junoon wala ishq -twinj epi 1

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hey frnd i m back with epi1….
today i will directly cm to d epi…den thanx giving ceremony ok?

episode 1

taneja mansion.
a big house is shown fully decorated guest r cming….(want to see?) den lets go ….ya here is d main door cm cm with me ok…..omg guards r der n checking d invitation card n den allowing dem to go look like it is d house of rich prsn but wait frnd do u hav invitation…….ok cm i hav ur invitation card also now cm or else v will b late
(sry for my bakbak in my ff also but kya kru me hu adat se majboor..sorry.(now i wil not write acc to my pov ok )

here is groom n his family arrive groom face is seen s it is sehra upon his face..n groom goes n sit in mandap.groom is looklike he is not happy panditji tell to bring bride.
while two girl goes to bring bride
a lady: m so happy dat tw will b my dil
(so bride is our pnjabi ptaka twinkle)
2 lady:yaa bebe v r blessed to get tw as a dil
(1 lady is bebe)(2 lady is usha)

a beautiful room is shown with pink n purple combinatin..looklike it is of sm princess but wat is dis a girl is sitting in d attire of bride but der is no glow on her face.her eyes is twinkling n seems dat she had cried bfore smtime.she is in deep thoughts..just den 2 girl enter d room
1 girl:o my sis is looking so beautiful in dis attire.()acting s if she is vry happy)
2 girl:ya my sis cum bestie tw is looking like princee in dis dree.kisi ki nazar naa lage meri gudiya ko(n enact to put kajal on tw)
1 girl: hey chinki, meri sis ko heran mat kr (hey chinki dont trouble my sis)
chinki: ok sry but must say our jiju will die seeing our hotty right mahi ?
mahi gets teary eyed listening d word jiju but she cmposed herself
mahi:hm u r right our JIJU wil b majnu seeing her
twinkle: plz yaar both of u stop it (she yells)
leaving mahi n chinki shocked
tw: means plz dont tease me n try to blush but cant
chinki : ok now leave all di cm down all r waiting especially jiju cum frnd
dey trio cmes down
tw goes to mandap panditji starts d ritual
one boy:y i m not happy in my bro wedding ?y m not able to see tw getting married with uv?y
n he gets into thinking:y kunj u r nt able to se tw with other boy?y i feel dat my tw is not happy with dis marriage..oh kunj wat r u thinking ur tw she is no mor urs she will b ur bhabi soon no i cant lets happen but y is i m in love th her? no how can dis possible y y not possible evry thing is fair in lv n war h kunj u r in love with tw)he gets out of dis thought nsee dat uv is filling tws maang he det shock n think he hav to stop dis marriage but how… he get an idea
n goes smwhere
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hey frnds hope u liked

precap:twiraj r taking pheras.only 2 pheras (rounds)r left n……………..
where did kunj go?
will he b able to stop dis marriage?
if twiraj r not happy with d marriage den y dey get ready for d marriage?

frnds hope u liked it n sorry i m not good to explain emotions n all.dis is my first tym
u know wat i m vry happy with ur cmnts dat i m writing dis epi standing near d charge board s my fon bttry is only 3
i know kunj realization is very bad but wat can i do i m not able to express dis so sry
i dont have a single point like u all
i m vry bad wrigh though u all spport me soo thank u also for bearing me n my bak bak
a very big thank u to those who cmnt on my ff
yashavi, zayb_zikra,mannat,sidmin,neha,sayeda,sayeda farhana,saby,shatakshi,riya,rashiverma,shanu
thanks to silent reader but will suggest u to plz cmnt

so ppl do tell me how itt is
n yaa shanu on ur request my intro
u all know my name i m sana aka aamu(from both one is my real name but cant tell now),i m from india,gujarat.i m 15 yrs old .in 10 std

n yaa do tell me urs also plz
dat wer r u from,how old r u, n in which std if u r studing
plz do tell me

dont forget to cmnt
ok? meet u tommo o sorry crction not meet u talk to u tommo through cmnts
n yaa i want a suggesion
1.can i post daily but it will not long means length will b like epi1?
2.can i post once or twice in week but it will b long one?
do tell me through ur cmntsbcause i will not b able to update long epi daily coz i m iin 10

ok enough now u all also must b thinking dat how much i talk but kya karu…………………..
are wait.. itni b kya jldi hai

take e dat today i m writing from m fon so my cre will goes o sana(aamu)
k is dat clear??(its my tchrs dialoge hehe)
babaye
have a nice day
loads of love
waiting for ur cmnts

Credit to: sana (aamu)

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21 Comments
  1. very interesting plz post soon

    1. thanx sohi hope u had read d intro also

  2. Superbbbbbbb yaar loved it…..
    N ya u can post ur ff daily ………????
    N length of epi is up to u….☺☺??
    N do cont asap……???????

    1. Thanx zikra for cmnting n yaa i also think to post medium length episode daily only
      Thanx again n yaa u cqn suggest me ideas by msging me on my ac Aamu at tellyupxates

  3. hey frnd i know u all must b confsed somewhere but trust me it will get cleared in next 2-3 epi

    n yaa sry too for describing emotion n decoration badly
    but kya kru its my first time
    plz support me n plz cmnts

  4. Affaa

    Awesome….superb yaar continue soon

    1. Thanx affa for commenting
      Hope u read d intro also
      N yaa if u want any changes u can suggest me ideas through messeging me on my ac name Aamu on tu

  5. Shatakshi

    Hey sana
    The description was good yaar…n will be waiting for the next episode
    Loved it????

    1. Thanxxx shatakshi hope u will further also

  6. Sayeeda

    Amazing ….yrr
    U said that u described decorations nd feelings badly …R u joking ???
    U were superb at the description part ….too good ….
    Nd yah plzzz post daily no matter abt ur ff length we will manage ..
    Excited for next one….love u ..

    1. thanx sayeeda n yaa i wil post daily only

  7. RANdomfANCreationz

    Its awesome Sana loved it

    1. thanx joyee

  8. It was awesome sana I was not commenting on any ff due to my laziness but your episode made me to do so and same pinch I am also in 10 standard and post regularly

    1. thanx bulbul i m very happy dat u r also lazy like me(hehe)though u cmnt
      thank u so much
      n yaa u r also in 10
      from where r u?

  9. Mannat

    Hey sana. It was awesome episode but still suspense . But acc. to me suspense are a best part of story line … leave it … you can post your epi daily …

    1. thanx mannat n yaa suspense to hona hi chahiye but it will b clear in next 2-3 epi

  10. Saby

    Hey sana…. ? nice start… But lots of suspence…. Do cont asap

    1. thanx saby n suspense will b clear in next few epi

  11. Aamu

    hello evry1 sorry i hav not updated my epi coz i need sm suggestion i had posted dat suggestion but it is not uploading dont know y
    plz forgive
    i had tried for 3 times now also m trying

  12. k sana ammu nyc bt i hp twinj sidmin in ur ff unite sun

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