janam janam kaa pyaar….. shot-1

helllo all of u………
here i m with janam janam kaa pyaar few shots
i m so happy dat u all liked it n u al liked d concept…ya dis is different one n it is real story means not full dis wil b filmy n will lookalike with real…haaan haan real hai sista…its my frnds family member story……i loved it when she told me dis story i was imagining twinj as i had not seen dat people …………hehe
so here v go with

SHOT-1
a house is shown….ohhooo a melodious song of hindu religion is playing….nono some1 is singing….lets go in
a lady of 60 is singing d song(are yaar ab twinki ko oldy banaaya hai to kuch oldy type kaa hi lena padega na!)
a voice of a boy comes from a room
boy:MOM, please stop yaar…u know naa i hate religious songs if u want to sing dan sing some new ….
2 boy:shravan u just shutup dis sound is so pure..n u huh u love that yoyo honey singh song
shravan:dev!! u r like ur name only DEV n i love honey singh song not like u only religious song….
3 boy:shravan n dev both shut up! v should not fight ….v r good boys na!
dev:aayye manav maata aaiye…kuch laoo kya aapke liye…
manav:(calmly)no dev…. u should not speak badwords to any1
dey trio fight
d lady completes her pooja n comes der

lady:u trio just shutup
listening dis shravan who was wearing shirt….he put his shirt up(namuna kahika)..seeing dis manav close her eyes n dev goes to lady
dev:mom calm down….u know na ur pressure gets high if u shout
lady:u r telling dis to me u hav to think before fighting n u shravan put ur shirt down n manav open ur eyes beta
shravan:jo aagiyah twinkle baby
n winks at her(flirt kahika)
tw:u just shu……she stop as she knew dat if she will speak shut up dan again dis item will put his shirt up
tw:silence!
dev:mom dont say like dis ……n starts to cry(rotdu kahika)u know d word silence remembers me my teachers dialogue

shravan laughs
manav:dev bhaiya….n he also starts to cryy(nakalchi bandar.huh)
(trio is item haina ……..i know i know as i had given dem role)
tw leaves being irritated
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other house is shown…
a men voice coming…omg! yaar he is shouting lets c
men:no no no(confuse?…den read further)
1 girl:dad pls pls
2 girl:wat pls pls sumo….tell directly
3 girl:oh pls sona silence….he is our dad
sumo:dad pls naa it is only for 1 night
sona: no dad dont let her go…u hadnt let me go wen i asked u
maya:cant u talk calmly both of u
dey trio also fight n dont let der dad to speak
dad:stop

sumo:common kunj baby tell yes
sona:how cheap….he is ur dad n u r talking like dis
kunj leaves from der leaving dm fighting
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next scene
tw is shown selling flowers …..trio boys comes
shravan:hey tw baby how many times v hav to tell u
tw:wat
dev:dat u should not come to shop v r here naa
manav:jii maa v r here
tw:n how many times i hav to tell u both dat i got bored of resting….n i verywell know dat dev will leave for tennis n shravan will leave for beach to see beautiful girls n my bechara bachcha manav will left here n sell flowers whole day
shravan n dev:oh yaa i hav to leave…….by mom

tw gives oh-god-wat-will-happen-of-dis-boys look n leaves for house n poor manav sells flowers
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kunj comes to play tennis witj sona n dev also comes…kunj is expert in tennis dats y he guide dev
dey play for sometime…
dev:now i m tired man…pls can u giv me some water
sona:no sorry dis is dad’s water
kunj:sona!…..is dis way to talk..giv him
sona gives irritated look ….she goes to him to giv…kunj was facing back to dem sona sees dis n open d bottle n spills it on dev…now dev was all drench he goes near him n she steps back until she is stopp by bench
dev bends
sona:waa…wat..r…r…u…do..doing

dev pick another bottle from bench n spills on sona….both r drench now….due to sudden sona jumps coz of cold water n boh falls on ground upon each other……..both lost in each other..kunj turns n see all dis gets teary eyed seeing dis
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on d shop:
manav was selling flowers…(bechara ladka)..tw comes der as she was bored at home…she was about to go to shop wen she see dat………
maya comes der for buying flowers..
maya:hey can u give me pooja flower(hahahaheheh)
manav:yaa sure…which 1 white,yellow or pink

maya:actually giv me all of dem as i donno naa which color god like
manav smiles at dis
n starts to pack flowers…his eyes was on maya…unknowingly starts to shower d flowers on maya
tw sees dis n she also gets teary eyed remember something…n goes from der
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OVER!! abhi kitna lamba chahiye….dis is enough…
today i was not going to write also…as i m having fever….today not bcoz of mumma becoz of myself i m writing in blanket…yaar ye sar dard….chalo koi ni leave all dat
tell me how was it
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n my besties who cmnt on evry epi
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KRUTI:u also a very big wala thank u yaar…………
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ANGITA:thank u so much to u tooo…………..thank u thank u n ur twidhant wala was tooo good
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BABY:THANK U YAAAR thank u so much for ur valuable cmnt luv u
now my cmntrs who had not cmnt vut still thank u so much n miss u
LOVELY:wheere r u…u dint cmnt on my ff
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SHATAKSHI AKA SHATTU:waiting for ur ff
chalo thank ceremony over

n yaa special note dis only of twinj sorry for making u all bore with another pair but it was needed..n dis storyline cameup in mind through my frnd but its totally different from dat

now let me take rest….i m feeling cold
bahbye
LuVv…….. u…….ALL……..TiLl ……mOon……….N……….aBoVe

17 comments

  1. Purnima.agrawal30

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    amazing fabulous cute epi….aur tum sb likhte hi itna jyada accha ho k cmnt kiye bager raha hi nahi jaata h….& waiting for my gift….love you dear…..& eagerly waiting for next part

  2. Sameera

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    Hehe aamu nice epi
    I think Twi n kunj r not their real mom n dad
    Or else other hero heroines will be siblings
    😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
    Amazing awesome just loving it yaar do cont soon
    Love u soooooooooooooooooooo much
    😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  3. Sayeeda

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    Amazing Aamu jaan… What a awesome episode….
    Loved it..

    Guys one more thing I need to inform u…
    Yesterday nd today I posted one article to TU but they haven’t updated both of them…. I even mailed them but still in waiting for the reply… I don’t why r my post r not updated as they r not mailing me regarding rejection of it…
    Nd if this continues then I’m sorry I won’t be able to post any of my ff… I don’t know for how much long TU will take to sort out my problem…

  4. Baby

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    hey ammu amazing yr how how howwwwww r u sooo muaah speechless yr luvd it 2 d core n luv u get well very soon n post junoon wala ishq w8ing eagerly fr dere test n d confession fr sure luv u agn

  5. Lovely

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    Heyyyy Ammu..I never knew that u will miss my comment..sorry dear soooo much but mumma be surf half an hour me like phone Lena diya and I have really great work load..
    BUt I read that… Too good..Twinj sleeping pos. pic part was muuuuaaaahhhh
    😘😘😘😘
    And yes this one..I feel its like a bit of Golmaal 3….Twinj used to be lovers at their times but due to some reason got separated and they adopted the boys/Girls and din married..

    Nicie nice yaar…
    Lovely.. (JUST like me😜😜😜)

    Love you and sho shorry and forgive me if I don’t comment again.. But surely will if I get time..
    Muuaaahhh

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