Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai … part 24

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There has been no proof reading done for this chapter … I don’t want to read it again …
This is the end of season 1 of this ff … So what do you all want … a season break or normal continuation … Suggest any change of title that you want for season 2 … I wish to keep the name of the ff JTMMH only but I am open to all good suggestions
Lastly, ‘Saajna ve/Hai dil ko teri aarzoo has been used in this part so please listen to it while reading … It will enhance the experience
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“Sorry everyone, I was not replying to your messages but boards & entrances were keeping me busy … Good news; I have cleared NEET & I am shifting to Varanasi for pursuing MBBS … BHU offers the best of medicine … I’m leaving day after tomorrow”
This message of Sonakshi had an impact on everyone no lesser than the bomb blasts on Hiroshima & Nagasaki but to live in Delhi was getting suffocating for her. While in Kolkata she was mistreated by her own family, her Dad left her, she had to leave Kolkata along with her Dad’s surname but when she came to Delhi, colors started filling in her life, Dev brought those colors but he was the one who mercilessly took away her reason to live once again. She was desperate to leave Delhi, there was no point in staying in Delhi & so she decided to shift. Elena, Jatin & Vicky had called her & told her not to leave but Sona was not in a mood to listen to anyone. One day Ele dropped at her doorstep & enquired her about this sudden decision, Sona broke down & told her everything that had happened. After that Ele made sure that no one bothered Sona about this decision.
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SONA’S POV
I am finally in that train that would lead me out of this place but even now I am suffocating because of his presence. Maa & Bijoy Kaka are giving me company to Varanasi but all of them, Jatin, Vicky, Elena & Dev have also joined us… I don’t want to even face him … I’ll start crying … He doesn’t deserve my tears … but … but … even though I try so much … I can’t hate him … My hearts still thumps in my rib cage shouting that it loves him
DEV’S POV
I can see that she is stealing glances at me. We are sitting in the train facing each other on opposite seats … So close & yet so far … Say something Sonakshi … Please … Lash out at me, Hit me, accuse me, say that you hate me but please don’t behave as if you don’t know me … You know how much I get bothered by your silence … You are making things even worse for me
Hai dil ko teri aarzoo
Par mai tujhe na paa sakun
Hai dil ko teri justjoo
Par mai tujhe na paa sakun
Mai hu shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Mai hu lab tu duaa
Dono jud ke judaa
Sajaana Saajana Maahiya Saajana ve

After a long journey we are finally about to reach Varanasi … So many hours have past but neither of us have spoken a word …. Strange isn’t it … Things were so different when we were going to Agra … Do you remember that Sonakshi?
SONA’S POV
I have come to UP earlier also with Dev but things were so different then … You were making so many efforts to sit with me & to talk to me … Why have you become so cold Dev? Don’t you remember anything … I want to cry as loudly as possible once again, just the way I did on Papa’s birthday eve when you consoled me & I realized that I love you … I can cry once again Dev … only, only if you stand by me again … What is it that is holding you back?
Asha: Sona, We have reached our destination, We’ll stay in a hotel today & tomorrow you can join your hostel
Sona: Hmm
Asha: Sona think about it again … You can still go back & study in Delhi … There are so many good colleges …
Sona: Maa we’ve discussed this before … Mera dam ghutata hai uss shehar mein
DEV’S POV
Dam ghutata hai Sona? Great … start hurting me now indirectly as if your silence wasn’t enough to crush my soul … Why can’t we just go & sit quietly in the hotel … Everyone has decided to go to Ganga Aarti in the evening … Once again I’ll have to face her … As if Cancer wasn’t enough to kill me that I’ll have to bear looking at her eyes which are still full of love, tears & questions
Jatin: Dev, I still don’t agree with you … You can stop her
Dev: We’ve spoken before Jatin … This is the best for her
Jatin: Best for her or best for you?
Dev: What are you saying?
Jatin: You know when you were admitted in the hospital before her birthday she was crying because you don’t give her rights to become your partner in pain, your humdard, If you love each other sail through problems together … Be her pillow to let her cry & she’ll be your pillar of strength … You can come out of anything when you are together … when you are DevAkshi … If you can’t tell her your problems let me tell her atleast … Why do you want to be cursed for something you haven’t done?
Dev: No … no … My Sona won’t be able to handle this … I won’t give her anymore pain
Jatin: You are giving her pain now also
Dev: It’s nothing … If I die she’ll grieve even more … She’s trying to move on let her move on Jatin …. PLEASE I BEG OF YOU … I NEED YOUR HELP … DON’T COMPLICATE THINGS FOR ME
Jatin just kept his hand on Dev’s shoulder while Dev quickly wiped his fresh tears
Kai khwab dil tujhko lekar sajaye
Par khauff ye bhi kahi par sataye
Gar ye bhi toote to fir hoga kya re?
Mujhe raas aati hai khushian kaha re
Kyun dil ko dukhana bewajah
Phir aasun bahana ek dafa
Phir aasun bahan ek dafa
Mai hu shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Mai hu lab tu duaa
Dono jud ke judaa
Sajaana Saajana Maahiya Saajana ve
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In the evening all of our fabulous five along with Asha & Bijoy were seated in two boats in the lap of Ganga to witness the famous Benarasi Ganga Aarti. The priests blew the conch shells & started with the Aarti. The flame of the diyas rose to a great height, as the aarti proceeded the whole atmosphere became divine, captivating its on-lookers in its aura. Jatin patted Elena’s back & whispered in her ears
Jatin: Ele, Have you spoken to Sona?
Elena: About what?
Jatin: About my marriage
Elena: Huh?
Jatin: About her leaving Delhi … obviously
Elena: Jatin, we can’t cage her if she wants to fly … let her fly
Jatin: You know that’s not the reason
Elena: If you know what the reason is please tell your friend to act sensibly … He should have said no to her in a more polite way
Jatin: You don’t know what the real reason is Elena, Stop blaming Dev
Elena: What is the matter then?
Before Jatin could answer the conch shell blew again disturbing their chat. The clouds roared, the weather wasn’t clear since morning but now it seemed as if a big storm was about to come. Lightning flashed as if it wanted to finish all signs of mankind. In a frenzy the boat wala uncle (don’t know the word sorry) brought the boat to the shore & everyone got of it but the situation was worse on the ghat. Thousands of people were running to get out of the ghat. The Ganga who was calm few minutes before was roaring, splashing & flowing with only one motive which was to destroy anything that comes in its way. When Sona got down on the Ghat she bumped into someone & fell down, when she got up she realized that everyone else of her group had been drifted along with the cloud. All she could see was too many strangers rushing past her & pushing her. She didn’t had her mobile & all the money was in Asha’s purse. Due to the constant pushes she was getting, she was feeling dizzy. In between the screams of all those strangers she heard a familiar voice shouting her name but she felt too weak to respond before she could make out who it belonged to she lost her consciousness & fell into the arms of that person.
She remained unconscious for a long time when she opened her eyes she realised that her head was resting in someone’s lap. She shifted her eyes & saw that the person had his head buried in the groove of her neck & was crying profusely. It didn’t take her much time to realize who he was, “Dev!” She muttered under breath. He looked up & smiled at her.
Tu hi to har pal bandha hai
Lamho ki in zanzeeron mein
Tu hi to har din raha hai
Khwabon ki har tabeeron mein
Tu hi to har din dikha hai
Dhundhli oh Ujli tasveeron mein
Teri hi to hai khushboo mujhmein haa
Saajanana ve
Teri hi to hai khushboo mujhmein haa
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah
Ab tu hi to har su har jagah
Mai hu shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Mai hu lab tu duaa
Dono jud ke judaa
Sajaana Saajana Maahiya Saajana ve
Dev: Are you okay Sona?
She just nodded & freed herself from his embrace.
Sona: Maa, Kaka sab kaha hain?
Dev: No idea
Sona: They weren’t with you?
Dev: You were not with them so I came back to look for you
Sona: Thanks
Dev: You don’t need to thank me for taking care of you … That’s my right
Sona looked at him with eyes full of those innumerable questions again
Dev: We need to go back
They got out of the ghat & hired an auto rickshaw. Sonakshi was in devasted state not just because of the physical exertion but also because of Dev’s behavior he slayed her feelings that day when she proposed her & now he came back only for her. The auto rickshaw was being shared by others also. They squeezed inside it
SONA’S POV
We squeezed inside the autorickshaw. There was barely any place in it. The ride just started when I realized that passenger sitting next to me, a man of about 30 was not having really good intentions. The way his shoulder was rubbing against mine left me disgusted & I froze for a while. The next thing I felt was Dev had wrapped his arm on my shoulder & squeezed it as if reassuring me. He is a bipolar for sure or he is hiding something? I can see it in his eyes that he loves me then why is he behaving like this.
DEV’S POV
I could see tears & questions well up in her eyes again but when she looked up at me I decided to look the other way still having my arm wrapped around her protectively. I guess she got annoyed by this & halted the auto & got down from it without even looking at me. I saw that man follow her. Sensing danger I had to go after her.
SONA’S POV
I couldn’t handle it any longer … without even thinking twice I came out of the auto … I walked for a while when I felt a hand on my shoulder … I thought it was Dev but when I turned around it was that same man … He had followed me & I don’t even know where I am …An evil smirk played on his lips … There was lust in his eyes … He walked towards me … I took steps backward but he followed … My back pressed against a wall & he caged me in his arms … I thought that this is the end but someone hit that man from behind & his grip loosened … I freed myself but stopped there when I saw that my savior was Dev … Blood had shot up in his eyes … The man got up & punched my Dev right on his face … His lips started bleeding … I gave a sharp cry at this … Dev maintained his calm & held the man by his collar & started hitting him brutally … After some time I thought it was right to intervene as I felt that if I don’t stop him his hands will be drained in the dirty blood of that man … When I went to stop him the man took advantage of him & ran away
DEV’S POV
When that man ran away I felt like following him but then I saw Sona standing there, in a vulnerable state, I just pulled her in my embrace & she started crying bitterly holding my shirt… When she controlled her sobbing I held her hand & we started walking after asking some passer-bys we got to know that we were quiet near the hotel … Sona was not ready to step into any auto so we decided to walk … our last walk perhaps …
We were just about to reach the hotel when Sona stopped in her tracks
Sona: Dev, what is it that is bothering you? I know you are lying … It is written on your face … Please tell me Dev … We are friends first I can solve all your problems … I am ready to share your pain … without any expectations … Please give me a chance
I cupped her face in my hands & wiped her tears she looked so vulnerable I felt like hugging her & cry my heart out but when I saw her expressions getting hopeful, I stepped back & told her I would have done this for anyone & ran inside the hotel without looking back. She followed after sometime.
Haa tera saya to mai hu par sang tere na reh sakun
Haa iss safar mein to mai hoon par sang tere na chal sakun
Mai hu shab tu subah
Dono jud ke judaa
Mai hu lab tu duaa
Dono jud ke judaa
Sajaana Saajana Maahiya Saajana ve
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After a few weeks Sona called Asha from her new SIM that she had bought in UP & told her not give this number to anyone from Delhi because she didn’t want to keep any ties with anyone from Delhi
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37 Comments
  1. nice epi?..full of emotions?..oh dev..plesse tell her..?

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks
      Ab to bahut der ho gayi
      She won’t get to know before the leap
      Keep reading & commenting

  2. SamayraRaghavKashyap

    No words to express my gratitude to you for writing this FF.
    “Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai”
    Its just so apt for this story. Don’t change it. And normal continuation requested from my side.
    This episode was another benchmark you’ve set Riti. Keep going. I’m eagerly waitin for the next season. Coz I know its gonna be unconditional love n care. And I can’t wait to read that.
    One last thing….remember my novel waala deal. I want it at any cost. Love ya my friend you’ve done a great job.?

    1. Riti1107

      Gratitude??
      Manners seekh rahi ho kya?

      I will not change the title

      I remember your novel wala deal & if I write it I’ll pakka fulfill it

      Luv u 2 twinny

      1. SamayraRaghavKashyap

        Accha beta….meri line mujh hi pe…hmm????

  3. Normal continuation

  4. Awesome

  5. Riti1107

    Typos-
    Where Sona separates from the group it’s the crowd nd not the cloud
    The name of the ff is JTMHH not JTMMH
    When she proposed him not get

    There are others but please adjust

  6. Episode was Fabulous.
    Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue yaar.

    1. Riti1107

      Glad that you liked it
      Nd I’ll continue

  7. Richa144

    Omg.. I just wanted to read more n more but you ended the episode..it was very touching..felt so good after reading.. please post soon. Waiting waiting

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks di
      Will post soon❤❤❤

  8. Hey hi…
    I’m a silent reader of TU
    But I have always been waiting for your ff coz I just love it…. When I read the 1st few lines where u wrote that this is the last epi of season 1 I just thought that I should tell you how much I love this ff of yours..
    But now I’m actually falling short of words to express myself…
    Please don’t change the title…. It’s perfect… Just perfect ?
    N please please please come up with S2 asap❤

    1. Riti1107

      Hi Juhi
      Thanks for all the compliments
      Comment more often
      Thoda sa writer ko bhi accha lagna chahiye na
      I’m happy that my ff is reaching out to so many of u & making you all fall in love with it

  9. Plss continue normally. Don’t change name plssss

    1. Riti1107

      Your wish is my conmand8

  10. DramaQueen1004

    Riti di aapki aaj ki epi ne toh mujhe rula diya..
    It was awsum
    Aur aap pls ye title mat badaliye… its very nice n also from one of my fav songs ( humdard frm d movie ‘ek villain’) sung by my fav singer-arijit singh
    Pls continue n dont giv any breaks… main bardaash nhi kar paaungi
    Pls pls post soon
    Tc
    With loads n loads of love
    Nafia

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks Nafia

      Nahi badal rahi title … mujhe bhi yahi pasand hai but aise hi opinion ke liye poocha the

      I will post soon

  11. Yvonne Codner

    Enjoyed to the max… Riti, may I have the title in English please? I have been meaning to ask. As usual you have been superb.

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks
      Everyone is asking me not to change the title so I guess I won’t be able to … Democracy you see
      The title is actually the name of a Bollywood song which means that ‘you are my humdard’
      Humdard means a companion in pain
      If you are on wattpad you can read the same story with an English title which is ‘I live you’

  12. Priya12

    Di, pls don’t change the title…it’s just perfect for ur story, and I have so much memories in the title…so, pls don’t change it…
    And, ur always making me cry…it was so emotional, heart wrenching,
    And u said it was last chappy of this season..
    Some memories r haunting me of this ff…
    U just wrote clearly about that ganga arti scenes….I can just imagine it even I haven’t seen..
    Eager to see the nxt season …
    And di, atleast u could have provided some precap di..
    I m so excited to experience ur story…
    Pls post asap

    1. Riti1107

      I won’t as almost everyone wants the same title, including me!!
      I’m glad that I could make you cry?
      I mean the ff could have that effect

      I didn’t add the PRECAP on purpose
      Thoda suspense rakhne ke liye

  13. The episode was full of emotions!
    im a silent reader.. I just love your ff!
    as this episode is end of ya season I just wanted to comment that you ar3 doing a gr8 job.. pls don’t ever lose hope as you have dozens of silent readers, enjoying your ff

    continue with season 2
    n post it asap!

    1. Riti1107

      Thank You So Much Khyati
      I would appreciate if those dozens of silent readers take time & comment occasionally like they are doing today

      I’ll post it soon

  14. sorry for late comment. aaj aapne phir mujhe rula dia. it was so heart touching. I loved it. u know what aab mai kisise pyaar nahi karungi. meta dil tut gaya to mai tolerate nahi kar paungi.

    love u emotional devi??????

    1. I think dev will go to sona for treatment. or to her clinic. and thus she will know about it. sorry for guessing. let sona know about it sooooooooon. and I don’t want normal continuation. I want a superrrrrrrrrrrrr fast continuation.

    2. Riti1107

      Abhi padh likh lo has khel lo pyar mohabat baad me hota rahega

      Naa Dev Sona ke clinic me nahi jaayega
      Nd I’ll upload soon

      1. actually I am not even interested in love. I just hate it. I don’t want to get married also. ha agar shaheer hai toh alag baat hai. just kidding.?????

  15. V.V.harshita

    Awesome….epi yaar….full of emotions ….why can’t this dumbo Dev tells sona ….aghh!!! ?…plzs plzs Post soon yaar…I can’t Waite and ya plzs do continue ur w season ….don’t give any break dude….I can’t bear tht break ????????????plzs Post asap

    1. Riti1107

      Thank You
      I’ll post asap

  16. Aamu

    Uhuhuhuhu????…
    Di……!!!!
    I know mene kal raat jab post kiya tha sabse pehle read kiya tha n cmnt bhi but u know…i was at my nani’s place…so hotspot hota hai n kisine hotspot off kar diya..mera lamba painful cmnt rub ho gaya????????…
    Uhuhuhhh..
    Sachchi diiiiii…! U penned the pain n evrything sooo welll..
    Perfect but not perfect as devakshi is apart???..
    How will they meeeet…????????
    Bolo..bolo..naa nahi bolo..batado…
    I mean post kardo..na..! Pls diiiii…plshhhh???…
    Meri sisssy ho na..!!??? To post kar do…
    N ff ka name yah achcha hai..i love dis…so keep this only…
    Welll u know mene ek pura tissue use kiya…???….
    I criedddd…uwa..uwa…..uwa..
    Chalo koi ni..
    Bahbye di..
    Love u diiiiii..
    N there is a surprise for uh..! Hope u will like dat…u will get it sooon? stay tuned..?..may be for finishing first season
    …?

    1. Riti1107

      No more rona dhona its time for reunion !!!
      I’ve posted the next episode

      Nd I loved the surprise

  17. Keep the title intact…we love it…
    And you are actually justifying your title without getting distracted from it….
    Thats what a adore the most…
    It is a beautiful ff and i want it going in a normal continuation….

    Will be waiting for the next one….
    And thanks for this update…?

    1. Riti1107

      Your wish is my command
      The title is intact

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