JNDSD FF….Main Adhoora Tere Bina (Episode 11)

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Thank u so much for the huge response to the FF…it’s really overwhelming… Hope u keep on supporting lyk dis for each epi….luv u…now no bak bak..let’s start epi 11

Atharv’s anger level reaches cloud nine seeing Vividha unconscious. He twists the auto driver’s hands.
Ath: those hands which rise over a woman for.wrong purposes….I just break it
He gives a tight punch on that driver’s chest. Dhakk….!!!!… The driver shouts in pain.
Dri: u won’t go alive from here…..just kill this saala….
He orders his men to kill Atharv. Atharv fights with the goons. Bolo har har…………

They try to hit him with rod but he defends.
Ath: how dare u touch her??….!!!!!… How dare u…..
He punches the driver’s nose. Blood gushed out. He takes the rod nd hit the goon who had hit Vividha from all sides.
Ath:I will kill u…….
Jaana Na……….

The goons run away. Atharv’s anger is in an uncontrollable level. Slowly he cools down. He turns nd looks at Vividha who is lying unconscious. He goes near her and pats her cheek.
Ath: helloooo… excuse me…
He gently shakes her but no response. He slowly lifts her head up nd is shocked to see her bleeding badly. Atharv looks at her face nd the blood repeatedly. He lifts Vividha nd runs towards his car. Jaana Na…………….
He drives swiftly nd somehow reaches hospital.
He lifts Vividha nd run in

Ath: Doctor…….!!!!…plzz come….fast….
Dr, nurses nd attenders rush towards them. They take Vividha in stretcher. Atharv goes with them. Vividha is taken inside. Nurse comes to Atharv.
N: Sir…..there r some procedures b4 starting treatment…U need to fill this form with patients details.
Atharv is too tensed nd is unable to fill it. Nurse notices this.
N: it’s ok sir…I will fill….u just tell…what relation do u have with patient???

Atharv is stunned by the question. Yes….what relation he has with her???…..he is lost in thoughts… He thinks of how Vividha looked at him with hope,shock…nd mixed emotions…how she closed her eyes looking at him…how she got hit…. He looks at his shirt drenched with her blood.

Jaana Na……..
Atharv’s POV: who is she?? …. I don’t know her….I don’t have any relation with her….but….but why am I feeling hurt seeing her in this condition….why do I feel pain in my heart…why do my eyes fill with tears for her…..what is happening?.?
N: sir…who is she to you???
Ath: she…she…she is my..WIFE….
Jaana Na…….

N: sir ur name
Ath: Atharv…. Atharv Sujatha…
N: nd ur wife
Ath: she is…Vi… Vividha….Mrs Vividha Atharv Sujatha….
Jaana Na….
N: ok.. thank you sir

Precap: dr comes out. Atharv asks about Vividha. Dr says she is serious due to loss of blood

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13 Comments
  1. Nazneen Syed

    Wow superb ???.She is my wife wow.You have amazing writing skills aam2000.Carry on good job?
    Feeling bad for Vividha.Hope voh jaldi theek Ho jaaye.Better than current track.

  2. Nazneen Syed

    Waiting for next episode.

  3. Nazneen Syed

    No need of asking thanks Aam2000.
    You are writing very good ?.Carry on.

  4. Nazneen Syed

    Pata nahi current track Mein Vividha kab Atharv Ki patni banegi??

  5. Superbbbbb episode,..Thanks for making awesome story…
    Really u r making us crazy with ur ff…..waiting for next episode

  6. Good to see… that u r going according to JNDSD theme…. without unnecessary tracks like cv’s….
    Keep posting….

  7. Good episode.. Good feel… nice song…nice story. Good going… Keep it up..??????????????

  8. Atharv says his wife
    Vivida atharv thats soooo romantic
    I think in precap atharv will donate blood 2 vivida
    Iam i correct aam???…?

  9. Avanikamdar

    Keep writing i loved it …

  10. Soumi

    Today first time I have noticed your ff qnd just fell in love instantly. Wow.I read out all the episodes at a time. It’s so beautiful. Keep it up aam2000. Eagerly waiting for the next

  11. Very nice one aam keep it up dear……I just love ur ff sooooooooooooooo much…..all the best dear continue. …….

  12. Wow…. such a super epi….. u are super duper talented aamm… wish u all the best….. east or west ViTharv is the best…. what’s ur real name dearrr?????

  13. i read all 11 episodes in a go.. nd its realllyy lovely.. suprrrrbb … keep going….

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