to u. We can’t be parted. If we can’t be together in this world then may be in some other world” She shouted with anger boiling in her eyes…….she started looking for something sharp to stab herself she found a sharp knife and was about to stab it in her stomach. But dhruv’s hand snatched the knife.
“pagal ho gayi ho kya” “u think bihaan will be happy on seeing u like this ” she felled down on floor. She was now ruined both physically and mentally, can’t take any more.
Her eyes completely focused on her husband. She got up slowly and sat beside him. She caressed his face and leant into him to rest her head on his chest. “I love to watch u sleeping…. I adore ur sweet face… I want to be with u… To sleep with u… To Love u… I want to hold u and ur arms around me… I want to feel ur heart beats, as mine get synced together as one… I’ve found heaven in ur arms and my world in ur eyes… u are my love my life my everything…u are my universe” She Said and took a long glance at his face and closed her eyes. “I am coming to u” she whispered Two drop of tears slipped from her eyes to wet his chest. She was slowly drifting to an unknown world of darkness.

@ 6 years later.
“watch ur step aditi” preeti ran towards aditi and held her hand and supported her. Aditi kept one of her hand on her huge tummy and supported herself. There she was, aditi 6 months pregnant.
“who asked u to come down. U should’ve asked me” Preeti scolded aditi and made her sit on sofa.
“bhabi where’s dhruv” She looked around. Preeti smiled “don’t worry ur husband went to mandir with badi Sasu maa to pray for u and ur child”
In garden.
Dadi maa and suman were sitting watching over the little kids who were busy playing around.
priya the eldest one, daughter of sanjay was a very Cute and intelligent girl. Followed by the younger girl kriti a very bubbly naughty girl daughter of ashwin.

They were trying hard to make their little brother learn alphabets.
“bhai say a For apple” “b for ball” teaches priya.
But there sat the stubborn child. Not ready to open his mouth and blinking cutely at her.
“bhai plzz study otherwise chachi will punish u” Kriti warned with a cute pout on her face.
“I’ll tell chachi that u are not studying” “say a for apple” Priya warned.
A naughty glint appeared on his face as he saw his mother approaching him. “Its’s not a for apple it’s A for aryan pandey” he Shouted, laughed and ran inside. Yes, he is Aryan the only son of thapki and bihaan.
Dadi maa and suman laughed seeing his naughtiness. “bilkul apne bihaan pe gya hai” said dadi maa with wide smile on her face.
“a…a…aryan” “come to me I said” Thapki Started chasing him but soon got tired of running behind him she sat beside aditi breathing heavily.

Preeti and aditi giggled. Thapki smiled seeing his son mischiefs This was an ordinary scene in pandey niwas. (thapki running behind aryan).
Aryan came to her tightly holding a water bottle which he somehow managed to bring from kitchen.
“a…a..aryan” “what is this” Thapki asked confusedly.
“mumma plzz drink water” “I am sorry mumma” “mai aaj ke baad kabhi asa nhi karunga” He said cutely.
Thapki took him in her arms “its ok aryan” “mumma is not at all angry with u” Saying this she kissed him on his forehead he smiled. “but u have to study right then u will be a good boy”
“I’ll Help u” Aditi pulled his cheeks.
“no chachi I know ABCD” Saying this he started reciting it.
“A For aryan pandey” “B for bihaan pandey” “c for chuk chuk gaadi” Thapki’s jaw dropped. “who made u learn all these”
“papa” he replied.

“ohh!! Its ur daddy let him come home then I’ll show him” said thapki irritated.
“kya hua chuk chuk gaadi why are u missing me so much” Bihaan entered the door while aryan ran to him. “papa” “papa mumma was scolding me”
“accha chuk chuk gaadi why are u scolding my son” he said chuckling as he knew he have to pay for this later.
“bihaan” she huffed. But soon her anger vanished on seeing her husband and her child together. Laughing and smiling. She felt like starring at them her whole life. What else she wanted from life she shuddered at the thought of that fateful night when god had almost taken away her breath, her soul, her bihaan.

Flash back:
Thapki was slowly drifting to the world of darkness. But a voice disturbed her the voice was so sweet And soothing that she was forced to open her eyes. She looked up to find the most beautiful pair of eyes gazing at her. Its belonged to her husband her beloved her bihaan.
Bihaan opened his eyes and found thapki on his chest right above from where the bullet passed.
He called her “thapki” But no response he got worried As he knew what must have happened.
He caressed her face.

“thapki” She looked up as if getting Out from a deep sleep. Relief flooded through him as he saw her beautiful face.
“thapki” “I am fine” he voice was weak and frail but was soothing her heart her mind. He assured her that he is fine. A fresh set of tears rolled down her cheeks. “not again” he thought and reached her face to wipe them. But she held his hand And kept on crying. This time didn’t stopped her he knew that she need let out her pain. She cried her heart out. “bihaan” “I love u” “never leave me alone” She finally spoke “I’ll never I promise” He opened his arms inviting her to come to him. She slowly kept her head on his chest letting the rhythm and the music of his heart beat to soothe her pain.

Guyzz this is the last part of my ff. Thankyou friends for bearing me. This has been a quite new experience for me and Looks like I’ve made some new friends too.
As it’s the last episode. I would love to hear ur opinions. I am requesting everyone, who so ever have been reading my ff, to comments just for once, I just wanted to how many people have read my work. Plzz plzz it’s a request.
Love u all bye bye!!!

Credit to: Mineey

97 comments

  1. I can’t forget your FF ………..
    ITS AWESOME ….HAPPY ENDING. …THANKS A LOT…..and please updateta new THAHAAN new story yaarrr. ……

    • mineey

      Thanks payal my friend. don’t worry i will keep updating oneshot or may be twoshots whenever i’ll get time.

      • mineey

        Yess payal i am bengali but mineey is not my real name its shabnam and i am currently living in UP but nxt Month we are shifting to kolkata my hometown permanently. that’s is why i Have finished it so soon. I will be very busy these days.

        well…. Honestly saying i am really sad that i ‘ve to leave my friends here. But luckily i don’t have to leave u guyzz. i can remain in contact with u. and the credit goes to thahaan

  2. BIhaan

    OMG……………….this was the best episode ….actually the most wonderful pack of line i have ever read ….. i almost git so many feelings in just this episode ….it was so beautiful….arh ..i am speechless..want to praise you for every single line
    i will be waiting for your comeback in future, honestly i want to say..ahmmm …leave it…..just hoping that you will comeback soon, one day

    • mineey

      thanks bihaan. Thankyou for appreciating my work. Actually i took so much time to write this episode And Now……i am fully satisfied with ur comments. Thankyou so much friend.
      and….i promise i’ll be back……with a brand new story….till then bye!!!

  3. Jacinth

    Plzzz plzzzzzz mineey,don’t say byee..Really u made me cry..plzz u can’t stp 4m here..we want another ff 4m u…Anyway thnks mineey for dz beautiful amazing story and 4 perfect ending..u nailed it..u wrote dz pretty well.I enjoyed it from the beginning..um so sad bcoz the story is ending..may god bless u dr..plsss never say good byee..

    • mineey

      Ohh I am so sorry!!! jacinth My friend i am so lucky to have u as my friend. I promise i will never say good bye again…..thankyou so much for appreciating my work so much u made my day. Thankyou dear…..i am gonna be back with oneshot on thahaan…..very soon….till then takecare.

  4. mineey

    Thanxx santhosh my friend.
    i’ll definitely gonna write another, but not now.
    some other time.

    • mineey

      thankyou so much dear For reading my work And liking it….. And thankyou for keeping my request.

  5. Lovely

    This is the best of best ff I have ever read.Keep writing.u have an amazing talent.
    Really this is a great ending.
    God bless u!!!!

    • mineey

      thanks to u dear malika. If u haven’t kept on encouraging me. i wouldn’t have reached here. Thankyou so much.

  6. Shruti

    Wonderful episode It’s HAPPY ENDING OF THAHAAN. I’ll never forget ur ff it’s awesome my dear frd Mineey.???

      • mineey

        oh no!!! honey i’ve deactivated it Due to some reasons. But i’ll be back on fb very soon then i’ll let u Know.

      • Shruti

        OK no problem I can understand.. bt by this ff I hve got a frd like u.Plzz come back with another ff.???

  7. Happy ending ? Superb episode..you are an excellent writer?…thanks for this awesome F.f…….? M for mineey……is master in writing?

  8. sola

    I am silent reader of your ff…its really awesome…i never forgot…..u have great writting skills..keep it up…and come back with another one..becoz we r waiting for ur ff….

    • mineey

      ThankYou sola for keeping my request.
      i grateful to u that u have read my work and appreciated me. Thanxx

  9. Louella

    MineeyI m a silent reader but as it is the last part of ur ff I will comment. Today’s episode was very nice especially the children’s scene. Plz come soon with a new ff

    • mineey

      I know louella u have commented earlier….. on my 6 episode. See i have remembered u. Good to see ur name again and thankyou so much Seriously…..i am very lucky.

  10. Dear friend…….its really heart touching.actually iam a silent reader of your ff but your imagination power is awesome.Really miss you waiting for your new ff.

  11. Prtibha

    Hey mineey..it was soo emotional episode..u made me cry ..i just jumped to last paragraph from for know r they alive or not n then i read the middle paragraph…it was an awesome ff n i will miss for sure..please try to b back like our friend Anu okk..b back with another or like u said with on shots….Bbye tc n never forget me..remember as ur friend…..even v r from same state…

    • mineey

      Ha ha !! That was to be a surprise. But are like me i always read the first two pages and then directly jump on The conclusion…i mean last page.
      well…..thankyou honey.

  12. Ayushri

    Honestly, This is the best ff I’ve read so far. I was a silent reader alk this while but this chapter couldn’t stop me from commenting. Man you rocked it yaar! This part got me crying like hell! It was amazing! The way each and every emotion was described, I could actually feel each and every part of it! And the leap, oh god! It was amazing, better than those cliche endings (no offence) one of the best endings ever experienced! Honestly, i gpt goosebumps while reading it! Couldn’t control my tears, You are an amazing writer. Please don’t stop and continue writing, if not this then some other ff but don’t stop. You’re just great, this part made my day!

    • mineey

      Dear ayushri what to say…..how to thankyou…..i am so glad honey that u liked my work so much. And u commented…,thank you honey……honestly, saying….i am just running out of words….uhmm thankyou1+ thankyou2+ thankyou3+…………thankyou*x.
      well i hope u got my thankyou equation. ( i am very good in maths) Lol.

      • Ayushri

        I should be the one thanking you! For writing such a beautiful ff that too soo beautifully. Anyways, Welcome 🙂 And plss come back soon with an other one!

  13. No words to say it was awesome I was cried while reading…u explained d situation in a heart melt way…u r a superb writer….pls start another ff on thahaan

    • mineey

      Honey thankyou so much. I am so happy today. I once had day dreamed about this possibility(of getting so many comments)…,my dream is fulfilled. Thanks dear. I’ll be back very soon don’t worry!!!

  14. ashwana

    omg?u made it…
    really itz heart touching…
    I was little bit shocked while reading , tat u made bihaan to die ??bt finally nt.
    I became a fan of ur ff..
    ur ff is jz awesome,if it comes as a real story I ll b more hpy.?
    bt this is ur last part?am definitely gonna miss ur ff.?… am a silent reader of ur ff…
    bt today ly come forward to comment…
    plz come with an another beautiful ff..
    itz my humble request..

    • mineey

      Ashwana dear don’t be sad. I am gonna keep entertaining u like this. i’ll keep posting whenever i get time. Once again thankzzzz For keeping my request.

  15. Superb ending…, I loved it. Your writing skill was awesome, keep it up. I am big fan of your fan fiction. So I am waiting for your next Story,

  16. Fatarajo

    Mineey sorry for late comment as I was busy today and was outside your ff is too good yaar u know I read this episode thrice it was so good and emotional it really touched my heart and I love the ending a lot and I loved the thahaan son part so cute 🙂 please come back with a new ff asap

    • mineey

      Fatarajo fatarajo i was waiting for ur comment. Thankyou honey i am so overwhelmed to know that so many thahaan fans were reading my ff. Seriously i didn’t had the slightest idea about it. i am now feeling sad that i ended it so soon. Well….i’ll be back definietly.

  17. Deepu

    It was really awesome…
    feel like though exact capturation of episode…
    no words…
    plz come soon another thahaan ff
    u were outstanding…???????

    • mineey

      Thankyou1 + Thankyou2 + thankyou3 +………thankyou*x
      again thankyou equation……..What to do i am running out of words how to say thankyou. lots of love to u

  18. Tiara tharaa

    Hi mineey, im a silent reader. This episode was awesome and cute kid scene. Good job, keeping writing ff of thahaan. All the best. U did a great job. Thanks frnd.

    • mineey

      ohh tiara thanxx!! I can’t describe my happieness i can’t put it into words. U commented i am so happy thanxx.

  19. Malu

    Iam very sad? after read ur ff thought one day this was hppnd in tpk…
    miss lot ur ff..
    plz come back soon with another thahaan ff

    • mineey

      Hey malu don’t be sad. Just pray to god to give some brains to the writer.
      what else can we do!!
      thanxx for appreciating my work.

  20. I cannot explain ke mujhe kitni khushi hui ye ff parh kar meri to ankhoon main ansoon a gaye the trust me I love you yAar dil jeet liya mera happy ending thankU so much

  21. Alast

    Its awesome… I m one of the silent readers… Who were reading, enjoying & loving ur ff… I always use to wait for ur ff… As its last part i cant contrl myself from commenting… U r too good yaar… Superb

  22. rida

    Silentl reader, but read all the epi, but the last episode was horrified, but at tge sae time awesome too.best ending for any ff.

    • mineey

      hey u are not a silent reader i think u gave me a cool suggestion i remmember. U commented earlier also. Thankxx dear

  23. Akanksha Gupta

    Hello mineey
    I m silent reader of your ff but trust me I love all the epi,,, love your work,, love thaahan,,, love your story,,, even aditi dhruv story,,, I never comment on your ff but every time I read I appreciate,,, crore times better than real one,,, I love the leap,,,, cute family

    • mineey

      thankyou for ur appreciation akansha. I am glad that u at last commented on last one………thankyou so much honey.

    • Akanksha Gupta

      Awwwwww ty?? after reading I have tears in my eyes so I thought to comment at least on the last epi

  24. Hi mineey, I’ve read all your episodes. But I’m new here. But your story was amazing and outstanding. Hope you come back with a new one. I also made a ff destiny vs love. Hope to see your comments and Good luck on your next ff.

  25. TARA

    hi minney,i was a silent reader.I have read all ur episode this episode was amazing.Hoping u will come back with a new one

  26. anu

    hey mineey i m crying yar plz plz plz update a single epi 18 plz
    i m listening tum bin song from sanam re in ur memory really fab job done by u

  27. Simran

    Mineey. ….
    I’m reading tis ff from day 1 u started writing but never commented
    I hav to say only one thing….. Wow,, u r, u r just awesome….. so beautiful…. so nicely narrated. …. I can’t control my tears..its jus rolling down still.. I’m not sad but a mixed feeling….. hope I can see such a story soon in acted. …. Thank you…
    I don’t knw y a thank you to make me cry. .. but feel u deserve it..

    • mineey

      you are welcomed simran……… i am so glad that u kept my request. ThaNkyou honey that u appreciated my work. thanxxx.

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