Just the beginning of new love – Twinj (Episode 53)

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EPISODE- 53

nxt day-
taneja’s
kunj was already sitted on their sofa allowd by leela..n uv was angrily gng on thru newsppr…hardly noticing a singl headline also bcoz he has his entire focus on kunj’s momnts..
twinkle cms donw the stairs wearng a prfct suit..kunj immediately gets up to see her..his heart beats as fast as it beated wen he saw hr for the frst tym..she also looks at him n tries to keep hr calm n strng..she goes n joyfully hugs uv just to show him that she is happy kunj smiles to himslf..he puts his shades proprly..leela cms..
leela- so evry1’s ready..lets leave den to see this guy nnow..while they leaves..
l-kunj y u wearng this shades waether is so good today ..
k- umm maa,,wo bs ase he..twinkle also hears this n feels smthng fishy…
leela- oh ho puttar u dont need these acceseries u r already vry charmng..
k- ahaha, maa aap b na..bs aise he lga rka h..
n thy leaves..

they reaches n kunj n taneja’s gets sitted..
uv – angrily- kunj dey hvnt yet come.. n i request u not to create a scene today like ystrdy..they r vry reputated family ..forgod sake..dont do anythng ..n i m sure twinkle u will lyk sid
kunj nods sadly..they were sittng on a long table..in btvn twinkle n leela n chinki on her both sides..n kunj besides leela..n uv besisdes chinki..on one side of the table..
aftersmtym evry1 cms..
they all gets up to wlcm them ..
uv- plz hv a sit siddharth n mr. Bansal..
leela- cm cm mrs bansal..
mr. Bansal- pleasure meetng u all..
uv- well sir pleasure is all ours..
twinkle looks at kunj ,she was smwhere feelng uneasy for him that he is still wearng his shades..she thnks i m sure , he is hiding smthng..kunj bit turns his face n his eyes were visible sideways ,,,they were red …she gets shocked..
t-kunnj.j..
l- u said smthng twinkle?she cms in senses ..
t- umm no ma..kunj turns his face to her..n their eyes meet..
she thnks that he must hv cried whole nyt ..thats y dey r like that,..n she feels bad..n painful..he looks away.

mr.bansal- so , twinkle beta ..this is our son siddharth..
sid- hellow..twinkle..
twinkle was still looking at kunj..only..
uv- twinkle?she cms in hr senses n looks away..n composes hrslf..she looks at siddharth’s hnd which was waitng for a handshake..she slowly brings hr hnd up to him…
t- hello..kunj focuses on their hnds…n tightens his fist,..twinkle takes away hr hnd..
mr. Bansal – so yuvraj.who is this man ..
uv- umm this is..
twinkle- our family membr..she keeps hr face down..kunj gets a smile atleast she calld hr his family membr ..jaldi husbnd b bol degi..
uv- ya..
mrs. Bansal- so i guess we..shud let the kids hv a talk for a while alone..v hope no 1 minds that..
uv- offcrse not..twinkle looks surprise..sid gets up …
leela- go puttar..
t- hm..she gets up ..kunj keeps lookng at hr , he strts gttng mor n mor tears…in his eyes..bt keeps dem hidden…
sid- aftr u..twinkle nods n they leaves n stnds 50 mtrs away at the railing as it was an open suit.kunj keeps lookng at them..sid was vry well dressd n smart n handsm too..
sid- so , how r u twinkle..
t- u mm. I m ..absolutely fine..thnkew..
sid- u wont ask abt me..twinkle gets in hr senses that dese r etiquettes wat is she doing..
t- yaa.i mean ya..how r u..
sid- ahaha well..now much bttr…so tell me smthng abt urslf..twinkle was not at ol interstd in this..bt was smwhere has to do it.
Tears cms on face of kunj which he was constntly rubbing..
t- umm..i m ..married ..do u know that..?
sid- i absolutely know that frm ur brothr n evn got to know that u r facng problm in ur marriage,,
t- nd u still came to marry me?
Sid- offcrse y not, i liked u..i mean u r deadly gorgeous..so who will leave a chnc to meet such a beautiful gl..n i m really n open minded guy, i dont hv any problm if u were married or not..if v gel..i will b more den blessd to marry u..
Twinkle feels touched with his thoughts…she looks at kunj who was constntly looking at them..she thnks now he will feel wat i felt at that time..
Sid- so twinkle wat do u want the most in ur husbnd..
t- trust,he should b trust worthy..
sid- i see that came vry fast..well i cn count ur last marriage also got hatched bcoz of less trust ha?
t- umm..ya…
sid- okay..xcuse me..
t- yes..
sid- u r smwhere else ryt now i suppose..
t- did u say smthng..my hobbies ryt?
Sid- umm no…actaully..twinkle if..u need sm tym n space..i will talk to my dad for not hurryng up..i really like u..n if u like me..i cn assure u ..u cn hv all ur space…bt twinkle was not at all lsietning o him though he was sweet bt nope she has hr eyes only on kunj..
Kunj was now not abl to control his tears so he excuses himslf n rushes to washroom..twinkle heart stars beatng faster n feels his pain..n cudnt resist herslf too..
t-siddharth..i guess..u r veryy sweet..bt plz..will u just xcuse me..for a secnd..i want to go to washroom..
sid- umm.ya sure..i hope evrythng’s fine.
t- it is..absolutely thanks..i will b bck in a min..
sid- plz..she hurriedly turns to leave..
She hurried towrds the wshroom..
N starts knockng at the gate..

Men’s room
T- kunj open the gate
K- twinkle..
T- kunj .. OPEN THE GATE..
K- twinkle its men’s room..
T- idc.. Just opn the gate.. Get me in.. I want to see u..
K- no just leave.. I dont want u to see me like this..
T- kunj i saw ur eyes.. Plz open the damn gate..
K- leave twinkle.. Siddharth must b waiting for u..
T- shut up kunj n opn the damn gate else i m calln the security to open it..
k- y do u care twinkle..lemme b ..
t- idc .agrhhh ..just open the gate..
Kunj feels she wont go .. She is too much ziddi..
Kunj immediately wears his shades n opns the gate .. Twinkle rushes in .. She sees kunj stndng showing her his bck..
T- turn to me..
K- y hv u cm.. Bansal’s must b eagerly waiting for u to make u der bahu..
T- shut up kunj .. U know i dont.. She stops realizing wat she is sayng..
Kunj still facng his back..
T- u wont turn
K- no..
Twinkle angrily takes a deep breath n holds him by his shoulder .. N makes him turn.. Kunj stil wasnt ready bt looses at her touch.. N turns n faces her .. Twinkle sees his shades .. N holds dem with her fingers n pulls out.. She sees sm tears drops on his face.. As he kept his eyes shut..

K- just leave twinkle.. She gets teary eyes..
T- no.. Oope..en.. Ur.. Eyes..
K.- please twinkle.. Go..
Twinkle feels terribly bad abt his condition.. N now she lost all her patience .. She cudnt resist hrslf.. She takes a step closer to him n slowly puts her fingers on his face ..
Kunj turns his face to the ryt.. Bt twinkle brings it bck in frnt of her..
T- open ur eyes kunj..
Twinkle takes a step more close to him n cups his face .. Tears falls frm hr face.. She touches his eyes with her fingers.. Kunj takes a deep breath..
T- letMe seee dem..
Kunj looses at her touch n love in her voice agn.. He slowly opns his eyes..
Twinkle gets a bck looking at his eyes like that,. Fully red n swelled as if he hasnt slept frm past days n cried all day night.. Tear cms in kunj eyes n he looks here n der .. Without making eye contct.. With hr..
T- ye.. Kya.. Haal.. Bnna.. Rka.. Tumne.. Apna..
Kunj doesn’t replies.. N avoids her ques ..
T- u r drunk.. How many
K- 1. I drank bt i m not drunk.
T- y u doing this to urslf..
Kunj doesnt replies..
T- tell me damn it.. Aise kr k kya show krna chahte ho ha.. Ki mere se durr rehne m tum kitne marre jaa rahe ho.. Aise kr k kya duniya walo ko ki tum kitne mahaan ho n apni wife se kinna pyaar krte ho.. Ha yehi na..
Kunj feels broken insde..
K- tum ye kya bol rahi ho.twinkle. Its .. Its nothng like that..
T- oh please mr. Kunj sarna..
Kunj gets no words n hugs her tightly.. Pinning her to the wall.. Twinkle gets surprise..

T- kkunjj..
T- kunj.. Leave me.. Bt kunj tightens her more.. Twinkl closes hr eyes n tears gls frm hr eyes.. Twinkle slowly feels him.. N melts in him.. She slowly brings her hnds up n hugs him bck.. By tapping slowly on his back..her anger as if just fading into his hug..
K- twinkle .. Plz stop this..i cnt see..u with sm1 else..plz…(.cryng..)
Twinkle closes her eyes.. N feels bad.. She hugs him tightly.. N feels him.. N both makes the hugs passionate..
K- i m sorry.. Twinkle caresses his hair…she forgts evrythng.. Just him.. In hr thoughts ..
t-shh…kunj caresses her hair..
Bt ek dm se twinkle’s fon rings.. She opens her eyes n looks at him.. He still hugged hr.
T– kk..uu..nnj.. My fon.. Kunj cms in senses.. N slowly leaves hr..her hair all ovr his face as she moves bck both keeps looking at ech othr.. kunj turns n clears his face .. She picks the call clearng her face n composng hrslf..
T- h..haa.. Bh..bhai..
Uv- Twinkle where the hell r u.. Kunj.. Is also missng.. I hope u r not.. With him.. Here siddharth is waiting for u.. Where r u.??
T- umm..noo.. Bhai i m .. Not wit..th him.. B..bbh..aai.. I m in.. Washroom.. N I m.. Just,. Cmng.. Kunj gets bit hurt that y she didnt tell him the truth.
She turned to open the gate ..
Kunj was looking at her through the mirror n interrupts
K- y didnt u tell uv that u r with me.
She stops her heart strts beatng faster..

T- wo ..mm..
He turns to her..
K-leave twinkle.. u just cnt see the truth..
She turns to him.. Both faced ech othr now.
T- shut up kunj.
K- damn it u shut up.. Enough is enough now..
Twinkle gets a bck..
T- idc.. I hv to go .. Evry1’s waiting for me.. N she turns to open the gate .. Bt kunj immediately takes steps closer to her n smashes the door closed.. Twinkle gets shock ..
T- wat r u doing kunj.. She turns to him.. Kunj continuously lookng at her
K- today u hv to listen watevr i hv to sy. N idc who called u or who is out waiting for u. U r my wife.. N i hv full ryts to make u stop..
T- i dont wanna listen to anythng..
He puts his finger on hr lips.. N one on the door..
K- enough teinkle.. Twinkle cud see in his eyes the firmness n sharpness..
K- i just wanna say one thng.. I gues i hv apologised enough to u.. Said sorry n tried to explain myslf n nimbr of tyms .. Bt u r hardly considereng anythng.. U didnt evn trusted me for a scnd.. Bt now.. I wont evn say a sorry one more tym.. Heights of immaturity.. Y shud i say now.. I wasnt at fault bt fine if for a fractn of scnd i got cqrried away with the momnt den i hv apologied abt that too..fine if u want divorce i will sign dem..
She gets shocked..
k- if u want to marry sm1 else now..i wont stop u ..i willnvr show u my face agn..yes i cnt live without u bt tym teaches evrythng..twinkle gets teary eyes..i wont stop u twinkle..i hv always loved u n vl always lv only u..bt wil u b abl to live without me? Ha twinkle will u b abl to live without kunj.

t- umm..ku..unnj.jj..
k- tell me ..wil u b abl to marry ny othr guy..n share ur feelngs with him..ha?
k- u hv acted to much strng..twinkle n i cn see how much tuff wife i hv …ik u still lv me..bt smwhere u nvr trusted me wen thngs abt shanaya usd to cm..y twinkle y..twinkle’s fon rings..bt she didnt evn bothr to look at it..she was just looking at his face, his words,his eyes,that now were not lying..
k- u were insecure..n den wen u got to know tht i kissd hr..ur insecurity resltd in broken trust as u said..bt trust me twinkle..i nvr broke ur trust ,iwll nvr break ur trust. Tears falls frm hr eyes..kunj looks at dem..he raises his hnd slowly to hr face..n clears her tears..twinkle closes her eyes bcoz of his touch n opens dem ..as he clears the tears on other cheeks..deeply looking at him..emotions dancing in the air..love presnt in the air ..
k- i only love u..i love u twinkle..she takes a deep breath..kunj looks at her face with sm hope..
t- cm with me..
k – haan ?
t- move bck kunj..n cm with me..kunj takes steps bck to gv her space.. she opens the gate n nods him to walk..kunj takes steps with questned face..not gttng wat twinkle wants..both clears their face n composes themslves..
k-wat..r.r…u doing..
t- jjust walkk…
k- twinkle..if u ..wanna create a..scne ..n make fun..of me..there..srsly..now..i wont allow it..
twinkle looks at his face..n smiles..
t- how cn u evn imagine i will b creatng a scene of my husband..n looks away..kunj gvs a questn look..
both walks in silence..n reaches where all were sitted..
uv – gets up- where were u twinkle..he gvs looks to him n her..
mr.bansal- yes puttar where were u gone..v almost decided to get u married with my son..as he liked u alot..twinkle looks at sid..uv was fuming ,he was undrstnding that smthng has hpnd..
t- i m sorry sir..for takng ur precious tym..
uv- twinkle cm here i want to tslk to u..
t- bhai plz..today lemme speak..uv gvs a questned look..kunj toh himslf wasnt undrstdning wat she wants..he made full mind that she will ditch me infrnt of evry1..bt smwhere he still trusted his love..
t- mr. Bansal, v gave u a wrng introduction abt one persn presnt here..
mr.bansal- i m not gttng beta..
t- sir,the persn stndng nxt to me is not just a family member ..she takes a deadly pause..

HE IS MY HUSBAND…kunj gets surrised..uv fumes..bansal’s gets hakke bakke..sid surprised..
..both looking at ech othr..kunj still surprised…
T- HE IS MY HUSBAND..YES.THE HSBAND I WAS ALWAYS PROUD OF ..BUT SITUATIONS GOT SO MESSED LASTLY N BCOZ OF MY IMMATURITY I DIDNT EVN TO LISTENED TO WAT HE WANTED TO SAY,,I DONT KNOW I SHOULD B SOO MUCH THANKFUL TO GOD THAT HE GAVE ME SUCH A HUSBAND LIKE KUNJ BT I DIDNT VALUED HIM MUCH..IDK Y N WEN I GOT SO BLIND THAT THE PERSON I LOVED THE MOST I DIDNT LISTENED TO HIM..N ALL THIS TIME..HE WAS TRYNG TO GAIN MY TRUST BCK ..N I STARTED DOING ALL THIS CRAP..FINDING NEW PARTNER FOR ME WEN I CNT EVN GET A 10% OF HIM IN ANY OHR GUY..seh looks at him who was lovingly looking at her..KUNJ SAID SORRY TO ME SO MNY TYMS, LIKE SRSLY SO MNY TYMS.. , HE CRIED FOR ME LIKE GIRLS DO..kunj smiles n looks down..BUT I M STILL SO PROUD OF HIM..ISNT HE CUTE..YES HE IS CUTE..HE IS MY LOVE..N WILL ALWAYS B MY LOVE..she turns to kunj..I LOVE U KUNJ…

I M SORRY..I M SO SORRY WRDS U SAID INSIDE BROUGHT HELL OUT OF ME BCOZ I CNT LIEV WITHOUT U KUNJ I CNT LIVE WIDOUT U ..I M NOT SO STRONG..I M SORRY..FOR NOT TRUSTNG U..FOR NOT SHOWING SUPPORT WEN U MOST NEEDED IT..I IDNT SHOWED MY FAITH IN U STILL ALL THE TIME U WERE APOLOGZING ..N ..N ITS GOOD ONLY NOT TO POLOGIZE FRM A WIFE LIKE ME..WHO DONT TRUST HIS SUCH A LOVNG HUSBAND..I M SOO SOORRYY KUNJ.. N IF U DECIDING THAT I HV TO MAKE UP TO U .. I WILL PUT DAY N NIGHT TO APOLOGIZE TO U..TO GRNT UR FORGVNESS..SO TELL ME WILL U FORGV ME..? WILLL U FORGV UR IMMATURED TWINKLE? WILLL U FORGV UR …
He cups her face immediately ..
k- shhh twinkel shhh..i forgv u..i forgv u..i m sorry ..
t- plz dont..plz hug me kunj ..plz…kunj gets a smile.n he immediately hugs her passionately..
while thye hugged..evry1 clapped..sid was the frst one to clap.. evry1 clapped.. leela got vry happy ..chinki strts jumping in happiness but uv was still smwhere nt liking this..chinki says i love u uv n he looks at her withhappiness n says that same way kunj lvs twinkle..our twinkle..ur sister..he is really nive guy..better then u ..yes..n she laughs ..seeing her laughng uv also smiles..chinki holds his hnds n makes him clap..uv forgets evrythng n gets vry happy…n starts dancing..he goes t kunj who was stndng ith twinkle apologizing to mr.bansal..n bansal’s left..uv goes tp kunj..

uv- kunj apne uv ko maaf ni krega?
Kunj- umm srf ek shrt pr..
Uv- mm..bol yr..
K- tu mje tje bhai bulane dega tab..
Evry1 smiles..
Uv laughs n hugs him ..
Uv – bhai h yr tu toh apna..
Kunj- bhai..bhai..n they break the hug..he holds him with his shouder n says- i m such a bad brothr na twinkle..evry siser’s brothr treat their sisters husband in such a spcial maner n me luckless prsn treated my brothr in law in such a bad manner..i slapped him how cud i..i ordred my guards to throw him out of our huse..i m sorrry kunj that..i did so wrng to ..u..so wrng..he folds his hnds in frnt of kunj..
k- bhai kya kr ra h yr..i m lucky to hv a brothr like u..u r elder then me…u hv full ryt to do so wen i do wrng..bs bhai dheere se maara kr agli baar..aise lga kisi sumo ne haath chaap diya ho.. n he laughs ..
uv also laughs..n evry1 hugs in happiness…twinkle slides her hnd into his .. While looking at the happy family.. Wen twinkle suddenly whispwrs Iloveu kunj .. He gwts a smile n both looks at ech othr lovingly..

****53rd episode ends here*****

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Credit to: pali

45 comments

  1. Aastha

    i luved it i thought d challenge track would stretch bt no…. u really finished it in such a gud way…. pali now some romance bht fight ho gya

  2. panchi

    wooooooowwwww…… amazing yaar ….. finally twinj united ….. u r jst superb yaar …… loved it …..

  3. ahana

    Wow what an amazing epi……. first half was soo emotional i almost cried and second part i was soo happy twinj back once again

  4. Shatakshi

    Pali u r d best….its d first ff where twinj separation was so interesting n same goes with today’s track of their patch up… Keep going..lots of love

  5. twinj fan-(tamanna)

    I wanted to ask u that r u a writer by profession…amazing…the episode was full of emotion…..i loved it.. I can feel every bit of it..ur such an amazing writer…..

  6. Lama

    Yippeee Twinj are United ?????…..Pali ur ff is the best…..seriously ur concept, dialogues, track everything is just perfect…..Mind blowing palI…..u just nailed it…..Love u ❤❤❤❤

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