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Home»Fan Fiction»JAB WE MET in US by Neha (Chapter 1)
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JAB WE MET in US by Neha (Chapter 1)

Neha_PheonixBy Neha_PheonixMarch 24, 201756 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hey Guys! A warm welcome to one and all! Hello I am Neha-17 after being a silent reader then a commenter and now here I am with my FF. Really you guys have inspired me to accomplish this new field. I hope you will accept me and support me. This is my first ever fiction story (Except the essay writing in school) and I am kind of nervous and anxious how it will be as to my readers.

Here I go…..First there is a short prologue and then followed by 1st Chapter.
Prologue: This is story is different version of Anika and Shivaay based in US. For the character sketch I am taking the two leads of IB as of now and I will introduce character whenever required and let you all know.

Revere Beach located in Massachusetts, 4 miles from Boston. It was establishes in 1985 and declared as the first public beach. The beach had a well-lit sunlight and the sun and clear sky were great look for admirers. The beach is must visit location during holidays and weekends and it is savored by the people of all generations. A girl with her friend were sunbathing and drinking refreshments. The girl was a charismatic and notable in the crowd with her brown hairs dangling off her shoulder. Also, as she was smiling, her perfect curvy smile adored her beauty. She was wearing red crop top with a well matched white color sarong which covered like a skirt and had red flowers engrossed in it. Her crop top had a thin belt which was flashing her glowing skin.

Also at a distant there was a boy surfing with the waves, crashing them chasing them and enjoying the sport. Truly, waves were guiding him and they looked like teasing companions of each other. After surfing the boy was heading to rest down a while on the warm sand. As he was walking, water was drizzling down his hot body and it looked like watching a Greek God descended to earth. He was dressed in shots and surely had taken efforts to built perfect toned body. The most attractive feature of him was his eyes beautiful partly bluish green wherein you can immerse in it and spend time.
Guys, Guess who are they?

Chapter 1:
The girl, Anika was conversing with her friend Clarie.
Anika: Hey, you said that your friends are going to join us . Where are they?
Clarie: Oh! I had called them .They will be here in few minutes.
As soon as Clarie’s friends arrived the girl’s gang decided to play beach volleyball. The set up was already present and surely the pair of Anika and Clarie was a great team to tackle and play of with. They were delivering great shots, gossiping and laughing around. They had already won two out of three sets and to in attempt to win the third one Anika was going backwards and she collide with someone who almost held her in nick of time but unfortunately she fell down. Due to this all girls gathered were laughing looking at them.
Anika: (Turning towards him) Hey you! Can’t you walk properly and ….
She suddenly stopped after looking into his eyes and almost loved them..
Boy (Yes, it is Shivaay): Why are you yelling? I almost tried to save you. You should be grateful for that.
Anika: But you could not save, so I won’t be. It was due to you ,I fell down. We were playing can’t you walk on the other way?
Shivaay: Really? Well that was a small accident. You could be inside boundary; you have crossed it and blaming others?
Suddenly, Ankia sees that she has crossed boundary but she never lets other person win against her in any conversation so..
Anika: It happens while playing, you were passing you could have taken care of.

As Shivaay was about to say something then Clarie sensed that this conversation won’t stop and jumped into the conversation.
Clarie: It’s ok Anika. Are you Okay? Should we start the game?
She thanked the unknown person for trying to save her friend and he gave a weak smile and left nodding negatively at Anika which fumed her.
Anika : I am fine she said and not reviling that her leg is hurt as she didn’t wanted to say in front of him. I think I will rest for a while.

Anika POV- Was I rude? Well maybe I was. For the first time seeing someone and those seductive eyes and I was lost of words. How could I cope with that feeling? “Those eyes” well ,I should give them a nick name or else it will be their insult. How about beautiful? No, it is so common. Well then kanji ankhe ? Haha, it suits him. It’s nice to see an Indian here on this beach but Clarie stopped our conversation. She is smart and my best friend here. I saw him walking and then resumed to watching the game. Alas, we lost but right now I was more inserted in thinking about the recent happenings…
Shivaay POV- I am not that much affected by girls. But, she has a different attractiveness that enthralled me. I am a short-tempered person but I didn’t want to hurt her. This is so un-likely of Shivaay. If my brothers would have been here they could have presented her a trophy. Oh! I miss them so much but yes I will join them soon. Anyways, for the first time I have left an argument halfway but still Shivaay Singh Oberoi pays with interested an interest and walked with a smirk.

Precap: More fun at the Beach!!

You need lots of effort to write. I am realizing it now but I am happy to reach out to you. This FF is dedicated to Ishita (IME) cause she pressed out the writer in me. Also, to my friend and author on TU like Adi, Shrinjal, Abhija, Janhavi, Chanaya, Hajira, Kanfi, Candy,Rufina, Ishita_Ishu, Mansvi,Anu and authors like Kehkasha, Dreams, Farin, Diyaa…you guys are great.(Sorry if I have not included anyone’s name)

Thank you!
By- Neha-17

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    56 Comments

    1. nikitajai on March 24, 2017 5:02 pm

      Nice one dear waiting for the next update…

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:30 pm

        Ya thanks ?..I am glad you liked it. Thnx for supporting.

    2. Bhavana on March 24, 2017 5:07 pm

      Superbbbb start…..loved it completely…eagerly waiting 4 the nxt…update asap… 🙂

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:31 pm

        Thanks dear..for loving it it gave me a lot of happiness.?

    3. thedreamsoul on March 24, 2017 6:21 pm

      I should tell you that you are so talented in writing . I loved each and every words of you . Please do post soon beacuse I am waiting <3

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:33 pm

        This is new field for me …I was over ridding with joy reading your comment…Sure I will post soon.?

    4. Lilly on March 24, 2017 7:04 pm

      Superb…..loved it…

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thanks for loving it ? and reading.

    5. IME on March 24, 2017 7:23 pm

      Superbbbbbbb sii
      i was waiting for your writings
      at last i got
      m happy
      it was amazinggggggggggggg
      waiting for the nxt
      post soon
      loved it
      love you
      take care
      byee

      • IME on March 24, 2017 7:27 pm

        *Dii
        and thank you so much for dedicating it for me i am so happy thank you

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:43 pm

        Dear you encouraged me and I found a new me….you are always welcome..thanks for reading it….Love ya…?

    6. _candy_ on March 24, 2017 7:45 pm

      pls continueeeeeeeeeee diiiiiiiiiiiii loved u r writing

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:44 pm

        Thanks Candy..sweetie..your comment motivated me a lottt…dear?

      • _candy_ on March 25, 2017 9:11 am

        thnx for writing my name u r tooooooooooo swt

    7. ronumowl on March 24, 2017 7:50 pm

      awesome…superb..no words to explain how good it is…u should have started writing earlier di..bcz u r very talented n creative…..plz write next part soon…waiting 4 it….

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:48 pm

        Yes..but phele I wasnt knowing this …On cloud 9 after reading your comment…The story willl be interesting too..thanks?

    8. hajira on March 24, 2017 7:59 pm

      Oh I already read this and it is superb and unique I loved it waiting for next ???????

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 8:52 pm

        Ty…ty…? The story will take many twists and turns …I am happy that you loved it…?Your so inspiring di!

    9. anujohnson on March 24, 2017 8:25 pm

      Superb

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 10:17 pm

        Thanks Anu……:-D
        Thanks for commenting

    10. JanviSingh on March 24, 2017 8:26 pm

      It’s awsm di…
      U should definitely continue it…
      Sorry for late comment… Actually my phone was discharged….
      Bt the story has started with a great plot….
      It’s superb….
      I’ll be waiting for the next part…
      N thanks for mentioning my name di… It really means a lot to me…????

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 10:39 pm

        Ohh janu dear really nice of you. I will surely continue. I am happy you liked the plot…??

    11. ARJS on March 24, 2017 8:42 pm

      Awesomeeee superbbb a new thought keep writing..waiting for next one..love u???

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 10:41 pm

        Thanks Rufi…your comments means a lott..I will surely cherish this story??

    12. Surbhi Sharma on March 24, 2017 9:29 pm

      Awesome. Can’t wait to read ur next part .loved it

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 10:42 pm

        Thanks dear for commenting…..Next is coming soon tomorrow…?

    13. Mrunal on March 24, 2017 9:50 pm

      amazing update…
      fantastic start…..

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 10:48 pm

        Thanks a lot for your valued comment …Tysm?

    14. alekhika20 on March 24, 2017 10:34 pm

      Superb part,cont soon

      • Neha-17 on March 24, 2017 11:03 pm

        Thanks! I am glad you liked it…..Almost done with next part !

    15. lopez on March 24, 2017 11:37 pm

      sooooo nice dear,,,superrrrrrrrrrrrb starting

      • Neha-17 on March 25, 2017 7:37 pm

        Thanks dear…that you appreciated the start….More is yet to come.?

    16. kanfi on March 25, 2017 12:25 am

      Hey neha…it was awesmme…i liked it,,it seems very interesting,,post next part sooonn,,,gd night,,,n do remind me once…

      • Neha-17 on March 25, 2017 7:40 pm

        Aww..so sweet of you dear?. Surely I will remind you.Tysm?

    17. Charitha on March 25, 2017 8:32 am

      Excellent

      • Neha-17 on March 25, 2017 7:41 pm

        Hey thanks a lot dear?

    18. sabhya on March 25, 2017 8:33 pm

      Wow…thats something new..plss continue

      • Neha-17 on March 25, 2017 9:46 pm

        Ya sure dear..Ty for commenting ?

    19. Chanya on March 25, 2017 11:00 pm

      Amazing di…..please continue..loved it…sorry for the late comment di..i just woke up too early to read it..thanks for mentioning my name di..it means a lot..I’ll be waiting for next part

      • Neha-17 on March 25, 2017 11:23 pm

        Wow..even your comment made my day….Tysm dear? ?. And you aren’t late dear..Ty for taking so much efforts for reading. I will notify you surely. Take your time.

    20. ruksy on March 26, 2017 3:44 pm

      Loved it totally original and interesting

      • Neha-17 on March 26, 2017 3:53 pm

        Thanks dear..tysm..I have posted the second part too..It will come in some time?

    21. jasmin on March 26, 2017 6:47 pm

      Its amazing dii..loved it..love u!!

      • Neha-17 on March 26, 2017 8:29 pm

        Thanks dear..Love you too..?

    22. Ishika_ishu on March 26, 2017 7:06 pm

      Wooowwwwwwww di its really really nice.. waiting for the next…and thanks for including my name…(but spelling is wrong?)….hehehe pls dont mind….. i am waiting for next…..and haan dont be nervous..its really great i hardly read any ishkbazz ff but i loved it….luv u???????????????

      • Neha-17 on March 26, 2017 8:30 pm

        Thanks a lott..Sure I will tell you about all links..??

    23. Nanu 26 on March 27, 2017 1:33 am

      superb 🙂 <3 !!!!!!!!

      • Neha-17 on March 27, 2017 8:34 pm

        Thanks a lott dear…?

    24. Sophie24 on March 27, 2017 7:13 am

      That was amazing…
      I loved the story.
      You have amazing writing skills…

      • Neha-17 on March 27, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thanks Sophie ?…This is my first time into writing…So your comment is very precious …. ?

    25. Soumya85 on March 27, 2017 2:49 pm

      Wow amazing chapter di..great work?love it

      • Neha-17 on March 27, 2017 8:36 pm

        Thanks Soumya….I am glad that you loved the chapter…?

    26. MANASVI on March 28, 2017 12:05 am

      Hey dii..
      Juz loved it..
      You are so amazing in writing..
      I juz loved it..
      Btw thanks for taking my name too..

      • Neha-17 on April 5, 2017 11:57 pm

        Thanks a Lott dear for your kind encouragement and taking out time and reading. I am so happy that you loved it. ??

    27. Diyaa on April 4, 2017 7:20 pm

      Great start Neha! I visualized the entire scene and it looked awesome ☺

      • Neha-17 on April 5, 2017 9:28 pm

        Thanks dear! Well I am happy you accepted my request…filled with glee..Ty??

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