janam janam ka sath hai hamara tumara(raglak) part 1

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Hi all of you..I am happy that you all found it interesting.. thanks for reading the prologue..

So the story starts in Kolkata
In the charcoal like sky a golden streak, a crack in the cloud layer occurred when that painting got completed..

The boy saw it and got shocked..
Then a voice came
“Laksh..what you made.. this is not the portrait of that girl.. this is another girl”
(That boy is non other than laksh )
Laksh:- sanskar bhai I don’t​ know how it got made and and… this palace behind this girl.. I really don’t know how I made it..

He turned and looked towards that painting in which a girl was in royal attire and a palace was there..
And far from there in Rajasthan The same palace was shown which was in the painting the palace was high upon the hill overlooking the town, the mirrors which was attached in the​ walls were giving it beautiful look

A girl entered in it
The girl was as beautiful as an angel.deep black eyes having an ocean of mysteries in them,black silky hairs and glossy pink lips on which an angelic smile was there…
When we saw her face completely she was looking like the girl which was in painting..

Then a voice came
“Ragini madam…”
(That beauty was ragini)
Ragini turned and found and found an old man there..
Man:- Madam I am the gardener of this palace I heard that you brought it yesterday..

Rag:- yeah..I bought it..
Gardener:- This palace is closed from 100 years..I am appointed to care the plants but We never saw this palace open.

Rag:- from how many years you are working here??

Gardener:-10 years madam
Rag:- don’t call me’madam’ call me ragini I am younger than you na..

Gardener:- ok ragini beta..

Rag:- kaka what you know about this palace??

Gar:- I heard that this palace was built by a king who loved his wife but one day that Queen did suicide when the king was not there..no one nows why she attempted suicide but she left a note behind that she will come back for her love, for her king..
When the king got this news he also attempted suicide..

Ragini got lost somewhere after listening the story..

Rag:- why she did suicide??
Gar:- beta no one knows about it.. you come in I will ask the servant to bring your luggage..

Ragini nodded and went inside..

Here in Kolkata
Laksh was staring that painting
Lak:- why I made this painting.. and this palace.. why I am a strange connection with this painting and this girl…..

He got lost somewhere and the time stopped for him there only when he saw the girl in paining..
Lak:- I wish I could meet her.. she is beautiful..

He smiled and went to sleep..

Hahahaha..I can’t believe I am writing this​ mysterious story..I write comical stories but this is hahaha???

I hope you liked it
Sorry for short update..I was lil busy so I was unable to write more
Bye bye???

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61 Comments
  1. Awesome Mickey. . .
    Interesting story, caught my attention, hope to see the next part soon. . . Really enjoyed reading it but I have a request. . . When you publish the next part, could you please kindly message me to make me aware, I often miss to see it when I come online, I mainly come after two or three days ?

    Can’t wait till the next part, take care and keep smiling ✨

    ~ Halima ?

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very much halima dii???
      I am glad that you liked it and found it interesting..
      Ok di I will message you whenever I will post next part.don’t worry ?
      Take care
      Keep smiling???

  2. Amazing dear ? …..

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      Thanks diiii?????

  3. Awesome

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  4. Fabulous update dear

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  5. Shivi21

    Awesome beautiful cute story

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u soooooooo muchhhh diiii????
      Love you…???
      And I miss u ?

  6. Interesting episode and loved it. Eagerly waiting for Raglak meeting. Ur story is really good dear ???

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u very much??????

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      Thank you sooo much dii???

  7. Darshini

    Interesting miku…
    I can’t believe the fact that my cutiee is writing the mysterious plot…
    Wow dear…am eagerly waiting for the next part..
    Post it soon da…!!

    1. Yashu24

      I am happy that u liked it akka???
      Take care
      Love u????

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  8. Naz_Temish

    Wowww I love such genre of stories ….??keep going Mickey

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  9. Interesting

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  10. Kitkat

    awesome update sweetheart….. a raglak story with royal concept of rebirth i guess….. loved it sweety……

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u soooo much dii?????
      Love u?

  11. Awesome

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  12. Asw

    Amazing yaar keep going

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  13. Harinipriya

    oh my micku! U r impressing me with different concepts. This is amazing! And I am eagerly waiting for knowing the king and queen. Love u a lot! HAPPY MOTHER’S DAY. Convey my wishes to ur mumma! Keep going dear!

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u very much honey diii
      Love you?????

  14. Asra

    omg my princess writing mysterious story….it’s awesome dear…raglak r royal couple…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u very much asra diiii?????

  15. Dharani

    awesome micku…hope laskh’s wish come true as early as possible

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u soooo much dii?????

  16. Maggi

    Very good start ….i lyked the concept n d mystery is well set…
    Cont soon☺

    1. Yashu24

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  17. Mintu

    Amazing micku….Its like some suspense u r going to reveal in upcoming episodes..!! Maybe Previous birth connections r behind in it..I think like that dear…!! Post the next part soon dear

    1. Yashu24

      I am happy that u liked it akka???
      Take care
      Love u????

  18. Follybraverl

    Awesome post soon

    1. Yashu24

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  19. Awesome

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  20. Awesome…

  21. Awesome Mystery…

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  22. IQRA222

    angel so so juicy mystery oh la la !!!
    I am waiting for it eagerly okay

    1. Yashu24

      I am happy that u liked it..
      Love you???????

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  23. Bela

    Ahaa……Rebirth saga????

    It was a really good episode, with the mystery thick in the air while hints of a timeless romance??????

    1. Yashu24

      Thank u soooooo muchhhhh diii?????

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  24. Soumya85

    Awesome micky
    So much suspence
    Loving it
    Love u??

    1. Yashu24

      I am happy that you liked it diiii???
      Love you more ????

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