#Jasbatein #Pri&Nans #Episode 1

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Hi buddies… ……………

How r u all? Me n chocs r posting after a long tym ,hope u all still remember us. Ur wholehearted response for our prologue is so overwhelming. Thanks a lot all of u. Plzzz do support like this. Silent readers plz do comment a word or emoji n share ur opinions.

Before we go through story, we want to clarify few things related to our plot.

U all know about shivika story. Their clashes, fights.and misunderstanding then forced marriage. Friendship with hidden love n teasing Romance, blush lessons.

And then when Rudra agreed to marry miss. Chadda Rumya video leaked, all blame on Anika while Shivay took her stand. Then jhanvi came running on fire. Witnessing his mom om got broken completely. He dcided to protect his mom n kick sweth out by hook or by crook. Sweth agreed to om to leave Tej only if she gets crores in return. And she wanted 100 chores in installment. (sweth has nothing to do with tat deal, she just wanted to play with all oberois making them helpless) he explained this to Shivay n refused his help.so Shivay suggested him to go to Delhi n crack to deal. ( in our story no sweth-om engagement, No bareli no gauri till now).

Om left to Delhi,which made Rudra go weak more and he lashed out at Sowmya. The next day Sowmya left leaving a note and Shivay was angry on him. But seeing Rudra sad he suggests him to attend his friend marriage.finally Rudra also leaves.

Later tia asks Shivay to sign on papers to open a trust on her baby name, Anika stopped him but he didn’t listen. She was already hurt with his advice to Rudra abt their marriage. She completely feeling that for Shivay their own relation is nothing but just a burden. On top of that Shivay now also hurted her saying words like “stop being my wife “Anika pushed him in anger n tried to explain she is doing all this for him.Shivay got angry n pushed her which made her memory loss. (for real)

Omru r unknown to this as Shivay didn’t want to upset them more. Here tia used the situation n tried to make Anika against oberois. But Shivay make her agree to him in his own way, and Anika also started to believe their marriage. Then she got to know abt tia pregnancy n Shivay divorced her.so she made Shivay agree to marry tia (by revealing Shivay plan of leaving mansion for few days to family) Shivay agreed to marry tia being hurt n thinks to find video meanwhile n also make anika remember her past n present strong connection with Shivay.

Dadi was totally upset n Omru unknown of shitia marriage supported Shivay.shivay made Anika jealous to core during rituals. But he is not realising that Anika is getting hurt way too much seeing shitia. Though she didn’t remember anything she is getting broken to bits.

Mehendi&sangeet :

Almost ritual got competed, by A getting designed on Shivay hand accidentally.
Shivay tried a lot to get video chip finally Rumi helped him without revealing her identity. (Rumi is dushyant sister,shee was helping tia n sweth against oberois for money and was trying to harm Rudra but when tia told her dushyant died bcoz of shivika she wanted revenge. But she overheard sweth tat tia killed dushyant so she is playing on her own.) Shivay got ta chip n he destroyed it without completely watching video n Dayimaa words. He was so happy.

(sry to irritate u with this stupid narration which u all know, we just made few changes in story and now our imagination starts purely having different sense)

Late evening:

Anika drowned in deep thoughts. She was feeling may be she forced Shivay towards tia but the way Shivay getting close to tia making her believe tat she is indeed nothing but a burden in his life in name of so called responsibility.the thing surprising her why Shivay married her if he loves tia? What situations Made him chained in this unwanted relation ?

Shivay just then enters the room making Anika come out of trance. He was so happy n rushed towards Anika n gave her a tight hug. Tear escapes from Anika eyes while Shivay is also silently weeping other side. Anika gets herself free from his hold n turns n shows his sherwani for Shadi next day. Shivay gets hurt n angry.he holds her hand tightly n pulls her towards him.

Anika gets startled but smiles to Shivay surprise.

Anika: just one more night, from tomorrow u don’t need to face me.u will get free from this relation.u can live happily with tia.

Shivay: and u?

Holding her tears back: I will also be happy and I can Also start my new life.

Listening this he holds her hand more tight with red eyes.

Anika: u r hurting me.

Shivay: so do u

He leaves her n heads outside. Anika sits on bed crying.

“After destroying the chip,i thought there is only happiness in our lives but u r not able to feel our connection.u r completely ignoring ur heart.i can understand ur situation, u r thinking that I was forced in this relation but how to explain u our bond is beyond words. It’s enough u need to get ur memory back. For that only option left is me marrying tia in front of u. Now it’s in ur hands Anika u have to stop me getting Far away from u”Shivay wipes his tears n steps back into room.

He looks at Anika sleeping at end of bed. He goes n lifts her n adjust her on bed. He wipes her cheeks which r still wet n kisses her left cheek n sleeps beside her holding her hand.

In delhi:

Om got ta deal and is going to return in their private jet after 2 hrs. He is walking on deserted road parking his car near by. He was lost thinking abt jhanvi n Tej.suddenly a girl hits him from back which makes him land in pool of mud.he gets angry n gets up to see tat person.

Girl laughs looking at his face fully covered with mud.

Om: r u blind?

Girl: no I am gauri…. .

Some men coming running: catch tat girl… …

Gauri: listen they r forcefully making me marry some stupid. So I was running n hit u. Sorry.
(and she runs asap from there)

Men come n asks him direction she ran. Om was abt to tell right direction but then misguides them. Gauri who watches all this comes to him after they ran away.

Gauri:thank u Mr…. ……..whats ur name?

Om: none of ur business.

Gauri: u r so mean.

Om: shut up, u made me fall in mud….and now don’t irritate me more.

Gauri: why r u shouting? I didn’t do it intentionally .anyways it’s mud by which we can make many artistic things, one example is ur face.i can’t see ur original face but I am damn sure this mud face is more handsome than ur real one. Akhdu Kahike!!!!!

Om: fhat ta wuck!!!!!

Gauri showing her tongue runs away. Om wipes his face with his hand n looks at mud n gets into world of Statue making. He lets his thoughts go n drives away.

In plane to goa:

Chubby lieing to Sowmya makes her come to Nandini marriage. After boarding plane Rudra n sowmya shocked seeEach other. Sowmya is angry on his hurtful words. And Rudra some what relieved seeing her safe but still ignoring his care towards her takes his seat. Ria who is obsessive of groom kills a air hostess n comes as replacement. When ta plane was about to take off she holds Nandini and threatens everyone with pistol n bomb. Sowmya who is near to her hits ria leg n makes Nandini free but she herself gets caught. Rudra gets worried seeing this. He tries to come forward but ria threatens him hitting Sowmya head. Sowmya shouts in pain. Rudra can’t see this anymore n comes forward n holds ria hand n pushed her taking her pistol n remote in her hand. Then she is arrested.

Nandini makes Sowmya drink water n thanks her. She leaves seeing Rudra coming with first aid box.

Rudra tries to wipe blood on her forehead,

Sowmya: I can do it myself.

Rudra: shut up sumo!! U think u r hero just shut up and let me do.

Sowmya looking into his eyes.: why did u save me ? It would be better if I have died, u wanted me to leave for forever Na….

Rudra: enough…. I was angry n irritated so I busted on u. But what wrong did I say?? Why did u keep magalsutra with u?? On the top of that u left mansion without informing anyone. ..its btw us then y r u punishing Dadi prinku n Evryone back there? U talk abt family and u showed disrespect to all over there.

Saying this he leaves after dressing her wound. Sowmya was still hurt tht Rudra has no meaning of their marriage but she was also in guilt thinking abt Dadi. She switched on her old number thinking to talk to her n apologize. But she got shocked seeing prinku msgs abt shitia marriage.

She fastly comes to Rudra.

Sowmya: Rudra what ta hell is this?? Bhade bhayya is marrying tia n u r here enjoying?? Don’t u care abt Anika bhabi?

Rudra: what? R u mad? What nonsense?

Sowmya: prinku msgd me.

He immediately calls prinku n gets to know abt shitia marriage .he calls om..om also gets shocked.om decides to first go to Rudra n then return to Mumbai in their private jet.

Midnight :

Anika gets flashes of shivay forcing her to sign divorce papers.

Shivay: who the hell r u? Just sign papers n leave me or else I will throw u the way I brought u here.

Anika gets up suddenly from sleep. She is shocked with tat memory flash. She looks at Shivay sleeping beside her. She cries n thinks shitia marriage is right thing.

Precap: shitia taking pheras in front of Anika n Omru.

Tats it for today guys.plz do share ur opinions .dont skip commenting. Plzzz ur comments really mean a lot to us. Plzzzzzzzz

With love
Pri&Nans

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90 Comments
  1. Lisaaa

    superb

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u lisaaa

  2. SRINIDHI

    Good one!

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u srinidhi

  3. Siddhi_t

    That was awesome… Post asap…?

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u siddhi

  4. Awesome…. waiting for next

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u lilly

  5. Mystery_Me

    Its amazing chapter Di. I hope Shitia marriage don’t happen I am but worried with precap and Romi played good I like it and I am feeling I like in actual to she must be Robin’s sister after she react in yesterday’s episode and like Rumya part Rudra is being stubborn and caring and Om and Gauri visit is superb actually I don’t like their plot in Dil boley Oberoi but I like this waiting for their story to move further. Di plz update next part soon an plz tell Pri Di to update her ffs I am waiting to reqd her ffs.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u mystery….. I too was not OK with shrenu character as village girl, so we changed it. Chocs is kind of busy but she will post soon.thanks a lot for supporting us against tat stupid but just ignore her n don’t give attention to her.she is kind of wanting that right now. Thank u again for ur true love n support really means a lot
      ?????????

      1. Mystery_Me

        You both Di are my favorite writers so I can’t listen word against you both.☺☺☺

    2. Pri_24

      Hey I’ll post soon and yeah thanks for your support dear it means a lot to us… ☺☺☺

      1. Mystery_Me

        Di I am eagerly and desperately waiting for you FF.

  6. Too good nandu n pri… I wish ib was like this??

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u saha
      ??

  7. Savera

    Loved it

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u savera

  8. Shrutika

    Waiting for the next part. It was awesome Nans and Pri!

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u shrutika

  9. Pri_24

    Superbly described… ?? Love you my idea mate Nandupie… ????

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks chocs. Love u too
      ?????hope everyone Lyk our next episodes also

  10. Nice

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u shivanya

  11. Nice one dear…. Plz reunite shivika soon.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u nikitajai, shivika are always together don’t wry??

  12. Dheemahee

    It was nice one and changed plot of yours is also good if u don’t mind can u make ishkara rather then omri it’s just a request and all depends upon u not ishkara then please can u give a meaningful full end of ishanas character in your FF because this ishqbazz people did no gave proper ending to ishana character and I love that the most so . Any way if possible do that please or else it’s ok u continue your track thanks for this current track FF.

    1. Nansshivika

      Why will we mind??? It’s so good u shared it thoughts.i myself was fan of ishkara n chocs is big fan of vrushy. But they know paired kunal with shrenu so we also changed it coz readers will get happy reading.sry we can’t show ishkara coz we already thought of total plot. But we will end ishana in good way.ur request gave us idea to make rikara story forward thanks a lot for that. Thank u for appreciating this ff and do support like this?????

  13. I knw shitia’s marriage will not happen….. But still fingers crossed n waiting for ur nxt dhamaka episode……
    U both r rockstar together….. ??
    Love u gals always❤❤❤

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u sanu baby. Love u ????

  14. Nita D

    Lovely!

      1. Nita D

        When’s the next part? Eagerly waiting for it.

    1. Nansshivika

      I will post tonight Nita. I got some work so…… Sry for delay????

    2. Nansshivika

      Sorry didn’t get tym to post yesterday. I submitted just now it will be out soon. Sry for delay.

      1. Nita D

        Ok dear. It must have been uploaded by now. I’ll just check

  15. Ahaana

    superb ….. awesome ………….. fantastic ………..
    plzz post nxt part as soon as u can i request…………………………plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u ahaana .i will try to post it ready ??

  16. Pooja26

    amazing part……

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u pooja

  17. Kehkasha

    Amazing update di….
    After a long time…
    I just checked out the prologue….
    It was also fantastic….
    Loved it..plz post the next soon…

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u kehkasha.ur sketch is again awesome??

      1. Kehkasha

        Thankyou di…
        ??

  18. Anu16

    nice one….. but there should be some twist in pheras……ost soon

  19. Sairan

    Awsomeeee.. Fantastic..The dream and flashes.. Greatttt..Post soon next episode plzzzzz

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u sairan.will post it today?

  20. Awesome….????waiting for the nxt…?

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u bhavana

  21. Hrishi03

    Hi ur back with bang….Thank u fr ur update…as usual Ur update awesome…waiting fr ur update eagerly…??

    1. Nansshivika

      Hey Hrishi.thanks yaar.i will update today ?

  22. Vincy

    OMG… Wht the wuck

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u vincy

  23. Awesome…. Waiting fr next….

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u shivika

  24. It’s a worse part of ff I read still now ek dam bakwas hey ff hise padke meri Sari mood ka satya nas hogaya aja mei phele bhar iss tu aye ff padne keliye lekin hey ff padke tho muje michmichi hone laga gaye I will never read this ff Kya bakwas dimaag lagaya hey tum dono ne chi pls meri request hey aye mata badana

    1. Mystery_Me

      Miss who so ever you are you don’t have enough gut to post this comment with your account and even you haven’t noticed that 23 more people excluding you have praise this FF and this work and even they are waiting for next part so if you don’t have knowledge o judging and understanding then just back off and don’t read and jeep your mouth coz your silence will be far better then your rubbish words so stay off and you don’t even have idea how much better this both writers are they are incredible and they are inspiration of people like me and from next time think twice or as much time as you want before posting your rubbish comment and if you can’t appreciate one’s work then don’t try to demotivate them I hope you got enough of knowledge to stay in your limits.

      And yeah how can I forget many readers like me stalks them on TU just to know whether they have updated or not got it?????????????

    2. Nansshivika

      Well then we r not writing for u, we. R writing for others. If u don’t Lyk ffs u don’t need to read. We don’t know ours is worst ff or not, but u r worst reader for damn sure. And ya don’t stress to read n comment on our ff again.. Just get the hell out of here. And don’t think we will stop, we will not bcoz reamining all appreciated our work, we will write for all our genuine readers.

      1. Hey nandu n pri… When u hav many supports and u get so many appreciations from many of them.. why bother for a person who only wants to demean n demotivate you.. dont pay heed to such comments made by sick people.. we will always love n support u guys??

    3. Pri_24

      Seriously gal you think this one is bakwas then you must write something which is best one but you know for that you’ve to come with account and by your this action one thing is sure that you don’t have guts to come out in front of all so best solution for your problem is keep your idiotic hand ahway from key board from where you write this nasty comment and even you need to have glasses coz 31 more people appreciated this one so do one thing and yeah I seriously don’t want to say this but I have to so next time you can think zillionth time before demotivating anyone “GET THE HELL AWAY FROM OUR FF AND DON’T BOTHER YOURSELF TO READ FURTHER IF YOU DON’T LIKE blo*dy ATTENTION SEEKER” ???????????????????????????????????????????????? get lost now. (And one more thing we even can request to delete this comment but we won’t do that coz we want people like you to know that we are not weak as you think and we are not stopping entertaining our loyal readers who love our work. Hope your brainless head will get some lesson from this and you’ll not try to mess once again with us.????????????????

    4. Listen who evr u r….?? Dont u dare comment here again…. And if u r hvng better ideas then keep it to urself….. N who the hell r u….. To say worst ff?? Jese ki khud u r a great writer…..
      Before commenting on others think abt urself too….. If u cant appreciate then dont even demotivate….. If u don’t like the ff then jst dont comment…..
      They dont need commenters like u…..
      “DEMOTIVATOR”

  25. Superb plot hhplz post next part soon.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u sunshine

  26. Fantastic

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u angels

  27. Superb update

  28. Very well written

  29. Like it.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u ? tulip

  30. Amazing collab of two excellent writers whose work I admire so much post next part soon.

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u ria for appreciating our work

  31. Ruksy

    Amazing loved the update post ASAP

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u ruksy

  32. What’s wrong in my comment u people only ask na positive negative both comments are accepted so only I kept my pov when u people are ready to accept positive means y not negative so for just formalities u tell that right and u miss u haven’t seen my guts still now and if u have guts receive that comment as positive K and u whom so ever mystery I know every well what to do and what not to got that not only positive comment encourages people negative also do that it’s in u people how u think that but like u people u only like positive not negative because ur writing this ff only for comments so from now on ask for only positive comment OK not for both it’s don’t suit u people and u miss u don’t ever try to mess with me u don’t me go and give this types of dhamkis to someone u get scared by this not me and my account I try to create it but it’s getting error I will be back with my original account did u got that so from now on before telling anything think twice about it did u understand u better understand

    1. Nansshivika

      And we took it so positively that’s y we ignored it idea of skipping writing???????????

    2. Nansshivika

      If readers don’t Lyk our plot somewhere we take it as suggestion n it’s a positive comment for us.but for us negative comments are those people like u post and which we won’t encourage. And u better stop hurting others,n stop being attention seeker. From now I am not even going to reply to u. And by the way u r really making my day with this all funny stunt miss so called Ann.

    3. Pri_24

      Give a break you don’t have any idea regarding negative comment so let Mr explain you negative comment means what you don’t like in update it doesn’t mean that stop writing and your comment is not negative h is demotivating and we’ve guts to accept negative comment but not demotivating and give this error bullshit while creating account to some one else coz I know that you’re selling silly crap excuse just like you but we are not buying it coz we know that you are a merely coward person who is hiding away and demotivating people just because uiu don’t get enough appreciation for you. You are seriously an attention seeker who is only interested in demotivating people and a brainless head as I said earlier coz yet you haven’t noticed all the other people’s appreciation which is after your first comment so miss so called gutsy gal stay in your limit and yeah learn toto type at least a single statement without repeating u after every single word do spend your time in learning that and keep your self away from demotivating people not just only we but all others too coz silly and crap people like you can do that only. Once again its not any warning and dhamki like you said its just to say you that stay from thing you don’t like and yeah think twice no sorry zillionth time before messing with us if you have brain oh sorry how can I forget that you are a brainless head and yeah you said you know us well then let me tell you we to know you so let me yell to you that weak Pri and Nans which is known to you is gone now we are not that who decide to quit just because of a crap gal like you.. Just get lost from here… And yeah spend your time in learning negative comment so next time if your mind itch to much to post negative one then at least you’ll be able to post NEGATIVE COMMENT not a DEMOTIVATING…?????????????????????????????????????????????

    4. Anah

      hehehe u r such a funny attention seeker…. u come again to see writer’s response for ur senseless comment also did reply….. they welcome negative comments means they want to know ur taste ,suggestions and motivation only..who give rights u to ask them stop…I think u didn’t read just comment for attention so I can’t tell u r worst read bcoz readers can’t be worst if they read fictions it means they have imaginary powers but u didn’t have brain then imagine????? so first make u perfect…..
      sorry for hurting u but u should know how much words hurt everyone….

  33. Nansshivika

    U r so funny man ,, and one more thing I said share ur opinions above.it proves tat u never read story and seeing this u May read it.about negative there is way of expressing if u didn’t like something unlike u who just know to demotivate others. If u really didn’t like y the hell r u here again. We write stories coz we love it, and we don’t need to prove tat to stupid people like u. What wrong in ur comment is that what u asking how can u use worst word ,how much negativity u have in u??? Anyways who cares this is our post so just shut ur mouth and start ur nonsense some where else. If u have took our request of commenting such seriously then take this one also don’t comment on our story.if u didn’t Lyk something express it in positive way.tats my suggestion to u, if u r going to comment on other stories

  34. Puvi

    Hey nandu ur back with ur work it was amazing waiting for next part sorry for not commenting on prologue I was lil busy I was waiting to ur work nice to see after so many days it was fabulous waiting for next part eagerly

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot puvi . No need to be sry. I can understand.i will post next part asap????

  35. Lalitha

    Amazing update sis… Loved it…
    Pls post the next one soon

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u Lalitha. I will post today ??

  36. Anah

    sorry for late …..
    really amazing episode and don’t be shattered for funny people….what u have she didn’t…… save ur energy for next kidki tod episode..

    1. Nansshivika

      Thank u anah for supporting us n taking stand. And ya abt that stupid n so called act, it was funny…….. ????and I already submitted next part??

  37. Mrunal

    hey nans and pri……

    this is amazing dear….
    I’m glad that u didn’t included kali drama and gave a new turn to both omri & rumya’s relation….

    shivika scenes were really emotional…
    hope annika will remember everything..

    i was reading comments and i got to know about that stupid commenter so I’ll say plzzzz don’t waste ur time on such kind of peoples… leave that matter and continue giving such a mind blowing work…
    bcoz there r many people like me who r waiting for ur work desperately…

    love u dear….
    be cool & positive….

    1. Nansshivika

      Thanks a lot mrunal for supporting us.love u too????

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