JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 8)

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Hello friends…. This is KEHKASHA reporting with part 8 of JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…..WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI….

Thank you all for your wonderful support…. One thing which I would like to clear is that…… Pinky and her condition is because of GUILT FACTOR…… She is guilty from deep inside…… She is a kind of person who is really very selfish for her son but this time she had failed in being that……moreover she had hurt an innocent girl….. So she is GUILTY….

And one more thing…… I have decided to complete it with full 10parts……so two more parts after this……to go….

Lets start with the update…

RECAP- ROTILANA EXPOSED…….SHIVAAY AND PINKY’S TALK…..

PART 8
SCENE Next Morning
@Oberoi mansion….

Morning…….well it would be better to say that it was a dark morning……….morning coz sun had rose……..at its usual time………and dark coz the hearts of people in the mansion were completely drenched in guilt……..and sadness……..they were not bothered by the brand new day………all were dull like they don’t have life………like they don’t have any mood to live………like there is nothing in their life that they can live for…………

There was complete silence in the hall……noone was there……no movement…….just a dull day with a dull start……..

Within a minute or two Tejvi were shown coming downstairs…….having a light routine talk…….

Tej- (while tying buttons of wrist) Jhanvi……today is an important meeting……..and I don’t wanna disturb anyone in the home……..especially maa……..so make sure everything goes well throughout the day……….

Jhanvi -nods in positive…..

Tej- ok listen………i guess Shakti slept late at night so he is quite late today………when he get up……..tell him that I will handle the meeting…….

Jhanvi -hmm…..alright….

Tej- (turning to her) and if anything is needed………then I am just a call away………..hmmm……ok….

Jhanvi -smile satisfactorily………..ok….

And Tej leaves……

Jhanvi- (thinking) kal ke incident ke baad tum kitna badal Gaye ho Tej………. I am soo happy…..she smile and shrugged her shoulders……
[U have changed soo much ,Tej……..after yesterday’s incident……]

Jhanvi- Abhi tak sab uthe nahi……..i must go and check……..[All didn’t get up yet…]

Jhanvi leaves………and firstly she reaches Dadi’s room……..and…

Jhanvi- Maa…..let’s go and have breakfast…….
Dadi- (a bit sad) hmm…..chal puttar…..(she takes a pause)….. ShivOmRu aa Gaye……aur Shakti Pinky……..aur prinku kahan hai……aur….
[hmmm…….let’s go……..Did ShivOmRu came……..and Shakti Pinky……….and where is Prinku………and…..]

Before she could complete……..jhanvi cuts her………and…
Jhanvi – mummyji Tej office gaye hain prinku college……..and baki sab ko Mai bulane jaa rahi hun…….aap chaliye……theek hai….
[mummy ji Tej has gone to office…….prinku to college………and I going to call the rest……….is that ok……..]

Dadi- theek hai puttar…..
[ok puttar]

Dadi leaves to hall along with jhanvi who eads to call shinky……… But in the way they found worried Shakti……..

Dadi- Shakti…..puttar kya hua…….tu itna pareshan kyun hai………sab theek toh hai……..tu kuch bolega…….?
[shakti…….what happened……..why r u so tensed……….everything is fine,right……….will u say something…..??]

Shakti- Maa aapne Pinky ko kahin dekha……??
[Maa did u saw Pinky anywhere………??]

Dadi- nahi puttar……..par baat kya hai……??
[no son……but what’s the matter……??]

Shakti- Bhabhi aapne……..aapne subah se usse kahin dekha……??
[Bhabhi did u see her anywhere since morning…….??

Jhanvi – No……but would u tell the matter…..

OmRu came panting and informed shakti that…..
Om- Chote papa……..humne sab jagah dekh liya……..
[chote papa……we searched everywhere……]

Rudra- in the whole mansion……..garden……lobby……..kitchen………even then all the bathrooms and store room also……

Om- lekin Choti maa kahin nahi hain……….
[but Choti maa is nowhere….]

Dadi- (worriedly) Hua kya hai……..koi batayega…….aur pinky kahan hai……….sab usse dhoondh kyun rahe hain…….??
[what had happened……….will anyone tell………and where is pinky why r u all searching her………]

Shakti – Maa subah se pinky mil nahi rahi hai……….raat ko bhi jab woh kamre Mei aayi thi…..toh bahut pareshan thi……….saari raat kuch badbadaaye jaa rahi thi………..aur subah bhi……mere uthne ke pehle hi kahin chali gayi……..
[maa pinky is missing since morning……….even when she came in room last night………she was tensed………..she kept on blabbering something……whole night………and in morning also……..she left before I woke up…….]

Shivaay who overhead this conversation fumes and…..says…..

Shivaay – maa nahi mil rahi…….se kya matlab hai……….tum logon ne theek se dekha hi nahi hoga…….
[maa is missing…….what does that mean………..u all might not have looked properly…….]

Om- shivaay humne…..sab jagah achche se dekha hai……..choti maa nahi mil rahin hai……..
[shivaay we have searched properly………choti maa is missing…..]

Shivaay – (out of sense) missing……aise kaise missing………(fumbling)…..ma…mai..mai…..dekhta …..hu….hun……..
Maa……maa…..
[missing………but how…..I’ll search…..]

And he started looking for Pinky all over the house………shouting Maa…….maa…….madly………OmRu constantly followed him………in order to relax him……….but now shivaay was literally out of his mind………..as for him this week is a week of loss…………and being a famous businessman………..or a tadibaaz person (as Anika says)…………he has lost two most precious persons of his life………..

This time the matter was not to select one………..out of two………it was just……..that he was left with nothing to select………….neither his wife………nor his mother………. The two most wonderful ladies of his life were now far from him…………..he was going mad……..by each passing step……….the shout was getting more and more louder……….and terrible………to be handled by the elders……..weeping silently in the hall……….

Literally speaking……….he was feeling the worst he can…………..

This was his mad reaction when he……..shouted like thunder…….

Shivaay – KHANNA…….khanna…..

And Khanna entered rushing……….as this voice was really making him shiver to the core………..this was not what he know…….this was not that shivaay whom he knew……..

Khanna- Yes sirji…..

Shivaay- (still shouting) Did u saw maa going out of the mansion this early morning……..??

Khanna – Sirji…….woh……actually…..

Shivaay -(in same tone) were u sleeping…….in the morning……?? Answer me damnit…..

Khanna – Sirji woh Pinky ma’am……..went out……today’s morning………and has not left still……

Shivaay – and u r telling me now………is this the job for which u r hired…….??

Khanna- Sirji……actually ma’am herself has ordered me not to tell u anything………as she is going to resolve all the problems………as she is gonna to repent…….for all the mistake she had done….. .

Shivaay – oh really……..and now……

But he was cutted……..because of the call on his phone…….

He receives the call…..
CALL-
Shivaay – Hello…..
Poc-……………….
Shivaay -what……..maa……but how…….wait I am coming………
CALL ENDS…..

And he rushed outside…… OmRu filled him assuring elders…….that everything will be fine……

But elders were more tensed……..firstly for Pinky……..and then for shivaay……so they decided not to leave there children alone………and they also follow them……..

ShivOmRu reached Lifeline hospital……..and inquired at reception about pinky………and the receptionist indicate them the way to pinky’s ward………and they left……

As soon as they reached there………shivaay immediately rushed inside the ward………while OmRu were shocked seeing the person……….so was the situation of dadi ,jhanvi and shakti………

A no. of questions were running in everyone’s mind……….and the most important was how was Pinky with that person……….

TO BE CONTINUED….

PRECAP- Pinky- Anika…..tu hamare saath ghar chal rahi hai na……?
Anika- Ji MAA….
Rest everyone shocked……

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So friends done with today’s update……hope u will like it…..do tell me ur reviews……u might now have guessed…….that who I the person……do guess one more thing…..

Why Anika called Pinky as MAA……..??

Did Pinky apologize…….?? How…..??

Till then enjoy the ending note……
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LAMHON KE AANCHAL KO PHISALTE DEKHA HAI……
KHUSHIYON MEIN GHAMON KO PIGHALTE DEKHA HAI…….
DARD SE TOOTE TOH AAP BHI HONGE…..
MAGAR UN TUKDON KO SAMETTEY AAPKO…..HUMNE DEKHA HAI…..

With this…..
Signing off…
KEHKASHA..

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42 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Wow wow wow epi.. Emotional ??

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sairan…

  2. Renimarenju

    Hats off…i wish this would happen in real ib….really heart touching episode……and more excited 4 precap…….thanks 4 sending links……and am really 2 busy yaar……not getting time….but tmrw i will be free,,,,,,,

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks di………and yup I understand and its completely alright…….I’ll send u the links…… And by the way I have posted part 9…..I’ll send you the link….

  3. Fantastic

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks shainaya…

  4. Pooja26

    wow yr……
    m in love with d last parts shyaris !!!!!!!!
    just loved it !!!!!!
    amazing part……
    post asap…….
    tc…….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Pooja…

  5. Dheemahee

    Superb one dear no words left now bas next episode ka wait karna he ab to suspense Jane ke leahe ?cya.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Dheemahee…..and sorry for late reply….

  6. Awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Rashi..

  7. Sslachu

    It’s so beautiful… N your Shayari’s???????I’m in love with them

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Lachu….

  8. Dear it’s awesome and emotional and your ending notes are so encouraging…. I also encouraged… Thanks for this update and encouraging me through your beautiful lines…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Nikita…….and sorry for late reply……and its a big thing for me that I am able to encourage u….

  9. Ruksy

    Loved it totally update soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Ruksy…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Lilly……

  10. Diyaa

    Absolutely wonderful update. Lovely ending note ?

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Diyaa..

  11. Vincy

    So excited… Pls upload next part soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Vincy…posted part 9…

  12. Yashu

    Lovely yaar n ur shayaris killing me man…waiting for nxt…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Yashu…

  13. Lalitha

    Awesome epi dear….waiting fr the next part

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Lalitha…….posted part 9…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sso…..

  14. JanviSingh

    U nailed it sissy….
    Superb dear…..
    I think CVS ko tum se suggestions lene chahiye….
    Really excited for the precap…
    N as usual… Luvd the ending note…???????

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks janvi…..and ur dp is soo cute…

  15. Awesome ending note !!
    Loved it ..post soon !!

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks mansi..

  16. Samm

    for the first time in like forever, i think, i like the shayari at the end more than the entire episode. but this part was good too. 🙂 waiting for the next 🙂

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Sammie….it’s all my pleasure dear…

  17. Superb….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks shivika..

  18. Amazing episode…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you ankita….

  19. Luna

    Oh dear, your FF is so emotional. all the emotions are perfectly shown by u and your writing style really good and easy to understand. I’m liking your story. I’ll comment on your another FF after reading it completely.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Luna……that’s really sweet of u….and yup take ur time……read properly and enjoy reading and do tell me ur views in any way u can…..thank you so much….

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