Jo Bheji Thi Duaa… IKRS Episode 2

Jo Bheji Thi Duaa….. IKRS Episode 2
Hello friends… Here goes the 2nd episode of this ff…. and I have decided that I will end it in total of 3shots…. 2 down so 1 remaining… Instead of getting stuck in the story…. I thought to give this one a little bit of difference…but not that much… So that I can come up with a new fresh story… Hope you guys will like the idea…. Keep reading

The episode starts with Kaamini coming to DB with that letter. Daadi bua gets shocked on learning Dhaani is pregnant with Viplav’s child. Kaamini says she cannot let that child bring Dhaani and Viplav together again. Daadi bua smirks and says this is the spirit…. Kaamini shares her plan with DB and DB asks her to proceed before anyone sees.

In the ashram, Dhaani is lost in Viplav’s thoughts….. She reminisces how Viplav supported her till now and how their love blossomed every time. Dhaani smiles. Ishq ka rang safed plays…. She thinks Viplav should have come by now and walks tensedly. Here in AN, Viplav is getting ready and sees his jeans ….. He reminisces how he told Dhaani that he did not marry her to take care of his jeans, shirts,belts,shoes…but because he loves her…. Sau dard hai plays………

Later Kaamini knocks the ashram door and smirks thinking now Viplav will be hers only. Dhaani thinks Viplav might have come and goes to open the door excitedly… But gets sad on seeing Kaamini. Kaamini smiles and talks sweetly. Dhaani gets upset. Kaamini congratulates her and hugs her. She smirks thinking Dhaani smiles faintly and asks if Viplav did not come…… Kaamini says sorry to say Dhaani…but Viplav hates you… Dhaani gets shocked. Dhaani asks if Viplav sent her to joke?? Kaamini acts and says Dhaani… when I heard it I did not believed it…but Viplav is regretting that he married you… Dhaani asks What??? and tears roll down her eyes…. She reminisces Viplav saying he is so upset that he is going to break the marriage in the same temple where he married Dhaani…. Dhaani holds her tummy… Koi naa dekhe mere aansu plays …….Dhaani looks at her tummy… Then she raises her head and says No..this can’t happen… I don’t believe this …. Kaamini smirks and then acts …saying Kaash yeh sach na hota Dhaani…but this is the only truth… Dhaani says until and unless he comes here and says it on her face…she won’t believe it. Dhaani turns back and cries…. Kaamini says Viplav hates you.. why would he come here??? why?? Just then someone touches Kaamini from back… when Kaamini turns back… She gets a ZORDAAR slap…. She gets shocked… Dhaani also turns to see…… The face is shown…. and he is none other than Viplav…… ( YES….. Viplav….)   Dhaani says Viplav!!! Viplav looks at Dhaani with pain in his eyes…He feels hurt seeing Dhaani crying and goes to her. He cups her face and asks her to see her Viplav… Dhaani hugs him tightly… Viplav says I am here Dhaani…don’t cry.. He looks back at Kaamini who is in shock… Viplav says Kaamini….what did you think that you would make me away from my DHAANI …with you cheap tactics… Kaamini says what are you saying??? Viplav looks at her with anger and says don’t utter a word now…. Kaamini behaves madly and asks him to marry her… Dhaani gets shocked..and says Kaamini you?? Kaamini says Dhaani…you are the hurdle of my path…if you would have died…. Viplav would have been mine…why don’t you go away from our life?? Viplav shouts Enough….Kaamini continues onnce he will marry her he will also love her… She is educated…smart …beautiful… he will surely love her… Viplav smiles sarcastically… and asks her if she knows what is love?? Kaamini murmurs and says Dhaani is not of your type… Kaamini is of your type…She speaks ill about Dhaani. Viplav strangulates her…and says Maine kaha na… don’t utter a word… but you?? Kaamini tries to free herself… and says you are thinking about baby na?? Even I can be your kid’s mom…just marry me… please…and holds Viplav’s hand…. He strangulates her more… Dhaani gets tensed and says Stop Viplav….. Please stop… Viplav stops and pushes Kaamini with full anger…

He goes to Dhaani. Dhaani has tears in her eyes. Viplav cups her face….. Tera chehara(from Sanam teri kasam) plays…. Dhaani cries vigorously. Viplav hugs her tightly. Meri har ik tadap ko sukoon mill jaaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
Tera chehra jab nazar aaye
continues to play……
Kaamini is about to die with insecurity. (NOTE: please enjoy the scene …okay!!!) BUT WHO CARES

Dhaani says Viplav…. I was so scared…. Viplav says don’t be Dhaani…. people had tried to separate us with all their might…and looks at Kaamini…. Dhaani sees this and goes to Kaamini. She says she trusted her like a friend does..but she was snake hidden in the sleeves… Kaamini is fuming… Dhaani says before I slap you like Viplav did few minutes ago…get away from here…. Kaamini looks at her… Dhaani shouts just go…. and falls weak… Viplav holds her and asks Kaamini if she is deaf… Kaamini tries to speak… But Viplav asks her to move off… Kaamini walks off.

Just then RL comes there from out and gets happy seeing Viplav and Dhaani…. She comes inside to see Kaamini coming outside and asks what is she doing here??? Kaamini is fuming in anger… Dhaani and Viplav come to her. RL looks at Viplav and says she is angry with him as he made them worried. Viplav says Sorry… RL says OK…I forgive you…now never hurt our Dhaani…Dhaani smiles and Viplav says okay Rajlakshmi ji… RL says others have gone out…They will be happy to see you together…
Then Dhaani asks Viplav how did he came to know about Kaamini…RL looks on and asks if she tried to separate them?? Dhaani nods yes…. A flashback is shown Kaamini is smirking and saying no one will be able to know now that Dhaani is pregnant…She will never let Viplav go to Dhaani again…and happily goes inside throwing the letter in the dustbin. But the letter falls beside dustbin and Kaamini does not see it… Then Viplav is shown hearing everything. He recollects all those moments between him and Dhaani and how Kaamini used to come to spoil it… He gets angry… But then goes to pick that letter…..
And begins to read it……..

Viplav…
Humne kabhi nahi socha tha ki hum tumse door hoke tumhe chitthi likhenge….lekin socha toh yeh bhi nahi tha jab hum tumko pehli baar mile the ki ek din yesa aaega ki tumhare bina ek pal bhi jeena mushkil hoga…samay ka rang badal jaata hai lekin kuch rang kabhi nahi chutthte…jaise tumhare pyaar ka rang…who pyaar jo humko har mushkil mein sambhal leta hai…ek mithas lekar aaye the hamare jeevan mein tum…tumne humko har khushi di lekin aaj hamare aanchal duniya ke sabse bade sukh se bhardiya….maa banneka sukh…hamara rishta badal raha hai Viplav…chalo aayo aaj se hamari jindagi ki nayi suruwat karte hain…nayi jimmedariyon ke saath… Maa aur Pita ki…. Hum tumhare pass ana chahte hain Viplav…tum humse milne aaoge na???
I love you
Tumhari Dhaani

While reading the letter, Viplav has a wide smile on his face(imagine!!)… He smiles and thinks Mein Paapa banne wala hoon……. He feels the letter and kisses it… Ishq ka rang safed plays…… He says I am coming Dhaani…. He folds it and rushes to meet Dhaani….
Viplav hugs Dhaani…RL says you two always be like this….happy happy… Viplav smiles and thanks her…. Dhaani has tears in her eyes…RL asks if she is okay…Dhaani smiles and says yes….RL asks her to wipe her tears now… and curses Kaamini…Viplav says he does not want to spoil everyone’s mood by taking her name… RL says correct…..and asks them to sit and goes inside to bring something…..
Dhaani looks at Viplav. Viplav smiles and says thank you Dhaani…. Dhaani smiles and says Thank you to you too….. Ishq ishq plays…… RL comes with sweets and feeds them…. The screen freezes on their smiling faces…..

Sorry for making you wait for so long….. Do drop your comments….
Love you all 

23 comments

  1. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    YES! Finally Kaamini got that tadap she truly deserves to have. Don’t know when we will get to see this day on real IKRS but at least I enjoyed it reading. ❤️ Viplav knows he is going to be papa. Hayye! Cant wait to read the way he will take care of his lovely wife now. Post the next (and unfortunately last) part soon! ?

  2. Pethu sri

    Hey sujie great work and I love it but I am really weak in Hindi what dhaani mentioned in letter….. If u have time comment it in short I can understand….. OK….?keep rocking…..

    • Sujie

      |Author

      Thank you kaviya dear……
      Keep supporting ?
      Actually you can watch the part where Dhaani writes letter for Viplav in the episode of 25th may ….. She is very happy to share the news….and is reminiscing all those lovely moments with Viplav ??

  3. Latha

    |Registered Member

    Sujie at last kamini got a slap from viplav Kushi naa and I imagine the scene and really enjoyed a lot. But whatever u written here I want this in our real Ikrs. Viplav’s wide smile awwww I can imagine that killer smile. But I am also weak in Hindi. Keep rocking?????

  4. Arshdeep

    |Registered Member

    Sujieee dii..??? Dil jeet lia
    There were instances where i could exactly relate viplav to an incident and visualise him..?
    When viplav slapped her and said her Enough..ohh i could remember the scene when viplav saved dhani when asthana tried to molest her. The angry young man??

    Same i could visualise kamini acting madly that i love you..the way she was when she brought viplav into a room in hotel decorated..

    And kamini was badmouthing about dhani..i remembered the scenes where viplav asked raja’s mum and mami to stop speaking against dhani

    When viplav cups her face..i remembered the 17th december episode???❤ The way he was asking her if she is fine..❤

    Superb di????

  5. Renu

    Pethu it is the same letter dhani had written in ikrs i can translate it VIPLAV I HAD NEVER THOUGHT THAT WOULD BE FAR FROM U N WRITE A LETTER.. BUT EVEN HAD NOT THOUGHT THE DAY WHEN I HAD MET U FOR THE FIRST TIME THAT A DAY WOULD COME WHEN IT WOULD BE DIFFICULT TO LIVE WITHOUT U EVEN FOR A MOMENT. COLOUR OF TIME CHANGES BUT FEW COLORS NEVER FADE AWAY. LIKE THE COLOUR OF YOUR LOVE. THE LOVE WHICH GIVES STRENGTH TO ME IN ANY DIFFICULTY. U HAD COME N FILLED BY LIFE WITH SWEETNESS. U HAVE GIVEN ME EVERY PLEASURE BUT TODAY U HAVE given ME BIGGEST JOY JOY OF BEING A MOTHER. OUR RELATION IS CHANGING VIPLAV ; COME N FROM TODAY LETS START AFRESH ; WITH NEW RESPONSIBILITY OF FATHER N MOTHER. I WANT TO COME TO YOU VIPLAV. WOULD U COME TO MEET ME. YOURS DHANI.

  6. Renu

    Sujie maae dala bacha. Kash ye sab hakeekat me hota . Awesome superb fabulous n meticulously written. Happy ending which i would cherish for ever. ?☺

  7. maha

    It was wonderful sujie finally the most awaited scene “viplav slapped kamini” wuhhooo? .. it was sooo good that I can’t explain dil k armaan poory hogae? viplav cups dhani’s face how beautiful.. it was fantastic.. waiting for next one?

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