jab thak hai jaan……….(episode 1)

Hello every one hope u would have read the prologue of jab thak hai jaan………
If u are new…here is the gist…..
Its about the life of oberoi brothers……and their life ….yes its about life…how the three brothers of same kandan deal the itheir issues in different way…..jab thak hai jaan is a continuation of oh jaana…
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Prologue
episode 1
Zindagi ka har zakham uski mehrbani hai
Meri zindagi ek adhuri kahani hai
Mita dete hr dard seene se magar
Ye dard hi ti uski akhri nishani hai

Episode one…………..
Sun starts rising…..
The cooks and servant start their work with certain tremors…….a lady in a saree comes and asks did the arrangement got complete ….what is the condition of Prasad……
The chef turns and says its all most done mam….the lady says so its not done yet….
Lady: app yaha se jahiye mein dekh loongi….she ties her sari and works on the kadai….and speaks to her self…ajj ka din complete ho jaye bus mereliye yehi kafi…hai…..she mixes the content well.
She responds to the name Ishana…..
The lady named Ishana says ji dadi i am coming…..
its oberoi mansion…and oberoi mansion doesn’t need introduction to u guys…..
in room

dadi: every thing got sorted right …i dot want anything to go wrong today….
Ishana: yes dadi every thing is ready and Prasad bi bangaya…..
Some one comes and says …choti bhabi mein tyar hoon…kuch kam hai kya ….me karungi…..
Ya didi mein bi karungi… a girl says..
Ishana: kuch nahi hai Rudra…..aur sowmya u just see wether pandit ji need some thing…. the girl sowmya leaves……
Dadi..: i didnt expect this much puttar….its been five years u are doing this…….every year this day u leave ur appointments and thu kud iss kam par dyan derahi ho…..

Ishana: yes dadi its 5 years quite a long while….this day i want to be in home with u all….i just want to be Ishana….a simple girl who loves to smile ..who wants love from everyone…..who want to live her life with her family with in a small world…..who wants to stay away from the glamorous reel world…..who wants to be just Ishana omkara……and not as Ishana om kara singh oberoi…ceo.. “ishara” top most cultural academy of the country….. to be away from the one whom the cultural world wants to see…away from the one whose appointment keliye line lagrahi hai….and from the one omkara nafrat karthai hai……she sees some where….
In this five years every thing got changed but i am in the starting point……
Dadi: no Ishana …it will change mere mann keharaha hai everything will change…..
Ishana: mei bi yahi chathi hoon….she leaves seeing the time….
Scene shift a room
A guy in long hair searches for something….
Ishana enter…i know u are searching this….she gives him his kurta ….he gets from her hands…while getting both of their finger touch and they both see each other….sad version of oh sathiya plays….
He gets the dress and goes to change…ishana says kash app pehele jaise ho tho…..she remembers their shaddi …and all….

Sowmya calls Ishana didi…..ishana leaves in haste……
Om on the other hand sees the dress….i wish thu sirf Ishana hothi….sirf Ishana….aur hamara dhosti bi sachi…..he closes his eyes…. theri wajase hi shivay ne anika ko koya hai…. jane anjane me uskekeliye me bi karan hogayi hoon……….
Rudra sowmya and dadi greets pandit ji…..ishana comes with the Prasad and about to hit janavi….
Janavi turns her face…ishana says sorry ma…..
janavi: thu . kuch bi kar but dont call me mama….. i didnt forget anything……
Ishana is all set to cry…..prinku comes and says bhabi….it will get ok……dont worry ….ishana sees prinku and arjun trivedi and smile…

Ishana ask papa didnt come….arjun says he is on the way with mom….
Ishana smile …all the three leave to the hall…..
Tej comes and sees the arrangement….shakthi stands next to dadi….dadi ask about pinky ….shakthi says some thing….dadi says ok i will call her……
Dadi goes to pinky s room and calls her out…pinky comes and gives everyone a awkward look….rudra starts to say some thing but sowmya sighs him to stop……..
Pandit ji says so all things came and everyone are here …where is the concern person…….
Every one see the room near the pool…..
Inside the room….
A guy closes his wardrobe and wears his suit.. he sees a photo next to his wadrobe….he turns it…….he sets his hair….he sees the time its around 8 o clock ….he takes his wallet and phone….he looks him self in the mirror…..every thing his perfect… but the charm in his face is missing…..his eye is left with a streak of sadness….he sees the time again and move out……
Every one in the hall look forward for him.

rudra says bhaiyya came….every one look up to see him…..shivay comes out and starts towards the exit without even seeing the others…panditji gets up and goes to wards him with the kalash…..and shivay stops seeing the panditji……he gives annoying look towards panditji….pandit says everyone…..dadi ask panditji to start the pooja….he sees shivay again and comes to his place and starts the pooja….shivay looks at area…and leaves…………
panditji calls out for the next dear relation….veerendra trivedi comes and forwards his hand……its basri(obituary function) of anika….. anika shivay singh oberoi………..
scene shift to new York

office….
People gets ready to start with the work….
.workers start their work with haste…..
.a girl with white shirt and pencil midi named nikitha enters the 2 nd floor of building.every one wishes her .. a guy comes and ask about some tender…she replies vagely…..
After 5 complete minutes ..
…a black sedan enters parking of the building…..a young energetic lady steps down ….and removes her coolers….she throw the key for the valet parking…..the key falls on the face of the man over there ….she seemed cool and walked towards the lift…….the receptionist stood up ……its 2nd floor……
the lady enters the office….she was keen towards her way …neither she responded to the greeting of employee nor she looked up to see them…..its half way towards her room……she stoped to see a guy…..nikitha(her secretary) comes running towards the lady and gives a folder….she opens and picks the papers in her hands…the guys looks at her…a drop of sweat flows in the corner of the forehead……she see him…and throws the papers on his face….
she: i need this to be done today….
guy: yes mam mam…

she leaves to wards the cabin……
she starts with the work……
its 3.00
she hears some noise and comes out to check….she finds a broken vase….and nikitha swallowing her saliva….a voice comes….if you dare to control me this will be ur condition…. i need to hear only the truth…wo meri car kahan hai…..nikitha says i dont know….but the voice says…thu ne merei car ko khi chupathiya…bbathao meri car kaha hai……muje abi ki abi meri car chahiye matlab chahiye…………
the lady calls ansh…..whats going on…. nikitha turns towards the lady
nikitha: arpita mam plz i dint do any thing …but ansh is not believing me at all …
ansh coms running towards arpita(lady) : mama dekiye ..neethu anunty ne meri car chupathiya…and holds her dress…and keeps on repeating the same thing….
arpita lifts ansh says …: teeke i will get u another one..leave …neethu aunty ko kam hai…

anshu: muje wahi car chahiye aur abi…i knew she is having it…..
nikitha takes the car out and gives to him….ok have it….ansh shows bow to her and starts playing with the car…..nitkitha turns to arpita: i dont know how he found…. iam thinking to fool him but at the last he fooled me……
a man comes and says….ansh is just the Xerox of his father….ek tham carbon copy….hena arpita……arpita sees ansh…
ansh a 4 year old kid…with blue eyes and sharp mind…..and kidiki thod dialogues…..arpita says yes.. i try hard to change this but i am failing in my move………
arpita: bhaiyya app yahah…..looking at the man …

man: .ya we are going to Mumbai so thought to remind you 4 days meeting
.arpit says teeke kailash bhai ……nikitha thu ansh ko sambahal lena………..ansh comes and says mein bi javunga ….arpita says no thu neethu aunty e sath yaha rahe ga….
Ansh…circles arpita and says mein bi mein bi mein bi……kailash says let him come arpita whats wrong in it…. every one wait for arpitas answer…..
After a silence arpita nods yes….ansh kisses her in cheek and says good mama….runs here and there…
Kailash asks thu teek haei na arpita….she replies yes….
In the car….
Shivay answer to the call and a girl sits near by him….she looks gorgeous in her short dress…they discuss about the to be held meeting…..and now and then she looks at him……
Driver stops suddenly and she holds shivays hands ….shivay takes his hands and hold her…are u ok krithika…..the girl named krithika smiles ya i m fine….shivay takes his hands and kritika sees her hand and reminisces shivay holding her….
The car enters the oberoi towers….
Shivay gets down and goes towards his room…krithika follows ………….
Scene shift to newyork

Nikita comes and says every thing is ready……
Kelash see arpita….
They both leave the place to havelli.
Arpita sighs nikitha to take ansh with him….nikitha leaves giving a weird look towards arpita..
Pandit ask can i start the pooja….arpita goes in…kelash ask the pandit to wait for a while..
Arpita room
She stands in front the mirror in white saree.. she takes some thing in her hands……
Its a mangalsuttra.. she closes her eyes and holds the mangal sutra tightly…….
Fb
Where a guy wears her mangal surtra….and they make their grahapravesh…. they fight .with each other….he holds her close within his arms kisses her in her cheek…she runs out of shy….he chases her…….he throws her out of the house….he says everything was fake and he doesn’t consider her as his wife anymore…..

Fb ends
Arpita opens her eyes…..
She takes another photo…..she comes out and gives the photo and mangalsutra to the pandit…he looks at her with a weird reaction. She sits in front of the pooja….kelash takes a deep breath were sad ness prevails in every face….
Its that girls basri
The pooja ends pandit leaves with his dhakshana….
Arpita goes to her room and stands still

Precap: ..shivay shouts at sara…………ansh comes with the bat in his hand…….
Helo every one i hope u like this track….its new beginning of oh jaana………so plz reader give ur support….and thanks for reading this ff……..
Regards
Maya

22 comments

  1. muskan

    Ya bring back shivika,show some romance,in your previous ff also u

    have only shown there separation instead of romance,plz plz add romance of shivika in ur ff ,make it romantic and comedy b/w brothers plz,only u are showing anika crying,shivay being rude

  2. Vaishali BBZ

    Its amazing Pragya Di.. pls continue.. I just cant wait to see Shivaye’s reaction after meeting his son Ansh.. and Arpita is Anika.. waaoo !! 😍😍❤❤

  3. Mukta

    Interesting!!!!!!!! But who is Arpita…. now I don’t think she is Anika!!!!!! Plz open up the suspense fast!!!!!!

  4. Nandini

    Oh god Maya u r fabulous. arpita doing barsi of herself(anika) how much hurt is she! And the way she changed is proof of tat. Waiting for next plz post next asap

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