JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 9)

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Hello dear friends…. This is KEHKASHA again….with Part 9 of JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI….

Since I got vacations and free time….so i am posting this back to back……and if u have missed the previous part…..then link for the previous part….

Part 8 Here

So plz do read if u have missed…..

Coming to next update….

RECAP – Pinky goes missing…….shivaay gets a call and all rushes to hospital……

PART 9
SCENE CONTINUED….
All elders and OmRu were shocked to see the person…..actually they were confused that how come Pinky was with that person…..

But to clear the misunderstanding Rudy spoke….
Rudy- Bhabhi……aap yahan…..aur aapne bhaiya ko phone kiya tha…..par Choti maa ko hua kya……??
[Bhabhi u here……and u were the one who called bhaiya……..but what happened to choti maa…..]

But before Anika could say anything……Shivaay came out of the ward……in an utterly confused state……and he moved to Anika and said……

Shivaay -(in confused state) meri maa meri nahi rahi……kya jadoo kar diya tumne……ki unhe sirf tumse hi milna hai……..(completely shocked) wo mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahin……aur uss par kehti hain ki mujhe Anika se baat karni hai…..tu yahan se jaa……..kaise…??

[my mother is not mine………what magic had u done…….that she only wants to meet u……..she is not even talking to me………..and more than that she said…….that I wanna talk to Anika……..u leave from here….. How…??]

Anika- woh sab Mai aapko baad mein samjhaungi……
[that I will explain u later…..]

And she rushes inside…….leaving everyone in a more than shocked and confused state…… All were literally trying to figure out what might have happened between these two…..
(A/N- I am sure u all must be thinking the same……..right…)

SCENE @ ward…
Anika enters…..and sit beside Pinky……while tears started flowing from her eyes……

Pinky- (who noticed this)… Arre tu pagal ho gayi hai kya……..ro kyun rahi hai…….roye tumhare enemys…..and she hold her hand…..
[are u mad……why r u crying……let ur enemy cry…..]

But tears in Anika’s eyes didn’t stopped……..so to comfort her….
Pinky- lagta hai tune mujhe abhi tak maaf nahi kiya hai…….dekh agar aisi baat hai…..toh Mai phir se kaan pakad kar tujhse maafi maangti hun………and she holds her ears…..
[seems like u have not forgiven me till now……look…..if it is so……then I can again ask for forgiveness by holding ears……..]

While Anika immediately stop her from doing so……..
Anika- Aap aisa kuch bhi nahi karengi……..mai aapse Choti hun…
[u will not do anything like that………i am younger to u….]

Anika taking a deep sigh…….with teary eyes said……..
Anika- aapne waise bhi his tarah mujhse maafi maangi hai……….mai bhool nahi sakti……..aur rahi baat aapko maaf karne ki……..toh Mai aapko maaf kaise Karun…….aap badi hain mujhse………aur mera koi haq nahi Banta……..ki Mai aapko maaf Karun……

[by the way…….the way u have asked for forgiveness……….i can’t forget that………..and about forgiving u……..then how could I forgive u……..u r elder to me…….and I have no right to forgive you…….]

There was complete silence…….after listening all this……. Pinky was shocked……..and her guilt increased more…….she was teary eyed…..

But….
Anika- Mai toh bas aapko dher saara pyaar de sakti hun…….MAA…….aur dobara agar aapne mujhse maafi mangi…….Kisi bhi karaan se…….toh……toh….
[I can give u lots of love…….MAA…….and if u again ask for forgiveness……for any reason……..then……then…..]

Pinky- (curiously) then…..then……

Anika-toh…..mai aapse…..aapse…

Pinky- aapse…..kya…??

Anika- (with a smirk)…..toh Mai aapse kabhi baat nahi karungi…….soh lijiye…..
[then….i will never talk to u…….think….]

Both then burst into laughter……

At same time…..
Outside the ward…… Everyone was restless…….about all the possibilities that were going on……into there heads……but after lots of mental turmoil……. Shivaay decided….
Shivaay- Ab bas…….bahut ho Gaya…….ab mai andar jaa raha hun……..and that’s final……..
[now………enough……enough of all this………now I am going in……….and that’s final…..]

And he enters inside the room followed by rest others……

And the scene that they saw inside was……..like an unexpected one……. The shock was simply added more and more to their already shocked states…… They witnessed Pinky and Anika laughing and doing light chit-chat……

Shivaay- (in that shocked state….) Maa…… Anika….yeh ho kya raha hai…… Kahin Mai sapna toh nahi dekh raha……
[Maa…. Anika….what’s going on…… Am I dreaming…..]

And Rudra immediately pinched him hard……to which he screamed……aloud…..
To which Pinky smiled and said……

Pinky- Shivaay koi sapna nahi dekh raha hai tu………achcha sun……tune doctors se baat ki…….mujhe ghar Jana hai……waise bhi hospitals mein reh reh kar mujhe michmichi hoti hai…….
[Shivaay u r not dreaming……..ok listen…..did u talked to doctors……..coz I feel awkward being in hospital…….]

Now it seems to be testing of patience……of everyone who’s eyes r popping out of their respective socket………with the only question………YEH HO KYA RAHA HAI…..
(thinking the same……right friends……)

Recovering from the series of shocks…….. Shakti questions…..
Shakti- Pinky……tum theek toh ho na…….tumhare sir-wir par chot toh nahi lag gayi……..aur tum yahan kaise…….aur Anika tumhare saath…….kaise….??

[Pinky…..u r alright……right……..hope u didn’t got hurt on ur head……….and what r u doing here…….and how’s Anika with u…..??]

All in chorus- EXACTLY

Pinky – Arre shaktiji mujhe kuch nahi hua……bas kal raat se itna sab kuch ho Gaya……..ki Mai apni healths ka dhyan nahi de payi……..kuch na khane ki wajah se BP low ho Gaya aur Mai behosh ho gayi……..aur rahi baat Anika ki……..toh Mai uss waqt issi ke saath thi………aur Mai yahan kya kar rahi hun…….se aapka kya matlab…….bande ko shauq nahi h aspatal mein Bharti hone ka………tabiyat -shabiyat kharab thi……….koi ghoomne those hi aayi………

[Shaktiji I am fine……its just that……..a lot happened since last night…….and coz of that I couldn’t pay attention to my health……..and become of not eating anything for a long time…….BP lowered………..and so I fall unconscious…………and about Anika………then I was with her………at that time………and what do u mean by……..what am I doing here………person has no dream to get admitted in the hospital……….i was not well…….]

Dadi- puttar tu ab theek hai na…..
[Pinky u r now fine……right……]

Rudra- itne aaram se Choti maa ne itna kuch keh diya…….aur phir bhi…….dadi phir bhi aap pooch rahin hai……..ki Choti maa theek hain ya nahi………arre she is fit and fine……..hain na Choti maa…..

[with so much ease……choti maa said…..soo much……and then also…….dadi then also u r asking……….ki Choti maa is fine or not……. Arre she is fit and fine…….right Choti maa…..]

Pinky- (smiling) corrects……(to shivaay) tu abhi tak yahin khada hai………jaa jakar doctor se baat kar aur mujhe yahan se recharge* kar……
[u r still standing here……. Go and talk to doctor and recharge * me from heres…….]

Om- Choti maa recharge nahi…… Discharge……

Pinky- corrects Om…..

Shivaay leaves with a lots of confusion………and after talking to doctors about pinky’s health……..and with the assurance that she is fine……he headed towards the ward to take her back to the mansion………after the doctors allowed for the discharge…….

@ward…..
Shivaay enters….
Shivaay – maa doctors ne discharge papers ready kar diye hain…….aap ghar chal rahin hain…….
[maa doctors have readied the discharge papers………u r coming to the mansion…..]

Pinky- (excited) Sach…… (pauses for a second)…..with a hopeful smile…….. Anika tu hamare saath ghar chal rahi hai na…..??
[Trues…….. Anika u r coming with us….right….]

Anika- Ji MAA……

Everyone was shocked to the core……..from morning they were getting…….bundle of surprises……….but all were soo pleasing………. Noone knows what had happened between Pinky and Anika………..but all they knows was that everything is getting back to normal……….

OmRu – (in the shocked state with a pleasant smile) Yeh ho kya raha hai……

Shivaay’s mind immediately travels a FLASHBACK…….
CALL @ MORNING..
Shivaay – Hello….
Anika- Hello shivaay aap jaldi se lifeline hospital aa jaiye………MAA ko kuch ho Gaya hai…….woh achanak se behosh ho gayi hain……
[hello shivaay……come to lifeline hospital fast……..something has happened to MAA…………she has fainted suddenly……….] Shivaay -what…….maa……but how……wait i am coming…….
CALL ENDS
FLASHBACK ENDS…

A pleasant and satisfactory smile instantly appeared on his face……… He was mentally scolding himself for not noticing such a big thing……….in haste…… Now all he wanted to know was………how all this happened……..

After sometime……. OmRu accompanied dadi, jhanvi and pinky ro the mansion……..while shakti left for office……….and shivika were assigned to the duty to pick up sahil from RV’s house……..along with their luggage and reach mansion as soon as possible…….. While during this time the ladies of the house will prepare for the grand entry of their beloved bahu……..

Everyone left in their respective cars……and while on their JOURNEY to RV’s house shivaay all the time kept on asking Anika…….that how come all this change happened…….while Anika was lost in her own thoughts…….finally after getting no attention and answer from Anika……. Shivaay concentrated his focus completely on driving……….making a mental note that he will ask this to her later on…..

Anika who was lost in her own thoughts…….was continuously thinking the immediate U-turn that her life took THIS MORNING ….

FLASHBACK
@ RV’s HOME….
In the early morning…….as soon as the door bell rang…… RV with his regular routine opened the door…….in a partially sleepy state……..and forwarded his hand in order to receive the pouches of milk to be given by milkman………..but after getting nothing in return he opened his eyes……..after rubing it properly in order to avoid further sleepy feel…….and was shocked to see the person standing in front of him……..he immediately shouted “Anika”……

SCENE inside the house….
Anika was standing shocked…….to see Pinky standing in front of her………totally devastated…….she had no idea…….about what could have happened……..and why is she here…….and that too in this state……. She immediately offered pinky…….with a glass of water……..and ask her to take a seat as she is looking completely exhausted………..but to her surprise Pinky neither took the glass of water nor she rested……… The only words that came out of her mouth were…..
Pinky- (in a really shattered tone) mujhe maaf kar de……. Anika…….agar kar sakti hai toh mujhe maff kar de…….
[forgive me……. Anika…….if u can then plz forgive me……]

But soon the FLASHBACK going on in Anika’s mind took a BREAK…………because of the sudden her felt by her………as shivaay applied break…….

Anika- (angrily) aapko dikh nahi raha tha……..ki Mai kuch important soch rahi thi…….iss tarah break lagane ki kya zaroorat thi……woh bhi bheech raste mein…….
[Can’t u see……..i was thinking something important……..what was the need of applying breaks like this……that too in the middle of the road…….]

Shivaay – (showing fake anger…….as he usually do) Han……woh toh mujhe dikh raha tha ki madam kuch important socjh rahi thi………tabhi toh mere itne saare sawalon mein se ek ka bhi jawab nahi Mila………. Aur rahi baat breaks lagane ki……..toh jab hum manzil par pahuch jate hain toh break lagane padte hain………

[Yeah……that i can see……that madam was thinking something important……that’s why I didn’t get answer of even a single question………and about applying breaks……..then when we reach our destination……..then we apply breaks…..] And he pointed to his opposite direction in order to drag her attention that they reached home (RV’s home)…..

@ RV’s home….
Sahil was super excited after listening that they r going back to oberoi mansion…….while Anika excuses herself for packing their luggage……..and shivaay took sahil with him for a lil and quick shopping……..

Now Anika was all alone at home……..with her thoughts……..those thoughts that were continuously popping into her head for no reason………. Even she was not getting any conclusion of what happened……

TO BE CONTINUED….

PRECAP- Flashback –
Pinky- (crying) Maine tujhe kya- kya nahi kaha………………..
Aur Mai yeh bhool gayi…….ki Mai khud ek chote se pariwar se iss bade khandaan mein ayi thi……

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So friends done with today’s update…..hope u will like……hope that u will not get bored……hope that u will enjoy this part…… And a note……that this is the second last part of this story…….. And next part I.e. Part 10 will be the last part……….. So plz share ur views…… I’ll be glad…..

A very big thanks to all those who liked and presented their views on this series…….and also to them who read it as silent readers…..

Till then enjoy the ending note…..
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AE DIL TU MAT GHABRA….
INN NAYE RAASTON PAR TU CHALTA CHALA JA…..
HAR GUL SE NAYI MAHEK TU CHURA….
HAWAON KE SAHARE TU UDTA CHALA JA…..

With this…
Signing off..
KEHKASHA..

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37 Comments
  1. Nice

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Shivanya……and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  2. You ate simply awesome and amazing!! Full of emotions..it was fantastic ..will miss this for sure..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much mansi……and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  3. Awesome update!!
    Ending note was lovely !!!!
    I will miss this ff

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks again dear..

  4. Diyaa

    Lovely update!! And thanks to your endnote I’ll try to keep flying with the help of a breeze?

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Diyaa…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  5. Awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Rashi…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  6. Dear it’s awesome… I love your ending notes….with Lots of love…..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Nikita…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….
      Luv u too dear…

  7. Sairan

    Awsomeeee..Just superbbbbb

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Sairan…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  8. Awesome epi… loved it…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Lilly…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  9. Nita D

    Lovely episode dear. I m so eagerly waiting for the next one.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Nita…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  10. Samm

    i can’t believe it’s going to end soon! why? oh why is this ending so soon? such a nice, satisfactory one! 🙂

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Sammie…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

      And plz believe that this is ending by next part…

  11. Ruksy

    Amazing

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Ruksy…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  12. JanviSingh

    Whhhattt….???? Ye itne jldi end kaise ho skta h????
    Anyways I’m glad tht the other story won’t end this soon…
    N it was a shocking update….
    Shocking cuz itne sare shocks Jo the is part mein???
    See u in the next part….
    Till then take care…
    Luv u….???

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Janvi…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

      And yup O Saathiya is still going on…

  13. Superb update…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Ankita…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sso…..and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  14. Dheemahee

    Wow dear wow?????? what a episod Yar I really loved it the conversation between Pinky and Anika was just simply awesome…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Dheemahee…….and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  15. Yashu

    Awesome loved it

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Yashu…….and I’ll try to post the last part by tomorrow….

  16. Mrunal

    hey kuhu….
    first of all really very sorry for not commenting these many days…..

    but i think god decided to give me rollercoaster ride… first a very big issue created between my close friend and me… & i totally become depressed.. and for avoiding my frustration to burst on wrong person i stopped commenting… thanks to samm & shivika bcoz of them and my bunch of other friends i became normal again… but later that I’m suffering from cold and fever and still in bed rest bcoz of weakness….

    but today i finished all ur episodes in one go…..

    a lot has happened in the story….
    really happy nafratbaaz exposed…????
    pinky & annika’s bond totally unexpected… but loved it….

    dumbo shivaay itna bada change notice nahi kiya…???

    I’m sad that next part will last one…
    I’ll miss this badly yaar…

    & i missed u also very badly…
    love u dear…???

    1. Kehkasha

      hey di thank you so much……
      and thousand times i have told u not to say sorry……par aap sunte hi nahi ho…..
      and about the last part…..then do read that……as for now i am typing that only and hopefully i will post it by evening……

      and how r u now…..,even i missed u di……but i didn’t bothered u thinking that u might be busy with some important stuffs………but i was literally unaware of the fact that u were not well………..

      get well soon…..and plz..plz..plz…jaldi se theek hoke……apni pyari si choti sis ki baat maan kar……apna ff post kar do……..plz…plz……..

      Till then……see u…..and tc….

  17. Ruhirachel

    Superb ?? ….And ur so talented Yar…..I can’t write dis much long episode ?

  18. Ruhirachel

    Superb ?? ….And u r so talented Yar…..I can’t write dis much long episode ?

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