jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 2)

Episode 2
Hello every one thanks for the support which u were providing all through these day love u all….and silent readers plz do comment……..
Till now
Its the introduction about shivay and arpita….and ansh……..
Jab thak hai jaan starts …

In new York…..arpitas residence
kelash enters the room
Kelash: how long u are going to do this arpita….
Arpita: jab thak me jinda hoon tab thak…
Kelash: this not the way . since 5 years u are doing ur own barsi…its not done….
Arpita: its not my barsi bhai its anikas…. yes anika …the girl who dreamt about a decent life…who wanted to live with her brother in a peace….who got held with the high class people….who fell in love with a guy who hates her the most…the girl who thought his love is pure and true……the girl still have his belonging in the form of ansh….who still finds her love in her son…the girl who cant fight back….the girl who lost due to koon kandhan..the girl took everything on her to make her sister live happy………..
Kelash: arpita stop …if u are doing this what will u get….i know its not easy to forget any thing but u need to….
Arpita: this day the worlds unlucky girl died and got a new avatar and name…arpita….yes anika turned to arpita….and bhai i am not doing this to forget anything..but to remember every single thing happened in my life….to grow ansh without the shadow of the past…….
Kelash: plz arpita …its 5 years move on….and i want you to take the next step….she turns to look at him….kelash says sorry if i intruded more
Arpita: bhai u have all rights to ask any thing… after all i am in ur sister s disguise…….
Kelash sees arpita s photo hanging on the wall . he says no my arpita is you…and ur are my family
Nikitha comes and says mr alluwalia is on line…
Arpita leaves for attending the call
Kelash: i wish u move on in ur life….ur age is too young to give this qurbani……. i dont know who is going change ur life…..and whose name is written in ur destiny…….

Scene shift India

Oberoi mansion
Dadi : billu…….shi shivay singh oberoi ko phone kar kkar inform kartho ki pooja hogaye…….
She leaves..
Omkara: dadi why are you doing this you know shivay is possessive about you …how long will you punish shivay
Rudra: yes dadi …this 5 years you didnt even utterd a word to bhaiyya….he tried a lot to speak to you but u didnt respond. I know bhaiyya did wrong but ….
Dadi: stop it Rudra….he didnt do any thing wrong…..but he proved me wrong….he proved my parvarish wrong by throwing my bahu out of his life.. i thought one day he will understand but everything wnt in vein…..he didnt change and the outcome meri bahu…meri anika is dhuniya se chaligaye…… dadi sees Ishana and say one girl lost her sister…a couple lost their daughter for the second time….and oberoi mansion lost its badi bahu…
But nothing affects billu …sorry shivay …shivay singh oberoi…..oberoi empire ki malkin….the one who could not safe gaurd his life what will he do to this empire
I wont speak to him till my death…i pray to die early….omru hug dadi and ask not to say this again….ishana wipes her tears seeing this……..

Scene shift to office…
Shivay reach his cabin and starts working with his laptop…
Sara enters with the tray of break fast…
Shivay look up to see her
Sara: sir dadi ne kaha pooja katham hogaya…so ur break fast….
Shivay : ( fold the laptop with anger) should i say every time that i dont eat on this particular day….just stay away dont show ur face again ….
Krithika comes and ask shivay to be calm….
shivay :..plz leave krithika…..i want silence today…cancel the meeting …..
krithika comes out (in mind) i dont know wats going on …i want shivay to come out of his past…kash mein anika se mil pathi
Shivay see in the wall…were newspaper sheet moves with the rythm of wind….
“ a girl in mid 25 and a kid of 10 years died in the accident .on probing the girl’s name was anika who was a small time chaterer and the kid who was also handi kapped was sahil”
News paper was dated 5 years before.
Shivay closes his eyes for a minute and opens the laptop to concentrate on the work
Krithika thinks of shivay and gives a deep breath…i will change you shivay…

Scene shift to new York
Anika attends the call: i know what i am doing is for ansh and plz u dont spoil my kid…
By then ansh comes with car and says mama i need to speak …but arpita ask him to stay out as it is a meeting… ansh says i wanna speak to uncle….arpita says no….
Where ansh throws the car and makes his finger flows through the hair…and stare arpita
The person on the phone: arpita i am seeing some one else s attitude in him….exactly him……, but of 4 years…..u know he too does the same thing…
Arpita: stop it vinay, i already said i dont wanna hear about any one even as a comparision….
Vinay: anika….ok ok arpita how long u will run out the truth behind ansh surname
Arpita: u called me to bluff this to me or any thing else…
Vinay: cool yaar…ok ur attending the Mumbai meeting know…because i too have a work and i will join u there….and all the best for ur new venture ..that too in india….
Arpita : ya i am leaving to india…but ansh…i dont know….
By then ansh comes with a bat to break the labtop …vinay who was in video confrencin g with arpita shouts plz dont do this …….arpita turns to see ansh
And reminces of her breaking the windscreen of a car with bat….
Viany and ansh speak for a while and ansh leaves to play.
Vinay: its better u bring him with u other wise you wont have roof upon u if he gets angry….arpita smile hearing this…
Yes i am going to….

Scene shift

Oberoi mansions’s In kitchen
Shivay prepares the pizza…ishana comes and about to leave…shivay ask her to stay….
Om and rumya reach there….rudra ask to spin the pizza shivay does….and he starts is cooking

In new york
Arpitas residence
Anika and kelash stay with the plate.
Chef in the kitchen stands on the bench and garnish the pizza with spices and coriander….he takes it in the plate…with greater difficulty he gets down and takes the pizza ….his chef cap falls and closes his face and he crys out mama…arpita runs to kitchen and starts laughing seeing ansh with his face fully covered with the chefs cap and pizza on one hand and culinary apron which is longer than him almost sweeping the floor…..
She takes the cap and ansh smiles at her…she hugs him and kisses him on the forehead….ansh says mama plz i am not kid now….plz its better u stay away than doing this….
Arpita: gets angry and shout s zyada tadi math dekana…me theri ma hoon ….jab rath ko thu muje bulayegi na meh nahi avungi…..and leaves ….
Kehlash smiles seeing them…….its not anika…it someone else ..its him……i need to meet him
its morning….

shivay gets ready in room……
he comes out with his wet hair and wearing a bathrobe…..he see one photo and says dont you feel ashamed to see me like this…….he turns the photo… he dries his hair….puts his suit almost black….sets his hair…does his signature step….he turns the photo…. ask how am i looking now……
he comes out …and goes to kitchen. Ishana comes with the his coffee….he takes the mug and says good morning….she replies good morning jiju…shivay see her with anger…ishana holds her ear and says good morning bhaiyya…. shivay smiles….om comes and leaves silently seeing Ishana there……
Ishana puts sad face…shivay : dont worry every thing will be all right…….and om will accept soon…..he leaves…
Ishana: bhaiyya
Shivay turns
Ishana…app teek tho ho na….
Shivay smiles….and leaves
Ishana: (in her mind) i knew u miss anika didi more but u are not showing ….u still pretend to act as u hate her…..by not attending her basrsi…….but the fact his u can see her in photo….i know it was my mistake…she took everything with her.. she took my blame ….dadis love.. and…and…ur zindagi….
U also made it clear that this oberoi mansion doesn’t have her photo……….and her things…….
Its all because of me……….
Sowmya comes and sees Ishana lost in thoughts….she holds ishanas hands and say….every thing will be fine one day……

Scene shift to new York
Ansh comes out of the washroom with wet hair and towel…arpita comes close to dry his hair….
Ansh: mama u go i will do…i have grown up…u go …and go and hide himself behind the curtain
Arpita: mein theri mama hoon …come soon we need to leave earlier…come…..
Ansh: u go …..gooooooooooooo..he shouts
Arpita: ek tham wo jaisa…vahi tadi vahi ego…i leaving but come soon……..
Ansh gets his hair dried and wears a black suit…he looks all sides and set his hair…..
He comes out…….
Arpita and kelash turns to se him…..ansh stand in front of him and does signature step……..arpita see this awestruck….and hides her tears….she hugs him and says ek tham carbon copy……
Ansh: mom its embarrassing….
Arpita ok lets go…… they leave for the success party of their company…………kelash gives a slide regarding the new venture of planners and organizers which they are gona start in india……..
He says till now we have done through the mediaters…and not its our own personal…………
Arpita thanks every one……..
Vinay comes and compliments arpita…they decide to take ansh with them……….

Its been a week
oberoi mansion
krithika comes and greets every one…..pinky and janavi speak about Rudra and sowmya s marriage……rudra gets shy and about to leave…krithika says now a days men are feeling more shy…and our ruddie tho shy ki dhukan bangaya………..
pinky says kash i also do my billus shaddi……..
janavi: yes we need to think about shivays marriage……and i dont know whether shivay will accept are not…..still he his in the same mode…..and after that accident he was broken fully
pinky: what accident jetani ji.. …nothing happened……..and the road sided girl was not my bahu…..even shivay said that she is not his wife….then what….do we have any evidence regarding the marriage…..on that day shivay in person took away everything and burnt………….
we do barsi because mummiji chathi hai that all…that too the photo is only left as mummy ji has it……..and shivay dont even attend the barsi also……… because she is not in his mind or heart……
as pinky says this dadi enter and every one keeps silence…..krithika goes and holds dadi………pinky says i wish krithika comes has my bahu………….
krithika who is hearing this gets shy……..

precap
anika lands in the India….. ansh shouts spaghetti …………dadi gets hurt……..

thanks every one for your comments ….i hope u are enjoying the current track
regards maya

19 comments

  1. Nandini

    Carbon copy thing was so cute. I just loved it. Awesome. Maya post next soon can’t wait to see shivika meet and ansh meeting shivay. And by the way anikas face is hers only right? And wat abt sahil?

  2. sunithi

    i used to b a silent reader but now am commenting for same ff for more than one time bcoz track is simply awsm

  3. Majeda begum

    Hi maya I have a huge request only if u have time. Please update regularly if possible. – SILENT READER. BUT I can’t help but comment. Your ff is amazing

  4. Tulasi

    |Registered Member

    Its really awesummm diii…….i luvd anika as arpita…she took a crct decision …luvd her charac a lotttttt……..suprbbbb……

  5. Hidden Sunshine

    Nyc epi Maya.. e1 da 1st epi vs relly gud …luvd da part vr ansh behaves exactly lyk SSO … hope dey meet each otr soon …but vr is sahil ? N i am not gettin da direct links 2 ur ff …Can u R any1 from da readers suggest me by what name i shud search ( i used ishqbaaz jab thak hai jaan ff by maya epi 2 ..it juz showed da link 2 epi 1 …dn i searchd among al da ff in IB TU page n got da 2nd epi)

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