Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai… a Devakshi ff… part 10

The trip to Agra was planned for two days. They journey is to start today and our heroes will return the next day at night.
All the 11thies (going to be 12thies) had assembled in the school campus at 5:00 am. Lady Bacchan had organized them in lines and was addressing them
“All ladies & the not-so –gentle-men, the details of the trip have already been mentioned in the brochure which is in your hands at this very moment. Although you are the senior most class of the school I know your heads are the size of a pea. So I would have to remind you of the etiquettes of the school. Our school believes in the principles of……

Lady Bacchan went on to describe the proper code of conduct. The entire batch felt like sleeping listening to her monotonous voice. Except a few who were busy in their own world.
Elena: Vicky! What are you doing?
Sona: Ouch! Vicky I’ll slap you
Vicky (With an innocent look): I’ve done nothing.
Jatin: Don’t do that Vicky.
Elena: What is in your hand?
Sona: Yuck! You are tickling us with a fallen pigeon feather. Where did you find it?
Dev: Stop it Vicky.
Vicky: I plead not guilty, my lord.

The commotion was spotted by the eagle eyes of Lady Bacchan.
LB: Oh! I see the pros & cons of the GST Bill are being discussed by my favorite students. Mr. Tripathi
Vicky: Yes ma’am
LB: Won’t you include the rest of the school in your meeting. I suppose all of you would want to stay back with me AGAIN.
Dev: Sorry ma’am. He won’t do it again.

LB: This habit of standing up for each other will put all 5 of you in great trouble some day. Anyways the girls board the bus first.
Jatin: Save a seat for us Ele.
Methodically, everyone was boarded into the bus. The girls were sitting together & the boys were sitting behind them. Lady Bacchan was busy in patting herself for making everyone sit with full discipline but as soon as the engine started every student in every bus of every class started hooting & shouting leaving Lady Bacchan screaming alone in the school ground about moral values, ethics & this spoilt generation.
On the other hand a SORVANASH was happening Bijoy & Ishwari missed their bus Why?

Because Ishwari had to carry a big black kadhai, 32 dabbas & 108 packets of ghee. Bijoy who had agreed to carry the luggage (just to improve his impression )but because of the load he was not able to walk properly & the bus left them. Bijoy wanted to go back home but on Ishwari’s insistence he took another bus to Haridwar.
7:00 am
Sona was chatting with Ele. Vicky was busy with his candy crush & Jatin was reading some novel with his headphone on. Only one person was frowning that was none other than Mr. Devrath Dixit.
Dev’s POV: Very good! Where are we going? Agra. Famous for? Taj Mahal. Where am I sitting ? behind Sonakshi but but but … I can’t even see her. Baat karna to door ki baat. Had hai… look at everyone busy doing their own thing. Are we on a school trip or some business meeting? Gosh! Sonakshi Bose don’t you seriously care about me. I’m dying to be with you & you are busy talking about stupid girly stuff. Beta Dev ab tujhe hi kuch karna padega.(You’ll have to do something Dev)

Thinking so Dev got up, stood on his seat and started shouting
“Class walon. We are on our last school trip & everyone is busy in their own world. Come on everyone lets add some spark”
Sona: & how will you add that SPARK Mr. Obhodro?
Dev smiled he had finally grabbed her attention. Now it was time to impress. He took out his guitar & started playing a tune which was familiar to everyone. He sang:
Dil Chahta hai

Kabhi na beetien chamkile din
Dil chahta hai
Hum na rahe kabhi yaaro ke bin.
Hoooo din-din bhar ho pyaari baatein
Jhume shaamein gaayein raatein
Masti me rahe dooba-dooba humesha sama
Humko raahon me yun hi milti rahe khushiyaaan
Dil chahta hai…..

Soon the entire bus began to sing along with him. Dev’s mission was accomplished. Sona’s entire attention was now fixed on him. These travelers are happy but what about our ‘budhi ghodi laal lagam’(old aged love birds) Jodi Ishjoy?
Well not everything was going as planned. The bus that they took looked as if it would break down any time. The conductor had taken some strange interest in Bijoy & he looked at him continuously while rubbing his stomach & cleaning his teeth with a tooth pick. A baby was wailing in the background & the bus did not seem like one, it felt like they were taking a camel ride with the driver not increasing the speed beyond 20 km/hr.
Bijoy tried being romantic & took out an orange candy & offered it Ishwari. She took it happily but then started saying
Ye zindagi ek orange candy hai (Life is an orange candy)
Bijoy: ??

Ishu: Haa… ye zindagi ek orange candy hai jo kabhi nahi tikti (Life is an orange candy coz it won’t stay always)
Bijoy: Ishwari have you seen the weather … it’s so it’s so
Ishwari: Weather… kismat jaisi hoti hai bas badalti rehti hai. (Weather is like fate … keeps on changing)
Bijoy: Leave it… I am very happy
Ishwari: Khushi to 2 minute noodles ki tarah hoti hai… jaldi aati hai jaldi jaati hai (Happiness is like 2 minutes noodles… whixh xomes fast & goes fast toO)
Bijoy: Chup ho jaa meri amma
Ishwari: Amma nahi maa….
Teri maa Meri maa
Iski maa usko maa
Yahan Wahan aur kahan kahan
Har bacche aur budhe ki maa
Hoti hai ishwari shreeman
(I can’t translate this … Will become too weird in Hindi)
Ishwari smiled
Bijoy’s POV : Sorvanash !! Ye kis pagal ke saath fas gaya
9:00 AM
The school buses had stopped at Yamuna expressway so that the student’s could eat & freshen up. This time Dev could not tolerate that he wasn’t getting time to spend with Sonakshi so he had a plan.
Dev: Ouch! My stomach… it’s aching.
Sona: Are you okay?
Class Teacher: Dev if you are not feeling well … We’ll drop you at the hotel before the rest of us go to visit Taj Mahal
Dev: Aaaah !! No … no ma’am I’m fine. I’ll take my medicines & I’ll be okay…
Dev had different plans this time. He went into the bus before anyone else could. He shifted Elena’s stuff on his seat & kept his belongings with Sona’s. He sat next to the window. The rest of the class boarded the bus.
Jatin: Dev must be sitting alone… sulking
Elena: I don’t think so Jatin

Dev was sitting, perfectly normal with a broad smile on his face
Dev: Badi der laga di aane me ( You guys took a lot of time to come)
Elena: Dev that’s my seat
Dev: I’ve shifted your stuff with Jatin & Vicky. I’ll sit here
Everyone looks at him completely in shock
Dev: What? I need to sit near the window seat…otherwise I’ll vomit when the bus starts.
Jatin: Aaj kal zyaada hi beemariya nahi ho rahi tujhe. Peeche aaja Vicky andar ki taraf baith jaayega.
Dev: No no… aah … aah I can’t get up …my stomach it’s aching badly.
Jatin: Nautanki
Elena: Sona you come with me … Jatin you go with Dev

Dev: No no no
Vicky: Now what?
Dev: Arey! Why aren’t you people sitting?See … peeche sab wait kar rahe hai ( The rest of the class is waiting to be seated)
He got up & held Sona’s hand and made her sit with him
Vicky: Abhi to aapse utha nahi jaa raha tha Janab (You had problem getting up?)
Dev: Oooops ! Yes aaah … my stomach is aching badly.
Sona: Are you okay?
Dev: Tum ho na … ab sab okay ho jayega.( Now that you are with me everything will be fine)
Well everything was not so okay for IshJoy . The bus had finally broken down. The two of them were standing on the road hoping to get some lift.
Ishwari: Huh… zindagi bhi aisi hi hai…..(Life is like this only)
Bijoy: Eh !! Zindagi aisi zindagi waisi wali budhi aurat ek shabd aur boli na to yaha pe SORVANASH kar dunga mai … Chalti firti gyan ki dukaan apna gyaan band kar….
Ishwari: Aurat kisko bola ? Maa hu mai maa

A truck passed by. Bijoy stopped it & asked for lift. The driver agreed to give them lift. When Ishwari was boarding the bus she slipped & fell into two strong arms. She looked at the driver & recognized that he was none other than her ex husband Khatri
Ishwari: Khatri…
Khatri: Kab girna band karegi re Ishwari
Bijoy: Khatri… Ishwari… SORVANASH

Sorry for the late update
Vaishali took your advice of post aram aram se too seriously noo not really… Cousins had come & was busy with them.
Will post the next part soon

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  1. Manya

    Dev babu dramaqueen ban gye….oh sorry Dramaking ban gye??
    Bechara Bijoy kaisi aurat ……oh sorry maa ke saath Phass gya???Uska toh zindagi hi barbad Ho gaya??
    Turning point?I hope it’s for good!!!
    Post soon
    Love u?

    1. Riti1107

      Bijoy ka zindagi barbad aur hoga agle episodes me
      Turning point for Devakshi will be good

  2. ShrutiP

    Awesome dear…I was waiting for ur ff…loved it…post soon…????

    1. Riti1107

      This time I’ll pakka post soon

  3. No need to say sorry for the late update as family comes first…??
    And about posting aaram aaram se to i will again say that only…that no need to rush up…do it AAARRAAMMSSEEE….?????(I am sure iske baad baki sab readers mujhe chappal joote tamatar ande leke maarne aane waale hain…?????)(let me hide somewhere now??????)

    Super awesome episode….loved it….funny and hillarious……???
    Dev is such a DRAMA QUEEN…ooooppsss….DRAMA KING….!!!
    Vicky was tickling all of them…???
    I also did that thing once or twice in my school days in the morning assembly…and my poor friends got scoldings from the teacher….
    Beejoy was soo damn pissed off.???
    LMAO….KHATRI…tune maari entriyaan re ishu ke dil mein baji ghantiyaan re tang tang tang tang…..????

    Over all…mujhe bohot mazaa aaya padh ke…thank you for the update…?

    Chalo ab NIBANDH (essay) khatam kar deti hu warna mera comment tumhaare episode se bhi bada ho jaaega??….and i’m sorry for such a long comment..????

    1. Riti1107

      One of my friend used to do that whenever the principal had to give a speech
      Bijoy Dev nd specially Golu ko tang kar raha h na serial me to ab uski love life ki band bajne wali hai

      No issues with long comments
      I like it

  4. Priya12

    Dev ne tumhare ff me bahut ache se acting kiya yaar..dramabaaz…..
    Poor bejoy…
    Awesomeee epi dr..
    Pls post asap…

    1. Riti1107

      Dev has become Dramaarath Dixit now
      This time i’ll post soon

  5. Akshita

    You posted after soo long yr??? I. Loved it❤❤

    1. Riti1107

      Sorry for posting late
      I am the only & youngest Sister in my generation in my parental side
      So my cousins literally hijacked me
      So couldn’t post
      Will post the next one soon

  6. awesome. post soon

    1. Riti1107


  7. V.V.harshita

    Awesome Post soon dear

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks nd I’ll post soon

  8. Amazing episode post the next episode soon as possible plzz

    1. Riti1107

      Sure sure
      I’ll post soon

  9. Nikkita0194

    Sorry riti Di 4 cmnting late
    Actually my schl are started so I am very much busy now a day but u were fab apki mummy se puchna chati hu auntie ji kya khila Ke bada kiya hai inko mujhe bhi batao mai bhi kha lungi itna acha likhti hai but apke aram aram we likhne Ke chakar me mai bas ek hi chis kr rhi this waiting waiting andddd waiting??????
    PR OK meri umide hi tut GI ki ap KO post soon bolu
    An aram aram se hi post Karo kya kr sakte hai??
    With luv

    1. Riti1107

      Are nahi Niks
      I will post the next one soon pakka
      Mai ye soch rahi thi ki tum bhool to nahi gayi ye kaunsa ff hai nd kiska ff hai jaise tum pichli baar bhool gayi thi
      Glad that you still remember .???
      Nd mummy ne kya kha ke bada kia h
      kyuki mai aur kuch dhang se nahi khati
      Poora din mummy se daant zaroor khati hu

      1. Nikkita0194

        Are daat toh mai bhi khati rehti hu din bhar abhi v kha rahi hu PR apke jaisa talent toh aya hi Nhi
        And paneer is my fav baki toh mai bhi kuch dhang se nhi khati
        Mai apka ff Nhi bhuli thi PR is bar bhul jaungi????

  10. Fuggysona

    wow it is awesome i really loved and i am shruthy
    i did not login because i don’t have moodpa

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks Shruthy ❤❤❤
      Aajkal mood mera bhi nahi karta log in karne ka
      Coz serial me to Devakshi ka Tashan nahi band ho raha
      Nd Bijoy has become chikchikoy
      Comment karne ka mood nahi ho raha written episode me
      Sorry… Sorry I went on some other track

  11. Aamu

    Dev baabu drama king??
    Wonderful epi..
    Perdect,jz perfect
    Post next sooon…
    N sorry for d late cmnt..

    1. Riti1107

      Thanks dear???
      No problem with the late comment atleast you commented ?

  12. Juhi16

    Sry di itne din tak ise pad ni pai…actually sst exam tha and mere liye ye ek dreadful subject h….??
    But finally exam khatam ho gya…board exam khatam..Finally maine EXAM KO KHATAM kr diya…??
    Anyways,Di episode to as usual ekdam mst tha…luved it?
    And khaskar vo dev ke pet dard vala part…are bhaiyon aur unki behnon…dev vahan se nhi uthega…after all dev ke saate datd beemariyon ka ilaj sona hi to h…??

    1. Riti1107

      Congratss !!! ??
      Haa Dev ki saari beemariyon ka ilaj Sona hi h ??
      Still I am missing Devakshi in the serial
      We are seeing Dev & Sona bt not Devakshi isiliye ff hi padh k khush hona pd rha h ?

  13. Juhi16

    And haan ab na mai bilkul free hoon aur aapko jldi post krne ke liye aur zyada bolungi..And if u have any problem to mt bolna..
    Jst joking…pr jldi nxt vala post zaroor krna…so much excited to know ki Shadi ka laddu…nhi sry shadi ka halwa kaun khata h…Chikchikoy ka Khatri masala…??

    1. Riti1107

      Next part is posted
      Nd surprisingly TU ne itne jaldi review krke upload kar dia
      TU zindabaad ????
      Shaadi ka halwa kisko milega jaane ke liye padhte rahiye
      Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai only on TU
      Timing- Jab writer ka mood kare

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