How Our Journey Started…..??? Part 15 (Last Part)

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How Our Journey Started……??? Part 15 (Last Part)

Punishment Day 4….

He was rubbing his sleepy eyes…..to believe what he was infront of him…. Sona with a breakfast…and his favourite coffee…. No…not favourite coffee… His coffee made by Sona was….his favourite coffee…..

“Mujhe Der Ho gayi hai Kya…. Main abhi Sab kaam finish kar deta hon….” Dev…biting his tongue..between his teeths…

“Nahh…..actually…today I wanted…to eat a proper breakfast…. Today, I didn’t wanted to eat the same… Sweet omelette…..and salty tea….” Sona said in concerned yet sarcastic tone…

“What…??? The omelette and tea…I used to make….in prior days…were…” He stopped…and face palmed himself….

“That is why…it’s said….don’t trust anyone….Bcoz…the sugar and salt..both have the same colour…..” She rolled her eyes

Dev bowed down his head guiltily…and in embarrassment also…. “So, why didn’t u complained about it…. The sweet omelette..and the salty tea….” He wanted to…know the real cause….that why Sona resisted and didn’t complained….

“We should respect the food…. And I’ll happily eat like these foods if…cooked by….” She smiled and hugged him….and both fall down on the sofa….on which Dev was sleeping previously and Sona was….sitting on a small space of sofa…staring him….and a good….aroma of breakfast…that was waiting for them….. Sona was on the top of Dev….and Dev entrapped her small figure…under his big manly..arms

Dev was loving…this hug…after such a long time…. He felt himself complete…. He patted his back…. “Let’s start…” They parted and started their breakfast…. Sona made Dev eat the first bite by her hands…with teary eyes…..Dev took the bite by holding his one….and the next was wiping the trailing…tears on her cheeks…… The next was Sona’s turn…. Dev made him eat….and in this way…they did ..their breakfast….

Dev was washing the dishes……and Sona was standing…with her back resting to the counter of kitchen…. She was staring Dev…. Both didn’t said a word…but understood….everything…..just through eyes….. Ansh started crying…..and they both came out of their lovely trance….and the recent eye lock they were sharing broke…..

Dev was about to go….but Sona…ran first….and picked up….. She kissed him everywhere on the face….. After three days, she picked him up….kissed him….washed him….changed his clothes….and made him ready…. Dev was lovingly seeing all this….standing at the door of the room…resting his head with one corner….

He noticed his mistakes….he was making…. He has been fastening the diaper…wrong….”oh….that is why…it started leaking after every two hours….” He thought….. He has been applying body lotion to the face too….. Actually, what’s the difference between….. Body lotion…and face lotion… He was unknown…. “Face is also a part of the body…” He thought again…. He didn’t kept the bib…beneath ansh..while feeding him…so his clothes got wet with milk…every-time

After ansh…was ready… Sona picked him up….and stood up from the bed…..and moved toward Dev….. Dev kissed ansh….who was in Sona’s hand…and was refusing to come to him….(bechare ko baap, ki shakal dekh kar….pechle teen din yaad agaye hon ge..)… Dev then…kissed Sona’s forehead…. “Chalein…” He asked…

“Yes….” She nodded….”I’m waiting for u in car…. Come after packing our clothes….and locking the apartment properly….” She added further…..

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Dixit mansion…..

Ishwari was sitting in hall….worriedly…and riya, nikki were chatting with…Neha…who came back from Canada…to surprise everyone….she was telling about..her in laws, their house, about ranveer…etc etc… But neha didn’t knew…that Sona….and Dev weren’t home…and about their fights…. Infact…no one in Dixit mansion knew except Ishwari…..why Sona and Dev…were sharing a strained relationship….????

Devakshi were great actors…Bcoz outside the room…they used to act normal…while didn’t even..talked with eo….in their room…

“Ma…don’t worry…bhaiyya…will come…!!” Neha said to Ishwari….who was trying to call Dev…

“Neha..!! He isn’t picking my calls…from last three days… I’m worried…is everything alright….????” She replied worriedly….

“Ma…bhaiyya asked u…that he will be busy…so he wouldn’t be able to call u…” Nikki replied

“Han Ma…. Everything is fine…. But Ma…bhaiyya…hasn’t gone for a business tour….Infact….there was no business tour…this week…I myself…has checked the details….” Riya….the great…said…. “Moreover, Tina told…that.. Bhaiyya..took four day leave….” She added

This increased….more tension to Ishwari…. “No…he can’t do this… Where must have he gone…??? That too…lying with everyone… Something’s fishy….”

Neha, riya and Nikki again started their convo…while Ishwari sat there looking at the door….

Devakshi reached Dixit mansion…..

First Dev went inside….with bags….

“Dev…..!!!” Ishwari said with full shock…Bcoz..Dev was wearing the same…kurta shalwar….and he was stinging badly…. The clothes had the marks…of surf….and oil….

“Ma….” He was about to hug her…but Ishwari backed off…

“U r stinging Dev…..” She frowned….. “Where were u….??? U had gone for a business meeting….or u got hired in municipal committee…..” She demanded for answer…. “It looks….like u have been cleaning roads….and were picking up the dumps… And…”

“Ma….” Dev said with disbelieving eyes….

“Kya Ma…Han…??? U weren’t on a business meeting…i got to know….” Ishwari…shouted… NRN…were laughing seeing their brother in such a situation…..

Dev was standing without any reply…when Sona came behind…with ansh in his hands…

“Sona….ansh… Meri jaan….” Ishwari ran towards them….kissed them both… While Sona signed Dev through eyes to go…and change soon…. All gave a warm welcome to both…..Sona and ansh….

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At night….

“Dev…!! Unpack the bags…and place my clothes properly….and also of ansh…. And put clothes in that basket….” She ordered…. “And after doing this…. Come for dinner…Ma is calling…..” She moved out saying this…

Sona was going down to NRN…and ansh…but Ishwari called sona…..to her room…

“U have forgiven Dev so easily….????” Ishwari enquired

“Nah….. I took full revenge….” She replied excitedly…..

“Hahahaha….good job….I won’t ask the punishment…Bcoz ik…u r very intelligent… And thank u for forgiving him….” She kissed Sona’s forehead..and Sona laid down in Ishwari lap…. And Ishwari started caressing her hair……”U have such a big heart…. If I was in ur place….I couldn’t have forgive my husband…. Bcoz self-respect is the only thing..that a woman have…. And trust is the only thing….that she wants….from her men….whether it’s father, brother or husband…” Ishwari said….

“Ma….” Sona hugged tightly…

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After dinner, in Devakshi room…. Lights were off… Ansh was sleeping in the cart….(MAUSORI KI KASAM….Dev babu ko iss se koi masla…nhi howa…) Devakshi was lying on the bed…facing eo…. Dev was caressing Sona’s cheeks…..

“I’m sorry again ….” He said…

“Hmmmmm…..” She replied back….. “Punishments kaisi lagin????….. Or how ur four days passed….??.?” She added gleefully

“Fourth day….Sab se best tha…. Bcoz u came back…and today…my punishment was a bit less….” He replied happily….. “Who said…that???….the fourth day is still here…. Acha complete what were u saying…” She replied swiftly…

“The rest three days…. Were good…. And one think…I got to knew…. Every work is difficult…..and it requires effort…. I thought….house chores are easy thing to do…. But handling the house…and children….isn’t piece of cake…. I wonder…how u woman…. Handle these…so nicely…???” Dev said….

“That’s why…I gave u such punishments….. To let u know…. These things…. I’m glad u got to know…” She replied….

“Acha….what’s the punishment of fourth day left….that I have to do….???” He asked innocently….

Sona at once kissed him…..and she put the blankets over…. “That’s the punishment….” Sona whispered….

“If this is the punishment….. I’ll like to have it everyday….” He replied…..

The end…..

Well, a story never ends…. Bcoz….every ending is a new start of another story….. Life goes on and it never stops….. Value the ones u have….. Once they…r gone…they may not comeback…… Thank U…..

The media conference ended…. A girl and a boy came running to a man….

“Papa….u rocked today….!! ” the girl said joyfully

“Bcoz he’s my papa….” The small boy bragged….

“He’s also mine…” The girl said…… “No….” “Yes…”

The man was laughing seeing them like this….”ansh….ruhi…stop fighting like this….”
Yes, the boy is ansh….and the girl is ruhi…. DEVAKSHI CHILDREN….

“Ok papa…” They said in a union….

“BTW….where’s ur mama….” He asked

“Oh there p…she comes….” Ruhi said…and she ran to Sona…. “Ansh…she’s my mom….” She bragged now…..

And Devakshi laughed…seeing their children….

“Superhero…. U wrote the book…so well….” 12 year old Ansh said… “U also have to tell…ur and mama…story… That…how ur journey started….???” He added

“Han papa… Ansh is right….” Ruhi said…

“He just told u….” Sona said… While…ansh and Ruhi…didn’t understood…. Devakshi smiled….and all at the end…shared a group hug…..

THE END.

A/N~ Hi! Everyone…. Hope I’m not that much late…. How was the last episode…??? Tell through ur precious and valuable comments….. Silent readers…u also…I’m waiting….. This is the last part…..and ur torture is finished for some days…πŸ˜‚….. But don’t be so glad…. I’ll be back…after my exams…. I would like to thank u all….who have commented on my ff’s….and have been supporting me till now…. I won’t be naming them….Bcoz if any one is left out…so, that’s why…. Bye…for now…. Take care of urselves…and ur families….
Stay happy😘….. Stay blessed❀️

REGARDS,
MΓ₯Ε‚Γ«ΓͺhΓ£.

46 comments

  1. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Amazing episode! Loved it very much! The entire journey with you and your ff. You are an amazing writer and I’ll always wait for you to come up with a new awesome story just like this. Keep smiling.. God bless you πŸ™‚

    With Love <3

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Thank u so much maria…..😘 awww….😍….I too loved meeting u all….Will surely comeback…..and u also have to come….. Thanks again….❀

  2. Anu

    Awesome episode… last part was so cuteeee😍…really superb story… i am going to miss ur ff..nd early waiting fr d next one😍😍…take care dr… always be happy😘

  3. Farhat

    I’m crying maleeha.. Not Bcoz of the story but because it’s the last part.. And I’m serious here, my words can’t describe your beautifully carved fanfiction.. Hats off to your creativity dear.. Main teri hay re Jabar hoye re Jabar fan ho gayi..

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Awwww…..that’s so sweet of u dear….πŸ’žπŸ˜˜…..Thank u so muchπŸ’‹….but don’t cry….I’ll also feel bad…..and thank u for ur support, love and appreciation….πŸ’–β€

  4. Anjali

    I was a silent reader.But it’s high time.So I came forward to tell u how amazing writer u r!
    U have great writing skills dear.
    Now coming to ur story…..it was awesome. I enjoyed reading each and every part of it.I always love to read stories having DEVAKSHI kids.
    Please come back fast with another amazing story

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      First of all…..Thank u for breaking silence…..πŸ’‹ then I’ll say…..Thank u for the appreciation and love u showed through this comment……❀😘

  5. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Feeling better…….so commenting
    Awesomeeeeeeeeeeβ€οΈπŸ˜˜β£πŸ˜‰πŸ’πŸ’žπŸ’˜πŸ’—πŸ’ŸπŸ’“πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’˜πŸ˜πŸ’žπŸ’•πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ£
    All the best for examsπŸ’–
    Jaldi Se wapas aanaπŸ’
    Love love love love love love love love love ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Glad u r alright…..😘 and thank u for ur constant support…and love…..❀ thanks for the wishes……and lots of love for u too …..sweeto….β€πŸ’ŸπŸ’—πŸ’•

  6. Niki645

    |Registered Member

    Amazing, Super, awesome, fantastic…. ………….I am speechless, Maleeha di!
    I loved ur ff so much!!!!
    And the endingπŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»It was too good!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ƒ
    U are a fabulous writer!!!πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ˜˜
    I will be eagerly waiting for another amazing story from amazing Maleeha di!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜˜
    Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls come back soonπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    Loads of love 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  7. Erika

    |Registered Member

    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee episode dear we will miss your ff u write fantastic dear i hope we see u soon with a new ff pl. come back soon and best of luck for your exams do well

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Thank u so much Erika….😘 for ur constant support, love and appreciation…..πŸ’–πŸ’˜……and I’ll comeback yaar..😜… And thank u for wishes…..❀😘

  8. Erina

    |Registered Member

    Awesome end my doll bcse usse acha end nhi ho skta tha . I loved it from core of my heart nd my chootu sa heart also loves u nd vo apne doll ko bht miss krega so for that chootu heart come back soon ….. D whole journey with u was awesome no matter vo lecture ho ya y as d writter was my doll πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜‹πŸ˜β€πŸ’™πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ’“πŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’—πŸ’˜πŸ’πŸ’žπŸ’ŸπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘nd all d vry best for ur upcoming exams . πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘do best nd come tara tari(jaldi jaldi )
    I don’t realise ki kb y journey hmri start huyi nd c now we r on our destination . but I’m happy bcsas I got such a awesome ff
    With loads of love to my doll
    Erina here

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Thank u so much….my sweetie rosho…..πŸ’πŸ˜˜πŸ’– thank u so much again…..for ur constant support..love…appreciation….and ofcourse for the wishes…..πŸ’—πŸ’ŸπŸ’žπŸ˜˜…..thank u once again…..and I’ll miss u too….but I’ll come up soon….for u ur sweet…loving heart…..and of course for everyone here….who will be waiting for me…..πŸ’“πŸ’‹πŸ’•…… Thanks one again…..❀❀❀

      • Erina

        |Registered Member

        Awwww thnx u also my doll for showering so much love on me … πŸ˜Šβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜nd u called me rosho for d first time I was happy plus surprised bcse only my pari (sakthi)used to call m this but now u also .. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜˜πŸ˜‹πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ
        Love u nd cya soon….

      • Erina

        |Registered Member

        Ooo koi nhi but sachiii bolu to I love this nd thnxs for giving m this name .. πŸ˜…πŸ˜Šβ˜ΊπŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‹πŸ˜

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Welcome and I didn’t knew….she called u that…πŸ’–πŸ˜˜……and today…..I thought of giving u a nickname….as u have also kept mine…..πŸ˜œπŸ˜˜πŸ’‹πŸ’—

  9. Rockzzzzzz

    |Registered Member

    What an amazing ending😊
    but it ended😞..i wanted it continue,it was so goooooooooood…but fine because i know that u will soon come up with another amazing and more better storyline and keep entertaining us
    waiting for the next
    love
    PARIπŸ’–πŸ’–

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Thank u pari……πŸ’˜πŸ˜˜ Ik….but everything has an end…..and yes I’ll come after my exams…..😊 thank u once again for ur support…πŸ’πŸ’–….nd post ur ff’s soon…….after ur exams are over….πŸ’“β€β€

  10. Rj12

    |Registered Member

    Amazing maleeha what an awesome ending
    But it’s over😒 every serial or ff has an ending so this had to end but come up with something good

  11. AnShIta

    Hey Maleeha di!
    Okay, I know you must be terribly angry at me for not commenting on the previous parts , but pleaseeee do forgive me!
    I’ve been silently reading all the parts but could not comment due to my health.
    This was amazingly amazing. Literally cool. The ending was fabulous. I LOVED IT.
    Please do come up with something really soon!
    And, please do keep in touch!
    Till we encounter again, take care!
    Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      No…no… Anshi…I’m not angry with u…..😘 u have been reading the parts…it enough for me….how is ur health now…..???? Take care of urself….πŸ˜˜πŸ’“πŸ’• Thank u for the appreciation…..πŸ’– and surely I’ll come soon…..and will try to be in touch….β€πŸ’

      • AnShIta

        |Registered Member

        I’m so delighted to know that my pyaari di isn’t furious!
        Well, my Healy has slightly been improving, but my cold keeps on getting worse at times. So currently, I’ve gotta make sure I don’t get too much of anything cold!

  12. Benish

    It was awesome 😘😘😍😍
    Ur way writing is very good I like it πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Through ur writing style I guess u r Indian Muslim or pakistani πŸ™„πŸ™„
    Hmmmm?????😊

  13. Heshine

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maleeha….!!!! I’m extremely sorry and sorry…..dear….first I’m sorry fa the way extreme late cmnt…..πŸ˜•and next fa not cmntng n the previous part…..!!!πŸ˜•πŸ˜•please do forgiv me dear…..!!!actually I was stuck up in a huge pile of skl work….!!!ugh….!!!its really terrible…hope u knw….!!!πŸ˜‚
    And yeah …..coming to the ff…..!!!I shud juz that this is amazing…..but sad that thus is the last part of the ff….!!!πŸ˜•πŸ˜•i will really miss I and ur ff….!!really….!!!first I shud say abt ur 14th part….!!!oh its really awesome…I’m awestruck after reading it…..!!!!and even the last part.. .!!!!hw could u write such fabulously…!!!????!!oh I think its really a mystery…!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜u juz made me go dumb after reading ur ff….!!!πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜›truely….!!!its juz flawless….!!…oh I can’t believe if someone can write such awesome….and its none other than u….!!!😍😍😍really I luved the way sona made dev understand his mistakes….!!!! and dev realizing his mistakes at the last day in silly things….!!!like…….changing diapers…, applying lotion…..!!!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜›πŸ˜›oh its really funny…..!!!u juz made this part rapturous….!!! It really made the day….!!!u r such kind and soooooo sweet….!!!!ur thoughts are juz mind blowing….!!!!but very sad u ended this ff….!!!and u promised me that u will come up wit ur next ….remember….!???!?πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜hope u do……!!!!once again the epi is juz splendid……, awesome….., flawless…., amazing….. , breathtaking….., incredible…..,
    Oh I have no more words other than this…..πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜›πŸ˜œ……….!!!!πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜—πŸ˜šπŸ˜špls forgive me fa the delay once again……
    Love….love….πŸ’ŸπŸ’ž
    Heshine…!!πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’ž

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Heshine…..Omg…..😍😍😍 itna lambha message dear…..all ok na….!!! Just joking….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ……thank u so much dear…..and I said na it’s ok…..it’s never too late…..and I’m satisfied that u have read my ff…liked it…have supported me.😘😍…commenting isn’t a matter….πŸ˜˜πŸ’–πŸ’ž…… Thank u once again…. 😘 and yes I remember….that I have to return…..and I’ll dear…..don’t worry……
      And thanks for the wishes…..πŸ’ŸπŸ’— and also for so much appreciation….. Well, mere se bhi ache writers hain yahan pe…..I don’t think…I can that well…..but still thank u for such beautiful compliments once again…..πŸ˜πŸ’—…..
      ❀❀

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