The journey together (epi-26)(Surprise treat 2nd part)

Hiii ???………. everyone I’m here again your Sharon shrivatsav?……….. I was really overwhelmed with your comments……….. And hope you all like this ff and plzz………. comment and tell me whether it is good or bad anything………………see guys you all asked for a treat???????? and here I am with it…..yeah! I remember I had told I will update it on Saturday but since I had to give you all a treat here it goes…..

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Recap: Flash back continues…… (And I hope anu4875 understood it after reading the comment in the last epic…..)
Ragini: I know so I am telling it to you……..
Lakshya: you can trust me fully……..
Ragini: I feel somewhat I know you…..
Lakshya: that can never happen now tell me what your problem….is.?
Ragini: I am just hiding myself from my family……..
Lakshya: why………?
Ragini: because I am not ready to accept something which is true………
Lakshya: what are you not able to accept………?
Ragini: I will tell it to you some other time………
Lakshya: but how…..?

Ragini: 5376321809………
Lakshya: what…..?
Ragini: my number……….
Lakshya: ok……i will call you and tell what my number is……..and calls her (actually he had also taken one number hiding it from everyone and even Ragini did not know about it……..)
Ragini: hello……..
Lakshya: this is Rahul and my number……..
Ragini: ok….bye I have to leave now…..
Lakshya: even me…..bye….and they both left the clime and both were happy Lakshya was happy that he got back his Ragini and knew something was there which was pricking her……and Ragini was happy as she had got a new friend called Rahul like Lakshya and hoped he gives her some ideas……..
(Plzz……do not think Ragini is sharing her sorrows with some outsider while cannot do it with her family members…..i just want to show Ragini feels somewhat good whenever she is around Lakshya and tells him everything and hence she was running away from him and the situation……..)

Lakshya comes back to office and plans everything with Sanskar and also with AvRaj………
Flash back ends………
Lakshya: I know this and how did you tell Swara……..?
Swara: he does not hide anything from me……..so he called me up and told everything………
Lakshya: ok………and guys……..one more thing……
All: what………?
Lakshya: when you all were talking to Ragini on conference call………
Swara: wait how do you know this………? Sanskar did you tell him……..?
Sanskar: no……..and Avraj you……..?
AvRaj: no……..
Lakshya: wait let me continue……….i had come to talk to Sanskar to ask him help me woo Ragini again and I heard your conversation………sorry……
All: oh! Ok……..
And they all sit and chat??? for some time and then go back to their respective works and Swara went to meet Ragini……….and enters her cabin……..
Swara was hell shocked and was in an utter shock to see Ragini in that state…….. Ragini’s hair was all messed up and she was lying on couch doing something with some paper???……she had a pen in her hairs……..looked tensed……..even Swara got tensed……
Swara: what happened………?
Ragini: you………here………?

Swara: yeah! I had come meet Sanskar……..
Ragini: oh! Missing him already???………
Swara: yeah! I cannot hide my feelings like how you do………
Ragini: I was doing some project work…….. trying to change the topic……
Swara: I was doing swimming……
Ragini: what……?
Swara: yeah!
Ragini: are you mad……?
Swara: then what……? If you give a different answer to my question I will answer you differently……
Ragini: Swara plzz….I do not want to talk about that and you know what and explains all the things which Swara already knew……Swara acts surprised and laughs out loud…………
Ragini: laugh………laugh………even I will get a chance to laugh but now I will think about how will I manage that stupid date which Lakshya is going to give me……..
Swara: I know you manage do not worry….
And then they also chat ???for some time and then Swara says maaa…..will be alone at home and goes home………then all there RagLak, AvRaj, Sanskar come home in their vehicles home……Raj drops Avni home and comes back to his home had they went to eat ice-cream???……..
@ Night……………..

Lakshya was happy that he was taking her on a date and so was Ragini but she was tired of showing fake anger on Lakshya and was feeling lonely……..Lakshya felt he should eat ice-cream??? and went to kitchen and asked his mother for it and he told her he will go and bring it as he was having an extreme feeling to have it and it was not in home as told by his mother and went to every shop but all were already closed or did not have his favourite Black Walnut ice-cream with Jamoca almond fudge on it???………. (My favourite and do tell about your favourite ones I will be glad to know it……) He was fed up of searching it and at last found an ice-cream parlour which was open and went there thinking this is the last shop and I am not going to search anymore and went there to his surprise it was available there………Lakshya buys the whole family pack which was available as he was having an terrific feeling to eat and was returning home………and received a call and picked it…..
Lakshya: Swara bolo……..
Swara: Laksh! Ragini……
Lakshya: what happened to Ragini……?
Swara: Lakshya you know Ragini needs an ice-cream??? now and she had been to the last shop open but they have told her that just now somebody took it and went and she is crying hardly can you plzz…..bring that ice-cream for her and I am also cursing that ice-cream buyer and he bought all the packs from there stupid manerless fellow, I will kill him if I get him???……..
Lakshya: Swara waittttttt……do not scold me……
Swara: I am not scolding you I am scolding that buyer………waittttttttt………….do not tells me you were the buyer???……..
Lakshya: yeah! What to do now……..?

Swara: I have an idea and tell him which is muted……….
Lakshya: I will give you a gift for this beautiful idea……..
Swara: really……….
Lakshya: stupid how will I execute it………you and your stupid idea???…..
Swara: so it was a sarcastic comment……..I will tell Raj to clear your way……..
Lakshya: now it is confirm I am going to give you a surprise gift which you will never forget………
Swara: not a joke right……?
Lakshya: no…..baba…..
Swara: thank you so….much……..
Lakshya: now I have to execute the plan you tell Raj to be ready ok….bye…..
After an hour or so……..BAADI ???an person is entering in the house through the kitchen door which was kept open…..holding an battery? and a bag?……..he goes towards the stairs and climbs it without making any noise…..and opens SwaRagini room door……and his face is revealed it is non-other than Lakshya………
Lakshya: see she is taking away my sleep and sleeping like a princess in the middle of the room that too holding the teddy??? tightly as if it was her husband……….wait…..yes it was gifted by me for our first valentines and remembers the day……..
Flash back starts……
Lakshya had told Ragini that he is going out with his friends for Valentine’s Day and not to disturb him for today and Ragini had got angry on him for this that he is celebrating his Valentine’s day with his friends and not with her………But Lakshya was preparing for her special surprise from his side………
Ragini was sleeping a deep sleep in her room when she received a call from some unknown number………

Person: hello….Ragini….
Ragini: yess….who is this……..?
Person: if you want to know about Laksh……..come to the place I will message…..
Ragini: hello……..hello……..but the phone was cut……Ragini ran downwards and took her car keys and went to her car just then she received the message and started towards the place and she reached there in no time and was shocked to see Lakshya lying on the road unconscious she went to him and hugged him and shouted at him to get up and do not act……….but he did not get up………
Ragini: Lakshya……Lakshya……get up……..? There was no reply………
Ragini: Lakshya this is all because of me…………I should not have let you go alone…………Laksh…..and she starts crying……..
Just then an ant walks on Laksh’s face and Lakshya starts moving his skin to get rid of that ant and Ragini gets shocked………
Ragini: Laksh……Laksh……..
Lakshya: I am ok……and he stands up…..
Ragini: wait you were doing drama with me………….
Lakshya: sorry……
Ragini gives him a tight slap ✋and starts crying???……….
Ragini: you know what I would do without you………? I was shocked when I got to know something happened to my husband (Guys still she did not remember her past that time this happened……) and cursed myself……..and you……you are playing with my emotions……? And started to cry again……….

Lakshya: sorry…..Ragini……..plzz….do not cry I just thought of surprising you……
Ragini: stop talking to me……..
Lakshya: plzz….do not tell like that Ragini……..
Ragini: now go from here……..
Lakshya: as you say and he walks away……..
Ragini feels bad that he was trying to surprise me and I slapped him and told him to go she turns around to call him but he was gone and she got still more angry that instead of convincing her he went off……she was about to go away but stopped seeing something……..it was a dress with a chit on it…..it read as below……..
PLZZ……WEAR THIS DRESS ???AND COME OUT OF THAT HUT⛺⛺⛺ WHICH IS THERE TO YOUR RIGHT…………..

She turned and saw to her right and went inside that to change her dress…..Ragini comes out of the hut wearing the dress gifted by him the classic black cocktail dress……..and waited for him just then there came a open deck car and the driver asked her to climb the car and she did so and was very happy……..and the car came to an halt……..she was asked to get down from the car and go straight into the park and take left………and Ragini did so and was stopped by an women and she tied her eyes and brought her somewhere…..and left her there with her eyes closed and Ragini called out for her many times and now fed up opened the cloth from her eyes and was awe struck……… She just dropped her lower jaw in astonishment the whole park had lightings and was decorated with ribbons all around and had RagLak’s photos everywhere……….and she suddenly felt something on her waist yess…..it was Laksh’s hand and she turned to see him……he was in his suit which he had bought for his special date with the lady love of his life and he just smiled at her but she broke into an hug and hugged him tightly………
Ragini: do I deserve so much which you do every time……..
Lakshya: shhhhh……

Ragini went away from him and faced her back towards him and started speaking to him………
Ragini: you know what Lakshya I do not deserve this much love from your side……..I am not a perfect match for you and I do not remember my past still ……….and even slapped you when you were trying to surprise me……
Lakshya: just stop it……… ???(Angrily)
Ragini: Laksh………
Lakshya: just stop it Ragini you do not know………am nothing without you…..and I am warning you not to talk anything about my lady love???……
Ragini: sorry for badmouthing about your lady love ???now plzz…..forgive me……and she made a puppy face???? seeing which……
Lakshya: forgiven……….and sees his watch oh! No it’s already time……..now come I have many things to show you….
And he did not wait for her reply……..and took her hand ?and went running from there to an isolated place…..there Ragini could see something but could not identify it as it was wrapped in some cloth….Lakshya took out the cloth and Ragini gave him an confused look asking what is this telescope for……?

Lakshya sees through it and tells her to see it herself……..and Ragini saw it was an shooting star ★and suddenly Lakshya held her hand and told her make a wish seeing this star………and both made the same wish that they want to stay with each-other whatever may be the hurdles……….and opened their eyes and saw each other….and Ragini hugged him again……….
Ragini: Laksh I hope the doves have sealed our promises which we made now………
Lakshya: what…………?
Ragini: let me explain……..Venus is a classical goddess of love rode in a chariot drawn by doves……..
Lakshya: sooo………….
Ragini: it is believed that these doves of Venus are quick to seal the promises made by true lovers……….
Lakshya: ok……..now I understood and they seal the promise or not sure I and you have sealed it so no problem……..
Ragini: ok……..now what…..?
Lakshya once again took her somewhere holding her hand and Ragini did try to speak and ask where but stopped thinking today there would be many surprises waiting for her………
Lakshya had brought her to an place which was worth loving the centre of the of the park which was decorated with her all the favourite colours that was sky blue, red, purple and orange……she was so happy after seeing the decorations…..that she literally turned around and started running around like a small baby……..Lakshya saw her with so much of love and care and also possessiveness towards her…………then came back to senses and they had their dinner and Lakshya asked for a dance and they danced on this song in the background……..
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……..

Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse………
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……..
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse………
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse……..
Yeah yeah yeah yeah……
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……..
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse………
Log kehte hai pagal hoon main………
Yeah bhi na jaanu………
Dil lutaya hai maine ab kisi ki na maanu……
Chen deekar ke maine becheniya yeh li hain……
Neede uda ke maine tumse wafaye ki hain……..
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……
Jee rahe the hum tere dum se……..
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse……..
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……..
Humko pyaar hai sirf tumse………
Kuch isharon mein tumne humse joy eh kaha hai……
Ab yakin aa raha hai tumko bhi kuch hua hai……..
Kyon tumko dekte hain kya dil mein sochte hain……..
Toofan jo uth raha hai hum usko rokte hain……..
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……
Jee rahe the hum tere dum se……..

Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse……..
Yeah yeah yeah yeah………
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……
Haan kasam yeh kasam….
Di kasam li kasam……
Haan kasam kasam kasam kasam…………
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se……
Jee rahe the hum tere dum se……..
Ab yeh pyaar na hoga phir humse……..the dance ended romantically……..
Lakshya: Ragini……take this……..and gave her a writing pad and a pen……..
Ragini: why…………..?
Lakshya: you have to write about me………?
Ragini: what……? No…..no…No….
Lakshya: common……i know you will have some expectations and I also know you love to scribble and now you have to scribble about me……

Ragini: plzz….Laksh……
Lakshya: think this as your Valentines gift for me……….
Ragini: ok………and started scribbling and she hid it so that Lakshya could not see it and told she finished……..
Lakshya: now let me see……..
Ragini: on one condition……
Lakshya: what……?
Ragini: you have to take me to an ice-cream parlour………and I want to have coke too……..
Lakshya: ok…..done…..now hand it over………and Ragini gives it to him……..
Lakshya reads it aloud……..
1. I WORTE YOUR NAME ON A PIECE OF PAPER,
BUT THE WIND CAME AND TOOK IT AWAY,
I WORTE YOUR NAME ON THE SAND,
BUT THE SEA WASHED IT AWAY.
SO NOW,
I HAVE CARVED YOUR NAME IN MY HEART,
AND BABY HERE IT SHALL FOREVER STAY…………..

2. THE BEST LOVE IS THE KIND THAT AWAKENS THE SOUL; THAT MAKES REACH FOR MORE, THAT PLANTS THE FIRE IN OUR HEARTS AND BRINGS PEACE TO OUR MINDS. THAT’S WHAT I HOPE TO GIVE YOU FOREVER.
Lakshya had tears in his eyes after reading this which Ragini had written…………and Ragini could not see that and told……..
Ragini: see Laksh for this only I did not want to write it………
Lakshya: Dumbo……i was just thinking whether I will be able to fulfil all your wishes……
Ragini: do not think more as you will not be able to fulfil anymore as you have fulfilled all my wishes and also you love me the way I have written……..
Lakshya: thank you for coming into my life……..and now my turn……and starts speaking to her without breaking the hug……
i fell deep in love, the first time i saw you……
your love, my darling made me feel so beautiful and new……..
it feels so wonderful to see your pleasant face……

makes me feel like kidnapping and taking you to some other place…..
where there would be no one to disturb us……..
it would just be you, me and never ending bliss……..
you are the one in the world…..
whose love comes for without a price to me!
thank you my love for giving me the taste of paradise………
i love you so much, more than you can never know……
in your love sweet heart my love will always glow……..
and if you are not with me, my breathe will forever st………

Ragini covered his mouth with her hand………
Ragini: I never knew even you can be a poet…..
Lakshya: At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet my dear…..the difference is that you were a poet from before and became wonderful at it after falling for me but me I became poet in your love……..
Precap: some drama and more romance………….

That’s all for today waiiiiiittttttttt…………do not forget to comment……………..and as you all know next episode update will be on Saturday……..so be alert and awake……..so plzz…..stay tuned………AND DO COMMENT GUYS……..
SO HOW WAS THE TREAT……..? And the next episode is coming packed in the jet just for you all till then……dump all your letters here in the comment box and it will reach me……so do not forget to post the letter guy….s (I mean the comments……)
In the up coming episodes there will be more romance between swasan and raglak with a twist???…..so stay tuned…???

Credit to: Sharon shrivatsav

56 comments

  1. Read it twice already. ..Thank you for giving importance to raglak……what I can say ..awesome awesome awesomeeeeee

    • Sharon

      Thanks sindhu rm ???and what to tell about your ff it’s just awesome though I am not able to read it now….I will search for it and read it after my exams….all lone ragini right…?

    • Sharon

      Thanks a lot fabby….. u know what i have a teacher we sweetly call him fabby sir only…..??? wht a coincidence…..

  2. Aarti

    I dont know what to comment after reading it was superb, awesome, fabulous nd best treat thanku soooooo much u r a brilliant writer sharon

    • Sharon

      Thank you divya….and you have o love hem because thy make a superb on screen chemistry…… ?

    • Sharon

      Thanks akhila and thanks to my brainy for giving me such idea’s…… lol just joking u read right I just mentioned in is ff that at a touch of love everyone becomes poet and starts scribbling even I am in touch with my love that is writing…… do not think something and all ha! Lol….take care…

  3. Ruhani

    Omg this was the sweetest treat ty so much dr… Felt bad for lakshya he loves her so much yr their valentines date was superb… U knw what it took me so much tym to read this bcuz I was reading every single line again n again cherishing it.. Keeping writing dr n study too. N I hope to see the 100th epi

    • Sharon

      That’s my pleasure ???ruhani….soon you I’ll feel good for lakshya because he has made the best choice by choosing rags….and I am studying well…..even I hope to write my 100th epi.?????

  4. Taiana

    Woww awesome part yaar… Raglak scenes were soooo cute n sweet… Laksh valentines surprise in past was amazing… Just luved today’s part…

  5. Nita

    Wow Sharon I loved it….it was just awesome….Ragini’s letter to laksh n laksh’s reply….everything…. And Kasam Ki Kasam is one of my favourite songs also..

    • Sharon

      Thanks Nita…..and me too I keep humming that song even in my examination hall to feel relaxed…

  6. Ani

    Thanks alot… This is the best treat ever… It took 1 hr for me to read ur ff today as i imagined each and every scene and read it more than 2 times… Gng crazy on ur ff… Love u a lot for giving us such a lovable ff… Thanks alottttt… Raglak scenes was so cute and their pair is the best pair ever… Ragini’s letter and Laksh reply for it is chanceless… Really ur ff is the best of all the others and u r the best writer… just dnt have words to express how much I loved ur episode today… And gonna read it again after posting my comment… Keep on giving lovable episodes like this for us…

    • Sharon

      Thank you so much ani ??????? i damn love ready such loving and long comments I am so happy today …….I am flying on clod nine and not able o come down after reading your comment…… I am thinking my responsibilities are increasing after seeing such loving comments from everyone by thinking you will expect more and more from me now and I will try my die hard best to give you all that expected one….☺ and once again thanks for such a long comments…….

  7. Ayushi

    Thank you so much Sharon for such lovable treat and I am falling in love with your ff you are the best writer ever I love you a loads and I am reading this ff so many times that I forgot to comment now commenting after reading it nearly 10 times and no doubt you write the best of all……

    • Sharon

      That’s my pleasure meghs…..and i was just wondering what happened that you did not comment till now….???

  8. priya

    think so u have taken the idea of godess venus from merchent of venice?????????awesome episode

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