junoon wala ishq – twinj epi-50 ♥ GOLDEN JUBILIE ♥ last epi..(BYEBYE ALL OF U)

¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤Hii…..
I know u all r shocked seeing my golden jubilie n last epi together…i will tell u but pls read d last epi WID TISSUE PAPER …it will b needed probably..so lets go…

Recap:twinj got married by accident later der family make dem married officially…der first night..ring competition..n karan’$ words..

JUNOON WALA ISHQ-TWINJ
EPISODE:50 GOLDEN JUBILIE (LAST EPI 😉 )
leap of 6 years..
Sarna mansion
A lady is running after a girl wid milk glass in her hand n she was talking on phone…
Lady:yes..yes mr.sharma..it will b okay..but wen will u send those things…party is tomorow n til now ..i want all those things in 1 hour..or..
N she cuts d call..
Now she goes to d girl who was hidin herself behind d sofa..
Lady:amira will not drink milk..??
Girl nods in no… 😛
Lady:okay..so tomo’$ party is cancel…
Girl:y mumma…

Lady:becoz..u r not drinkin milk…if u will not drink….den how will u get energy..?n u will look small even u turn 5 today….so dont drink okay..m going..n yaa i will call sharma uncle n tell him to not send d things…
Girl take d glasa n drink it in 1 go…closing her nose…
She make a annoyed face….
Men:u r like u mumma only..drama queen…
Amira saw d men..
Amira:papa..!
N she runs n hugs him…
Men:yup..my princess…tell me who made u drink milk…? I will slap him|her…
Amira:mumma…
Men:twinkle…..?

He made angry face…
D lady is tw
Tw turns…
N d men is kunj…
Kunj giv hee flying kiss..n den make angry face
Ku:y u Made her drink d milk…come to d room i will c u..
Tw:achcha mr.sarna..? Den lets go..
Tw said furiously..but kunj was smiling…
He puts amira down n she goes to usha…
(Specially For vasiya aapi..u want twinj scenes so here u go…)
Tw was busy wid her work for d party so she dint go der…she was putting evrything in car as dey were going to d farmhouse for next evening party….
Kunj was now annoyed…dey all move to farmhouse at evening…kunj was driving n he was not speaking anything as he was angry..tw dint notice it n kept talking wid amira…
Dey reach farmhouse…every1 had der dinner n was chitchatting in hall..kunj signs tw to come to d garden..shesigns him dat first he will go den den she will come…he goes n waiy for him….
After 2 hours(10’0 clock)
Tw comes der…kunj pulls her to d backyard…der was grass of horses stored…
Ku:y u came dis much late..?
He sai wid full anger..
Tw:oh my sadu is angry wid me…actually i went to make amira sleep n den bebe call me for massaging her hair so…
Ku:hmm..bebe called n u go at moment but wen i call u dint come…at mornin also n now also…
E said burning in anger.
Tw startes tickling him…
Tw:u r now also angry…?
She said continuing d tickling ..
After much time she stopped….
Kunj moves closer to her….
Kunj:now pay for tickling…
Tw blush..
Tw:no kunj…its a grass store…firt v will go to d room den v will c..?
Kunj:no…u tickle me here…u will pay here only..
Kunj capture her lips…
She got Tw got shocked by his sudden act…
Tw also responds him…kunj was moving his fingures all over her face sensously…tw was losing her control..now kunj widout breaking
d kiss…unzip her kurti…
Tw:kunj…not here…
Kunj:……
He kept mum…n strt proceeding..
Tw broke d kiss…n she was now proceeding to remove his shirt…she tear whole shirt…while kunj bites her neck…she was digging her nails in his bare chest…kunj remove her upper cloth dat us kurti…both r standing at d corner..n behind d dry grass…if any1 would enter..dey cant see dem…coz grass ws covering dem….tw was wearing a plazo…kunj hands reach d hook..he start to take out..now tw became wild…she takeout his jeans…both were naked..dey just want to b in eo embrace n want eo love…donno from where a small cloth came..dey cover demself using it as a bedsheet n dry grass as a bed….den dey make love wid eo..n slept der only…(hope u all liked it)

Next day…
At 5 am…
Tw woke up..n saw demself necked n in d grass..she remember last night n blush hard..just den kunj also wakes up..
Ku:oye…my doll is blushing so hard…koi to roklo..warna i will..
He pulls her through her waist n widout further he insert hid lips into her…tw pulls out quickly…
Tw:kunj lets go…some1 will c us…n
Kunj again kiss her…
Ku:no problem baby…
Just den dey heard some1 coming der…
Tw:ohh god..wat will happen…
Wear cloths fast….
Tw wears her plazo n kurti..but kunj wore jeans only coz his shirt was Teared by his wild wife…

Ku:how will i go….
Tw:idk…dats ur problem..
Ku:dats not my problem…u only tear it…now giv me something
Tw:if u had not remover my kurti dan i would not hav tear ur shirt…
Ku:if u hav not tickle me dan…
Before he could say something she left…kunj goes behind her…
To der luck evry1 was sleeping…
Dey enter der room..kunj close d door n block her way.. by putting his hand..
Tw:remove it..i wanna get fresh…
Ku:i will help u na..baby..
He holds hernin her arms…n strt to go to d bathroom..
Tw bites his hand n he lose..she tuns to d bathroom…

At night:…
Party was going on at farmhouse…
Evry1 was sooo happy..no1 knows dat der happiness will b destroy in sometime…
Some1 is seen outside d farmhouse….he was facing his back….he turns n is revealed to KARAN.KARAN MALHOTRA..
Karan:i m back..kunj sarna..today ur game will b over…u take away tw from me…i will take away ur life…today is ur happy day…ur princess bday…today ur princess was born..n today only u will b dead…ha..ha…ha…
He laughs evilly
..
Der kunj receives a cover…
It has written to meet at backyard…
Kunj thought it was from tw so he left…tw saw him goin..she goea behind him.
(*TISSUE PAPER NEEDED IF U R SENSITIVE*)
KUNJ ENTERS D grass stored room…
Ku:twinkle…where r u..?
Tw was coming..she saw him entering d grass room..but some1 calls her so she left der…
Kunj was finding tw….
Karan:ta nahi…teri maut.(not tw ur death)
Kunj:karan…
Karan:yes me…m back…before 6 yrs i left because my mom was ill..n i had to go to her …but now as shebis dead..i will hav to kill u..u take away tw from..me..
Kunj:wat..tw is only mine…
Karan had chain in hia hand (hope u understand .d one which is made up of iron…it is soo hard..dat 1 could die too)
Karan beat kunj wid d chain on his leg…kunj fall down…
Kunj:wat r u doiin…y…y..
Before he coul say..d chain strike his head..n he got unconcious
Kunj:TWINKLE
he loudly shout…
Tw felt something..she left for dat place….
Kunj again shouts her name n finally got unconcious…
Karan:i will kill u…
“BUT BEFORE DAT U WILL B KILLED BY ME”

tw shouts from behind…she runs to kunj…
Tw:how dare u…wat he has done to j dat u did dis wid him….
Karan:he take away u from me…i will kill him..n den u will b mine forever…
Tw stands n slap him
Tw:how dare u to think i will cm to u…i m his only…KUNJ OR TWINKLE JIYENGE BHI SAATH OR MARENGE BHI SATH(kunj n tw will live wid eo..n die wid eo)
Karan:u slap me..u hav to pay for it..
He holds her n pulls her closer..he tries to kiss her….tw tear fall on kunj:$ eyes..he open his eyes n saw d scene which he had not imagine…he stands up wid much difficulty..his head was bleeding…

Kunj pulls tw..tw hides herself behind him….
Kunj n karan hav a fight…firstly kunj beat him..but wen karan beat him on head…karan start to beat…tw could not take it anymore…she wraps her dupatta tightly on his head..to stop d Bleeding….kunj was in half concious state..tw touches karan’$ feet to stop beating her husband…but he was not stopping
Tw:i will do watever u want…
Karan stops
Karan:GIV UR SELF TO ME…
tw made a disgusting look..
Tw:wat…
Karan:giv urself to me…or he put his feet on kunj’$ chest…

Tw saw him..she closes her eyes..
Tw:I M READY….
Tears were gushing down her eyes…
Karan:ok den lets go…
Tw:where…
Karan:to my place…der is something special for u…
Tw had no option den dis…she gets ready
Karan:(to his goons)take kunj also..he will sseee his beloved wife..which will become mine to dags night…

At kaan’s place…
A big luxurious room was decorated wid roses… d way from door to bed is of roses…d room was full of tw’s picture….
Karan:c baby v r here…lets start…go n wear dis..handing a packet to her….
Tw takes it n left to bathroom…
Karan made kunj sit on a chair n ties it wid rope…he was seates exactly in front of bed..kunj was unconcious…karan wakes hiM up by water..he opensbhus eyes n saw
Ku:where i m…n where is tw..
Karan:shh..kunj…wait my twbis goin to come..
Ku:she is not urs..
Karan:ohya she is urs but to b mine in sometime…actually she accept to gav herself to me for saving ur life.. she will b mine todays night
Ku:DONT UDARE TO TOUCH HER…I WILL KILL U…
Tw comes out of d bathroom…wearing a full sleeve long shrug…
Karan:takeout d shrug baby
Tw eyes kunj…
Kunj nodes in no…
Tw doesnt take out…
Karan take a knife n Put it on his neck(kunj)
KARAN:do it or…
Tw takes out…
Karan put d knife aside..he goes to tw..
She was wearing a sleeveless n transparent pink onepiece…it was till her knees only…her br**st waa covering rest is transparent…
Tears were coming out her eyes unstoppably..
Kunj was trying to take knife…
Karan moves closer…she close her eyes…karan was about to insert his lips into her..but
Kunj:BY TWINKLE…

Tw pushes him n saw kunj on d floor…
He had cut his wrist…n d knife was in his stomach…
Tw made his head on her lap…
Kunj:i cant c u wid any1..instead i should die…
Tw:no kunj…i did dis only for u..
Ku:ii…i..i..tr..trust ..u..u..
Tw takes d knife n she insert in her stomach in1 go..widout thinking…she falll on kunjs head which is on her lap..
Tw:I had promised u Dat i willb wid u forever..KUNJ OR TWINKLE JIYENGE BHI SAATH..
KUNJ:OR MARENGE BHI SAATH…
DEY SMILE AT EO…n close der eyes…
Dey remember der knok-jhoks…der fight…der love confession…der marriage..der first night..der last night…
Dey had a smile on der face…

Dey close der eyes forever n ever…

—-D END—-

(Oye kahan jaa rahe ho…story abhi baaki hai..)
“DIS WAS D STORY OF MY MUMMA”
PAPA…”
SHE said crying…it was a girl who was saying dis story on her launch of her first book..which is on her mumma papa….she is AMIRA..twinj’s daughter…d sign of der love…
Amira:der love was dat much strong..dat dey die for eo…der junoon on der love was infinity…junoon Me aakar woh kuch b karte the…sometimes fighting…sometimes loving..n atlast die on dis day..on der daughters bday…today is my bday n dis is d gift for my mumma papa…dey always want me to become a writer..n here i m …today is my first book launch which is on der loe story…my book “JUNOON WALA ISHQ”
I miss u mumma papa…n love u all…

She said having tears almost on crying…
Amira:i must say…pyaar ho to mere mumma papa jaisa…junoniyat wala JUNOON WALA ISHQ…my parent s love was unique…
—————————.finally it ended here
I know u all r shocked..i ended it widout notifying u..becos u woild stop me to end..so
ACTUALLY I END IT BECOZ OF MY STUDIES…I GAV MY WHOLE DIWALI HOLIDAYS TO U ALL…N MY FF SO DAT I COUL END IT…U ALL HAD SUPPORT ME SOO MUCH THANK U ALLL OF U…UR LOVE IS SOOO MUCH FOR ME THANK U FOR UR LOVELY CMNTS…
SPECIAL THANX TO PURNIMA N SAMEERA FOR DER CONSTANT SUPPORT TO MY FF….
BABY N SAYEEDA TOO..DEY BOTH SUPPORTED ME IN D BEGINNING…BUT BECOZ OF STUDIES DEY STOP SO ITS OK…

ADYA ….tHANX..
SIDVEE…SIDHANSHI ALL OF U…THANK U SOO MUCH..LIVE U ALL..
U ALL SUPPORTED ME…
SILENT READERS TOO
TEHREEM…VASU AAPI…SIDMIN.SHRUTI…SHATAKSHI..N MUCH MORE..A SORRY I CANT SAY EVRYONEA NAME…
BUT LOVE U ALLL SOOOOOS OO MUCH…
WILL MISS U ALL GUYS….
BUT DONT THINK I WILL LEAVE U ALL EAAILY…
AFTER MY BOARD EXAM …AFTER MARCH I WILL B BACK WID A NEW FF…
HOPE U ALL LIKED ENDING….
I MADE IT A SAD COZ I KNOW U ALL WILL NOT GET TEARS IN UR EARS ON LEAVIN ME…SO BY DIS ENDING UALL WILL HAV A SINGLE TEAR..I WIL FEEL LIKE I HAD A SMALL ALSO PLACE IN UR HEART…
PLS CMNT..

OR EK CHEEZ MAANGU…
ONLY UR 1 MINUTE…
ALL SILENT READER PLS CMNT…
HISAKE TO LONG DENSA PLS….I WILL REPLY TO UR CMNT…
N U ALL WILL HAV A TREAT FROM ME WHO HAD CMNTD A SINGLE TIME…DO WAIT
BAH bbYE
Love u alll♥♥♥♥♥

67 comments

  1. Sameera

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    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Woww yaar aamu such a nice ending yaar bas rula diya sabko pagli sachi ye junoon wala ishq 😘😘😘😘😘
    I am gonna miss it soo much dat I can’t describe yaar …
    Loved the whole journey from twiraj marraige them Twinj moments their confession chinki enemity n everything yaar just loved each n every scene of ur ff ..
    I don’t want u to end this ff but studies is more important n i agree with your decision sachi yaar amira has described her parents love sooo cute …
    And twinkle last dialogue kunj aur twinkle jiyengay b saat aur marengay b saat made me get tears in my eyes 😭😭😭😭
    Such a epic ending yaar ……
    Will misss u soooooo much …..
    Don’t u dare forget me agr bhula nah to anjaam dekh Lena 😂😂😂😂
    Well best of luck for ur studies babes do come soon with a blast will wait for u ba byeeeeeee ….
    Last but not the least 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
    Love u soooooooooooooooooooo much
    Ummah 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Sameera

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      Arah mein tujhe sab se imp baat to bolna bhul hi gayi nai samjhi ???????
      Well a very happy golden jubilee yaar mubaraka 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
      Party to banti hai boss’s 😘😘😘😘😘😂😂
      Hahaha ab pakka wala bye 😁😁

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Ab rulayegi kya pagli….. 🙁 🙁 🙁
      Sachchi i willl miss u soooo much…..
      I was knowing aakhon me leakage to hogahi…lo ho gaya….now smile….
      I think u smiled right….?
      Right….
      Thank u sooo much shammmu….for ur lovely long cmnt….
      Love u tooo sooooo much♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
      N meri itni majaal ki me tumhe bhul jaao…or tu bhule to kya….teri itni majaal….
      Will miss u…..
      Thanx for ur wishes…jut pray for my exams

  2. Sohi

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    Hey aamu your ff was good amazing fabulous awesome and what not iam very sad that it has ended but it’s OK all the best for your exams and come back with new story bye take care

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Thank u sooo muchh sohi for ur support n wishes …thanx again
      Glad dat u liked jt…
      Love u…
      Willll miss ur cmnt tooo…
      N dont take tension i will b coming sooon after march……wid a bang

  3. Adya

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    Aamu ..!!!!
    Yrr Kyu aise krti h…I know u won’t believe me but honestly I’m having tears in my eyes…mamma promise ……tune Bina batae aise ……yrr….Mai Kya bolu ..I’m lacking words.

    😢😢😢😢😩😩😩Tu chali Jayegi to mujhe tag kaun krega !!!! Mujhe jaanu kaun bulaega ..???? Mere bday me mujhe wish kaun krega ??? Mujhe kaun datega ??? Mere ff pr comment kaun krega ???? Mujhse summary kaun mangega ???? ……tu bata aj mujhe ….ni bata !!!!! Main darling kisko bolungi ???? Hug kisse mangugi ????
    Mujhe jhappi Aur kissi kaun Dega yrr !!!!!!!

    Bt I won’t force …lekin aj iss comment me..mai apne dil ki sari bhadas nikal rhi hu…tujhe bahut miss krungi….Tere pure ff ko miss krungi…Aur hnn plss jaye n to apna exams ache se Dena….come first in every aspect of life…don’t fail to try …plzzzzzzz come back soon…Tera ff sabse acha ff tha !!!!! Get that…

    Aur madam plss….don’t u forget the promise that u gave me !!!!! Every Sunday Wala ….yaad h n..😟😟😟
    Acha last Bt not the least …vo dialogue yaad h ….hum tumhe bhul jaye aisa ho nhi sakta Aur Tum hame bhul jao aisa hum hone nhi denge !!!!😨😨😨😨
    Sun n….I’ll miss u !!! Come back soon..Bt exams me concentrate Krna Aur hnn ache se likhna…first hona Aur badmashi mat Krna..

    Come back soon !!!!!
    Love uuuuuuuuu tillllll infinity Darling 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
    ( This is the longest comment by me to anyone..)

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Aaaaah….itni lambi cmnt…
      Wah..wah…
      Yeh to muje dekhkar hi samajh jaaana tha..ki yeh tu hi hogi…
      Haa yaar muje end karna pada…lr madam sabse pehle mene tuje hi bola tha ki me TU leave kar rahi hu isliye f bhi end kardungi….
      Or haa maine promise kiya hai…ekdum pkka wala promise…PINKY PROMISE….har sunday me online ho jaoungi…pkka…
      Or tu muje bhulegi to me tuje apne aap ko bhula dungi samjhi…..
      Thank j sooo much for ur support…
      Or tu tension kyu leti…tuje tag b me karungi…chat b karungi…daatungi bhi…jhappi b…but woh sab 1 din me hi karungi pkkkka…
      Love u yaaaaarrr….
      Thank u soooo much…..
      Thanx for ur wishes…or tu to muje mumma ki tarah boltj hai…badmashi mat karna….
      Ab badmashi to mere khoon me hai….mumma bhi..or papa bhi to usme meri kya galti….
      Bahbye…
      Or haa warning..bhul ne ki himmat mat karna..warna…

  4. Jisha

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    Loved ur ff dear…nd the ending was so emotional n touchy…their love for eo…I was not commenting for a long time… sorry for that..n last dialogue too…👏👏👏👏..
    All the best for your exams dear… will miss you nd ur ff

  5. Ramya

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    Hey aamu I will miss u
    Episode was amazing as u know bt aaj ka tho emotional tha
    Aur tumhara ff end karna sabse zyada emotional tha I know studies bohat important hai bt I’m going to miss u
    Ur episode frm start to end every part was fabulous n amazing
    Loved it N love u
    All the best fr ur studies n come back soon
    Keep smiling
    N I’ll miss u

    • Aamu

      |Author

      aww…dats so sweet of u…
      Gad u liked it…
      Thanx for constantly supporting me after my break…..
      Will miss u n ur cmnt….
      Love yaa…
      Bahbye..
      N surely will come up widn…

  6. SidVee

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.. you ended it😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭.. but no problem cuz studies is more important.. but will miss you and this ff sooo much.. the whole ff was lovely n cute n amazing.. i remember almost all the scenes from twiraj marriage n their dramas to stop the wedding😂😂, thier flashbacks, cute moments, their journey in train, their love confession etc.. everything was so beautiful.. loved it.. and todays epi was super amazing and emotional and heart touching😭😭.. best of luck for ur future 🙂 love u😘😘❤❤

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Dats so sweet…u remember my whole ff…..??
      Dats so good..
      Thank u for supportin me…thank u sooo muuch….
      N pls dont cry…
      I will b back after my exams in marcg….
      Love u…
      N will miss ur ff

  7. Twinjfan.tamanna

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    kyun matlab kyun… kis janam ka badla re rahi ho…. o o sorry ammu not for u… mai studies se keh rahi thi… ek bacchi ko khush nHi dek sakthe Kya tum… mera 1 fav ff tumhare wajah se end ho gaya…

    dear ammu… firstly congrats for ur golden jublee… I ll surely miss u and ur ff… lekin dusra ff start kardi firbi time na mile tho koi nai… ek os bi chalega but plz dont stop writting… plz

    the epi was romantic but the last part made me cry… jab tum ne kaha ki tissue lelo mujhe bohoth dar lagaya… kyunki agar kahin karan apne maksad me kamyab na hokaye…. fir bi borosa tha dil ke ander ke meri ammu aisa nahi hone degi… fir bi sad hun ke tum ne end kardia…

    love you

    urs Tamanna,

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Itna gussa…!!
      Woh bhi MERI studies se..?
      Huh….well me bhi gussa hu..uski wajah se muje TU leave karna pad raha hai…
      Well thank u sooo much tamanna for ur cmnt..n support…
      It means alot…
      Thanx for ur wishes…
      I will b soon back wid another ff after march..muje bhul na jaana…himmat bhi mat karna….warna…!!!!!!
      Love u.. ♥♥♥
      N miss u yaar…

  8. Lovely

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    Myyyyy Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnn….uff ab studies hain toh main kya bolu?…

    Chalk pehle epi ..baat baad main…Epi bohot emotional tha yaar…Ye Karan ka baccha jis din haath aa jaaye naa…I’ll slay him right there😠😠😠 …mere Twinj..I mean ..Tere Twinj ko alag karne ka try kiya….but ek baat bolu??..chal bol deti hoon…kunj ko chaku mil hi gya tha toh usne apni rassi kaat k free ho k Tw ko bachaya kyu nahi?..suicide!!… Koi ni..thumhe bhi toh end karna tha naa..Twinj even thought to help u…
    Sooo…prepare well for exams..Rc Pe khoob saare scores chaap dena …and daud k vapas aa jaana…OK…

    Vaise…will u cont. Reading?… agar nahi toh thoda selfish hoke wish karti hoon…mere ffs padh Lena plz…and ek chotuuuuuu sa comment kardena so that I know that u r reading….but plz haan..padhna zaroor..aur itna bhi mat padhna ki board results k baad bandook leke mere ghar aana pade…but I know aana nahi padega…

    😘😘😘😘😘😘…Love u ammuuu..and will miss u too…b back asap😃

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Hmmm…yaar..
      Magar karan ko me tujhe maarne nahi dungi …..
      Kyuki…use to me maarungi…
      Thank u soo much for ur cmnt…
      Or tension mat le yaar me laut k aaoongi …ni aaoongi to or kahaa jaoongi…
      Sirf march tak intezaar kar…
      Or sorry miss….me TU open hi nahi karungi ki muje read karne ka man ho…so soorrry…
      Love u….
      N will miss ur romance n bakbak…
      Bahbye…

      • Lovely

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        Hey..ammu..aww..this is bad haan..ek toh karan ko maarne nahi derahi aur padhogi bhi nahi..😔😔😔😒😒😞😞😶😩😩😩😩😥😥😥😢😢

        Acha PMs toh khologi?…agar vo bhi nahi then tell I’ll send you my what’sApp no. at least what’sApp toh chalaogi..I know.
        😘

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Hmm.me sachchi ni kholungi or watsapp number dena…muje alowed nahi hai..
      Mera number sirf meri family n my 2 frnds k paas hi hai…

  9. Shakti

    Hey Aamu….
    You made me emotional.I loved the story…Your words..your style of writing …..I’ll miss this Story & you cause this Story was you for the silent readers like me.Readers know you (a writer) through a story.And the Ending…twinj’s death & then the twist of their daughter telling the story…is amazing.The feeling of Amaira while telling her parents died on her birthday & their (TWINJ)love story was unique & very nicely penned down….This is Something which made tears find its way down my cheek…
    Stay blessed Aamu…

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Oh yay…
      U love it dat much .???
      So ssweet of u…
      Than for cmntng…
      Love uh n stay blesses…
      Gla u cmnt…
      N willl soon comeuo wid new ff…after march….

  10. Foreverfanoftwinj

    |Registered Member

    Oye hoye bharatwasi
    Mujhe rulane ka theka liya hai kya…
    Dekh Maine comment kiya…
    Aakhir meri frnd ne likha hai…
    Ab ye bata tissue papers ka paise cheque mein degi ya cash mein..
    Matlab rula hi diya mujhe..
    Teri akeli aisi story hogi Jo is lady shaktiman ko rula payi…
    Kush ho ja..
    Mujhe ek nhi 2-2 tissue papers lage 2-2 😁😁
    Par haan dekh tune zaban di hai ki tu board exams k baad vapas aaigi..
    Aa Jana vapas..
    Apna board exams dhansu tareeke se de k.
    Chal ye tha senti comment ..
    Ab episode comment..
    Walah…ya Allah…subhanallah…katilana…dhasu…emotional
    Kya behen itna accha likhti hai…
    Maar dala..uffff…
    Muahhhhhhhhh..
    Dekh aaj tak mai silent reader thi…
    Par ab rok hi nhi payi comment krne se…
    U really write too good…

    Be back soon
    Love u …😻😻😍😍😘😘😚😚
    Bye….
    All the best 😍😍😻😻

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Oye hoye …..
      Thank u..thank u….cmnt karne kaa kasht uthaane ke liye….thank u…
      Or i m proud of me…k me ek akeli hu jisne tuje rulaaya….
      Or me cheque me de dungi..chal accouny no.dede…
      Achcha laga cmnt kiya toh…
      Will miss my new naveli dost…
      Koi ni ham zarur milenge…me aaoongi…pkka after march…..
      Or tera naam nahi dhund paarahi hu…
      Kya rakhu..??
      Shullu..?
      Cmnt karne ki dushman…???
      Ki kuch or…
      Tu koi suggest kar…
      Sunday tak batadena…last din hai mera….
      Lov u….
      Will misss u chatter box…oh yaa yh naam kaisa hai..?
      Teru baaton se lagta hai CHATTER BOX to tu hai hi…..by

  11. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 aamu tum bahut buri ho ek toh itna emotional episode mere TwiNj ko maar diya aur dusra u ended ur ff 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 aamu first u made me happy by giving TwiNj scenes then u made me shed tons of tears very bad girl 😏😏😏😏😏😏
    Now coming to episode it’s amazingly awesome…loved it to the core especially TwiNj romance 😍😍😍😍😍😍🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈 I legit loved it…then TwiNj death I legit cried 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 TwiNj daughter amria is shoo cute ❤❤❤❤ I so loved the last lines pyar ho toh TwiNj jaisa junoniyat wala junoon wala ishq 💝💝💝💝💝💝 aamu the journey of both ur ffs was so amazing…will miss you so much…

    All the very best for ur boards and bright future…

    Love you 😘😘😘😘😘

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Haaye..
      Didu gussa hai..??
      But isme meri koi galti ni hai…yeh sab studies ki wajah se hai..
      But pkka me aaoongi…aap sirf yeh boliye..
      Meri aamu aayegi zarrur aayegi like mere karan arjun aayenge 😉
      Hheehe…
      Thank u….
      U liked d romance..it was specially for u…dis was not in my story…
      Lobe u didu….
      Bahbye…
      Will meet u aftrr march..
      Will miss u ♡♡

      • TwinjSidMin

        |Registered Member

        Awww aamu thank you so much for TwiNj romance though it wasn’t in ur plan but still u gave it for me…I legit loved it…TwiNj romance in grass store 😂😂😂😂😍😍😍😍🙈🙈🙈🙈

        Muje pata hai meri aamu TU se aur TU family se dur ni rah payegi aur wo zarur wapas aayega…meri aamu aayegi zarur aayegi ❤❤

        Aur mai gussa ni hun kyu ki yahan baat teri studies ki hai toh all the very best for ur studies…may u achieve heights of success…

        Will miss u…
        Love you 😘😘😘

  12. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Aamu tum na … 😔😔😔 main baat ni kar rahi …. end karne k Chakkar mein ek baar bhi ni poocha …. ff end kar diya…. pataa nahi tum telly updates pe aur rahoge ya nahi ya chodhh k chali jaaogI…. yeh ff mera favourite thaa .. favourite tha kyunki yeh ab ni raha … jaanti hun bohot baari comment ni kiya …. meri galti hai .. bad Huna main .. pataa hai … aur reason bhi padhai hai isliye tumhe daatungi nahi …. apni padhai par dhyan dena okay air kabhi yaad aaye toh baat kar lena mujhse … please it’s a request kabhi telly updates k ff padhne matt choddhhnaaa …. aur jahaan tak ki baat hai ff ki toh bohot yaad aayegi 😭😭😭😭itni emotional ending aur voh dialogue 😭😭😭 yaar ab bas aur ni likha jaa raha … mera dil kaam karna band kar raha hai … main jaa ri hun … issi kunj aur twinkle K saath ….. byee ….
    Bhoolna mat mujhe ….. varna ….. varna khoon choos jaaungi …. Vaise blood group kya hai … ussi hisaab se decide karun ki khoon choosu ya na choosu …. batana zaroor haan
    Lub uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    ❣💟💞💝💜💛💚💙💗💖💕💓❤💋💋💋💋💋💋💋💋

    • Aamu

      |Author

      No yaar..me ttelly update leave karine k liye to end kiya…
      I want a break..n have to study now…..
      So bahbye…😊
      Love u..💗💗💗
      Thanx for cmntng…
      Me tune bohot peer to agar tu aaj cmnt ni karti to…
      Bach gayi😉😘
      Will miss u😐

  13. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Aamu di…………I’m having the feeling to hug you tight……seriously you wrote it so beautifully……..that each and every word touched my heart……The emotions were described amazingly!!!

    Aamu di I will definitely miss you and please try to stay in touch with TU … Please … it is a request!!

    But I will not force you…I can understand…And studies should be one’s utmost priority….I am sure you will rock in your exams the way you rocked this FF 🙂
    All the best for your exams and reach to your deserved success….

    I don’t want to bid you adieu…BUT……. 🙁 🙁

    Well I am not that bad…I will bid you adieu with a big wali smile so you always remember your Jhalli sister 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Loads of love and support ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

    ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Aamu

      |Author

      DAT so sweet of u zuha…😘😘
      Thank u soo much for cmntng…
      M very very glad u liked it…☺☺
      Thanx again…
      Or hug karine me liye milna hogs…😛
      Thanx for ur wishes…
      N u too do ur best in exam n reach high…..
      Will miss ur ffs…soorrry for dat ..u will no b able to cmNT😐cmNT😐
      Love u..
      Will miss u
      Tc..
      Ks😘😘😘😍😍

  14. twinj

    Hey aamu,
    It’s not fair…Ek baar bhi nai sochha…Itni jaldi end koi karta hai kya…aba may tujhe congrats bholu ya pher tumare ff end hone ka gum share karu.Itna acha likti thi tu.I know that may ne comment karne may bahat time laga diya.Really sorry for that.Studies are more imp so first priority for studies.Epi na superb plus emotional tha.Ek toh tumare ff katam hone ka gum aur phir yeh twinj ki adhuri kahani.Yesa golden jubliee may ne kabhi nai padha.Anyways congrats for the golden jubliee.FF katam hogaya par tumare ff ki yaad mujhe hamesha aayegi.May tum ko bahat miss karungi.Best of luck for the board exams.Come soon.Don’t forget me.Miss u.Bye kehene ka toh maan nai hai par jaana toh parega bye…bye..

    Lots n lots n lots of luv,
    twinj(miss u)

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Oii akku..me samjhti hu…
      But me much nahi kar sakti….
      Yeah merit majboori this..
      Hope tu samjhegi😘😘
      Loveb u….💗💗
      Thank u for supporting n cmntng…or sorry in advance….me tumhaare is yaa koi b post par cmnt nahi kar paungi…me Sunday she TU leave kar fungi den after march only…
      Sorry ha..
      Will.Miss’s u

      • twinj

        Hey aamu,
        I understand ki yeh teri mazboori thi.Aur aab aur rulane ka plan hay kya woh bhi sorry bolke.Tum bahat acha likti ho.Tumare ff ka bhesabri se intazaar karungi.Bye.Miss u.

        Lots of luv,
        twinj

  15. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Holla aamu,
    Wat should i say………u ended it suddenly 😞😞😞😞😞i am feeling bad but wat can i do now.

    Dear i loved ur ff from starting. It was such a cute love story. Loved it. Ur an amazing writer 😍😍😍😍love ur way of writing. U r amazing.
    Loved it. Wish to see u soon with another ff. u r very sweet aamu💜💜💚

    All the best for ur boards👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
    Love u💜💚💕

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Thanx chikni😍😘😘😘😘
      Love u yaaar..thank u for supporting me….😘😘
      Or taarif ke liye bhi…
      Thanx..
      Love u..
      N will.Misss u…😐😐😐
      Mujr bhuk.na jaana😉😊

  16. SidMin23

    |Registered Member

    This is beautiful written and hidden emotion also and i will missed your ff and I love the ways u end this ff throw twinj daughter sharing diaries and twinj die at last which is sad but will be missing U and your beautifully written ff. Hope to see u soon with OS or ff again.

  17. Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    Aamu is was a good ff but with a sad ending.
    i really enjoyed reading it.
    good luck with your exams
    come back with a bang
    just a question= is your really name Aamira

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Thanx simiy…
      Thanx for supporting n cmnting…😘😘
      Will surely back..
      Or mera naam Aamena hai not amira…just I like dis name so….😊😊😊

  18. Amii

    Wow.. its soo nice love story..
    N amira is my name 😊 when m reading i was like wow… 😁 come back with another ff

  19. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey Aamu! this is not fair yarr…. bhala itna rulata hai koi…haan? ek toh twinj ko mar diya upar se tu bhi jaa rahi hai… I’m so sad… but study is most important so I’ll not make u upset n I respect ur decision….will miss u so much n ur this ff too…. hope u’ll come back with a blast…..

    Now cmng the epi firstly I’m really very sorry for not cmnting on ur pre epi actually busy with college work….. n…n….n….n..n.n…..n….n… hayeeee kya romance tha….pre epi mein bhi aur aaj bhi…. I just loved it…..it was simple but hot romantic…. loved Amira…she is so cute… I really enjoyed whole journy of Jonoon Waala Ishq…. ab to ye bhi nahi keh sakti ki post next asap… hai na?

    Well jaate jaate mera ff padh lena bcz maine 3rd epi post kar diya hai bade dino ke baad… aur haan pls don’t forget me….

    Now ba bye n take care urself

    Keep smiling always….. n best of luck for ur studies n exams…

    ♥ Love uuuuuuu ♥

    “Shalini/Neha”

    • Aamu

      |Author

      First thank u for long cmnt…..
      Oww…u r so sweet..
      U liked it dis much..
      Thqnx …
      Thanx for d wishes😘😘😊😊😊
      N I willl surely back… Bhul na jaana😘😘
      Love u💗💗💗
      Will Miss u😊😊

  20. Purnima.agrawal30

    |Registered Member

    sabse pehle toh congo for ur ff’s golden jubliee…🎇🎇🎇🎉🎊🎊🎆🎆🎆🎆…dusri baat epi was awesome amazing fabulous emotional sad heart touching tha….✌✌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌😘😃😃😃😃….sach me rula diya…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭….aur last baat…..me tumse bhot gussa hu …😤😤😤😤😤😤…koi iss tarah se krta h kya…..bina bataye ff end kr diya…..😩😩…..shock de diya….😟😟😟😟…aur kisne kaha k dukh ni hoga tum ni rahogi toh …..pta h kitta dukh ho ra h…..😩😩😩😩😩😩😩…..bt samjh skti hu k padhai k saath no compromise….😃😃😃😃….bt jo bhi plzzzz🙏🙏🙏🙏jldi se wapas aana naye ff k saath….😘😘😘😘…luv u loads….😘😘😘💕💕💞💞💞….&….miss u ….😢😢😢

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Thanx purnima….
      Thank u soo..
      .much..
      Love u yaar…
      Or me zarur aungi..pkkaaa aaungi or ff me swath aaoungi😘😘
      Love y….
      Will miss ur cmnt😍😍
      Bahbye

  21. Sidhanshi

    Aamu meri jaan.. I’ll not miss u at all.. Bcoz u’ll be always in my heart.. Yaar da epi was awesome, amazing, superb… I don’t have words for describe it… U just nailed it girl… Jab mey last part padhrahi thi na tab mujhe sare twinj scenes, der nok-jhok, love… every single things yaad arahethe… Nd congrats for u’r ff’s golden jubilee… Yaar log g.j par treat dete hey aur tune to apna ff e end kardiya… Very bad.. Pehle to yeh sunkar tujhe ek punch marne ka man kar raha tha bt i can understand studies r more important… So march me milte hey tere new ff k sath.. Chal abhi bye.. Acche se exams dena.. Hame bhul mat jana.. Yeah yeah i know mey koi bhul ne ki chij hu vala… Accha u take care.. Love u chipkali… Baabbyyeeee… Ummaahhh…

    • Aamu

      |Author

      😈😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
      Ohh god…punch lava tera zor she
      😛😛😛
      Thank u soo much yaar…
      Love u…
      Thanks for supporting
      Will miss u

  22. swasti

    Aamu di yeh kya kardiya aapne twinj ki sad ending aur woh bhi golden jubliee may.May thode din ke liye TU se gayi thi aur aapne yesa annart kardiya but also without informing.Studies ke liye aapne TU chodne ka fesla kiya yesa decision aap ne dil may patar rak ke diya.Di may aab tab register karungi jab aap wapas aayenge aur next ff may, may try karungi ki may suru say he cmt karu.Superb awesom fab
    too emotional epi.Luved it.Aur ha aap ne saach kaha pyaar ho toh twinj jaisa.Aur ek baat di may aap ko kabhi nai bulungi miss u.Aap bhi mujhe maat bulna iss bakbak queen ko.Best of luck.Come soon

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Are waaah…☺☺
      Thank for cmntng..or me zarurbaoungi but tu pls register hoja….
      Me kabhi online hongi to msg karungi waise bhi babydoll she VAda kiya haihai..ni main bar Sunday USSR chat karungi…
      Pls register…
      Ab thank u for d cmnt…
      Love u💗💗
      Will.miss ur bakbak..😉

      • swasti

        Hey aamu di,
        may aab bheja kis ka kaungi.Jo bhi ho may na register aap wapas aane ke baad he karungi.Aur aap ko mujhse bhi ek wada karna hoga ki aap TU ki kurbani beyart nai jane dhenge.Exam ke liye best of luck.Come soon.

  23. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it the last part Was so emotional (but Na I not that emotional I did not use the tissue paper ) Because I was angry on you how could you end the ff without informing but then I saw your note Okay chal I forgive you I am no more angry on you 🙂 The story of your ff was just awesome The way it started with Twiraj’s marriage the flash back everything was too good the Love tests Twinj nok jok everything see I remember My memory is great ahi apne kite tarif karu meh
    Love you 🙂
    Hope you comeback soon 🙂
    aur dont dare forget me 🙂

    • Aamu

      |Author

      U remember my whole ff…????☺😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Dat so sweeet….
      Love u yaaar..will.miss u too😐😐
      Or sorry me there ff pr cmnt nahi kar paungi..😐
      Love u…
      Bah ye….
      Thanx for d wishes..

  24. Priya23

    Hi I m silent reader of ur all ff and ur a brilliant writer. I luv this ff so when u r having ur xm and not posting I waited for ur ff and when it posted I smaile like mad coz when i read it toh it was really a joonun wala ishq.I m shocked that ur ff is finished but no problem u cmng with bang I m sure with it having good marks 4 ur xm .and the episode what I tell about it I was really crying while reading it my left eyes is already hurt and while reading it and its hurts more and though I don’t like sad ending but it was really beautiful and heart touching so plss promise u write onther ff in happy note.Ok best of luck 4 ur xm by and luv u.

  25. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Aamu jaan see ur Sayu is back after soooo long time only to make u realise that I’m always their to support u….
    I know I stopped visiting tu nd commenting too… Coz I have quitted TU…. Neither I will be joining TU back nor continuing my ff but today I again came back only to wish u all the best for ur future…. 😇😇😇😇😇….

    The way u ended the story was too cute nd adorable yrrr…. Last line was killing yrr… Still it leaves goosebumps to me…. Amazing… Awesome yrr…

    Sorry for not commenting on ur previous episodes…. But finally this will be the last comment on ur ff coz after this I won’t comment again….

    I missed u all a lot …. Nd u too……

    LOVE U….. Always be happy… Be a successful person in ur life ahead…. Fulfill ur dreams…. MAY Allah grant all riches of world to u…. 😆😆😄😄😍😍😍💕💖💟💞💝💝💗

    • Aamu

      |Author

      ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
      Yay…my sayu di..cmntd…yay…
      Thank u solo much sayu…
      Glad u cmnt…
      Thank u soon much for ur wishes…aameen…😊😊😊
      But😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
      U will not cmnt on any ff now😖
      U will not cntinue ur ff..??
      Y..
      Y..
      Y…
      Uhuhu😭😫😪😓
      Its okay I can understand yaar…
      All d best for u too..
      Love u💗💗💗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Will.Miss’s u yaar…
      😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Thank u again….
      U made my day wid ur cmnt..
      I started ff after getting inspired by u…so thank u😘😘😘😘
      Bahbye

  26. Baby

    |Registered Member

    you knew naa aami i use love dis ff to my life bt u gave n end to it
    sad ending n heart touching ending yr srsly m crying lyk wat not ryt now tissue paper nhi uthaya kkunki rona cahati thi tere byebye khene ke liye bhi or iss sad ending ke liye bhi
    tune aisa kun socha ki if u ll give a happy ending n u leaving sooo we wont cry ofco we wuld hv
    yr aami dis was one stry which i use to love lyk hell
    iski vajah se i met a sweet prsn lyk u
    u ohhh god i m toh not able to speak anything bcoz my vision is blur out of tears
    yr why why soooo emotional n cute stry
    ohhhh god loved it wen twinkle was tld to give herself to dat karan for kunjs life i was hving tears in my eyes dat how will kunj c dis n he killed himself n sooo did twinkle
    yr it was beautiful journey wid dis ff n u
    will miss it to core
    it was cute
    romantic
    emotional
    tashan
    awesome
    fabulous
    spectacular
    fantabulous
    loved it yr
    abhi bhi ro rhi hun ruk hi nhi rhe aansun will miss u yr n dis ff
    a tribute to the love of twinj
    beautiufl ff dear will miss the junooniyat of twinj
    junoon wala ishq osm yr ♥♥♥♥
    love u lods si♥☻

    • Aamu

      |Author

      Ah…tmune to muje b ruladiya pagli…
      N its k ..I wikk pkka cm up.wid new…agar nahi aao to muje ghar aakar maar dena…
      Okay..?
      N thank u soon much..
      Tissue she pochlo aansu…
      😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
      Will miss u…
      Babhbye…
      Love u….💖💖
      N thanx for giving such importance to my ff😘😘😘😊😊😊
      Love u solo much

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