janam janam ka sath hai hamara tumara (raglak) part 3

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Hello my dears.???
I am really happy to see the wonderful response I am getting in this story thank you very very much ??
First of all I want to tell you all one thing I told you guys na that I am of 16 am really sorry I said lie. I am of 14 years and I am in 10th standard. Forgive me please..
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Time never waits for anyone, it passes
With its speed, with the passage of time many birth and death occurs,Death is the secret of life. Everyone have to die one day but… the love never dies..
Love can’t be obliterate. Never ever!!!!

Some people can’t get separated by death, they take birth again for their love..to complete their love story.!!

The story starts with laksh standing dumbstruck because of the photograph he was holding in his hand.
The black and white photograph was not an ordinary photograph for laksh it was the chest of questions for him…
his eyes become widened and the words were not able to find way to come out…he stand there only being totally numb.
Sanky saw him
San:- lucky!! Lucky!!!
Lak:- hmmm…
San:- lakshhhhh!!!!
Lak:- ha.. Bhai.!! Yes!!
San:- what’s there in your hand?
He snatched the photo from his hand.
And he too got shocked​ seeing it.

San:- laksh you r here in this photo with this girl… this was the girl na which was in your painting? you know her? And your dresses are royal type na..,laksh!!!!!

Lak:- Bhai I really don’t know her, believe me please..

Here in the palace.

Ragu:- what was there in that paper ??
“Ragini..” a voice came.
Ragu turned and found gardener’s daughter kavita there..

Ragu:- kavita!!
Kav:- come with me..
Ragu:- where???
Kav:- in the garden.. some small children are playing there…

Ragu:- wait I am..
Kavita dragged ragu with her.

Kav:- well ragini why you came India you lived​ in Australia na..?
Ragu:- I got nightmares about some sequences in India and…

Ragkav reached in garden

Outside some small girls were Doing Kathak.
Ragu smiled seeing them.

All girls:- diiii come na…
Ragu pointing towards herself:- meee!!
Lil girls:- yes you… please come na di..

Ragu came near them hesitatingly​.
One lil girl (ridhima):- diii you dance with us naa..

All girls:- please please..
Kavit:- rani go na!!..
Ragu:- ok ok…But I love to do Kathak already.
All lil girls:- oooooo…
Ragu(smiling):- yes.!! and I love to do Kathak in anarkali dress only..may I go to change..

All:- okkk…
After sometime ragu came out in a simple but gorgeous royal blue anarkali dress..

So there were girls between the age 8-13
Their names were iqura(@?) ,priyanjal,ridhima,purvi,anshika.

All girls:- wawoooo diiii!!

Ragu stood in the middle​ and start dancing.
(Iqu your favourite song ??)

Dha Na Dha Tatdha tatdha
Dhi Titkit Dha
Dhi Titkit Dha
Dhin Tirakita Tirakita dha
Dhin Tirakita Tirakita dha
Dhin Tirakita Tirakita dha
Dhin Tirakita Tirakita dha

Mere Dholna Sun
Mere Pyaar ki dhun
Mere Dholna Sun
[Lucky’s​ heartbeat​ become faster..he placed his hand on his chest..]

Dha|Tat Dhin Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha
Dha|Tat Dhin Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha
Dha|Tat Dhin Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha Tirkit Dha

[San:- lucky come car is repaired now
Lak:- hmmn
Sanlak drove off]

Mere Dholna Sun
Mere Pyaar ki dhun
Mere Dholna Sun

[Ragu was dancing gracefully.. the walls​ of the palace had mirrors attached in it when ragu passed near it..
The mirror reflected the king and queen in it]

Meri Chahte to
Fiza mein bahengi
Zinda Rahengi
Hoke fana
Tana na na tum 4
Ta na dhi re na ta dhi re ta na dhi re na

[Sanlak were near the palace that’s​ why the photo came on the car flying..
Laksh heard some singing sounds.
Lak:- bhai stop the car!!!]

Mere Dholna Sun
Mere Pyaar ki dhun
Mere Dholna Sun

[All were admiring ragu’s dance..
Thwy were in garden so outsiders can also see themm.]

Saathi re saathi re mar ke bhi tujhko
Chahe ga dil tujhe hi bechainiyon mein aayega dil

Mere Kesuo ki saaye mein
Teri raahton ki khushboo hai
Tere begair kya jeena
Mere rom rom mein tu hai
Meri chudiyon ki khaan khan se
Teri sada aati hai
Yeh dooriyan hamesha hi nazdik kahan bulati hai

[Laksh came there and stand near the gate.He was unable to see ragini as she was surrounded by all girls]

o Piya
Sa Ni Dha
Ni Dha Ma
Ma Ga Sa Ni Dha Ni Sa Ga Ma

Ragu stopped her dance and all clapped for her.
Iqura gave ragu a rose
Iqu:- diii you dance very beautifully.
Ragu:- thank you sweetie

Laksh :- who is this girl???why I felt like this girl
is …
He saw the photograph in his hand and smiled..

Precap:- the meeting of raglak.. with the sweetness of yummmm… mangoes ?

Sooo friends I am really​ sorry for saying lie about my age but most of you already know my age.

Ok leave it
Today you all tell me your birthday if you all don’t mind.

And
Your favourite dialogue from swaragini.

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73 Comments
  1. Nymisha281

    Awesome…..my birthday is on 2nd Aug …when is Urs ??

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you ??? birthday is on 24th march

  2. Lovely7

    Awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diii????

  3. Asra

    awesome princess….loved it alot….eagerly waiting for nxt one…
    my birthday s 16th Jan…my fav dialogue ofcourse aww mera bacha….tkcr dear…

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diiii????
      I am happy that you liked it??

  4. awesome mickey the mystery i’m waiting for it
    my birthday 13 january
    my favourite sene when sanskar confessed his love in drunken state to swara, his dialogue at that time is my favourite
    your birthday?

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks sanju??
      My birthday is on 24 march????

  5. Rafeee

    Superb dear

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks ????

  6. Awesome part!!

    Enjoyed reading it, upload the next part soon and where is my message? Thank god I saw while I was scrolling or I would’ve missed seeing it. . .

    Take care and keep smiling ✨

    1. Yashu24

      Really sorry diii I thought to message you afterwards and before my message u yourself read it..
      I will surely message u from the next time pakka?
      I am glad that you liked it
      Take care????

  7. Hey dear it’s awesome…..you know I am also 14yrs old …. and my birthday is on 20th March ????…. and yours on 24th March ….. so I am older then you ?????? by 4 days ….. soo start calling me di . And I am also in 10th class . Where are you from ?????

    1. Yashu24

      Ohkkkk my ashnoor diii…!!! i will call​ you diii..is it ok???
      Thanks you for liking this ???
      I am from Rajasthan and you?

      1. Mumbai

    2. AMkideewani

      Finally you got someone who is younger than you Ashu?

  8. Awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you????

  9. AMkideewani

    Superb my birthday is on 11 July?

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you diii????

  10. AWESOME

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you????

  11. Dharani

    awesome micku and u already know when is my birthday…..

    1. Yashu24

      Yes I know diii when’s your birthday.??
      Love you ????

  12. Asw

    Nice interesting yaar keep going

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you ????

  13. Darshini

    Wow!!another awesome chappy…!!
    I loved it a lot dear…
    Aww…laksh is getting some unknown feelings for Ragu…
    Waiting eagerly for the precap…
    Keep rocking cutiee…!!
    And my b’day is on Oct 31 da…
    Abt d dialogue it’s obviously the most likeable and adorable dialogue btwn raglak “aww..!!mera bachcha…”
    Hehe!!
    Tc da and love you ?? ?❤

    1. Yashu24

      Love you akka…Am really happy that you liked it ???????
      Take care
      Love you ?????

  14. Harinipriya

    Oh Micku! This is awesome! Ragini’s dance is awesome! Oh the little girls were Iqu, Priyanjal, Ridhima, Purvi and Anshika… I think I already know these names. hehehehe! Want to see Raglak’s face off dear! That too I want to see Laskh’s reaction! 😀 Eagerly waiting for next part!
    My birthday, u already know naa
    My fav dialogue in Swaragini is ‘Aww Mera Bachha’!! Only that! 😀

    1. Yashu24

      Love you honey diiii??? I am happy that you liked it❤❤❤????
      Take care
      Love you ???

  15. Varshni

    Amazing amazing amazing dear ??? I really loved it ???? keep going !!!! My bday is on Jan 8 . Urs????
    My fav dialogue awww mera bacha (????)

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much diii..???
      My birthday is on 24 march?

  16. Awesome part nd can’t wait for next

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much ?????

  17. Sofia

    Its really wonderful dear…❤ & my bday is on 11th oct.?

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much ?????

  18. Awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you????

  19. Awesome episode dear and loved Ragini’s dance. My birthday is on 1st June. My all time favourite dialogue from swaragini is “Awesome Mera Bachaa” Laksh’s dialogue to Ragini. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes. Please post next part ASAP ??????

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you soooooo much ?????

  20. Sorry it’s “Aww Mera Bachaa”

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you????

  21. Interesting di nd I’m 13years old…my bday on 24 April

    1. Yashu24

      Aww..u r one year and one month younger than me ???? thanks dear for your comment ???

  22. Mintu

    Awesome micku.. Its hidden nd seek na..both raglak didn’t see each other.. ? they going to meet soon..wow.. ragu is dancer in kathak.. Superb.. Eagerly waiting for their meeting.. I think already u know my birthday..!! My fav dialogue is..awww mera bachaa..!! Urs??

    1. Yashu24

      I am really very happy that you liked????
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Love you ??????

  23. IQRA222

    hey angel it was simply awesome episode
    so let’s start
    the first four lines i really agree and love too they are too so true!! did you wrote them on your own?
    poor lucky so very confused and puzzled he is but don’t worry lucky boy my angel is there to clear your doubts so don’t worry and have patience
    and god ragu’s dance scene and my entry was the best scene loved it so much and my ragu danced on my fav song its a cherry on the cake
    and god i am flying i gave flower that too rose to my rose my ragu di i am flying
    and the recap is very very superb can’t wait for the raglak and not to forget my yummy mangoes
    can’t wait for the next part

    1. IQRA222

      and didu as i told there are two of my fav dialogues
      1) aww mera bacha and
      2) swara or ragini are incomplete without each other
      and you know my birthday is on 20 december and yours is on 24 march see i know!!

    2. Yashu24

      Awwww…my cutie.princess
      I am really happy that you liked it…???
      Yeas I wrote those Lines..??
      And I am very​ happy that you liked your own entry ??
      And of course I know your birthday….
      Ok will talk later ?
      Take care,stay blessed, keep smiling
      Love you ??????????

  24. Shrilatha

    Awesome micku…my birthday is on 3 nov

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much diii ???

  25. Akshata

    awesome, update soon

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much diii ???

  26. Fairy

    Baccha..frst of all thnx a lot for ur wishes…it made me so relaxed dear really..M so blessed to have u in my life??? love u…
    Oh wow dis story..??? amaznggggg!!!!really i love dis type of plot dr.. n u r writing on it wow so it must gonna be fabuloussss…..rags dance woww…I imagined it yaar…? It’s awesome…N aww!!! IQU n rags scenes were so cuteeeee…..N loved laksh? ….waitng eagerly for nxt part dear???? n no need to be sry sweety,i already know ur age bt for some who doesn’t ,dey wl understand u n it’s so good dat u confessed it like dis.hatts of to u??
    My birthday is on-15TH SEPTEMBER?

    N my fav. Dialogue from SR is hehe jo ke I mostly use -“AWW!!!MERA BACCHA”??,
    N “HUM RAGLAK HAI”?

    Keep smiling n stay blessed baccha? love u so much???? tc?

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwa fairy diiii Love you soooo muchhhh… your comments r really special for me…????
      And about my prayers sooo don’t say thanks..Ok..?? Praying for your mumma was like praying for my​ own mom??
      And I AM Really very very happy that you liked my story this much..????
      Really you r very special for me..????
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Love you soooo much????

  27. A.xx

    Amazing and 2 dialogues per character I really love:
    Lakshya : (Sab kuch kohne ke baad mujhe apne pyaar ka ehsaas hua hai aur ab yeh ehsaas meri zindagi hai) and I know some people will find this a wierd one but I truelly love it (RAgini zabardaasti meri zindagi mein aayi hai,meine isse nikal ne ki bohot koshish ki AUR LAKSHYA KO RAGININ NAHI KABHI PASAND THI AUR NA HIKABHI HOGI.)
    Swara: (Yeh Ragini ki behen Swara bol rahi hai) ( acha dever sa).
    Ragini: (Ki shukar hai ki hum aapse ab pyaar nahi karte) ( acha suno yeh ek art hai ek daam ache se karna ).
    Sanskaar: ( Meine tumhare pyaar ki khadar ki, agar main tumse shaadi nahi karta tho tere jail se bhagna bekaar ka ho jatha.) ( Are yaar helicopter mein gumane kya Sanskaar ka bhooth le kar gaya tha).

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooooooo muchhh diiiiii…yeah all the dialogues are awesome.. ??? and you forgot to write your xx in ending ?

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you????

  28. Aasthu

    I loved the dance….try to increase the events happening in a chapter…..who is in your dp???

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you sooo much diii.?????
      Ok diii I will surely increase the events happening..?
      And diii teju is in my dp..

  29. Maggi

    That was good …
    Hope to see more of the story in next epi..

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you diii???

  30. Soumya85

    Omg it’s amazing micky
    The dance and song with laksh strange feeling was awesome
    I’m in love with this ff
    Post the next episode soon
    Love u??
    My birthday is on 8th June

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you somu diii ?????
      I am really happy that you liked it
      Omg your birthday is about to come..??
      Take care
      Love you????

  31. IME

    Awesome mickeyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
    I love itttttttttt
    amazingggggggggggg
    post nxt part soon
    i read all the parts in a go
    superb!!!
    Love u
    take care
    byee

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you ishu ????
      Love you more
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Stay blessed ???

  32. Berdilla

    Awesome dear mickey choti

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you diiiii?????

  33. tëìtō kUn

    Superb….
    My favorite dialogue is
    “Aww Mera Bacha”!!!!
    Mine is on June 18th!!!!

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you soo much ?? I really missed your comments ????

      1. tëìtō kUn

        So sweet of you ?
        ?u…

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