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The journey together (epi-9)

administratorBy administratorFebruary 12, 201614 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hiii….everyone I’m here again your Sharon shrivatsav…. I was really overwhelmed with your comments… And hope you all like my ff and plzz…. comment and tell me whether it is good or bad anything…. (And as I was feeling sad for not mentioning the name of the common commenter Ani in my episode 8 hence I was having somewhat guilt in my mind hence I have updated a short episode…)
Let’s jump in to the Story
Recap: (FB continues….) the happy family time in BAADI…. And everyone went to sleep…

@ Morning
BAADI
Ragini got up early at 6:30am and felt like going to walk in the park and tried to wake up Shona and Dramebaazzzz but they did not show up hence she took her dairy in which she would write her felling and would be always scribbling something always

MM
Lakshya for the first time woke up early in the morning and went for walk in the same park for fresh air…

@ Park…
Raglak enter the Park at the same time and feel butterflies in their Stomach but ignore it…
Ragini sat on the desk nearby and started scribbling in her diary….
The pearly rays of the sun played on my eye lids and woke me up to a fine morning….it took me only a few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference…The air smelled earthy and the dry and drooping plants were now boasting of their new found youth it was coming of the age; but yes in reverse order….
Adjoining the plants were their new neighbours, slick, curly, twirling bougainvillea and weeds. They almost looked up to the tall trees, wishing to grow as tall someday. They gyrated with the smooth wind. Letting their Leafs dance to its tune like Cinderella with her prince charming…
And she started to walk here and there in order to get some new idea and suddenly her favourite spot caught her eyes…
It was her favourite from her childhood…. She went there actually we had to climb ten steps to reach an arch kind of place from where sunrise and sunset could be seen…. She wanted to see sun to continue her scribbling’s…. Hence she started to run to that place while she missed one step and thought she would fall and closed her eyes with fear… Then realised that she did not fall and opened her eyes and got stunned…..

Ragini (to her): it would have been better to fall than come in his hands…
Lakshya (to him): why my heart asked me to save her while my mind wanted something else…????
Meanwhile they had an intense eye lock and were disturbed by an old people who scolded them for romancing in Park… and composed themselves
Old lady: cannot you see it is public..
these modern couple have no privacy only…
Ragini: granny…. You are mistaken he is not my husband…
Old man: why man did you fight with her that she is telling her husband as not her husband???? Look you both have to understand each other and move onnn…
And they left that place immediately…
Ragini (turning to wards): don’t you have manners…. See because of you I got insulted…
Lakshya: ohhh!!! Just shut up I was just helping and saved you from falling…
Ragini gets frustrated and runs to her home…. While Lakshya also goes to his home…

Precap: Nooooooo….. Not again plzz….
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Plzz….comment if you all liked my ff especially Ani….

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14 Comments

  1. Anna on February 12, 2016 9:20 am

    So interestnf..keep updating yaar

  2. Hayathi on February 12, 2016 9:59 am

    Always fighting mode

  3. Ani on February 12, 2016 10:35 am

    Wen their hatred turns to love… Too short episode…

  4. swathi on February 12, 2016 10:52 am

    hey its awesome…

  5. rafee on February 12, 2016 10:57 am

    nice

  6. swati on February 12, 2016 11:11 am

    Superb please make it longer

  7. Ammu on February 12, 2016 11:32 am

    superb dear. raglak scenes are very nice

  8. Aarti on February 12, 2016 11:55 am

    Superb rocking as alwaz

  9. Sharon shrivatsav on February 12, 2016 1:34 pm

    Thank yOu every one…..

  10. Aishu on February 12, 2016 6:45 pm

    Itz really very cute dear…….. And plz reveal the suspense soon. And one more request, plz post bit longer

  11. Arjuna on February 12, 2016 7:35 pm

    Very nice

  12. Meghs on February 12, 2016 8:21 pm

    Again fight lol …. All past they fought only am just kidding… Its nice…

  13. Sharon shrivatsav on February 12, 2016 11:03 pm

    Guys I have updated the 10th episode today itself as I will not be able to update it tomorrow……..

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