jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 10)

Episode 10
.hello every one sorry for the delay…..it was due to the bad network…….now it got good….and sorry for the delay
Till now
Arpita come to india…and organizes rudra sing oberois engagement….ansh and oberoi family gets closer day by day…arpita hides herself from the eyes of oberois…..on the day of engagement arpita sees shivay and kritika together and feels bad….

So the episode starts now….
Its the villa…as kelash speak about arpitas feeling and y she is hidding that vinay comes there
Vinay: leave her kelash …jo attitude shivay ka tha abb iska hogaya…..by saying this u can lie to urself what about ansh……if ansh ask about his father what will u say…and u knew ansh is quite smart…..

Arpita sees some where and says
Arpita: mein kahunga ki uski pap marchaka hai……tears roll on while she says this…..
With this vinay turns arpita in anger…..

Vinay: how dare u say this…….arpita…..though we fight …i cannt accept this about my child hood friend…..and u know me very well…..
Arpita: but i can accept as he was my sorry anikas husband…..thume kya laga.. we girls should accept every thing u guys do…..u too proved u are patriachial guy… neither i nor my son will need him…. and i dont get affected by his presence ….and as for as mr oberoi and ms desai(krithika) ki shaddi…… i dont have any problem……i thought mr oberoi would be married by now…but i got suprise as he was still single….time tho lagtha hai…unn jasi shandar koon wali ladki tho milna mushkil hai na……lagthat hai ki bahut doondne ke bath krithika mili hai……
Jo anika apni pyar keliye kuch bi kar sakthi thi… wo sab keliye bi aur mereliye bi mar chuki hai…..mein arpita hoon…..muje koi feelings nahi hai….mereliye mere ansh aur sahil ke alava kuch maine nahi hai…..
So plz dont try to over power me in this….i am not interested in this any one…….saying this she turns to leave

Vinay: ok i accept ,then y u are running away from oberois…..u can face them…come lets go ….now……come …..
Arpita turns to see him with anger……..
Vinay :kya hua…..
Arpita: dont waste ur energy vinay …just concentrate on your work…..engagement is over we are leaveing to NY day after tomo….
Arpita leaves …..
Nikitha comes with ansh….
Arpita takes ansh with her……………

Scene shift to oberoi mansion lawn….
Engagements gets over…trivedies leave……
Omrushi share a great momnt with them…..in shivay s room…..
Rudra keeps hand on bed and see that wet….
He looks shivay with micmichi look….
Shivay see this say…wo woo…baccha…uska nam kya..hai…
Om : ansh
Shivay: yes ansh ne kiya….matlab milkshake girathiya…..
Rudra: app ne use eise jane diya…kuch nahi kaha…..
Om: mmm yes…
Rudra: bahiyya app tho .ap tho…..i hate. U …..when i did this 3 years back u made me to clean that myself…..but u left that ansh…….
Om: Rudra…u dont know …wo bacha uski milk moche ko shivay ki tie se pocha tha…
Rudra: shouts baabp reae…………
Shivay sits looking at him…and om and Rudra sees shivay who was all the smiling…..
Rudra: bhaiya app ko patha hai…is panch saal mein app ajj pehali baar muskuraahi ho…..uska karan ansh hai….patha nahi bahiyya agi kya hoga but mera maan keherahai ki sab kuch teek hojaye ga……
Om: but krithika was saying they are going to ny after they finish this assighn ment…….
Shivay: when are they leaving….and is ansh is accompanying….
Om : ofcourse….he will..

They share some normal chat then all omru leave…..shivay goes towards the window and see the moon….he comes back and takes the photo….he sees anika smiling …
Shivay(in mind) Rudra was saying i smiled 5 years after now….thu sirf muje jodkar nahi gayi but meri zindagi bi there saath legayi ….mein sirf ek jitha jatha insane bangaa…..koi emotions nahi hai…kyn kiya eh sab anika……kyn ……wo ladka ansh….uski har ek kiyadari mein muje thumko dekrahi hoon……kash wo hamara baccha ho…aur thum bi mere saath hothi….
Tears fall on the pic….shivay wipes the photo…..
Dadi from window sees this…..and cries……
Scene shifts to arpita villa

Arpita: ansh badmaaashi math soa jaaho….
Ansh: smiles at her says obdoi…obdoi…
Arpita turns surprisingly : thu hei kaha seeka…oberoi
Ansh: obadoi…..wo dadhi wala uncle hai na …uska ghar….appko patta hai..wo ghar ita baaaahi(ansh widens his eyes and hands to show this..he was energetic all the way)..

Arpita: wo ghar mein kaun kaun rehatha hai
Ansh:starts sain….wo noodles uncle….wo joker uncle…..wo somi aunty….aur aur …dadi anuty….aur…wo mouche walla uncle…mama appko patha wo mouche uncle hamesha muje kuurthe rehathi…aur bass …wahi,….
Arpita desperately ask aur kohi nahi …..her eyes looking for ansh words…
Ansh: baas whoi…..hannnnnnhannnn…wo kadoos uncle….par ajj tho wo meri friend hogayi…par…mein use friend nahi kahungi….wo kadoos…(ansh keeps his face like shivay). Wo tho volcano ki thara ..chid chid rehethe hai….app ko patha hai ajj une katliya….ansh laughs
Arpita: une lagi thonahi na…..koon ahi kya….kyn kiya he sab
“ kaise lagae ga ansh tho uni ka koon hai”
Arpita turns to see her own soul standing in smiling….and she senses she is becoming anika now a days…..
Arpita looks at ansh and tears roll on…..she wipes and makes him sleep…..
She looks at moon…………………………………..
Next day
Arpita calls nikitha to confirm the ticket for tomos flight…..
She says still two days in india…..
She sees the amount and calls kelash and ask him to settle the amount…
She comes to cabin and ask for ansh…kelash says he is urging to go for temple….arpita ask him to take ….
Scene shift to temple….
Ansh runs around and goes and calls out dadi…kelash too greets dadi…..kelash says they are going by tomo so they came to temple…dadi praises them and thanks them for the arrangement…..pinky days shivay ki shaddi par bhi ansh planners ko hi um bullayenge….
Kelash gets sad hearing this…..

Dadi remembers of shivay crying yesterday and urges kelash to come home with ansh….
Kelash to agrees…he doesn’t inform arpita….
Scene : oberoi mansion
Obros are busy in in the kitchen and shivay in full form of chef….every other see him with a smile…..
Dadi comes and gives Prasad…and kelash to comes…..
Shivay see him and remeinces of nikita s conversation of money shivay sees for ansh and doesnt see him and gets dis appointed

But he manages and goes to his room and takes the check..he gives to kelash…..kelash says about journey and smiles…shivay gets more disappointed as ansh will be away …….he manages to hide….he turns towards the kitchen…..
Scene kitchen….
He sees the whole dough for the pizza base is wasted and vegetables scattered through out….and oil spilt every evere…..shivay shouts for omru and none responde….he sees the atta fell all over..and sees a chef cap moving around….he goes to see along the table…..where he see some one sneezing heavily and as a result his cap fell and closed his full face ….shivay goes to take the cap…where the person sneees again
Every oberoi gather…shivay: thum sab yahah wo tho iski under koun hai…shivay goes to open and sneezing sound comes again…..everry one gets back….by then kelash says he will be back with in 10 mintutes and ask them to take car of ansh…. dadi agrees….
Dadi to join the scene….
Shivay goes towards the cappd person and takes the cap slowly and gets shocked seeing face….
omru: kaun hai
shivay laughs terribly and uncontrollably…..everyone sees him….
they sees ansh with full of atta covered his face….and chef cap half closen…he sees every one and gives a cute smile and sneezes again…..
shivay : hai kya hall bana raka thu ne….by which ansh shakes his head and atta comes out….shivay too coughs…..ansh says muje pizza chahiye….mushroom ka….
everyone look at shivay

shivay pehele thus nahalo phir pizza…..ok…
ansh shouts no…no..no…and runs over every where and gets hit with tej…tej gets tensed seeing him….ansh sneezes again and shouts for mamau……
Ishana convince him for bathing and shivay goes to make pizza…he sees the kitchen and smile….
……………..
Ansh comes out and goes to kitchen….he sees shivay taking out pizza form the oven….he sees them …omru see ansh….
Shivay was about to garnish …but ansh stops him and ask him to garnish with pudina…..
Omrushiv ans ish sowmy: all together pudina……..
Ansh: mmm pudina…..muje pasanth hai…
Ansh takes out the leaves and putts over it…..but finds it big….and puts sad face…..
Shivay: kya hua

Ansh: hey tho bada hai…jab mama banthi thi wo tho ita sa hoga…..(ansh show the thumb and idex finger together to show it will be chopped….)
Shivay makes it …ansh smiles….every one see ansh taking out and eating it..

Its after noon
Arpita confirms the ticket…and calls kelash…..
By then kelash ask nikitha to pick ansh now as his meeting is moving beyond the scheduled time….nikitha ….
The meeting gets over and kelash starts to driving…..
Arpita calls again…..
Kelash says ansh is with nikitha and says the details of the meeting they both argue regarding the tender…..
By then kelash puts a break and his car gets hit by the lorry….moblie falls and call gets droped……

Arpita says hey bahi be na hamesha ki thara battry charge nahi kya hoga….
She and starts with the final work….she ask the gm to take care of the concern and about the orders…as she will be leaving tomo…….
Kelash gets amulized and taken to the hospital…
Nurse takes his belonging and his wallet getsopen and every thing gets scattered….
The doctor comes and takes the vallet and sees the photo…..
“ kelash aritpita and ansh………”
Doctor “ anika singh oberoi zinda hai……”
By then nurse checks for the contact no and informs arpita……….arpita tries to rush……….
Nikitha comes and takes ansh….shivay gives him the gift of some toy…….ansh leaves oberoi mansion……..every one look teary eyed…..
Shivay manages his tears where dadi and omru notice this…….

Precap
Dadi shouts what………………….and vinay ask arpita where was she till now….and gets shocked seeing ansh and arpita……………..

Hello every one …sorrrrrrry for late…its my network problem….thanks for the support….u are giving to me……love u all
Regards maya

28 comments

  1. Elle

    |Registered Member

    oh….no….so the most awaited moment has about to start….ohhhh, lm so desperado….so continue soon…ASAP. ..Please,,,, pretty please

  2. safaq

    super dooper ozm ff …u r very creative writer …ur ff bring a huge curl on my lips …ur suspence that how shivika meet is just khidhki tod …….plz post daily alway wait for your post ……

  3. Nithu

    |Registered Member

    Di loved it ….u no how much i was waiting for ua ff..i bcam mad yesterday…my frnd minnu and i were restless untill we read your ff actually..my frnd minnu also reads ff but along with me….and she is one of the biggest fans for ua ff n tulasis….pls post nxt one asap..pls…di…

  4. Hidden Sunshine

    Nyc epi maya…asusual lovd shivansh moment n my cutie ansh😍 scenes n obro moment 😊…precap filled vit suspense(mayb om r dadi vl c arpita instead of shivaay🤔).waitin fr da nxt epi

  5. Tulasi

    |Registered Member

    Omgg…tht precappp…woww…..desperate for tht diii…plzzzzz post it soon…..i am really dyng for it…..plz plz post it soon…d epi was awesummm to d core…….shivaays emotions ….ansh playful acts…..of all shivaays feelngs n charac is very well potrayed….i think u really desrve a ovation for writng such a great story….
    I thnk oh jaanaa se bhi suprr duprr hain jab tak hain jaaan…….
    N i evn luv d title a lott it only shows d main theme of d stry…jitna bhi hatred hain they luv each other jab tak hain jaaan……
    ur evry epi touches my heart….i cn always feel d pain n luv u potrayed……
    U r awesumm writer …(maya) all d emotions needed r present…..like it is filled wid feelngss pain luv hatred anger …….😍😍😍 n i cnt evn express my feelngs always while gng through d epi…..

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