Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai … part 15

Hey everyone! Before I start with today’s episode … I need to say something really badly… I want all of you to be really frank with me & if you don’t even like a comma in the ff please let me know … I have been getting very few comments of lately & I am losing out on my regular readers. So plz if there is any issue do let me know & if there is no problem then please comment kar do ….
Anyways let’s start with the episode
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Sona: Elena slow down … Elena … Ele
Vicky: Woaah !! Elena … humari bus hai tum kaha ghusi chali aa rahi ho? (Why are you coming in our bus?)
Sona: Can you please be sensitive Vicky.
One day after school Elena was heading towards Sona, Dev, Jatin & Vicky’s bus. She was not looking in a mood to address Vicky’s nonsense. She pushed Vicky & made her way into the bus. Vicky followed her & held her hand
Vicky: Say sorry
Elena: Sorry bolegi meri jutti (My shoe will say sorry)
Vicky: Accha bulwa ke dikhao?(Make it say then)
Elena stamped her feet & crushed Vicky’s toes under her feet’s weight.
Vicky: Ouch!!!
Sona: Serve’s you right
All of them settled down on the last seat of the bus. Just then Jatin entered the bus.
Jatin: Elena apna rasta bhool gayi kya? What are you doing in our bus?
Sona: Her parents are out of station … So she’ll stay with me for a month & go with us in the bus …
Elena: Jaao ab (Go)
Jatin: Where?
Elena: Qutub Minar
Vicky: Why?

Elena: Coz both of you have got the answer to the question of the millennium … Mai tumhari bus me kaise ? Get that printed in tomorrow’s newspaper. MORONS!
Jatin: Oho you’re still upset about your ipod being confiscated?
Elena: Confiscated?? It has been looted by that LADY BACCHAN
Sona: Why were you listening to songs in the Chemistry class?
Elena: Because I can’t bear that lecture… kuch samajh aata nahi hai & complain nahi kar sakte nahi to practicals me number nahi milenge… Why did Lady Bacchan had to come for a surprise inspection then & there?
Vicky: We signaled you to put it back but tujhe hi daredevil banna tha now you’ll have to suffer
Elena: Ha ha saari galti to meri hi hai ( It’s all my fault (sarcasm) )
Sona: Jatin where is Dev?

Jatin: Must be coming … busy with the final round of interview for the head boy … I’m sure he’ll make it…
Sona looked outside the window. Dev was standing outside the bus & was merrily chatting with Natasha
SONA’S POV: Again Natasha… Well she is better than me in all aspects … except when it comes to studies… I have no right to question Dev about his proximity with Natasha … he’s not my boyfriend… I love him …. But that doesn’t compel him to love me in return … but… but it’s paining here inside.
Dev entered the bus along with his rabbit smile
Dev: Hey Elena! What are you doing here?
Elena: You are late dude … Jatin & Vicky have already made the discovery… The noble prize will go to them
Dev: Oho still upset about your ipod?
Sona: Hell upset
Dev: We’ll get it for you …
Elena: How?
Jatin: We’ll all get dressed up in black
Vicky: & we’ll go to Disc… Disco Deewane aahan aahan
Jatin: Shut Up
Dev: We’ll steal it from her house
Sona: Or we can unleash my neighbour’s dogs … they’ll bite her & we can get the ipod
Jatin: Or or or … we can make this stress ball sit on her … Sona catch it
Sona: Stress ball?
Jatin: Stress ball = Sona … round round … get it get it?
Sona threw the ball right at Jatin’s face
Sona: Bull’s eye
No silly stupid idea could make Elena smile
Vicky: Aditi has de has de has de has de tu zara nahi to bas thoda thoda thoda muskura
Elena: Who Aditi?
Vicky: Gaana hai yaar
Dev(sings) : Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi jaise daaru desiiiii … Khatti meethi baatein hain nashe si … jaise daaru desi
Sona(sings): Ladhkhadene lagi … gungane lagi … bewajah har jagah aane jaane lagi … tu mujhe mai tujhe jo bhi ho dil mein wo khul ke batane lagi
Chorus: Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi jaise daaru desiiiii … Khatti meethi baatein hain Nashe sii jaise daaru desi
Finally Elena smiled
Elena: I love you all
Sona: Awwww
Sona hugged Elena.
Dev: Uhm Uhm … Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost (There’s still something left)
Dev opened his bag & started searching for something…
Elena: My Ipod! Where did you find it?
Dev: Asked Lady Bacchan to give it …
Vicky: & she gave it …
Dev: She had to give it …
Jatin: Why?

Dev: Because your friend is now the officially elected head boy of the school !!!!!!!
A round of applause, hooting & cheers for Dev followed. The teacher in charge of the bus had to step in to make them quiet. After some time…
Sona: Congrats … I knew it that you’ll make it … Who’s the head girl?
Dev: Natasha
Sona: Natasha?
Dev: Yes Natasha
Sona: Why Natasha
Dev: Sonakshi … I’ve prepared something for you
Sona: What?
Dev: Pagla howar badol dine pagol amar mon jege othe
Chenasonar kon baire je je je
Sona: Jekhane
Dev: Jekhane path nai nai re … Sekha … ummm … forgot … messed it up… Sorry
Sona: Why did you prepare this song?
Dev: The day when we were returning from Agra … you were singing this right? I thought that let’s give a surprise to you but it all went wrong
Sona: It was perfect
Dev: Just Perfect?
Sona: Just Perfect
Dev: I promise that I’ll learn a full song in Bengali … This was Rabindrasangeet … I’ll look for another such song & sing it on your birthday
Sona: You’ll learn a song that too … that too … in Bengali
Dev: No … I’ll learn a song in YOUR language … that’s my motivation
Sona: But why?
Silence. Dev became speechless
Sona: Mr Obhodro … Tum Eakdum
Dev: Eakdum Smart, Intelligent, Handsome
Sona: Tumi Eakdum Impossible
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That night Dev could not sleep. He got up, came out in his balcony. He remembered his day at school… His thoughts got stuck at the point where Sona had asked him … ‘But Why?’
Dev’s POV: But why? Good question Sona … I am going on doing things completely bizarre … completely not Dev Dixit style … all for you & when you asked me today … why ? I had no answer … Some whys should not be answered … I don’t know why Sonakshi … All I know is that when you smile & when your eyes sparkle everything is perfect in my world but when you are sad & you cry thousands of daggers pierce my heart… I promise you that I’ll never let you cry again in your life ….
PRECAP: DEVAKSHI’S FIRST RAIN … YE MAUSAM KI BAARISH YE BAARISH KA PAANI….

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Nahi zyaada nahi hua
Comment nahi karne par PAAP chadhta hai PAAP
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35 comments

  1. Nikkita0194

    Nikkita0194

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    riti di u know what its time to add as many devakshi movement as u can nd i want lady bachhan and yammu mam back i love them more than devakshi n i love their schl adventure yar unka bunk ab kuch aur vaisa hi schl life ke bare me socho jaise unke schl me model banana hai ya dance hai ya drama hai it would add fun n u can cover it with lots of devakshi movement
    n its also fab
    i think ki cmnts isliye km ho gaye kuki schl hm logo ke start ho gaye
    think u r not hurt
    luv u
    niks
    bye di

    • Riti1107

      Riti1107

      |Author

      I don’t know Niks how much of ur advice I’ll be able to follow coz the story can’t stay stagnant … I need to start with the actual story line which will start after this rain sequence
      I promise that they’ll be more Devakshi moments coz we are heading to that part of the story
      Apart from that I’ve got an inter school comp track in my mind
      Lady Bacchan will be there & I’ll try to fit Yammu mam again
      Thanks for ur advice
      Love you 2… 3…4 …😉😉😉

      & Haa sshayad school khulne ki wajah se comment kam ho gaye

    • Riti1107

      Riti1107

      |Author

      Sure there will be more Devakshi scenes coz we are heading to that part of the story where Devakshi & in particular Dev will take the centre stage

      Till then & beyond that keep reading
      Thanks for commenting

  2. ShrutiP

    ShrutiP

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    Don’t worry about comments dear….
    Your work is great…And I always wait for your ff….
    And about the episode as usual superb…Just loved it…
    Please post soon…
    Love you 😊😊😊

    • Riti1107

      Riti1107

      |Author

      Yes you’re right … I shouldn’t be worrying about comments … The no. of comments are not in my hand all I can do is keep posting

      Love you too ❤
      Thanks for the advice
      & Thanks for your wonderful comments

      • ShrutiP

        ShrutiP

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        Glad you are seeing everything in a positive way…
        Continue writing..
        Aur please jaldi post kar year…
        Love you 😊😊😊

  3. Manya

    Manya

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    Tu awesome hai yaar and tera ff bhi toh u can’t underestimate urself and ur ff nhi toh main bura maan jaungi😂😂❤️❤️❤️
    Love u and ur ff😘😘😘
    And Dev babu and gaana waana😉😉😍and Precap mein toh baarish waaris😂😂❣❣
    Waiting❤️❤️❤️

  4. Vaishaali

    Oohhiiyyyoooo….head boy and all….waah ji waah….❤❤
    Par natasha…head girl….yeh kya kiya riti…???😭😭😭😭
    But then you again made me happy by that dev ka bangalan…no…uski bangalan ke liye prepared song…. can’t tell you how much i loved that…😃😃😃😃

    Thank you for the update….😃😃

    • Riti1107

      Riti1107

      |Author

      Dev ki bangalan👍👍
      Someone tell X-GKB to address Sona like that

      Natasha ko agle episode me head girl banane ke maze aane wale hai
      Sona will rock & Natasha will be left shocked

      • Vaishaali

        Achha….aisa kya…then i will be waiting for her tote ud gye..wo bhi furrr karke..😂😂😂

        Haaa…gkb idiot bangalan bangalan kehti rehti hai….usko ehsaas nai hai abhi bhi ke wo sirf bangalan nai…DEV KI BANGALAN hai….

        Bas dev ko khud ko pata lagne ki der hai…😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

  5. Harshita1407

    Harshita1407

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    Hey your ff is awesome I am loving it don’t worry about comments and precap see bohot ummeeden hain💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜🌂🌂☔☔⚡⚡

  6. Rajeshwari

    Wow dev sang a bengali song for sona so sweet he is and all his friends too precap is just awesome

  7. Aamu

    Aamu

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    Hey riti..
    Dont feel bad…
    Mene cmn kiya previous par shaayad abhi i mean aaj hi….
    I was busy..soo…
    But dont felt bad..
    It was awesome yaaar..
    Ekdm phaaadu…
    N yaaaa idk how many read..but jo b karte hai naaaa…!
    Enjoy karte hai..like i do…
    Post next soooonn….
    N yaaa love yaa

  8. Priya12

    Priya12

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    Di, I m extremely sry for late cmt….little busy
    Don’t feel bad for cmts di…
    We r thr di…I luv ur ff a lot…
    Pls don’t feel for this….
    And epi just amazing di…

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