jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 27)

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Hello every one thanks for the tremendous response u gave to me till now…i dont find words to thanks you…..u accepted our mistakes and appreciated our victory whole heartedly….thanks for that….and tu…thanks for updating the post…telly updays u guys are providing a great platform for the people like us…………………………………..
So last episode of the jabthakjaan……………………………..
To be frank i will sad to close this as this was the only way to meet u guys….but destiny decides the world…so thanks a lot ….
Scene 1
Oberoi mansion
Anikas room
Shivay with the diary….he gets remembrance of the rudras engagement , and ansh behaved with him…and how he had shared a bond even with out knowledge of his truth….
Shivay turns the page…
Date
Ansh, yesterday i asked u about ur new friends in oberoi manshion…..and u said about the dadi wala uncle….i dont know how to say….he is ur father….u might wonder..y i hided this truth to these many days…but i didnt have any option apart from hiding this truth….and yesterday it was the big day in my life…i saw him….and the moment what i felt was accompanied by a big truth of his engagement….i thought at least he would remember me as rival but he didnt….
Ya its justified ansh, how come the only to be heir of the oberoi industries will remember the girl who doesn’t even new her lineage….. thats true we met…..we fought with each other…. we supported each other…we hated each other….we married…..but we never fell in love…..it was the bitter truth which made me to come out of the illusion of being bride of shivay……when i understood the truth it was too much late…..when u go to oberoi mansion in Mumbai… plz dont try to speak to any one of the people…..they are good……to themselves…..that all i can say………….
As shivay reads this….tears roll on over his eyes and he closes his eyes for a moment…….
Ansh comes there…….he sees shivay crying …ansh wipes his tears…
Ansh: app kyn ro rahi ho….appko bi mama chaiye kya…..he pouts his lips and sees him…..he goes and sits with shivays arms……he sees shivay reading the diary….ansh touches the pages…and says mama….mama……….
Shivay holds ansh with in himself…..
He turns the page…………..
Date accident day
Ansh,
When ever i prayed to god …he betrayed me….yes today to ….we are about to leave to new York today……but tere mamu ka accident hogaya tha……and in hospital we thats me and ur father came in face to each other….and u were the sole reason…..worst part is u were introducing mr shivay aka ur father to me…ur mother……i couldn’t speak a word….thank god vinay uncle came at my rescue….mein ne joot bola ki mein arpita hoon..anika nahi……dadi …ishana(therra chahi) un sab ko mein waha deka tha….sab mujse baath ki.. but he didnt spoke a word.. he was staring at me…….i think he might be thinking how to deal withme……i dont know what s going on in his mind…but one thing i new i should be ready to face any thing…….ajj be ek quasih hai ke….mein thum do ko ek saath dekna chathi hoon…at least kuch pal keliye…….
Shivay turns the page……
Where ansh puts his fingers on the lines …he says mama ki …mamaki…………..
Date….its after 2 weeks …..
Ansh,
Now we are in oberoi mansion, yes i already said to u that ur father was quite good at business….yes another deal he cracked….and the same reason…ishana meri behan……. i am not writing what all happened in between these weeks……but one think…..u are sharing a great bond with him….and he too wanted the same….jo insane hamesha tadi dikatha tha…..jiskeliye business aur money sab kuch tha….thu unniki bagome akkar unnise ladrahi ho ajj kal……i was wrong….krithika aur shivay sirf friends tha….. i didnt expect this from krithi…..
Fb shows ( where krithika comes to villa after anika gets discharged …anika apologize to her…but krithika talked about shivay…and how he was like a robot all these years….and the marriage was tha plan to make u accept the truth that u to love him and u are anika……krithika asked me not hurt shivay more…
I am staying in oberoi mansion as anika….thu bi theri papa ki bago mein hamesha settle hojathi ho….aur diere diere mein bi benakab hohi jarahi hoon…..jo mein ne socha tha wo galath tha….i was still in his heart…and life…….jo mein ne ajj thak socha thaw o bilkul galath tha…………………do not how to say…but i wish i could stay here….par ajj se zyada kal(past) muje bajboor kar rahi hai ki mein yahan sab se door javun…..because i dont have enough strength to face the same if the history repeats………….. i dont know ansh….but i wish every thing goes in ease and i leave om for ever…..aur phir se arpita banna chathi hoo…kyn ki mein anika hone se hi dart hi hoo…………
Shivay turns the page and reads about the daily happening and arushi s presence and humiliation….
Date : after arushi humilitated ansh
Ansh,
Today ur dadi came to me….
Fb shows pinky coming to anikas room
Pinky: anika…..i knew i haven’t accepted u as my daughter in law till now..to be truth full i haven’t got convinced till now…..but i want u to be shivays wife as his smile lies in u……i cant see him like a robot any more…wo meri ek lautha beta hai…aur..i did every thing to convince in this 5 years but i failed…every thing changed when u came back ……i want u to be his wife from my heart …..but i cant be polite with u once far all as …it takes time for me…..and please forgive me……
They both love each other….and pinky ask her to think about her decision once……
Fb ends……
Ajj theri papa bi ek deal leaker ayithi.. after which i am taking this decision………
Shivay reads it and closes the diary………..
Shivay : iska mathalb…anika….anika……………………i need to start…..
Scene shift to shivays room
Om comes with the flight ticket…
Shivay : no need of this anika is not in London…………
Om: hhave u gone crazy…u told u are leaving to London….then what the issur………
“shivay is right anika London me nahi hai……”
Om:kelash app yahan?
Kelash: wo meri behen hai….ijust now i got to no that arpita London me nahi ahi…………..
Shivay: she is in this city…and under some one cluctes………i need find…….
Om: how u got to know…………………
Shivay says about the diary..where the decision was written…….
Fb shows that shivay reading the last page of of the diary where
Ansh,
Dhil aur deemak ki ladaye mein dil jeeth gay ansh….. i am ready to take risk…and i am ready to take any other betrayal if it comes on my way….i am gonna choose the first option…..dil se be aur deemak se bi me kush hoon………..aur meri ego keliye mein thume qurbaan nahi thena chathi hoon………kal mein wo wali mandir chane wale hoon…where i first met ur father….where our takkar shuru huhi thi………..and jab thu kal(next day) utega..theri mama aur papa ek saath hogi hamesha keliye…………………
Ishana wipes her tears……………………..: then what about that note….arushi ne diya tha…..the messages and pics……..
Shivay: its fake….
Rudra: we missed some thing.. note was given by arushi…the pic was shown by her…. those messages came only when we discuss something critical about bhabi…so ….some one is watching us…….
Sowmya: someone nahi…arushi……….i saw her many times speaking to someone these days and she is hiding some thing…..we need to check
Om: what shall we do…she wont utter a word…and…..we need to find some thing to trap her…………
Ishana: idea hai….uska mobile phone ..kuch thohoga…………………..
Rudra: dont worry i will steal it….”.what an idea sirji”
Om: (pats his head) duffer…usme tho password hoga……..kaun crack karea thu…….
They all think ……and shivay sees ansh trying to open the sipper….shivay leans down makes him sit in the bed…he gives the sipper to him…he smile…..shivay to smile back….
Ansh: mama kab ayengi……muje mama chahiye…….
Shivay: jalthi ajayengi…mein lekar avungi……………………….
Every one see this with streak of sadness all over their face….
Shivay: i will get that…….she touched my ego and family….and now i will show how shivay will deal…..he does the signature step…….ansh who was seeing him also does the signature step…………………………
Every one see shivay…………………………
Scene shift to hall…….
Shivay(with full form in bagad billa avatar he throws the mobile……..and the vase Ishana comes and ask kya jiju..:) what the wack…u are ask ing me kya hua…..its all because of u and ur sister….i thougt to give a chance but…she proved characterless by running away…..leaving ansh here…..
I lost 45 crores in this week due to my negligence…. it done….thats all…. i know u knew the place…call her and ask her to take ansh with her….else….i will make sure that u people wont stay here
Ishana with shock : jiju….have u gone crazy …ansh is ur son……
Shivay: do u have proof…………….
Omru: shivay..i didnt expect this….
Shivay: stop it…..i dont wanna get held in ths circle more…(he sees arushi standing in corner) arushi can u join me in lunch ……
Arushi: (innocently): yes shivu sure…..i will change my out fit…………
Arushi goes to her room…………she starts dancing…..to herself: its all over anika…….few days u and ur son will be out…………….she comes out…..
Lunch
Shivay: aru….(arushi looks up and she could nt control the blush) hope u dont mind me calling u aru……..
Arushi: no…in fact i like it
Shivay: can u give ur mobile….actually i threwed my…still i didnt get the substitute….so…..
She gives the mobile, and shivay ask her to unlock it……….she to does……
Shivay starts calling some one….he smile looking at her….
On one corner Rudra pays some waiter…waiter comes near shviays table and spoils arushis dress with the grevy…where she goes to wash room for cleaning……as she enters Ishana locks from outer side and puts the board of (under repair) om ask the dj to increase the volume of music…….
They all assemble…..
Rudra starts probing and shortlist the most dialled no…..om calls to those five nos….its last one….shviay backs off and his heart beat raises…om holds shivay……
Call goes…..a person picks the call
Poc: mam sab its good that u called me……this girl is quite hard to handle….wo kya nama hai…i just forgot…in this two weeks she tried to elope twice……..ha …anika…..yesterday to she tried to elope but we found…muje kursa agaya…aur ek thapad diyya…..aur behosh hogaye…..she didnt woke yet…u just finsh this soon mam sab……aur hamara payment be dedo…..
As shivay hears it…he his about to shout where….om holds her….
Poc: mam sab…u will come today no?……mam sab…mam sab….are u hearing me…..
Ishana: ya i am hearing u….ok will come………
She cuts the call………………………
Shivay : i wont leave u arushi…………………………..
Rudra : call trace hogaya…..
They see the place …shivomru see each other………………………
Soon a waiter comes and unlocks the door…and gives the phone to arushi…she says shivay left for the meeting……she sees to call but finds the battery down……………..she leaves….ishana who watches everything and informs pinky…………………………..
Oberoi mansion
As arushi comes….pinky makes her busy with herself…..and takes her mobile with her…………………
Scene shift to ….
The place
A goon: who are u…what u want……….leave this place.d………….
Shviaomru come to light and see each other…they hold each others hand…….and signs
Lafzon ki duniya rahi…………………………………….plays
Fight starts………
Shivay searches for anika…………….he sees the locked door……he goes inside……
“ dont come near me….u cant do any thing….just go away(as shivay holds her ) dont touch me…..i will kill u…….”
Shivay: anika…daro math…mein hoon…..mein ..theri billu….see me……..
Anika looks up to see shivay……………she outburst crying shivay…and hugs him…… she holds tightly his shirt and leans herself against his chest……she starts crying……shivay holds her tightly…………………..he lift her face..
“ro math , sab kuch teek hogaya…..”
“ansh kaisa hai…”…anika
Shivay: wo teek hai…chall …ghar chalthe hai……
Omru see anika coming……as she walks she slips …shivay finds her legs with the imprints of rope…..shivay see that…and sees anika…he kisses her in fore head and says u r fine…..i am with u…………………..
Omru smile………..
Scene shift to oberoi mansion
Every one are waiting at hall
Shivay anika, omru enter……
Arushi who was busy with pinky sees them and her face gets changed………………….
Anika holding shivay comes near to arushi……………….gives a tight slap twice………….
Fb shows anika reaching the mandir…and some goons kidnapping her….and making her lie in a darkroom…and after 3 days arushi comes and challenges anika badly………………….
Anika: what the hell u thought….i said that day itself….shviay will come….our love doesn’t started at love at first sight….hamari ishqbazzi nafrat ka tha….ladai ka tha……ishq se zyada thakath nafrart ka hai….and i was were our journey started……..
She drags arushi to the exit……..ishana ask anika to stop…she comes and gives a tight slap…..anika throws arushi out of the house…..shivay see this…….
Ansh comes and hugs anika……………she is about to lift but due to weak ness she couldn’t……she hugs everyone……………………………………..
After a day…………..
Om : Ishana …ishan….where where u….
Ishana: what the hell omkara…..cant u keep quite for awhile…..sube se das bar bulachuki hogne….ab kya…..
Om: wo meri…merei…shirt got strucked…..
Ishana with frowning…goes to makes him correct…..suddenly he holds her…….
Ishanna: are u not ashamed to do this….leave me…koi dek lega…….
Om: kaun dekega….mein theri pathi….aur sharam ki kya bath hai…..now a days u are busy with some thing else…u are not giving time to me…so i need to do this………………
Ishana: how mean om…..just now i went out ..u started again……………….and this not fair…
As she complains om gives a lip lock…..and Ishana eyes gets widended……she lies against his chest……………………………as he moves his hand around her waist……………………………….
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Shivay come out of his room……he ask about anika and servant says she is in kitchen
Shivay goes and holds anikas hand…….
Anika: kya hua…..
Shivay: who asked to u do this…..u are still weak….and where are the servants.
Anika: shivay plz plz stop it…..ansh muje pooch raha tha isliye..sirf milk shake bananarahi hooo……….thats all….
By then omru isha,sowmy come ther.
Shivay: kaha hai therea ladla….
Anika signs him to see some whre……….
Its the open cupboard which is compact…..wher ansh sits inside comfortably…and with the rubik cube…he turns to see every one and rolls his blue eyes…he first frowns his eys and seeing them…he then smile…….looking at them……
Anika: ansh utt thera choco milk ready hogay………
Ansh comes out and takes the sipper…..he see shivay and goes to him…and urges to lift him….and shivay lifts him…and as he sits comfortably….and pulls oms hair….. ansh smile.s……………..
Its night…….
Anika goes to guest room and searches for some thing……..
Shivay: are u searching for this diary…
Anika: how u got this……iska matlab..u read fully….are u not ashamed to reads others personal things…..lgive to me…give
Shivay: keeps it up..and and anika tries to get…..where shivay holds her around her waist…and says sorry………….
She too holds him and says….aj se no sorry….. he starts k**sing and it about the chance of lip…..they come close…..and about have a lock…………..
“mumma app yahah ho…………..”
They break the hug…and see ansh standing with his toy………..
Ansh goes and drags shivay away out…anika follows him….
Ansh reaches pinkys room………….
Ansh: (he leaves shivay there……) app apne mama ke pass soyie(u sleep with ur mother)…aur mein meri mama ke pass souvungi( i will sleep with my mother) as he says this he drags anika to wards out……
Shivay sees dadi and pinky laughing at his condition….and shivay tries hard to hide is blush……….and anika who looks back shivay all the way going with ansh…also blushes…………
After while anika see shivay leaning in the door………….looking at her and sleeping ansh…………………the smile looking at each other…………………

SO GUYS ITS NOT THE MERE ENDING BUT THE START……………..
I THANK EVERY ONE FOR SUPPORTING ME…AS I SAID IT WAS LONG I TRIED TO MAKE IT SHORT BUT COULD NOT DO IT…….AND PLS GIVE UR SUPPORT TO EVERY FF WRITER BY COMMENTING…AND SILENT READERS IF ANY PLS PLS……COMMENT….IF U THINK I HURT THROUGH MY FF ..SORRY AS IT DIDNT HAVE ANY MOTIVE BEHIND IT …..THANK YOU TELLY UPDATES….THANK YOU READERS……………………………….
BYE EVERY ONE……WISHING EVRY ONE A SUCESSES IN THIER LIFE…….
REGARDS
PRAGYA &SHAMA

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43 Comments
  1. Lijince

    Hi Pragya and Shama…..I have been a silent reader of your FF….I had not read the first one….not fully….only some of the last episodes….but I was impressed with what I read…so I made it a point to read JTHJ…..and your writing has inspired me so much…..that I also started writing a FF Ek Duje Ke Liye…..

    Your storyline is superb….I mean incorporating all elements of love, brotherhood, cheat, forgiveness…..truly inspiring…..keep it up!!

    I wish you come back with another FF soon….maybe on another serial….but do come back!! Love you guys…. <3 <3 <3 :* :* :*

  2. it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing
    i m really really gonna miss it yaar
    i m a silent reader
    but today i was moved to comment
    it was too too amazing
    especially that
    ‘aap apni mumma k paas soo, mai apni mumma k sath sounga’
    great hehehehe
    i just loved it yaar
    will miss u alot
    thanks for this
    thanks for ansh
    thanks for u guys being there
    love u
    take care
    have a great life ahead 🙂 🙂

  3. Tulasi

    Hiii diiiii…i couldnt comment as i was really busy…… luvd it completely……. i thnk its a long jrney from oh jana to jab tak hain jaan… n i luvd each n evry epi frm d strtng n its really a big thng to write sumthng of nearly abt 100 epi…… ur oh jaana was d first ff i strtd readng wen i initially entered into tu n its a reason for me to write …i always used to wait to read ur epi….. n i really luv those moments btw shivika in d strtng of oh jaana…like how tgeir luv blossomed n later on u made it a dhamakedhar ….. n jab tak hain jaan was really fantastic…… d way u showed d emotions of a girl being away n showng hatred buryng her immense luv deep inside strygglng all d way is amazng n extraordinary……….
    Luv u…..take care

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