jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 8)

Episode 8
Hello every one….thanks for the support and plz do supporting like this………as we writer get energy from ur support…………
@ to readers….
Hi every one hope u all are enjoying the track….here are my replies for ur confusions…as i could not reply back in comments i am doing here….
@ sahil is not dead…he will be back soon…….kelash is not sahil….
@ i hope i am disappointing some on for quite long time by dragging shivika meet….sorry for that…but truly speaking i my self is desperate for their meet…but i need to wait….for that…..so sorry once again…..i will take time as ansh needs to get used to shivay …..

@ precious shivika .4….is really super and good start….pls do continue….as i use to read it off line i could not comment back so plz dont mistake me…..
@ and most of u said its emotional….thank u every one
And last but not the least thanks for those silent reader who started commenting………
Here goes episode 8

To be frank when i was writing it i loved the scene and as a reader ……..this my favourite episode of all….hope u too like its……
Till now
Shivay senses anikas presence but he could not find her…..on the other hand…om and Ishana come closer day by day…..rumya engage ment preparations has started…….ansh comes to oberoi mansion
Episode 8
Oberoi mansion:>
Dadi ask his name..
Om comes and says he his ansh….dadi ask wo baccha …
.om : yes who hi baccha tha… shivay ko irritate karna ki .koi moka nahi choda tha…
Ansh gets happy seeing him….and goes to om s arms and plays with hair….ishana comes and sees ansh….
Ishana forwards her hand to wards ansh but he turns towards om…..

Rudra says the history…and every one laugh…..ansh comes down and makes fun of om and Rudra…they start chasing him …he runs all over the hall…holds Ishana…and she protects for a while….as om comes close he jumps and hits tej……
Tej stares at him….he does the same funny face and leaves running calling mamu…mamu…(kelash) tej gets confused with is behaviour and ask about him to dadi…she says the organizer ka baccha hai….
Tej smiles…..

Ansh runs here and there…..he goes to store room and sees toys there and sits ….the door gets closed automatically…..
Every one here thought that he met his uncle……
Scene shift to the ansh planners…
Arpita gets everything ready and says…its only 3 days left…today after engagement i will be relived from oberois……..arpita calls kelash asks about ansh…he says he is in some meeting and will come soon…ansh is with him………
Arpita(in mind): i should make sure that ansh should stay away from oberois….mein koi hungama nahi chathi hoon….sirf 3 din…that all all this will be over…..
After a while .. dadi ask the servant to look for ansh as he might feel
hungry……servant goes and ask kelash…..kelash says ansh was with dadi and ……
Servant says he came looking for him, kelash gets tensed and shouts for ansh…..hearing that …whole oberoi family comes to gether except shivay……shivay with his blue tooth ……
Kelash ask om for ansh….om says he was calling u so we thought he was with u…..every one calls for ansh and they gets tensed as the time passes……
Asnsh on the other hand feels alone and dark ness he gets scared and goes to open the door….and finds the door closed…..he shouts mama…..mama…..
He tries for a while and starts crying……he shouts mama and hits the door…..
Time passes….

Every one search for ansh……
Shivay comes and sees the rage down and he too starts searching……time passed and kelash feels something strange….he thinks bringing ansh here is bad idea………
Ansh again starts crying for mama,…..he hits the door……rudra who passes by hears this and he calls every one …..kelash shouts for ansh and he replies calling mama….
Ansh: mama muje dhar lagraha ajja na…..he nnahi kulraha hai….mama….mamma…..
Shivay leaves the place and om tries to pull over but it doesn’t open…..shivay comes with the keys and tries to open .,,,,,but it gets jammed…..shivay some how opens the door…..and ansh comes out ……..
He comes running and hugs shivay tightly…..shivay feels strange and sees kelash who smile seeing him……shivay is about to leave ansh so that he can get with kelash….but ansh hugs shivay tightly ..so that shivay cant go out of his circle…..every one sees this with a surprise……he feels ansh trembling and pats him…..ansh holds him tightly…and tears roll on over shivays jacket……
Shivay: kuch nahi hua …chup ho ja….mein hoo na….chup hoja……he pats him……after a while ansh looks shivay with tears running all through the cheek….shivay smiles at him and wipes his tears….he brings him to hall and every one join…..shivay sit and make ansh sit over him …..
Ansh sits in shivays lap holding his suit tightly he sees every one rolling his eyes…..he sees tej….and makes sad face and gets towards shivay more closer…..every one notice this…..
Janavi ask tej not to fear him.. tej says what did i do……….ishana gets the milk ….shivay takes and makes ansh drink.. ansh sees its haldi ka doodh…..does the nauseating effect….
Ansh: (looking at ishana) muje pasanth nahi hai….choco milk le aho..choco milk….choco milk……
Shivay: no u are drinking this…
ansh nods no.(shaking his head vigourously ). : mein ne kaha na muje pasanth nahi hai….choco milk ley aho…..
shivay holds the milk and make him drink….waits slowly till he finishes…………
ansh finishes the milk and makes funny faces…..he gets the milk moustache and he looks around for cloth and wipes with shivays tie……..shivay see this with smile….and gives the glass to Ishana…..
ansh: app tho bad dadi walla uncle hai…..
.every one see the other side of shivay with a shock ……..
Dadi smiles seeing this gesture of shivay. And thinks kash anika yahan hothi………..kelash too smile…….
Arpita calls kelash …..ansh calls out mama mama……kelash gives him….but he is cautious that he does not utter the word oberoi ……shivay see ansh speaking to his mama….he lifts him to make him sit in cushion..but ansh sits more comfortably in shivay lap and starts speaking as he speaks he holds shivay tie………..shivay looks at him ….. every one too…
Omru reminices of shivay shouting at his bagad billa avatar and this shivay……
By mistake ansh presses loudspeaker…..where every one hear arpita shouting……u be quite and dont show ur tadi bazz all over….be a good boy… aur mamu ku thang math karna…..aur muje theri baharme koi complain nahi hona chaiye aur choco milk math pena…….give the phone to mamu…..
Kelash tries to get as soon as it when to loud speaker….drops the call……
Every one gets dumpstruck with voice….esp shivay.. utters the word anika….
Ansh: says anika …anika.. anika……..smiles seeing shivay. …
…sowmya ask what ur mama s name……ansh says atpita…..
Kelash manages them….with his explanations…..ansh gets down and kelash says they will leave as the arrangements are almost competed…..shivay calls ansh and hug him…sees him emotionally……and pats his head

Ansh comes to his jr bagad billa avatar….and shout: leave me ….u are doing like my mama..wo bhi yahi karthi hai…….i am not a kid….dont do this…i hate this……ii am not kid any more……
He set rights his hair angrily…and goes near to kelash…..dumpstrucking every single oberoi over there …….
Every one stands still with his attitude…..
Ansh and kelash leaves oberoi mansion
Sowmya says this kid has something ….which is much closer to us…..
Rudra: kuch tho bath hai.. jo ham nahi dek pa rahi hai……….
Om: (in mind) how come he is like this, as far as i know …vinay is much soft spoken…but ansh….i need to find this out……aur arpita …..i need to meet her….kuch tho baath……
In car…..ansh and kelash:>

Kelash is n the way ….he ask not to say any thing to arpita….
Ansh: kyn …mein mamma ko bathavungi…..wo dadi uncle …ki bare me….wo hamesha muje ladthe rehthe hai…..
Kelash: ok then say but mama theri bag pack karegi aur thu jayegi new York…..so tata tata….mein india mein enjoy karundgi…..
Ansh puts all type of thinking faces and says ok….
Kelash: pinky promise.
Ansh pinky promise…… wo dadhi uncle ko tho mein kuch karungi……
Kelash see him and smile…..he thinks the incident…its relation ….as ansh shivay ko hug kiya…..i dont know hw its gonna change but something has to be done…..
Oberoi mansion
As ansh leaves shivay goes to his room and sit…..
He thinks of the voice….its anikas …anikas….i need to find….he remembers of arpita(actually oberois think nikitha as arpita) he calls the sara and ask to sent spl invitation to arpita for today s function……..
Om comes and sees shivay…
Om : kya hua…
Shivay: kuch nahi
Om: i know what u were thinking…but …..
Shivay: no om …i am not thinking about ansh….and anika…..i am bit busy with work leave me alone….
Om: pehali baar yeh hua hai ki thu akeli rehana chathi ho…..
He leaves…..om all the way thinking about ansh and the arpita……how can be it possible….annika ki awaaz…aur arpita….muje check karna hai…..
He crosses his room and Ishana comes doing something with her hearing…..
They both collide and om hold Ishana who is falling……ishana to holds hime…tighly……they have an eye lock….
Janavi passes and see this…..
She makes some sound and they come to senses…..ishana sees janavi and leave…. om to….janavi thinks to do some thing towards Ishana…..
Its enagament….
And

Last final touch……
Vinay enter the oberoi mansion…..so as the kelash……..
Vinay greets every one and thanks shivay for saving ansh…..shivay smile s…
By then krithika comes in a beautiful sari…..shviay looks at her. Side….
Vinay sees this…and gets sad….and thinks even he changed…..he didnt love anika…..it just a plan…..
Vinay: ok shivay see u later…..
Shivay : kya hua….
Vinay leaves with a smile……
Shivay see to the krithika side….and goes to desperately towards her…….krithika too feels the same………………

Precap
Sowmy says i am going to stop the engagement…………………………………………………….ansh bites shivays hands…….Arpita sees shivay and krithika passing by with their hands holding to gether…..

Hello every one , a big thanks for the support and comments…..thank u all…hope u enjoy the current track…..silent readers (if any) thanks for reading my ff
Regards maya.

25 comments

  1. Vaishali BBZ

    This episode was really good.. Shivaye and Ansh’s bond ❤❤
    I want Anika and Shivaye’s face off.. Pls make it soon Pragya..
    Waiting for the next part..

  2. Mukta

    Awesome episode….. really very nice!!!!!! And sorry for not commenting in last few episodes…. actually I was a bit busy…. so couldn’t comment!!!!!!! Anyways post the next one asap……

  3. lucky

    nice episord and thnx cuz you are updating it daily now
    this is one of my favvourite ff
    love the epiiiiiiiiiiii silent reader……

  4. Nansshivika

    |Registered Member

    Its so emotional I love the track and ansh and shivay scenes they are solo lovely emotional yaar can’t stop expressing whole episode is going in front of me. Its superb

  5. Mounica

    Ur ff is sooo good,emotional,loved it a lot….waiting fr shivika,omkara unision….and thanks fr clearing doubts…all the best…and continue ur ff….iam a silent reader sorry fr nt commenting ……Tc

  6. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Lovely diiiiii….loved it diii…but di…y dint vinay tell shivaye that anika is alive…cuz vinay knows her real happiness is woth shivaye..abv al that vinay is shivayes beste..right

  7. Bshama1239

    |Registered Member

    Thanks dear readers ,
    Hi I am Maya and by pragya side I am replying…
    We are glad that you all are loving our merger hope you all will support us like this…

    With love : your Maya 😊😉💖💘💗

  8. Hidden Sunshine

    2days epi Highlights fr me:
    1.Ansh enterin oberio mansion n bondin with da family 2.Shivansh scene from hug to gudbye(starting to end) dat vs exactly what i wanted 2 c 😊 3.da scenes vr Tej says what did i do n ansh cleanin his face with shivays tie 😂 4.Niku’s typical mom wala lecture 5.Shivaay n da whole family reactin on hearin Niku’s voice 6.Sumo rudy thinkin kuch to hai n also om 7. Jr.BB’s tadibazi makin evry1 shockd N how can i forget 8.iskara moment ..
    IN SHORT I LOVED EACH N EVERY PART OF 2DAYS EPI 😉

  9. Hidden Sunshine

    I think i wrote a summary of da epi instead of givin my review in da previous comment Sry fr dat😅…Ansh vs da star of 2days epi with his cute,naugty n tadibaz andas (Ur writin made him) An epi filled with cuteness … Mayb om findsout abt niku b4 shivaay(my guesses) N why is shivaay interested in kritika n dadi wants hr as hr bahu (kuch toh gadbad hai🤔 curious) .. N niku is da nickname given 2 Annika by me …I keep doin my bakbak 😅😅

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