Jealous, Betrayal, Mistakes, Redemption chapter 1

Hi I’m back again Mother’s diary is posted and I thought I’ll post this one else well. I am going to be busy because of the holiday and my son’s birthday is next Saturday and after New Year will be mine birthday, after that I’ll start writing but I won’t stop Comment on your post, that’s promise I’ll keep, now I should stop talking and let you read the story, enjoy…

Bonnie POV

I am making a big mistake, I don’t even love Arjun, it was because of Destiny he made me do it, he told me if I marry Arjun, I’ll have my sister back, but I feel like my sister is drifting apart, I need to talk to him, and then I will tell Ardhika the truth.

Arjun POV

I need to forget Radhika, I am going to marry her sister, even though this is killing me, but I don’t have a choice, she told me she is pregnant, even though I have no memory of making love to Bonnie because I was dreaming of making love to Radhika, I betrayed Radhika but then she betrayed me by getting engaged to Neil, so I told Bonnie then we should get married for our child. Few days ago I found Neil with Sam they were kissing on the lips, I got angry with Neil and punched him and said how could you do this to Radhika when you are engaged with her, Neil said I am not engaged with Radhika, she wanted to propose to you, I was just preparing her because she was nervous to propose to you. When Neil told me the truth, I realize I lost her. Now that I’m getting married to Bonnie, it feels all wrong, it should have been Radhika carrying my child not Bonnie. I can’t do this, I’ll be there for the child, but I need to talk to Radhika, see if I have a chance with her, I’ll make all the redemption for her, if I could get her love back.

Radhika POV

There is no way I’m staying here and see my sister marry the man I love, I am leaving here, but first I need to talk to my sister, I need to know why she betray me..

When Radhika went to Bonnie’s room she saw that Bonnie was stabbed the knife was still inside her, Without thinking she takes the knife out, and that when Arjun arrive…….

Precap: Who stabbed Bonnie and why?

Thank you all for your lovely comment for the rectifier, the sequel will be much later because I want to focus on mother’s diary and this ff. I’ll start writing the next chapter after the holiday for now bye bye ta ta….

23 comments

  1. arti viswanathan

    Superb, excellent and marvelous episode brin dear… I loved it….i liked reading it…. And i will be waiting for next episode….. U re superb writter….

  2. Starz

    Starz

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    Awesome and is exciting…. loving it…and ha advance bday wishes to ur son and my little bro….so wats his Name??…will wait for u to post.. love you and take care

    • Brin

      Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Starz, my son name is Ishaan and his birthday is this Saturday, I will update after the holiday, a big bear hug and stay blessed. 🙂

  3. Chashni

    Oh my god now arjun will mistake radhika as the stabber.so then story will start with his revenge,I couldn’t even able to think.brin di you are awesome.superb.

  4. RITWIKA

    Marvelous…..i just loved it……its going interesting day by day…..waiting for next one….post soon n take care…..

  5. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Brin dear… u stoppped at wrong timing yaar… u made me so curious… will Arjun misunderstand Radhika that she stabbed her sister?? Oh gosh!! Breaking my head… will wait till u update dear sisy…

    Convey my wishes to ur son sisy… and advance wishes for you too… happy birthday in advance… stay happy dear.. tc… 🙂

  6. Jewel

    Jewel

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    Omg, it is going to be really complicated. Now Arjun will misunderstand rads…. It is superb brin… I can’t wait for next…. Plz come back soon….

    • Jewel

      Jewel

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      I think the person who try to kill bonnie loves rads… He wants to create problems btwn ardhika… Saral is there in this ff??

  7. Dipika

    Dipika

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    Brin this another amazing story by u.. Bonnie pregnant with arjun.. No yhos cannot happen.. Radz engage to neil.. Now bonnie stab.. Twist pe twist….update soon

  8. Jessie

    Jessie

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    Brinzzzeeee….this is suspense…so not done…wapas aaja jaldi…bonnie stabbed…now we have a villian…or villi…and Arjun will misunderstand isn’t….waiting 4 nxt one dear…love u loads…TC…

  9. Aasthu

    Aasthu

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    Oh Gosh……now that Arjun will believe her to be the killer??? I hope not…..don’t know y bt one part of my mind says he won’t……but then how can it bcome betrayal since ardhika are the focus couple??????????

  10. Rossy

    Rossy

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    Di again u r rocking…another mystery after rectify…i know Arjun won’t doubt radz if he heartily wanted redemption this time…and if he doubt a slap to him from my side…huh…btw…who has problem with bonnie or Arjun??? Di will wait for your both ff…a very very happy hearty warm wishes to ur son…and exactly when is ur birthday…2nd Jan??

    • Brin

      Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Rossy, yes my birthday is on Jan 2, I will update after the holiday, a big bear hug and stay blessed. 🙂

  11. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    Superb dear 🙂 another intriguing story from ur m side. 🙂 I really cant wait for nxt…plz post soon..hope Arjun doesn’t doubt Rads… Loads of love. 🙂

  12. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Brin this was short, but this getting better and better you are too good with suspense 🙂 loads of love darling 🙂

  13. Sathya

    Sathya

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    Brin, it is marvelous shot yar…oh god the trio’s POV is amazingly narrated by you. Yar i am so nervous thinking the scene when arjun see Radhika with knife…oh definitely he will mistake her yar..no pls don’t do this to her na..she already suffered of losing her love. Ok so u won’t update till ur bday….okay will wait for it…:) loved it thouroughly

  14. Meen

    Meen

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    Brin…….that was so gooooooood……thank God u r back….I missed ur ff…..specially mothers dairy……. Amazing……this one seems interesting…. Eagerly waiting for story to unfold

  15. Affaa

    Affaa

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    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…… I’m back after long gap… What happened in this month’s… OK say how are you… And baby doll… I was so happy to ur new ff….wah di kya Baath hai… I’m completely speechless in front of u.. I hope u didn’t forget me.. I’m affa.. What a start… I’m looking forward… Please do next one asap.. When I’m free I’ll read it.. .. Love you sooooooo much di 😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙… I missed you so much

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