jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 23)

Hello every one…………sorry for the delayed posting …actually i had my exams so could not post………………really i apologise from all u all……sorry……………………………
So no more boring going straight to wards episode….
Jab thak hai jaan………………..
Till now
Anika comes and resides in oberoi mansion, and shivay gets happier…riddima returns with some planning…anika tries to sort of the problem……….
Episode starts

Its night
Anika gives everything to shivay and says some instructions to shivay…and shivay ask her how did she knew that he will come…..
Anika looks up to see shivay….she gives a simple smile and leaves……shviay holds anika s hands…
Shivay: anika …..cant u reply to my questions……
Anika takes his hands and says i have work……..
She sees ansh coming inside….
Anika:: ansh ajj thu papa ke saath soiyega……and i dont want any complaint….
Ansh looks at him(shivay)..he reminces of slap..he goes and hugs anika and nods no…..shivay sees this with sad face…..
Anika separates him from her and says no more excuses u are gonna sleep with ur papa…
Anika: i thought u will sleep in pool room ……she trickily makes him accept….she leave…….
Shviay looks ansh standing……he forwards his hands to lift him….
Ansh with his car tiger….frownes his forehead to see his father….he makes funny faces and says…i will go my self………he turns his car and moves…..
Shivay sees him with smile…(in mind) ek tham anika jaisea…………..he smiles remincing of their meeting,……
After a while…
Shviay goes to dadi s room and have good chat…..
By then…ansh goes to shivays room peeps inside…..he sees arushi there……
Ansh: chuadail aunty…………….
Ansh comes out silently and leaves the car…………he starts wandering all through the hall… he sees pinky room…he smiles looking at her….he peeps into their room…..and goes and hides beneath the bed……
Pinky s room
Pinky brushes her hair…and she taunts about anika coming…shakthi ask her to sleep…..she comes and lies in the bed….
Shakthi sits with his lap top and night lamp is on…………ansh comes out….and sees pinky sleeping with sleeping band around the eyes… he sees shakthi working seriously in laptop

He reminces of her scolding him all the while……………He goes to the dressing table…and takes some cream ….and…and a make up brush…….
He goes towards her……..she turns to wards him and sleep …….he takes the brush and makes it flow in to ears…pinky starts smiling and gets disturbed…..she sleeps again….ansh again takes the brush and puts the cream into her cheek…..she doesn’t respond…..again into ears….
Pinky ask shakthi to keep quiet as he is a father of married mann…..
Shakthi who was busy with laptop…looks shocking with pinkys words and says….pinky u gone mad……just sleep………..

Ansh keeps the brush this time in her lips…..as the cream goes pinky moves the lips and cream goes in…..she licks the cream..and accidently bits the brush………ansh tries to take the brush out of her mouth….but pinky held this tight………………over which cream to falls on her face ……and box falls in floor………..
Sound comes and ansh goes and hides……
Shakthi turn with the noise….and sees pinky……………………
Shakthi: shouts pinkyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy(whole mansion wakes up)
..every one come there ….and see pinky
Pinky with cream which is of red colour split all over the ears and face…and her biting her brush…………………..
Shock being transformed into a huge laughter…tej who starts tthis….ask pinky….
Tej: pinky ..itna buki hei kay…..thu cream ke saath brush bi kajavogi …..
Pinky takes out the brush….and says shakthi ji u did this know…..
Shathi: no ..i am working on laptop…i dint ….i know u try mad stuff…but this is not fare…pinky….is ur health is ok…..
Arushi: aunty apki demak teak hai na……
Pinky see her like burning……….
Shivay who was all the while quite…ask about her health….pinky blames it to be done by some one…..every one have the arguement….and shivay suddenly says…..its done by booth……
Oberoi family see him strange……with question mark in his face…………….
Shivay: ya its done by booth and booth is below the bed……very hungry……..and with in fiew minutes its gona eat kids……
Hearing this ansh comes out running and says booth..booth…………..he starts urging shivay to take him in his hands..and holds him quite tightly……..
Pinky: so u did this to me…..i wont leave….she comes down ……of the bed….
Rudra who comes down by then………and was in half sleep sees pinky ………..rudra shouts mama.. ..booth……….and starts running…………..every one see Rudra ….tej starts laughing again……………

Its night………………….in bedtime

Ansh ask shivay to come soon ….
Shivay: kya hua
Ansh: varna wo chudail aunty ajayegi….
Shviay: kaun chaudail
Ansh: wo….(by then arrushi comes to wards the pool…) ….mama ne kaha ki wo chudail hai…aur muje kaa jayegi…
As he says he lleans himself against shivays chest …and holds his toy…..shivay sees him….with a smile…he ask about his mama and chudail…
Ansh: wo (arushi) apiki gum hai kiya……mama ne kaha…ki wo chudail aunty apke saath gum ki thara chipki hui ha……aur mama bola ki woe k din us chudail ki class lega…………..
He sleeps eventually….

Its late night……

Anika enter the om
She goes into shivays room to check ansh…she sees ansh sleeping over shivay….shivay ‘s hands holding him close…she smiles and leaves….
She gets refreshened her self…and comes to kitchen….she searches in refrigerator….and takes the milk…………
“u sit here i will make this for u”
Anika: no i can………
Shviay holds her and makes her stand side….he starts heating the milk….
Anika: u didnt sleep yet…
Shivay: u didnt come yet…..
They see each other………….
He gives her the milk…..she takes it with a smile…she ask him to sleep….
Shivay: i need to speak…actually we need to speak….
Anika: no mr oberoi…..we dont have any thing to speak………..
Shivay : no we have a lot….we need to sort out….i know u are here for Ishana….but but……

He drags her towards him…they stay close…and entangled with each other….shivay holding her around her waist….and looking at her.eyes….as she keep on breaking the contact…..she tries to relive herself from him…
Shivay takes the hair in face..and says: koshis math kar,…mein thume nahi chodne vale hoon….u didnt answer me…..
By then they hear some noise….and anika gets tensed…..shviay drags her behind a pillar…..rudra comes down with water jug…………..(and speak to himself)
Anika gets relief seeing Rudra and about to call…….shivay closes her mouth and signs her to be quite….they see each other..with inhaling eachother s breath…anika could sense a strings of electric shock which passes into her nervous now and then…..she sees Rudra leaving …..shivay takes out his hands from her lips…..they both see each other…………….she see his hold getting stronger now…and

He comes closer…she starts taking her breath…more faster and with more anxieties….he comes closer…she see him….and turns the other side……………where…shivay k*****s her in cheek……she see him with a shock. And shy………..
And starts avoiding the eye contact……………………
Rudra leaves to his room…..shivay leaves her……anika is about to leave….where shivay says: mera jawab muje milgaya………….he smile………
Anika sees him with breath taking face……………………………
Shvivay leaves the place…………..
After a while…………

Anika is seen standing with the milk in her hands……she sees moon and reminces of shivay ……..she see some one leaving with the hood……….anika tries to follow him…..but he leaves the om clever ly………anika comes back and sees the bracelet down….she takes it………………..
Anika( to her self) this is belongs to…………….i need to check………….
Its morning……
Ansh shouts in wash room…with a towel …he runs all over…………..
Anika: ok …i will get ur tiger ….god….this much stubbones…….
he jumbs from the bath tub….and making more mess……..
anika come out and goes to shviay room….she waited to knock…but she just opened the door with in a intimation……………
anika sees shivay and says sorry…………………………
she see shivay holding arushi around her..and arushi holding him close and tightly…………….shvivay leaves arushi slowly and ask anika for her presese…….
arushi taunts her….and says about intimation before entering to others room…………….

anika sees shviay….and says…wo ansh ki car…and toy……
shvivay see the condition of the room…where dress and books are messed up in the floor…and anika to sees this …and arushi standing close to shivay…………….holding his shoulder……with a much more grip…………shviay tries to relive from this…….she takes the toy and about to leave…..
arushi: anika………….,,,anika turns to see
arushi: jab agle bhar ayenge na….door ko knock karna math bulna……………………..
anika sees shivay…………………they both reminces of shivay her not to knock the same door here after…as this room belongs to her……………………………….
anika leaves with plain face…………..shivay sees arushi……………arushi smile innocentlty…………………….

pre cap
Ishana and anika see riddhima hugging some one……………………………….arushi claims anika as a single mother…and taunts ansh about his fathers name………………….
Om defends anika…….shivay sees anika crying…………………………………………….

Hello every one….sorry for the late reply……and yesterday i completed my exams…………………………..
@ readers : thanks for the response at the fictional character ansh…………as u love him…he to loves u a lot………………………thank you………
@ readers: no need to ask sorry….as none of ur comments hurts us…..u guys are the only energy that we get ……so ur suggestions extract the better from us …..so dont ask sorry…….and there is no negative comments at all……as every thing is positive………………..
@ as far as characters……arushi and riddima are the last charater s of jabthak hai jaaa……………………so no more confusions…………………………….
@ i wont drag…as it gona complete in 4 or 5 episodes….its not that every leading lady should forgive and accept the hero…just like that……its about feelings..so it took time…………so will not drag any more…………………so dont get sad…………..
@ reader
So thanks for commenting and plz do encourage us with ur comments…………………………
Thank you
Regards
Maya……………………………………….

28 comments

  1. Nithu

    Nithu

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    I was dying to read this part..di…its sad ur ending..it..but pls come with the seq..of jthj..if possible…loved it di…today pinsh(pinky+ansh) scenes were awsm….laughed soo much….rudy tho…ansh se bhi chota baccha hein….loved it di…u no di whnevr i read ua ff imagine it like a movie….but i xant see ansh face in that

  2. Mukta

    Mukta

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    So finally the most awaited ff is here!!!!! I understand u must be busy in some work but plz understand my situation & try to post ur ff regularly😊
    Coming to the today’s update, it was just awesome!!!!!! Amazing as usual👌👌👍👍

  3. Lalli

    Wow 😲 Awesome dear u have a great skills to write such a ff and the way shivay and anika realizes their love and more bit jealousy and our cute and the booth drama was soo funny 😁 and exciting precap please update soon

  4. Hidden Sunshine

    Thank god !! i vs dyin 2 read dis
    Aww i felt so happy readin it ..cant say how much …epi full of my cutie ansh😍 scence n shivika … ansh doin al dat cute badmashi
    tellin shivaay wat annika feels abt arushi (mama ki chori/jealousy pakdi gai😂) … shivika kitchen scene ‘app abi tak soye nai’ ‘tum abi thak ayi nai ‘ (concern b takar ka)..
    Precap Dis arushi is such a ‘Tia’ 😒 ..annika left ansh with shivaay ..so that ansh can patch up with him isn’t it?😉 …BUT y did shivaay slap ansh???

    Des exams r da sickest things 2 happen in a students life isn’t it ..mine’s gonna start in a week😭 ..so i can understand …good luck fr da results dr👍

  5. Hrishi03

    Hrishi03

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    Wow grt update after long…..😊n as usual waiting for your next update😊😊n at d end will anika leave shivay n go😯😊😊any thing frm end will b grt……but hoping fr positive end😊😊😊😊

  6. Adhya

    Thank God..ur back….I’m dying for ur ff
    .dear ….Awesome episode Shivaays and Ansh ‘s scenes were awesome….want some more scenes too…and pinky and Ansh scene is very funny…haha… Keep Rocking dear…..love u loads

  7. Shalini

    Di i am a silent reader but i had read each and every episode of yours. I loved it. You are just awesome di. I am still thinking from the frst episode that what had happened between shiviika? but can’t get my answer.

  8. Shivika22kapoor

    Shivika22kapoor

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    Finally you upload this part I was dying to read it di.
    The epi was super duper awesome I loved it to the core ansh’s naughtiness and Shivaay’s way of catching him was super cute.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
    Pls update the next part super sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon pls 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

  9. Fama

    Fama

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    I was eagerly waiting for this part and I didn’t regret for waiting it was really awesome it was really funny to read Rudra’s scared reaction.

  10. Akansha

    Akansha

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    Been a silent reader totally loved it…. Loved every single episode n eagerly waiting fr d next episode… Its awesome

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