jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 9)

Episode 9
Hello wvery one thanks for the support which u are providing me since starting….

Till now
Ansh and shivay starts their new relation….ishkara moments happen….
The engagement night
Oberoi mansion lawn
Scene shift to the rumya…
Rudra comes in a dashing sherwani….and looks around….his eyes gets widened seeing beautiful girls all over……
Om comes and pats him ….
Rudra: itni kubsoorat ladikiyan kaha thi abb thak….mein thu wo sumo se engangement karne wale ho….wo tho kushi mein aur 4 kilo zyada hogaya…..
Om see sowmya standing behind and hints Rudra….
Rudra continues is thing…: om waha dehko….wo red skirt wali….kitna hot hai…wo tho muje dekrahhe hai….wo green wo …be……
Sowmya: mein keisi lagrahi hooo Rudra…..
Rudra hearing the voice turns …he says awaaz thu meeti he….as he says he turns to see sowmya standing like durga ma….
Om: Rudra i think u need first aid …i will go and arrange it……all the best Rudra take care…..he leaves
Sowmya: so Rudra….say how am i looking like….
Rudra: wo…wo….
Sowmya: thu nahi sutherega…its my fault i accepted for this engagement go…marry her….he leaves…
Rudra runs behind and holds her…..
Rudra: i can marry her but how can i call her sumo….or moti….mein sirf thume bula sakthe hoon na…..aur kiske saath ladai karsakthi hoo…..theri saath…..thu chalegai tho kaun muje cry baby bulayega…..
Sowmya turns….
Rudra holds and says: hum dhono ki beech me bahu farak hai…….thu meri friend nai friend se zyada…….aur patha nahi mein kaise theri jaise aloo paratha se shaddi karneke ko thai yar hogahi…..
Sowmya sees him and Rudra keeps a cute sa innocent face……
Sowmya hug him …..he too….ishana comes and says atleast wait till engage ment…….
Every one laugh and the y leave for the hall………

Guest come ……
Every one ask about the arrangement…..and shivay sees some similarity in the arrange ment….he thinks to thank arpita personally so that…he can talk about ansh……
By which vinay comes…he sees arpita coming behind krithika ….and look for ansh…..
Shivay goes towards krithika…..krithika with tremors looks him…..he crosses her and greets nikitha…..
As shivay considers nikitha as arpita….he looks around for ansh….
Nikitha says ansh is with kelash …..and mostly he wont be coming….shviay feels some disappointment….and looks at nikitha….he thanks about arrange ment

Shivay with the disappointment goes to his room..he gets shocked….
Ansh stands over his bed….and shouts… he see om and Ishana asking him to get down…
Shivay: what the wack…what are u doing over my bed…just…justt…get down…its un hygeninc….god…….
Ansh who was having the sipper in his hands…looks at shivay who was in anger…
Ansh smiles seeing him , and jumps, …more…he also shakes the sipper where the milk to sprinkle out of ..it
Shivay: how dare u do this….just get down…otherwise u will pay for this…mein thume….mein thume…..
Ansh: repeats…mein thume..mein thume…he laughs doing funny faces towards shivay…and om ans Ishana ask him to keep silent …but ansh makes it more louder…..
Shivay out of control…forwards his hand to catch him…and ansh runs here and there…at last shivay catches….and ansh starts shouting shaking his legs …he tries to come out of shivay clutches but it is impossible….
He starts crying as it was the last thing left…dadi comes and ask shivay to leave ansh…
Shivay without noticing that dadi spoke to him says: no dadi..this kid is showing attitude to me…i wont leave him…how dare he jumps in my bed….

As shivay says ansh bites shivays hands …and shivay shouts and leaves him…ansh sees vinay coming and runs towards him….vinay takes him in his arms….
He sits and sees shivay with smile ….almost smriking…shivay gets more anger…..
Vinay: hey leave he is a kid…thats all y are u getting tensed…
ishana: actually he touched bhais ego thats y….
Vinay: again eogo….jis thin thu ego ko chodega us din thume sachayi dekega….
Krithika comes and supports shivay …. vinay see them almost with hatred….
Krithika: no vinay u took bad…what shivay is saying is correct and ansh should have not done this…..
Bye then Ishana starts applying medicine and krithika takes it….
Pinky sees this and supports krithika and taunt vinay without mentioning the name of anika……
Dadi: pinky chup ho ja ….
By then…kelash comes and ask sorry …….
Every one leave the place…..

Shivay in his room gets his attire changed…
As he sees the mirror he sees some one entering with silence…..
He turns and see him…
Ansh comes with much bigger sad face and stands in front of him…
Shivay bents and ask why he is sad….he must be happy as he won…..
Ansh with same sad face says sorry…..and does utak batak….
Om and dadi come and see this….
Shivay says ok stop ….
Ansh: u say u accepted my sorry else i will do this till uu accept…
Dadi comes and ask who taught u this…
Ansh sees her with a smile and says mama….he see shivay…
Shivay hugs ansh takes him in his arms says i didnt get angry i was just pretending….ansh gets glad and smiles .
Ansh: iska matlab mein apko kabi bi kat saktha hoon kya….he rolls his blue eyes and asks…..every stare at him with silence and starts laughing….he comes down of shivays arms …
Ansh leaves… every one see him…ansh stops and turns ask shivay to bend…..

Shivay bends…ansh comes close to shivay;;;
Shivay: kya hua…
Ansh: mein ne app ko sorry bola na….keeps his face sad…
Shivay: yes u said… ..i accepted what the issue….
Ansh: isliye …isliye…..
Every one looks keen at him….by then ansh jumps and changes the shivay set hair….before shivay could react he jumps with laughter and show s funny faces to him and leaves……
Shivay stands still in shock..
Smile comes in shivays face….and tears as well………………..om and dadi look him ……
Om: are u ok shivay, u forgave the kid with in a minute…..its strange….whats happening…
Shivay: i dont know….this kid has something….which drives me to him…. i dont know y i can not see him in pain…..and jab be wo mere sath hotha hai..i feel like i am not missing any one…..he smiles with pain….
Dadi sees ansh and shivay ……

Scene shift to the hall….
Ishana looks for the ring….and finds it missing…..he calls om and says this…..all oberoi gets tensed as ring ceremony is the next….
Nikitha hears this…and gets tensed….
Vinay calls arpita and informs…..
She comes with the another new ring….as her car enter the party lawn…she feels her heart beat raising…
She steps down and ….she calls nikitha…..
Viany see her and ask kelash to take ansh away….kelash takes ansh…….
Vinay comes and see arpita….gives the ring…..by then…
They hear some laughter sound and turns to see …..
Where…krithika drags shivay holding his hand…shivay with the smiling face comes along with her…..as he leaves , he stops and turns to wards vinay…..he looks around….and turns…
Kritika drag him again…..

Arpita who was standing behind vinay comes and
Vinay: u said u wont get affected by him….why are u hiding…and shivay can sense u….
Arpita: seeing them going…wo wo …wo….ladki kaun…… her face turns sad…seeing shivay……
Vinay: wo krithika……..shivay ki patner….
Arpita: matlab
Vinay: wo..wo……wo shivay se……shaddi karne….wali…..but i am not sure…. i heard evry body . saying…
Arpita…..see them…and tears roll on automatically without her knowledge…..she see him…..vinay holds arpita are u ok…..
Arpita comes to sences and wipes her tears…and say what happened to me i am ok….i am ok…see i am smiling…….
Arpita leaves the place….vinay see her leaving
Who was the one u were talking to….
Vinay turns hearing tthis….
Om: wo kaun hai….
Vinay: wo w o meri client…hai….
Om: y were u saying about shivay to her……
Viany: shivay ki bareme sab ko patha hai …so she was asking what wrong….any way have the ring…..
Om : how u got it….
Vinay: some how…by then Ishana comes for the ring and engagement gets finished……..
Scene shift to villa .

Kelash and ansh comes there…..sees arpita…sitting in floor.leaning herself in bed ….he see her …she ask ash to come and eat …….
Ansh says muje buk nahi hai….. says he went to engage ment party…..
Arpita sees kelash…..
Kelash: ya i took him to Rudra singh oberoi s engagement…….
Arpita: kya wo …….wo ….i mean did he saw him. ..wo ansh se bath kya…
Kelash see arpita is desperate …
Kelash: mmmm….he wanted to see u too….as u are the mother of the brave son….u came there right…..
Arpita: ya i came ….i saw mr shivay singh oberoi,,,,and kri kri krithika……
Kelash: thu ne dekha…..are u ok….
Arpita: sees ansh looking at them…she ask him to change his dress…..
Kelash: arpita ….
Arpita: ya bhai mein teek hoon….i dont have any problem…..i felt bad….first….then accepted…..after all he is the most eligible bachelor now…..aur krithika to acche koon ki hgi…..so i dont have any issues….and then i think we need to settle the payment….and she turns…..
Kelash: aur kitna din thu theri darath ko chupavogi…….i know u still love him…..and u could nt accept krithika i knew…..
Arpita starts to say some thing…
Kelash stops….and says dont lie to urself arpita….see urself …ur conditions show s ur thinking…pls joot math bolo……
Arpita: u can think any thing kelash bhai but i am sure about it ….muje koi farak nahi padtha……
She calls nikitha.

Precap
Arpita says ansh s father died long back….

Hello every one …thanks for ur support….actually i need to say its we….ya its the merger of bshaMA and pragYA……
And its we MAYA hope u like this jab thak hai jaan…..thanks for ur comments and reviews….silent readers(if any) thanks for commenting
Regards
maya

27 comments

  1. Ketaki19

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    oh woww… very nice part… loved shivansh part a lot… oh anika still loves shivaay par hateki wajahse dono pas hokar bhi bahot dur hain 🙁 hope so ansh unhe jarur milwaye…

    sorry pichle updatesme comment nahi kar payi kyu ki diwali ki wajahse busy thi… waiting for shivika meeting… i think unki meeting ansh ke wajahse hogi

  2. Sahanaa

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    Ohh god… it is getting tooo intense yaar… cant wait for epi😅 u create such situation in ff dat i always wait eagerly for nxt epi😊
    Keep writing dea😊

  3. Nithu

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    Di its khidki thod episode..loved it di…im eageely waiting for shivika reunion…i think in 2 more days arpitha ansh and kelash will leave to new york…right di…how will they meet …many questions are running in my mind now di…

  4. Mounica

    Nice episode.waiting fr shivika meeting…l lived ur ff.thank u fr updating daily…waiting fr next episode eagerly

  5. Nansshivika

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    Shama and pragya its awesome so cute and emotional. Everytime I say this only. I wish I can get other words to express my love of shivansh scenes but what to do the word strikes is “emotional” ….post next asap

  6. Tulasi

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    Ahhh…suprr again…very touchy epi…shivansh is awesummmmm……it made me cry…n arpitha s reaction 😢😢😢 wen ll dey meet..??? I wannaa see tht…….

  7. Hidden Sunshine

    Asusual 2days epi vs lovely…. shivansh scenes n rumya scenes vr cute … felt da epi vs short.. i am juz greedy …waitin fr da nxt epi
    Hi MAYA … Now i know y i luv dis ff so much bcoz its a combo of my 2 fav writers ..I hv read only 2 ff b4 jthj ..1 day i randomly found a ff (IB ff by shama epi 54 ) found it interestin n read da whole ff n lovd it so much dat i seachd fr anotr n Cal it coincidence r somthing I found o jaana n fell in lov vit it As i completed readin it holidays vr over so dint search fr anyotr ffs…N i nvr got a chance 2 comment on any of ur ff’s coz dey vr ended much b4 i started readin !! N aftr dat dhamakedar endin of o jaana i had 2 read jthj 😊
    @pragya n shama i loved ur ffs n admire ur writin skills alot 🤗 until yestrday i tot u both r busy with some work of urs so u hv shared ur story vit 1 of ur frenz Maya n she is writin it in behalf of u 2 in pragya’s page N shama doesn’t comment coz its hr ff only(coz almost always shama vs da 1st 2 comment on o jaana)
    @shama yesterdy i found dat ur writin OS on Ishkara n Shivika …hvnt read dm yet but i am sure dat dey r amazin …i vl definitely search n read all da parts of dm as i get free … so consider me as a silent readr fr dm… I try 2 reduce my bakbak daily but it gets lengthier n lengthier evryday …adat se majbur 😅

  8. Vaishali BBZ

    Maya its superb.. I have no worrds to describe how beautifully u have written it.. I just loved Shivaye’s bond with his son, Ansh and now im dying to know how will Shivaye and Anika will meet and how will our Shivaye react after seeing his Anika and after knowing that Ansh is his son…❤❤💜💙

  9. Priyanka.N

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    I dnt knw y this misunderstanding grow thz much….one can talk nd clear things bt noooo…. jst thy want to fight with thr inner soul nd others also…
    God bless shivika in thz ff….

  10. RichieRich

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    Shama n pragya.. I became aware about your merger just now.. Not sure if you have told this before

    Both you individually have been very good writers n this merger simply rocks…

    Loved all the partz of thiz ff :*

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