JANVI’S SWASAN OS : ANDHA ISHQ BLIND LOVE

thanks everyone for your love and support …
so here is the story

there was a blind girl whose name was swara …
she hated everything ..she hated the whole world expect his boyfriend….
she only loves and trusts his boyfriend ….
one day a person get agreed to donate his eyes to swara
after the operation …
when swara was able to see the mighty world ….and when she sees her boyfriend was shocked to see that he was also the blind …and said to go away …sanskaar was heart broken …..
after 2 days
swara gets a letter from sanskaar

take care of yourself and my eyes too ….
swara was stunned …
and ran to sanskaar’s house …
and sees sankaar and hugs him from back
swara: i am sorry sanskaar ..please forgive me …
sanskaar was in tears
sanskaar: swara now you can find any one hand some from me ..and now i am blind too …
swara: no sanskaar you also found what special in me …
then
sanskaar hugs swara …
swara was crying …

sooon she meets a doctor …
the doctor says that he has a pairof eyes ..but it will cost 2 lakhs …
swara was very confused …
and thinks what to do …but finally …she gets a idea to donate her kidney ….and she donates it and gets 2 lakhs …
and sanskaar gets her eyes back …

and marry …
soon they are blessed with a sweet baby boy ..they named him sanskrit …

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the end

18 comments

  1. Well Wisher

    Nice but how is swara surviving like she gave way her kidneys then how can you reply please

    • NIKHAR

      We have 2 kidneys in our body….she gave only one kidney as it is possible to live with one….

  2. Falak

    will u pls stop writing one shots becauz u have make a joke out of it seriously we ask some writers that how can they write so beautifully and here I am asking u that how can u write so bad………
    First thing: No story ……u right a very rough story
    Second thing:Bad language
    Third thing:You cant guess when the story dtarts and when it finishes
    Fourth thing:no character sketch nothing I can tell 100 mistakes in ur os and I am not telling this on the basis of ur one os I hve read ur all three os
    NOTE: Don’t think I am bashing u bcz its for ur bennifit so pls stop writing

    • janviiivyas

      falak ….you don’t have the right to bash anyone ….
      first thing :no one has ever told me that …has they know what I am….I just study 7 …so all respects me that how can I write very good …In such a small age …They appreciate me ….
      jwala di ..commented on my FF that very nice …
      Anu di ..
      said to me that I write great in such a small age …This is a rise of a great writer …
      Secondly I think you have not ever written any os or FF ….and when you write good and someone bash you then remember me …
      thirdly some people like you …also bash swaragini …
      and sends cheap messages ….
      fourthly if people don’t like my work than I should not get more than 2 comments …you can search for my FF swasan and raglak ka love after marriage …There are numerous comments ….and if you find any FF comments below 5 than I will quit writing and tellyupdate …
      and yaa I didn’t used any bad word ..If I want I can use …but I know that u will be elder than me …and these are not my manners

    • Vyshu10

      |Registered Member

      Falak…she is just a kid, still in 7th std. She is trying to improve her writing skills. Its her decision to write or not. If u don’t like her work, don’t read. If at all u want to suggest her, go ahead but don’t throw tantrums. Tell her how she can improve her skills but not in a condescending tone.

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