Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada Rivanya Neil Ragini Prem Simar FF Part 20

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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada…I have started living more than before..Part 20
I dedicate this chapter to Piyali,Ajay who want Shesha to get true love.I dedicate this to Piyali who wants Shesha Shivangi friendship scene and also a positive Shesha.I dedicate this to Shakaib,Sanghita who want Kabir Shesha union.When I started this FF itself I had planned that Kabir Shesha will be a couple.

Thanks a lot for supporting my 1st Rivanya FF.This is a FF where the lead hero itself is grey.He was a coward who was forced to fool others because of lack of courage.So I know all of you hate Ritik.Ritik deserved it.Please write your favourite character and favourite scene and why you liked them.

One year later…

Ritik:Shivanya…are you not ready yet.
Shivanya came with Shivangi:Yes Ritik..I am ready.
Ritik was lost in her beauty.She blushed.

Shivangi:Papa..won’t you look at me?You will look only at mumma?

Shivanya giggled.Ritik was embarrassed.
Ritiik carried her in his arms:No beta.You look like a Princess.
Shivangi smiled.
Shi:Of course..because I only dressed her up.
Rit:I know that your hobby is to dress up Shivangi.But my Shivangi is beautiful otherwise also.
Shi:Because she is my daughter.
Rit:She is my daughter too.
They both giggled.
Rit:Lets leave.We are getting late for the engagement function.
Shi:Ok.

Engagement party.A beautiful girl was sitting there.It was none other than Shesha.Her guy came and sat near her.It was Kabir.
Kab:True love always wins.That’s why you realized my love and accepted me.
She smiled.

Shesha:Sorry Kabir..I was late in realizing the depth of your love.
Kabir smiled:No problem.Because what we get late is even more sweeter than what we get fast.So you are more sweeter than before for me.
She blushed seeing his romantic expressions.
She said in her mind: Kabir…from you I learnt a lesson that we should always marry the person who loves us.
Shesha:I love you Kabir.
He looked at her deeply:I love you too Shesha.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

They exchanged rings.
Samrat,Ritik and Shivanya:Congrats…
Kabir and Shesha were surprised to see them.They hugged each other happily.
Shesha:Thank you so much for coming.
Ritik:Why are you thanking us Shesha?We all are friends.
Shesha:But I troubled you all very much.I gave you so much of pain.
Ritik:But all the pain you have us was easily forgotten because of the great thing you did for us.
Shivanya:Yes Shesha.If you had not made me understand Ritik and I would never have been united.
Ritik:That moment I realized that I failed to see the heart good heart which was hidden.So I want to say sorry to all the rude words I uttered to you.
Shesha became emotional:I myself realized that I had a heart only when I saw yours and Shivanya’s love for each other.
Shivangi gave her a wedding card:Shesha aunty…Kabir uncle…my engagement gift for you both.
Shesha-Kabir took it from her and looked at it.
It was a picture of a boy and girl drawn by Shivangi.
Kabir patted her:Thank you so much Shivangi baby..this is so cute.
Shesha became so emotional that she hugged Shivangi.
Shesha:I hurt you so much.Still you gave me such a wonderful gift?I am sorry beta…Thank you so much.
Shivangi wiped her tears.
Shivangi:Don’t cry and spoil your make up on your engagement.
Shesha giggled.
Shivangi:And don’t say sorry and thank you as there is no sorry and thank you in friendship.
Shesha smiled and held her hand:Ok my best friend.
They hugged each other.
Everyone smiled.
Kab:Ritik..Shivanya..since we are getting married please give us marriage tips.
Ritik smiled:The only way to have a successful marriage is love..love and love.
Shesha and Kabir smiled at each other romantically.

Music was played…

Kabir Shesha did a passionate sizzling sensual dance.

Kaise bataaye, kaise jataaye
Subah tak tujhme jeena chahein

Bheege labon ki, geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chahein

Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai

Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..

(One-night-stand).
Ritik Shivanya danced romantically.

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara

Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon

Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera(Bhaagi).

Samrat and his fiancee Gauri danced with cute romantic expressions.

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)
Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon

(Sanam re).
Viren:Hey…we are not below you all in romantic dance.

Chaya:Virenji..what are you saying?
Viren:Come darling..we will show them that we can also do romantic dance.
She blushed.
They did a passionate dance.

(Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hai
Woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai
Jaan-e-jaan dilo pe pyaar ka
Ajab sa assar ho raha hai) – (2)-‘Sarfarosh’.

Ankush Yamini came on stage.
Ankush:We will prove that we are better than all of you in dance.
Everybody laughed.
Ank:We are noy bluffing.We were the best dancers of 80’s.
Yam:Yes..still we are the best.
Ank:Of course..we are the best.
They danced entertaining everyone.

Hai Jai Bolo Shiv Shankar Ki Jay
Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar
Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar
Ke Pyala Tere Nam Ka Piya
Ho O O Gir Jaoongi Main Mar Jaoongi
Jo Tune Mujhe Tham Na Liya, O Sau Rabadi

Hey Jai Jai Shiv Shankar Kanta Lage Na Kankar, Ke Pyala Tere Nam Ka Piya
Ho O O Gir Jaoongi Main Mar Jaoongi
Jo Tune Mujhe Tham Na Liya, O Sau Rabadi- Aap Ki Kasam.

Nachiket:Ankushji and Yaminiji proved that old couples are the better dancers.
Give us also a chance to prove that.
Everybody giggled:Sure sure.
Nachiket Ragini did a slow romantic dance.

Hmm…, ho…
Teri bindiya re, re aay haay, teri bindiya re -2
Sajan bindiya le legi teri nindiya
Re aay haay, teri bindiya re

Tere maathe lage hain yu, jaise chanda taara
Jiya mein chamke kabhi kabhi to, jaise koyi angaara
Tere maathe lage hain yu
Sajan nindiya…
Sajan nindiya le legi le legi le legi
Meri bindiya
Re aay haay, tera jhumka re -2
Chain lene na dega sajan tumka
Re aay haay mera jhumka re -Abhimaan

Shivanya:Neil uncle and Ragini aunty are so romantic in this age too.
Neil looked at Ragini romantically:Yes..we are romantic as romance is always there
on our air.
Ragini was shy.
Ritik:Too romantic.
Prem:Not only him his son also knows how to romance.
Ritik:Great Prem.
Prem held Simar’s hand.Simar was shy.
Sim:Premji..what are you doing?
Prem whispered:Simar..don’t make others say that we are unromantic
through your shyness.
Simar stared at Prem:What?
Prem smiled:Dance with me Simar.
Simar smiled and they danced.

Panchhi baadal premi ke pagal
Hum kaun hain sathiya O yaad nahi bhool gaya
O yaad nahi bhool gaya
Panchhi baadal premi ke pagal
Hum kaun hain sathiya

O yaad nahi bhool gaya
O yaad nahi bhool gaya
(Lamhe).

Samrat held his fiancee gauri closer:Not only the senior couples we young girls are also not back in dancing.
Samrat:Right darling.
Gauri:Yes samrat.No doubt.We will prove our dancing skills.

Ritik:We agree dear buddies.
Shesha:So come and put the stage on fire.
Samrat-Gauri dance together bringing smile to everyone’s face.

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara
O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai
O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara-Rustom.

Neil:You are right samrat.You both too rocked.
Kabir held Shesha closer:But you guys are not as hot as us.
Everyone laughs.
Sailesh:On this happy occasion why doon;t have take a group photograph?
Ankush:Sure.
They all posed together and a group photograph was clicked.

The end

NOTE:Gauri is played by mrunal Thakur

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6 Comments
  1. Shakaib

    Hi jasmine di….I never aspect it to this end but every good thing has end. Its is so awesome to read. Hats off to c u experimenting with Rihtik’s character. At first part…I also guessed that kabir-shesha will unite. It is so interesting to read. I really miss rivanya jodi on naagin serial. And thanks for continuing this….because sometimes when authors do not get comments,
    They stop continuing their fan fictions. I’m really sad with this. Like siddhi…. She has so much Good ideas and she writes also good but just because of comment…..she has stop posting her fan fictions…like rivanya forever, Kalrakshak, and many more. Wow….Shivangi.. Shivanya…Rithik family scene was so good. Andshesha cconfessing her love was so romantic. Shesha and kabor dance was so good as well as rivanya. Surprised to see mrunal here as samrat’s finance. Premar dance was also nice. Overall…episode was romantic and fantastic. Di…I’ve a question that you watch SNS or not..?? because I was reading SAATHIYA EK NAYI KAHANAI SEASON 1 OR 2.. THERE I READ IN YOUR COMMENT THAT YOU LIKE TO READ FFS ON SNS… DO YOU WATCH SNS..?? BECAUE I THINK ITA TOUGH TO WRITE A FAN FICTION ON ANY SERIAL WITH OUT WATCHING IT. RIGHT..?? my favourite character is shesha because at least she changed in your ff.. Which we can never aspect in show..!! My favourite scene when Rivanya confess their love in 1 st episode. My favourite couple is Kabir and Shesha and Rivanya here… Because Shesha and Kabir story was very different as well as rivanya… Tough we get to see less scenes of Kabir and Shesha as compared to Rivnaya..though I like both. Thanks for this wonderful fan fiction.

    1. Jasminerahul

      Thx a lot 4 the long comment.

      Why u r having doubt about whether I watch SNS?I watch SNS.But I have written ffs on the couples of the serials i have not watched.Sometimes when I see some couples’ scenes on TV itself I get attracted to them n I write ff on them without watching the serial.

  2. Nivu99

    nice 1 nd sooo nice convo
    ❤❤❤

    1. Jasminerahul

      Thanks you very much

  3. Shakaib

    Thank you for reply di…actually..as I’m late at this website…so I was SAATHIYA EK NAYI KAHANI….STARTING UPDATES…where a commenter name, Pari miss, asked you in reply why tolu molu used to call Gopi pari miss.. So you replied that…I don’t clearly tough now… Its been time I’ve read that….sorry if my doubt is wrong.

  4. Hey Jas, what a awesome ending! Love it 2 the core. And thank you for extending it and sorry for late comment.

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