Jealous, Betrayal, Mistakes, Redemption chapter 2

Bonnie was in the hospital she was near death every family gather for her, Piyali she is the mother of Bonnie and Radhika, her husband Samrat is with her, they were worried for there daughter, Mannat Kapoor is Bonnie and Radhika’s Bua, she is not the biological sister of Samrat, she was adopted by his parents when she was 6 year old but still they share brother and sister relationship, Mannat is a widow her husband died in the car accident she has two sons and one daughter, her name is Sam Kapoor the one Neil is in love with. Mannat son’s Jai and Saral. Saral is a doctor he is trying to save Bonnie and Jai is a cop, he has no choice but to arrest the person who may have stabbed Bonnie.


Jai: “What were you doing with the knife, and don’t tell me you were talking the knife out of her stomach without thinking the consequences.”

” Jai I wasn’t thinking, and please believe me it wasn’t me, I would never stab her.”

Jai: ” Your fingerprints are on it, both of your fingerprints are on it so which one of you try to kill her.”


Few hours ago…

Radhika: “Arjun I didn’t stab my sister, I just took the knife out of her.”

Arjun: “I believe you, I know you wouldn’t kill your sister, I remember one time when a little dog was laying on the road to die, you went to the dog to take him to the hospital, if it wasn’t for you the dog would have died, it’s not in your nature to kill.

Radhika was in tears, she didn’t expect Arjun to be kind to her. She goes to Arjun.

Radhika: “Please Arjun save my sister, I need to save her, please call the ambulance she is still breathing.”

Arjun takes out his cell phone and calls the paramedic. While Radhika takes one of her sweater off and uses it to press on to where Bonnie is bleeding.

Arjun: “There coming, any idea who would do this.”

Radhika: “No, I have no idea who did it, and why.”

Arjun: “If I get my hands on him, he will pay for killing my child.”

Radhika was shocked…

Radhika: “Bonnie was pregnant.”

Arjun: “Yes didn’t she tell you.”

Radhika nodded her head no..

Radhika POV

She probably didn’t tell me because she knows that it’ll hurt me, oh Arjun if only you knew how much I love you, it is killing me inside to know that you and my sister made a baby. I will leave after my sister is fine.

Arjun POV

Again I have betrayed you Radhika, I can see in your eyes how much this is paining you, I wish I could go back and change that moment when I thought you were in love with Neil, I should have confronted you maybe things would have been different, you would have been carrying the baby, oh how happy I would have been, but I can’t, but I will do my redemption any way I can.

While walking, Arjun sees the knife on the floor, he thinks he needs to save Radhika for the crime she didn’t do, it would be his redemption he would put his fingerprints on it, no way would he let the love of his life go to jail.

Radhika: “Arjun what are you doing.”

Arjun: “I am saving you from going to jail.”

Radhika: “But Arjun, why are you doing this, I will tell the truth.”

Arjun: “Nobody looks for truth, they look for evidence and right now if they get hold of the knife, they will get my print as well.”

Piyali opens the door to see that Arjun was holding a knife and that her daughter Radhika was with Bonnie pressing onto where she was bleeding.

Piyali calls all her family and says that Arjun is holding the knife, he stab my daughter. But Radhika tells them that Arjun didn’t do it.

Radhika: “Mother, I saw Bonnie, she was already stabbed, it was me who took the knife out, I couldn’t see her like this.”

Arjun: “We didn’t try to kill Bonnie, we were trying to save her, she is still breathing.”

Jai: “The paramedic is here, Saral will take care of Bonnie, and you both will go with me to the police station.”



Radhika: “Jai I don’t know who stabbed Bonnie, but I know Arjun and I didn’t do it, and think about it if it was your brother that got stabbed wouldn’t you take the knife out. And for Arjun why would he stab Bonnie when she is carrying his child.”

Jai: “For now you both can go, but don’t think of leaving this place and pray that Bonnie comes out alive or you guys are in trouble.”


Arjun and Radhika were outside the police station building.

Radhika: “Arjun why are you doing this?”

Arjun: “Because we are friends and I didn’t want you to get arrested for the crime you didn’t do.”

Radhika POV

I want to be more than just friends Arjun, but I guess you don’t feel the same.”

Arjun POV

I do have feeling for you Radhika but my mistakes are too big, I don’t know if you even love me because my betrayal is too big.

Radhika: “Arjun, I want to go to the temple and pray for my sister.”

Arjun: ” I’ll take you there.”


While Arjun and Radhika were gone to the temple, Bonnie was out of danger but was she safe from the person who stabbed her.

We see a person disguised as a doctor, he has covered half of his face with the doctors mask, he is holding a needle, he was about to end Bonnie’s life when suddenly Sam comes in the room and see what the fake doctor was about to do. The fake doctor pushes Sam away he escape but she did grabs the doctor’s mask and see Arjun’s face but Arjun is with Radhika then who is he….

Precap: Sam says Arjun try to kill Bonnie but Radhika says Arjun was with me at the temple. We see a person taking Arjun’s face mask off….

Finally I’m back to writing, hope you all enjoyed your holiday, I certainly did, Mother’s Diary will post next week, I have joined the watpad my account is brind2y2 hope to here from you, please do comment it gives me energy to write. It is 9:45 Jan 3 and it is snowing here, oh before I leave I wanted to thank Rossy, Dipika, S.V for your OS on my birthday, I really enjoy reading the OS. And for Ritu and Jessie thank you for the birthday wish. Sulbi and Jewel also thank you for the birthday wish. And on the wat pad I got birthday wish from Sweetie and Gianna too thank you so much, love you all, it is night time here going to sleep now bye, bye ta ta…


  1. Sammy


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    As ….only you can write head spinnning stories …i am so happy to come across this …..happy new year di …and do one thing add your name in the title …….trust me readers will run here …..i saw your name in the last ….and i was like …sammy you guessed right …….lovely chappy di ……i just missed last chappy of your rectify ….i will catch them soon ..😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Sammy for your comment, I’m glad your back on TU, and yes I will put my name on the title, thank you for that, hope it does come true, I will update soon, a big bear hug and stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  2. Gauri

    Brin now my head is spinning this was so brilliant ….just loved it…now who is this second Arjun come back soon πŸ™‚ love u

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Gauri, he can disguise as Arjun because of the mask, who he is well you just have to wait for it, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  3. arti viswanathan

    Brin darling excellent, superb episode…. I loved it dear to the core… It’s just an head spinning story.

  4. we

    Ohho… So much twists n turns… Di how do these awesome ideas come in your mind….. Hats off… You are indeed a good writer… 😊

  5. Rossy


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    Outstanding….Arjun believed..that’s gud…n their same pov but forced due to situation…i think bonnie is taking or something else…or if there any other trying to kill her…that means that person has any problem with Arjun or bonnie..or he I the real father of baby…gosh me n ny ideas

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Rossy, yes anything is possible in the story, keep reading, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  6. Sangee


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    Hey Brin di… A big round of. Applause πŸ‘ for you. . Lots of twists and turns… Arjun taking the blame…. Arjuns Anger for his Un born baby though he thought to re correct it….rads getting sad hearing that…. Arjun thinking abt rads…. Wah Wah super one di 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 waiting for next one

  7. Gianna


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    OMG my head is spinning now, this was more than fantastic. I had to catch up with the previous chapter first. This story has everything and the twist and turns you add just takes this to the edge and me being a fan of these kinds of stories am so loving this one already, hope to read the next one soon.
    Love u and tc πŸ’—

  8. Sulbi


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    Brin sissy…. awmse… so who tries to kill Bonnie… and why the person mask as Arjun… ardhika in love with each other… but culdnt able to express it… so curious to know about mystery dear… update soon… luv u and tc dear… πŸ™‚

  9. Jewel


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    who is that person who try to kill manya…. is that saral?? why he using arjun’s face mask?? i am thinking a lot…. brin this is superb…. i can’t wait for next post soon, plz….

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Jewel, it is Bonnie that he is trying to kill, who he is, keep reading, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  10. Sathya

    Brin..what yar? You became queen for twists and turns….yar am repeating the same dialogues as others…my head is spinning reading it. Oh god…its amazing writing yar….

    Belated bday wishes dear πŸ™‚

  11. Dipika


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    Brin darling this wonderful update.. U made me wonder.. Who stabbed bonnie.. Aradhika trying to save each other…. Jai… Is thre behind this… Sam got the killer.. But he is trying to trap arjun.. So many questions.. Post soon.. Love u lots 😍 😍

  12. Aasthu


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    I’m happy that Arjun stood by her…..I wonder who stabbed Bonnie…..sure that person hates Arjun…both Arjun and Radhika are in pain…..I really wish things had not happened the way it did… Saral a good guy in this….so this is a murder investigation ff????? I liked the chappy…..sorry for the delay in commenting………ummm di which country do u live in????? Canada ??????? tc…bye… u …..

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Aasthu, yes I’m from Canada, read your private message hope your exam go great, wishing you all the best for your exam, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  13. Manha


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    OMG!!!! awesome…. Mystery lying inside the beats of love. superb… Arjun loves her but he made mistakes in his insanity. well cant expect more from him. how idiotic can he be?? but the way he shows hi strust and love can make you forget his betrayal too. but i dont think bonnie is pregnant with aRjun’s child. this is just my assumption. Jai being a super cop is trying hard to find out but cant help but he too cant believe that radz did this. Ardhika emotions hiding from each other. mindblowing. if only they can speak the words.Still the death is looming over her. Hope she knows who is after her else it will turn into very mysterious one. now who is the one that wants bonnie dead and why to use Arjun’s face. someone close to them. It is awesome brin. loved it.

  14. Jessie


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    Brinzzzeeeeee….this is awesome..sorry…I got it late…but so happy i got to read….now am curious to know…but is Jai a good guy…!! Ardhika..that’s so lovely…u brought it out different…Bonnie is alive…what abt baby…Arjun took responsibility though,it happened by mistake….nice one you are portraying…..he immediately says abt his child…!! Tat part was well u’s interesting…!!! You made it so…!! TC

  15. Sweetie


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    Didu,firstly belated happy birthday again.. πŸ™‚ What a story line di!! Amazing wala amazing..I think the person who wore Arjun’s mask came to Bonnie and stabbed her,isn’t it??Or else how would she have allowed anyone in to the house??Or he put on the mask only for this hospital mission??My head is spinning..Finally my exams are over,yippiee.. πŸ˜€ Waiting for the next chapter Di,stay blessed and lots of love.. πŸ™‚

  16. _Ritu


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    Brin brilliant epi dear πŸ™‚ Arjun’s mask..I was lyk πŸ‘€ ..who is after Arjun…I feel fishy about Saral nd Jai..all eager for nxt..plz plz.plz post soon nd if possible den plz a double dhamaka.. :)loads of love. πŸ™‚

  17. Roma

    Very happy belated birthday wishes from me brin…I’m so sorry. ..I’m very late my dear….I’m still very behind here n in watty….so many things going aroud…n I’m trying to keep up…the episode was awesoooooome. ..loved it…arjun n rads both in very tough situation. ..but who is this mystery guy…who wants to trap arjun in Bonnie’s murder….very interesting n unique lovely story. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰ stay blessed n healthy alwaysssss. ..take care sweetie

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