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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada Rivanya Neil Ragini Prem Simar FF Part 101

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Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyada…I have started living more than before..Part 11
Shivanya:Ritik…only here we are husband and wife.Everywhere else in this place we are siblings.
Ritik felt upset.
Rit:Shivanya..but here we are husband and wife.Right?We will enjoy the present moment.

He led her to the dining table.They had food together.
At the time of biding good bye they were very upset.
Rit:Don’t worry Shivanya.Tomorrow also i am here.We will spend time together.

The next day Ritik took Shivanya to his hotel.Ritik gave her a saree.
Rit:I bought a saree for you.Wear it.I want to see you in this saree.
Shivanya smiled:It’s a beautiful saree.I will wear it now.
Shivanya wore the saree and came.Ritik was lost in her.They both walked towards each other.Shivanya slipped and fell upon Ritik and Ritik fell on the sofa.Shivanya fell on his lap.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Rit:My selection was’nt wrong.This saree suits you very well.You look so beautiful in this saree.

She blushed.
Rit:I will get ready and we will go out.
Ritik went to dress up.He came dressed up.He circled his arms around her neck cutely:Shall we go out my pretty wife.

She smiled.They went out.
It started raining.
He extended his hand towards her for a dance.She smiled.

She held his hand.They started dancing.

O re piya haye. O re piya haye. O re piya haye.

Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye. O re piya haye.- Aaja Nachle

Nachiket was looking outside through the window.Ragini came.
R:Neil..why are you looking out?
N:This rain is so beautiful Ragini.It reminds me of our old romantic days.
She blushed.
N:I want to relive those moments again.
She blushed.He held her hand and went out in rain.
They started dancing passionately.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kiya, beliya yeh tune kya kiya
Maine kiya teraa intejar, itna karo naa muje pyar – (2)

Sathiya yeh tune kya kaha, beliya yeh tune kya kaha
Yu naa kabhee karma intejar, maine kiya hai tumase pyar – (2)

Itanee mohababt saha naa sakunga, sach mani jinda rah naa sakunga

Tujhko samloo yeh meraa jimma, mai hu toh kya hai jane tamanna
Abb jina marana meraa janam tere hath hai
Maine kaha naa sanam, abb tu mere sath hai
Toh phir samhal, le me chala
Jana kaha, aa dil me aa-Love

Prem looked at the rain.He remembered his and Simar’s honeymoon time.

Flash back..

Prem Simar were sent to a honeymoon resort by Neil Ragini.They were shy to look at each other.Without looking at each other they walked together.Suddenly it started raining.When rain poured upon them they looked at the rain and smiled.
P:I love rain.
Simar smiled:Me too.
He looked at her:You too love rain?
She nodded smiling.
P:Then shall we celebrate this rainy moment together?
She looked at him.He held her hand slowly.She was shy.

( Dhaage Tod Laao Chaanadani Se Noor Ke
Ghoonghat Hi Bana Lo Roshani Se Noor Ke )… (2)

They started dancing.

Sharm Aa Gayi Toh Aaghosh Mein Lo
Ho Saanson Se Ulajhi Rahein Meri Saansein

Unknowingly they got intimate breaking the barrier between them.

( Bol Na Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke Halke
Honth Se Halke Halke, Bol Na Halke )… (2)– Jhoom Barabar Jhoom

Present..

Prem’s eyes got welled up with tears.
P:How could you change so much Simar?I can;t believe that the same Simar betrayed me for a selfish reason.

Shesha looked at the rain and smiled.She imagined dancing with Ritik in the rain.

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein to

Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to

Jal uthaa mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi batao sajan- Mohra

Weekend ended.It was time for Ritik to go back.Ritik and Shivanya moved away from each other tearfully.

Ritik went back home.
Shesha was happy:Ritik..you came back..
Rit:Ya..I am tired.Can you get me a glass of water?
Shesha:Why only water?I will give you milk.You will get good sleep.
Rit:Ok.
Shesha went to kitchen.She mixed sleeping pills in the milk.
Shesha:I am sorry Ritik.You are avoiding me too much.To make you attached to me I am forced to do this.When you married Shivanya though I was angry with Shivanya I never tried to snatch you from her.Because I knew that your happiness was Shivanya and you would never love me when she was there. I had decided not yo come between you and Shivanya and kept myself away from you and Shivanya though I burnt with jealousy every moment while seeing you with Shivanya.But destiny gave me a second chance to make you mine favouring me.But still you are away from me.To bring you closer I need to do this.Now Shivanya is not there.So you have to be mine Ritik.I will do anything for that.Sorry.
Shesha went and gave the milk to Ritik.
Ritik felt uneasy.
Shesha:What happened Ritik?
Rit:I don’t know..I feel my head is carrying a burden.
Shesha thought with a smile:Guess my pills started working on Ritik.
Ritik tried to walk towards the bed.
Shesha held his hand:I will help you to walk.
Shesha led him to the bed.Ritik fell asleep on the bed.Shesha lay close to him looking at him with a smile.
Shesha embraced Ritik from back::Ritik..you are so charming.My passion for you is only increasing day by day.

She embraced him tightly and slept close to him.

Morning…
Slowly Ritik opened his eyes and saw Shesha sleeping close to him.

He was shocked.
Rit:Shesha..
Shesha opened her eyes.She blushed.
Rit:Shesha..why are you sleeping near me?
Shesha blushed:Ritik..you only called me to sleep on the bed.
Rit:What?
She cupped his face in her hands:Thank you so much Ritik for finally accepting me as your wife.
Rit:What do you mean Shesha?
Shesha:Ritik..why are you talking as if you don’t know what happened on the previous night?
Rit:I don’t remember anything.I felt dizzy and I slept off.I don’t remember anything.Please tell me what happened at night Shesha.

How is my rain edit?

7 Comments
  1. Shakaib

    Hi jasmine di! Really awesome rain edit. I loves it to the core. You’re really awesome writer, well, I’m going to start my fan fiction might today or tomorrow. Di! Can I ask you a question..?? Why you do not comment in written updates. Or why you not be a part of any family or group on serials written update. Sorry if you’re hurted. So, Shesa is going to be pregnant. I hope Shesa gets her true love kabir.

    1. Jasminerahul

      thanku.waiting 4 ur comment.i watch the serial.so i don’t read written updates.that’s why not commenting there

      1. Shakaib

        Thank you for reply. Well, I’ve submit my fan fictions, They are on kkb, naagin and Kawach, Pardes and ishqbaaz, and yhm and sns. I guess you every serial.

      2. Shakaib

        Thank you for reply. Well, I’ve submit my fan fictions, They are on kkb, naagin and Kawach, Pardes and ishqbaaz, and yhm and sns. I guess you watch every serial on which I’m writing fan fictions.

  2. Very good 😊

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