Judaai- ek past esi bhi – swasan ff (intro)


Hey guys m new at writing. This is my intro + cherector face.-
sanskar maheswari- a big star. Actor+ singer. A big business tycon. A dark past is follwing him. Dark n dark.
Laksh maheswari- a derector nd a producer. Loves some 1. Knwn as lacky. Sankys bro. Very naughty.
Amera maheswari- (pleyed by tanya sharma) a bubly girl. Last year mba student. Sanlaks small siso. Thier jaan.
Swara malik- last year mba student.love her bro v.much. A past is always with her. Witch sold her mallion dollar smille. A beuty full gal.
Ragini malik-a cute nauthy gal. Nw a model.. But a student too.
Samar malik-(pleyed by sakti arora) asias no.1 besiness man. Love swaragini v.much. Can die for them. Can kill some1 for them.
*** promo- a girl is in a boy’s arm. She is faithing with the man.
Accident. Ahhh.
I can walk see put me down. Boy-I dont want to see. Nw move.
Girl-hw can i move see. Idot put me down.
Boy- oh sorry ms chikly. Gal-uuu i will kill u. Boy dosent care just wakling taking her in arms. Many oh my god.
stay turned. Sorry for mistake.. M new na.

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  1. Tamanna

    Seems interesting…. Update soon

    1. Samaira

      Thanks dr. Will updte today.

    2. Samaira

      Why forgot to tell. Swara is a singer.
      S tank u.
      Sanju thanks nd will try.
      Prakriti thank.
      Ashnoor thank u.
      Thanks deeksa di.

  2. Nice continue

    1. Samaira

      Glad u like it. Nd i will post it today.

  3. Abirsha

    Awesome dr…. Continue

    1. Samaira

      Thank u shanu di. Will continue soon.

    2. Samaira

      Thank u shanu di. Will continue soon. My fav writer is reading my story.

    3. Samaira

      Thank u shanu di. Will continue soon. My fav writer is reading my story.love u.

  4. Interesting☺.. n nice.. next part soon.

  5. Interesting..plzz give some space between dialogues..

  6. Continue
    Update asap

  7. nice continue

  8. Something new…continue

  9. Interesting dear… Plz continue

  10. Soory guys there is some net prob in phone. Sorry guys i cant reply u all Nd for net prob i replayed shanu di 3 times. Plz any reader dont mind. Kakli glad u like it.
    Bresh thanks nd sorry. I will give space between diluoge.
    Sagun glad u like it.
    Thanks anu.
    Thanks tani. Well thier profession is defrent. N this is not a fan n star story.
    Thanks vidi.
    Guys again sorry nd thanks to all.

  11. Seems interesting ,pls continue dear .

  12. Sanjanaagrawal

    Nice …. but plz write spellings right …..

  13. Superb.Interesting

  14. Deeksha


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  16. Samaira

    Thanks anu di

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