Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada… Rivanya SS Part 1

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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada…I have started living more than before..Part 1

Shesha was looking for a book in the library and finally found a book on love.Her face blossomed.Suddenly Kabir came closer to her.
Kab:10 ways to propose a boy.Cool.You want to propose a boy?
She kept silent.

Kabir showed her a book:I too took a similar book..how to propose a girl.I had taken it a few days back.Just came to return it.
Shesha:Why?You too want to propose someone?
Kabir smiled:Yes.
He looked at her romantically:I want to propose to a girl who attracts me every moment.

Shesha felt uncomfortable seeing the way he looked at her.
Kab:Shesha..why are you behaving as if you don’t know whom I love?

Shesha turned off her face.
Kab:Shesha..I love you..

She:Please stop it Kabir.I can’t bear this any more.I thought when I try to avoid you,you will lose your interest in me.But you are still after me.
Kabir became dull.
Kab:Shesha..
Shes:Yes Kabir..I don’t love you.I love someone else.

Kabir was shattered.
Shes:I love Ritik and I will propose him soon.
Kabir tried to hide his pain:Sorry for disturbing you Shesha.All the best for you and Ritik.I promise you that I will never come between you and Ritik.
Kabir left shedding tears.Shesha was relieved.

Ritik took Shivanya to a beautiful place full of greenery and river.
Rit:How is this place?
Shi:Beautiful.You know that how much I love such places.

Rit:I know that my natural beauty love such places with natural beauty.That’s why I brought here on this special occasion.

Sh:Special occasion?

Rit:First let us enjoy the natural beauty of this place together.

He held her hands and looked at the place smiling.

She could feel his breath on her skin.He felt his fragrance.They both looked at each other’s eyes unknowingly.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Rit:Shivanya..you asked me what special occasion I am talking about.Right? I want to make today memorable.
Shi:How?
He pulled her closer:I love you Shivanya.
She blushed:I love you too Ritik.
Rit:I know that you love me a lot.But ..this occasion is to propose you.
Shivanya looked at him in disbelief.
Rit:I love you Shivanya.Will you marry me?
She blushed.

Shi:Yes Ritik.I am dying to be your wife.
They became so happy that they got lost in each other’s arms.

Shesha met Ritik and gave him flowers.
Rit:Beautiful.But why these flowers for me?
Shesha:These are red roses which a girl can give only to the person she loves.
Ritik was confused:What?
Shesha:I love you Ritik.
Ritik was shocked:What is this Shesha?
Shesha:You are surprised?I really love you.You also love me.Right?I know that you love me.

Ritik became upset:You are my good friend.But I never considered you as my beloved.I love Shivanya.
Shesha was shocked.
Shes:Shivanya?I can’t believe it.How can you fall in love with a behenji like Shivanya?What does she have which I don’t have?
Ritik got angry:Shesha…I can understand your feelings.But you have no right to insult Shivanya.
Ritik tried to go away keeping the flowers on the chair.
Shesha’s heart was wounded.
Shesh:Ritik..you can’t leave these flowers and go away.
Ritik:I am sorry Shesha.If I accept these flowers it will be like accepting your love which I can’t do.
Shesha held his hand:You can’t leave me Ritik.
Rit:Shesha..control yourself…
He removed her hand off his and walked away.The shattered Shesha cried:Shivanya..I hate you for snatching from Ritik from me.

Months passed…

Ritik and Shivanya got married.

Years passed ….

Ritik dressed as a bride groom.He looked upset.
His daughter Shivangi went near him.
Shivangi:Papa…you said you love mumma.Then why you don’t love her now?

Ritik:Shivangi beta..what are you saying?Who said papa does’nt love your mumma.I love your mumma a lot.

Shivangi:Then why are you marrying Shesha aunty?

Ritik’s heart was pierced.His eyes became wet.

Kabir is played by Rajat Tokas and Shivangi is played by Amrita Mukherjee

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17 Comments
  1. RSTHEFFWRITER

    episode was just awesome . I couldn’t understand the last part . please make me understand

    1. Jasminerahul

      thanku very much.In the last part Ritik is shown to be ready to marry Shesha

  2. I also don’t know what happened to shivanya.why ritik marry shesha. But epi nice

    1. Jasminerahul

      thanku 4 ur detailed comment.plz keep commenting like this.i luv detailed comments

    2. Jasminerahul

      u will know why ritik is marrying shesha n what happened 2 shivanya

  3. Shakaib

    Really great fan fiction!!!! OMG!!! Kabir is positive love it yaar!!! Really you make him positive. Can you please tell em how much years passed so’ I can get to know how much years of shivangi is?????😏😏😏😏 love it to the coreee❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💚💚💚💚💚💚💜💜💜💜💜💜💙😘😘😘😘💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
    update next part soon,anxiously waiting 4 next part😃😃😃😃

    1. Jasminerahul

      Assume that Shivangi is 5 years old.thx 4 liking it.I made Kabir positive as Rajat Tokas does positives roles beautifully.

      1. Shakaib

        Are shesa and Shivanya sisters???? In your ff.

    2. Jasminerahul

      no.Shesha n Shivanya r not sisters

  4. Siddhi

    It’s great!

  5. Siddhi

    And read naagin (Rivanya forever) season-2 epi-65 and tere bin it is based on Rivanya only

  6. awesome di . so rivanya loved each other but got separated now . kabir loved sesha but sadly ,she did not love him . ritik proposing to shivanya and shivanya accepting it was nice . but the last part was so sad . amrita mukherjee is nice in shivangi’s role

    1. Jasminerahul

      thanku so much.when will u continue ur Ishra Rivanya ff?I’m a huge fan of Rivanya now.I’m waiting 4 u 2 continue ur ishra rivanya ff..plz reply

      1. yes , i am also a huge fan of rivanya and di i am not able to continue the ff because i dont know how to continue it and i am planning to restart it in a little different way, i will post the intro of that soon . but the pairs will be ishra and rivanya only .

    2. Jasminerahul

      ok…please start the intro soon.will b waiting.i’m too excited 4 it.plz read pyar ka meetha too

      1. sure di , will read and comment

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