jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 11)

Hello every one….thanks for the support…i dont know how to say but i am in cloud nine………..thank a lot for every one who is supporting me…..u guys are giving the energy which is driving me to go ahead……………………
Till now
Rudra s engagement gets over……arpita gets ready to leave india……kelash gets in accident……………………………………..

Episode 11
Shivay goes to his room and shuts his door…….omru see him who was sitting with his lap top…..
Omru: patha nahi abb kya hoga…wo baccha bi chalagaya………..
Pinky comes there…
Pinky: abb shaddi hoga….
Omru face her
Pinky: y are u staring ….i am saying the truth …yes shivay ki shaddi….krithika se hoga….shivay ko isse accept karne hai…….
Dadi: pinky
Pinky: mummyji…dont interfere in betweens moms and sons…..
Dadi leaves

Pinky : says yeh shaddi zarur hogi …..
Every one see her…………..
Shivay in his room stare at the laptop ..he tries to do some thing but his full concentration was in todays incident…..
Omru come and pats him….
Omru : kya ansh ki bare me soch rahi ho kya……….bhayyia….
Shivay: mmm somm wohi…….pizza mein pudina…….sach kahu jab bi wo mere satth hothe na …muje ek ensaass hotha hai ki mein ne kuch kaya hi nai……………..
Shivay sees them with pain in his eyes….he smiles all the while……….
By then dadi shouts calling shivay…………….
Every one assemble
Om says some thing….and omru Ishana dadi and shivay leave to hospital………………..
Scene shift to hospital
Kelash in icu
Arita ask his condition……….
Doctor says he his out of dadnger but he needs hospitalization for next week…………….vinay to comes there and holds arpita…..
Vinay : u be here i wll arrange for the money…vinay leaves….
Arpita sees kelash and thinks about ansh…..
Nikitha says ansh is in lobby of the hospital…………
Arpita shouts how can u leave a four year old kid alone……nikitha about to say some thing…but arpita leaves the area by then……………..
Scene shift to lobby…(its one corner end of the hospital……)….
Ansh starts playing with the toy and was very happy with that….
Arpita comes calling out ansh……….
Ansh who was busy with toy replies back saying mamma mein yaha hoon……
Arpita comes and sees him….her concentration goes towards the toy which he his playing with…
Arpita: (she bends and holds ansh) kisne diya hey toy….i said know not to get anything from strangers….how come u are not listening to me…..patha nahi mein thume kaise samballlungi…..jab dheko kisi na kisi raita pehlra ha hai……theri vajasa………………aur thu yaha akeli kya kar rahi ho….bol kisne deya hai toy….
Ansh plays with it..
Ansh: mama mein bola that wo obadoi…..wo dadi walla uncle….
Arptita gets tensed and closes her eyes for a second…..: mein thume bola na thu wah nahi jayyegi……
Ansh looks up to see her with sad face……
Arpita: ansh thu mama ki bath nai manegi…….mein ne kaha na thu ajj ki baath wunki bareme nahi baath karengi……..samji………….
Ansh looks up to see some one……
Arpita then senses the peoples around……………
She looks at them..and gets back……and holds ansh tighly towards her………………
Scene shift reception
Vinay finishes the initial formalities and ask about arpita….nikitha says she went to see ansh in looby………..
Vinay ask nikitha to stay with kelash and head towards lobby
He sees arpita standing there with ansh…..
He calls out arpita…but she doesn’t respond…
He comes close and tunrns arpita towards him….
Vinay: arpita kya hua…..i was calling from far….and u are not responding…..
He sees arpita and holds her with shoulder….he jerks her…..
Vinay: kya hua…..

Ansh : shouts obdoi…..obdoi…..
Vinay sees ansh looks towards the people………
Vinay: shivay….as he says he gallops the voice….
Vinay sees shivay and other standing there….shivay stares at arpita…………
Shivay: han mein…..kya hua vinay….
Arpita stands in shock and vinay find s her trembling….ansh sees arpita
Ansh: mama yeh hi kaddos uncle. Hai…..hei noodles uncle….. …he keeps on saying this……..nikitha comes there…………
Nikitha: mam….
Arpita turns to see nikitha…….
Nikitha sees shivay and greets him………turns towards arpita…………
Nikitha: mam ….he his mr shivay singh oberoi…… our new client……she turns towards shivay and says mr oberoi u asked for the master mind behin ur party …she is arpita mam………
Arpita and shivay see each other.. and arpita swallows saliva……
Nikata see them…..
Arpita: nikitha. Ansh ko there saath le jaho……
Nikitha turns…..arptita turns ansh neetu ke saath jao…………………………………………

Ansh as he goes turns towards shivay and smile…….and bits bye……
Arpita holds vinays hand tightly and takes the deep breath….and she lifts her head starts smiling at shivay and says……nice to meet you mr…..any ways mr oberoi….. i am very glad to see u …….actually i feel much blessed as i am seeing the countries most eligilble bachelor.. and business tycoon here…… i hope u had are statisfied with the arrangement…..she gives good smile…………………..
Shivay still starting at her…notices her every single movement………..
Dadi comes forward and about to hold arpitas hand…..
She says anika………

Arpita: i am sorry…..mere nam arpita hai….anika nahi….. i think u are mistaken…….she sees Ishana and omru…………
She continues…any way i need to go urgently so sorry phir kabi milthe thae hai….so excuse me…….
She turns and leaves holding vinays hand tightly…..and leaves..
Omru calls out shivay…..and shivay see his anika as she leave with vinay……….
Shivay sits with jerk omru shakes shivay …….shivay who was all the way staring at anika turns to see them……and says anika…..anika …….meri anika zinda hai…..wo wo…ansh …..ansh …mera beta…..mera ansh……..tears blast out of his eyes…… om …om ..thume patha wo a …ansh mera beta hai……..omru holds him……ishana holds dadi…….as they both cry……………..
Scene shift to kelash room
Arpita who holds vinay till the room as she enter she runs to wards the seater and starts crying heavily………vinay sees her…..
After few minutes of silence…..vinay hold her…..

Arpita: muje nahi patha tha yeh sab itna jaldi hoga……mein mein abb kya karungi…..vinay muje dhar dhar lagraha hai…..wune patha chalgaya ki mein zinda hoon….. her breath raises as she says
Vinay: arpita shanth ho ja…..plz …wo sirf shivay hai…hoi rakshasks nahi ahi….kyun dhar hai hai……
Arpita: nahi…muje muje …muje……ny jana hai…muje jalthi jana hai…varna…..mein …Toot javungi……nahi muje she gets up and goes to kelash and about to sake him….
Vinay rushes and holds arpita
Vinay: have u gone mad ….he his still in sedtion…..god…..wo sirf shivay hai …koi rakshak nai hai……ki thu itna dhar rahi ho……
Arpita sees him and breaks down again…

Vinay: thume yath hai 5 saal phele ham kaise mile the…..arpita looks on….tab bi mein there sath the aura bb bi rahuga…….jo bi there faisla hai….usi ki bi jalunga….ok… aur ek bath… u said u changed a lot where was the arpita who born 5 years back….u made every minute by urself how can u fell like this……go and show them that u are stronger…..if u are gona hide and run like this …..then u are accepting by urself that u areweaker……if u wanna fail then cry………
Arpita sees him……..vinay sees her and says…….thu ghar ja aur rest kar……
Arpita looks…
Arpita sees kelash and says ok i need some time i cant do any thing in this rage….i am leaving …..she gets her sunglasses………..and comes out ….she scans the whole veranda…..she sees oberoi standing…..vinay comes out and they both see each other……….

Shivay who was standing in corner leaning looks forward……. arpita see him…..
She takes the deep breath and walks around ……
Ishana comes and calls out …didi and hugs arpita….dadi to comes close…….
Arpita tries to control and breaks the hug and says sorry u were mistaken…..i am arpita….i dont …… know y u are getting confused….
Rudra..: anika didi…kyn app yaha hothe huye bi muje nahi mila….kyn didi…….
Arpita: u are Rudra sing oberoi …..oh …congratulations…..but orry u are mistaken…..any way nice meeting u guys ….bye……
She looks strainght and pass every one……omru and dadi Ishana see her…..
Shivay still staring……
She see shivay standing and stars walking….
Her heart beat increases and so as shivays……
She starts crossing shivay ……she crossed…….
Shivay: rooko….
Arpita stops …..and stands still she turns to see him…………………
Shivay takes the bracelet (its anika s which was left which shivay long back) shows that….
Shivay: yeh apaka hai …i fell down……an ani..anika………..

Arpita sees the bracelet and shivay…..she remeinces of their moment …..
She comes to the arpita avatar….
Arpita: with a smile…..no mr oberoi… mera nam anika nahi hai……..arpita……and one more thing …it doesn’t belong to mein ista ki cheap chese pasand nahi hai…….aur hei apko bi suit nahi kartha hai…so better throw it ……
Thanks u mr oberoi ……
Lets move vinay……………
She leaves smiriking………..shivay looks on………………………….
Episode ends…

Precap
Shivay drags anika to the corner and says….thu muje bag nahi pavogi anika….
They both turns to see ansh looking at them………

Hello every one sorry i think its quite long….but pls bare with me….i could cut….any thing….so sorry again…
Thanks for commenting guys….and to those silent reader thanks for reading
Regards
maya

41 comments

  1. Tulasi

    |Registered Member

    Omgggg….dhamakedharr……luvd it to d core di ……whole epi played before my eyes all d while ……fantastic…fabulous…..marvelous…suprb..awesummmm…….lovely…emotional……….n wat not to say…i have to find words……hw culd u write sooo elegantly di??? I ll always get immersed in d whole story……i recently got a comment tht if u really straight away touch d readers heart …it means u got succeed as a writer n in my case u did it…….
    I m out of words…..u made me cry diii….
    Arpithas charac is really fab….a girls emotions who had gone through d most worst moments wich made her strng but d only thng wich makes her weak is her luv……n d way she tried to make her calm wen she saw her luv aftr 5 yrs n turning out to be an unknown person was extraordinarly described….
    Shivaays feelngs r really difficult to express….shock happieeeee to find his luv zindaa n his son ….lovelyyy……
    A standng ovation to u again….😍😍😍😍

  2. Mukta

    |Registered Member

    waohhhh….. Shivika met finally….. but their meeting was not so special…. I loved Anika’s attitude…. awesome Maya di n Pragya di!!!!!!

  3. Hrishi03

    |Registered Member

    Hi really awesome….☺😊waiting for tis….n waiting for ur nxt update….n today s Sunday if can update d nxt pls………😉

  4. sabhya

    Totally in love with your ff…finally they met…❤ I don’t comment though very often..i am silent reader of your ff…keep going …great job you are doing..make it more spicy with shivika romance in coming episodes…💕

  5. Medha29

    Such an interesting track really enjoyed the episode….
    Waiting for the next episode very eagerly
    🙏 🙏 🙏 plz plz plz update the next episode as soon as possible

  6. Sat

    |Registered Member

    Oh my god Maya di, it was really superb,
    I just loved it to the core
    And ha was sorry for not commenting on your previous episodes.
    Please forgive me if you can
    I am so much busy, plz plz forgive me
    And coming to the episode
    I loved each and every part of it
    Firstly when annika n fact when arpita sees shivaay, that part, I was really awestruck and it completely filled my heart with suspense
    And when shivaay just stares at his annika, that scene was so emotional
    And when annika says she is not annika, but she is arpita, that scene was bindass, really
    And the precap was superb. I am waiting for it, hope arpita admits that she is annika soon. Just waiting for it and their romance, I am sure it is going to start from tomorrow I mean the next epi
    You are so great Maya di
    And pragya di, please read my ff and comment please
    And please update the next epi ASAP

  7. Ishqkum

    |Registered Member

    Wat can tell I am unable to express in words .wat can I tell it is awesome ,super ,fantastic, lovely, rocking,emotional, touchy I don’t have words seriously it mad me cry I loved I am becoming crazy to this story line .plz plz update next as soon as possible dr

  8. Nansshivika

    |Registered Member

    Wow finally what a blast!!!!! I was so waiting .this one is like blast of all emotions . can’t say anything now. Every scene makes me feel the picture in front of my eyes so good ….. Waiting for next

  9. Priyanka_22

    |Registered Member

    God… I felt goosebumps for while..
    Arpita is back wid a bang 😀 loved her attitude
    amazin pragya n awsum precap
    update soon 😀

  10. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Its fantastic marvaleous…amazing lovely the best episode…till now diiiiii…….u told its long epi..di if u evn write 100 pages i feel its soo short….the way u write is amazing…u made my day di…..love it to the core of my heart…shivaye crying for anika and ansh…anika in arpitha avtar…..she is not only herself and shivaye she is also hurting all her fans…..vinay is the best frnd on earth….love the way he suport arpitha di…omg dint xpt this sudden meeting…in love with ua ff completly di…🤗😘😍😍😘😘

  11. Razna

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    Oo pragya diii ….what an episode…..really i didnt read oh jaana. So i dont know why thwy separated ….so anobody plzz help mee…i am waiting for tommorroww…plz update fastlyyyy

  12. safaq

    don’t be sry for long update …..everyone likes long update……..u r so good no boringness in your story every post is khidki tod…..plz update daily

  13. Hidden Sunshine

    Shivika’s faceoff…OMG!! da way u scripted anika n shivaay’s reactions rather say emotions is simply amazing …Annika’s great wall of Arpita avtar gav me goosebumbs …N fr da precap shivaay n annika nadi ke do kinare n My cutie ansh😍 donno ko sath lane wala pul ( i juz wish he vs real ) …N ur sayin da epi is big…i am lyk a black hole fr ur ff ,no matter how much i read i am lyk thoda aur thoda aur😂…waitin fr da nxt epi

  14. Vaishali BBZ

    OMG Maya iam crying after reading this part of ur ff.. Shivaye is totally shocked and broken.. Ansh mera beta hai.. waaoo !!
    I have no words for telling how beautifully u write and express the feelings in ur ff..
    pls update the next part asap..
    I just cant wait..❤❤

  15. Manisha

    Razna…. It’s for you…. As shooter point out to ishana…. That ishana is behind all the accident … Shoot out, om ko drugs dena and all…. But anika manages to safe ishana …stand in ishana place… Every one blames anika … Anika only asked to billuji that what you think ….he throw out anika out of the oberio mansion… After that roop came and told that anika is the best sister which take all blame to herself to save ishana and
    Om’s life ….. I want to distroy u but u destroy yourself shivay beta…. An accident news arrive that 25 years old girl and 10 years old handicapped boy dies……. I hope now u understand how they separated…

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