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JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 4)

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Hola friends….. This is KEHKASHA reporting with PART 4 of……. JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…….WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI…….

I have a lot to say……but all at end…..first start with the update…..

RECAP- Om….and Jhanvi tries to explain Pinky……. Shivaay’s dream……

PART 4…
Next morning….

A fresh day…..a fresh beginning…….a fresh thought…….that arises in a mind……… He immediately opened his eyes…….letting the sunlight……..fall on his blue orbs………making it worthy……..of starring for long time………. The bright rays falling on his face……..was somehow covering the traces of tears……..that flowed last night ……….but those on the other hand were……..adoring his billion dollar smile……….a smile with determination……….a smile with open heart……..a smile with satisfaction…….as if he has left the burden of his heart somewhere………last night……..

Shiv- Tumko wapas laa kar rahunga Anika………mai manta hun ki Maine kal bahut badi Galati ki………lekin Mai ab uss Galati ko sudharunga…….
(u have to return Anika……..i accept that I have done a big mistake yesterday……..but I will correct that now…….)…

He immediately gets down the bed and rushes to washroom…….
He got ready very fast wondering…….where his lil brothers have gone…..

As he was getting down………..he found everyone present in the hall………all were looking sad……except TiLana and their mom……… Even pinky was not sad……..but at least she was not wearing that clever smile………

OmRu were standing in the middle………seeing the situation………shivaay felt a sudden pain in his heart………..asthe atmosphere was dull……..and completely black and white type………

He hold his chest as hard as he can in order to prevent any worsening situation………. Soon he gathered courage to ask OmRu about the matter…….

Shiv – OmRu……..what happened…….why is everyone like this……….did anything happened……..

A lot of concern was audible in his voice…………and a lot of excuses were visible on the faces of rest other………. As if they weren’t willing to tell anything to shivaay……….as if they were knowingly trying to divert the topic………..as if they don’t have courage to tell shivaay the matter………….as if they were afraid for shivaay ………

On the other hand………..shivaay was feeling more and more pain…….with each passing second……..and with each second the increasing silence………he hesitantly………gulping back the saliva……..with choked voice…….and with a lil idea about the situation……..asked….

Shiv- is….is….ani…….anika…..al….alright…….is Anika…….alright…..

As soon as these words left his mouth the dropping faces immediately looked at those KANJI eyes…….which were exactly showing the actual pain…….that was buried deep inside his heart……..his anger……..his frustration…..his arrogance……..and what not…… These r the TOOLS that he always used for hiding his pain…..

Om by gathering all his courage speaks…
Om- Shivaay hum tujhe kal uss halat mein nahi dekh paaye………toh aaj subha- subha Suraj ki pehli Kiranke saath hi hum…….anika Bhabhi ko dhoondhne nikal Gaye……… (Shivaay……we were not able to see u that condition ………..so today morning…….with the first ray of sunlight we went out in search of Anika Bhabhi……..)

Shiv- Then….

Rudra- bhaiya……humne unhe sab jagah dhoondha…….mandir mein…..unki puraani cantten mein……unki best friend ke ghar…..yahan tak ki unke purane ghar bhi……… Par……
(bhaiya we search her everywhere…….in temple……in her old canteen……..her best friend’s house……even in her old house……..but…….)

Shiv- but…….par kya Rudra……

Om-Par shivaay……..woh Hume kahin nahi mili…….
(But shivaay we didn’t find her anywhere…….)

Shivaay by now was visualising all the talks and chats……..and weird words…….of Anika………his mind and his heart………for the first time……..were together……….for the time both were OCCUPIED by only one person’s name…….. Anika……

His brain was constantly triggering him about something wrong…….but his heart……..his heart was explaining………or in better words consoling his mind……… He was having a strong belief that Anika will be alright…….but the situation and the dull and down faces…………of his family members were indicating something else…………

Om- Shivaay we informed police about Anika’s missing……….and they called……
Shiv- (in curiosity to find something good)…….what did they said………

Rudra- Bhaiya wo….
But he was cut due to call…….. Om’s phone received a call……….

As soon as he attended the call……his expressions changes like rainbow with each passing sentence of the conversation…………as soon as he hang out….
Om- Shivaay chalo……
(shivaay lets go)

Rudra-O…kya hua…….Mai bhi chalta hun aapke saath………. (o what happened……….i will also accompany you……)

And the three brothers rushed outside……….after driving for about 15min……..they reached a place……..a house…..

They entered the house and find……..sahil sitting in the hall………writing something…….. Shivaay was soo happy to see him……his happiness was now lessening his guilt……..he was now satisfy……..after seeing sahil safe……… He rushed to him and……..hugged him tightly………..into a bone crushing hug………and to his surprise……… Sahil also tightens the grip…….instead of protesting………

Shiv- (in a dull tone) I am sorry Sahil……Mai bilkul bhi achcha nahi hun…….maine bahut galat kiya……..tumhare saath……..tumhari Anika didi ke saath………i am sorry….

Sahil- Its ok….

Shiv- (in shock breaking the hug) its ok……nahi sahil….maine kitna galat kiya……tum mujhe aise kaise maaf kar sakte ho……..tum mujhe sazaa(punishment) do……

Sahil- (out of innocence)….. Theek hai billu ji…….aapki sazaa yeh hai ki aapko…..meri didi ki saari batein manani hongi…….. (ok billu ji ur punishment is that u have to agree with all the talks of my didi…..)

Shiv- promise…..
Sahil- pinky promise……..and forwards his Pinky finger……
They tangled their Pinky fingers…..
Shiv- Pinky promise………

Both OmRu were shedding tears of happiness as noone expected that sahil will so easily forgive shivaay……they were smiling like heaven………they were smiling coz their brother was smiling…….they were smiling coz this was the only thing………that they were missing since last night……….

But soon shivaay asked…..
Shiv- sahil……where is ur Anika didi……
Sahil- mujhe nahi pata……

The happiness on the faces again fades away listening sahil’s words………
Shiv- par Anika aur tum…..saath mein hi thhe……hai na…..
(but Anika and u were together right….)

They were lost in their deep thoughts……they were thinking that how and…..where…….could Anika…….leave……that too leaving sahil behind……….

They were thinking that where she may go……….but soon their thought process were distributed………by the voice from behind………

Voice- Anika Mata rani ke mandir ke peeche wali pahadi par hai…..
(Anika is on the hill near temple)

All turned to the direction of voice…….and ShivRu were shocked seeing the person…….but not Om……..as the person was the one who called them……here in his house…..and because of him………only they were able to meet Anika and sahil….

TO BE CONTINUED…
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So friends done with the update….. Hope u will like it……and about my question in the previous part……my decision is..

Anika will be back…..
But in my style….with her head high….and with her self-respect…..and according to me…… Pinky will be the one to bring Anika back……and not shivaay…..coz this time he is not at fault……he is just under pressure……. And this will happen soon….

So friends this was the answer to all ur suggestions…..hope u all agree with me…and plz keep supporting me……

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR AMAZING SUPPORT AND ENCOURAGEMENT…. THANK U TO ALL THOSE WHO INSPIRED ME…..

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ROOH SE ROOH KE TAAR HAIN JUDD GAYE……
DIL NE DIL SE IZHAAR HAIN KAR DIYE……
INTEZAAR HAI UNN…..LAFZON KA……ALFAAZON KA…
BEKARAR ISHQ KI KAHAANI JO BUN GAYE…..

With this.
Signing off…
KEHKASHA

45 Comments
  1. Sairan

    Awsoommmeeeeeeee..Loved it ❤❤❤❤❤
    Ur next episode bits are tooo good..Can’t wait for the next episode..Post soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Sairan…..
      And I’ll post soon……

  2. Awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Shainaya

  3. Plzzzzz…..update soon..plzzz…bdw epi was just awsm….loved it too the core..ur awsm writter dear..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sneha…

  4. Sairan

    Yes yes we agree with u totally..Bas Anika suicide drama na ho..Pahad 🙈🙈🙈🙈
    And of course Anika is a girl of self respect..Don’t let her melt so easily bt show some good and emotional moments PLZZ ❤❤

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks again dear…..
      And don’t worry coz…HAR PAHAD PAR SUICIDE NAHI HOTE…..

  5. Vincy

    Ok… I agree with your decision

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Vincy…

  6. Shivika

    Awesome…..brilliant……the ff story is going just speechless…….loved ut to the core………

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks shivika…

  7. So amazing..n what a twist ..pinky bringing Anika back to Om ..reason must be Shivaay’s health .. Let’s see…but jeeju-saala bond was lovely !!!
    Post next soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Mansi….
      And wait for next update……u will get to know everything…

  8. Diyaa

    Lovely update! I really like your idea of Pinky bringing back Anika. First, it’s only fair since as you said Shivaay was under pressure. Second, this will increase Anika’s self esteem and dignity even more. Third it’s a new idea. I haven’t read this angle before. So it will be very interesting. Looking forward to the next update.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Diyaa…..actually we all have seen Pinky humiliating Anika……..a lot…..but I just wanna imagine…….how will she regret…..coz this will be the most amazing scene…..

  9. Awesome shivay ki halat dekhi ni jati

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sso…..and don’t worry he will be fine soon…..but tab tak…..plz dekh lo…….oops….padh lo…..but yes I am sure you will love it further…..

  10. JanviSingh

    Yipppeeeeee…. I just luvd Ur idea…Cuz I’m annoyed wid Pinky’s Character…. N it was awsm sissy… N yup… I luvd today’s thought too..😊😊😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you janvi…..and have u posted ur next part…..
      Wait I guess u might be having ur exams……right…..r u gonna to give boards this year

      1. JanviSingh

        U guessed it right dear… My 3rd pre board is starting from Monday n 27 the was my brother’s birthday… So, got a little busy… Bt I would update d next part tomorrow for sure….☺☺

  11. Manu24

    mind blowing update…
    shivay’s pain omg…

    and yes… pinky wala idea is superb..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks di…

  12. Ruksy

    The update was amazing

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks ruksy……and yeah that was something different….:)

  13. Awesome….waiting for d nxt

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks shivika…..and I’ll post soon….

  14. Renimarenju

    Gud way of presentation…loved shivomru…..just can’t miss ur work……that’s why i read it now as i got a break…….really a new concept and u have done justice to characters in this ff…..looking forward…..4 next part……..and as soon as u will post the next one….send the links also……miss chatter box….

    1. Kehkasha

      Yeah renima di…..I’ll do that…..and thank you so much……coz its a great thing…….for me….

  15. Kavya347

    Wow kehkasha..it is superb… Excellent… loved pinky in this epi and Shivaay Sahil bonding was great…loved it a lotttt!!!!!☺ sorry i was not able to comment for the previous epis…they too were awsome… eagerly waiting for the next

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Kavya….and since I know that u read my ffs……so u need not to say sorry for not commenting……coz we r friends………

      And yeah I’ll post the next soon…..

  16. Awsome..and ur ri8 anika should come back to OM and she should be brought by Pinky…..update nxt part asap

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks san….and I’ll post next soon…

  17. Nita D

    Again a lovely episode kehkasha….loved it…..

    (Sorry for such a small comment as I m travelling)

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey dear koi itni si baat ke liye sorry bolta hai kya……..
      Anyways thanks a lot dear…..
      And as a replacement for ur SORRY can u plz tell me……..what’s D stand for……in ur name….
      And where r u travelling too….anyways happy journey……and plz now don’t say thank you for a loooonnnnngggg reply….

      1. Nita D

        Actually I had to say thanks for the reply but just I read your last line. So I’ll not say thanks.
        But thanks anyways 😉

        U take so much efforts to write so at least I should give a proper comment na. Toh sorry toh banta hai.

        Actually when I was registering, Nita was already taken. So I kept my name in TU as Nita D.
        D is the initial of my surname.

        I don’t live in my hometown. I study in another city. So was going back home after a long for the weekend. So there was a network problem.

  18. Superb episode…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Ankita….

  19. Aditi9

    You nailed it again

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Aditi…

  20. Samm

    AM-A-ZING! simply loved it. the suspense is killing, but i’m cool with imagining all kinds of possibilities. like shivaay winning her over again and the family moments with pinky being the good person for a change. 😀

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey samm thank you so much…..and keep guessing as I am gonna to reveal everything soon…

  21. Yashu

    Superb just read all 4 parts loved dem…..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks yashu….

  22. Mrunal

    ohh ho kuhu…
    tumane toh latka diya yaar…
    abhi mai soch hi rahi thi ki ruko thoda suspense khul jayega par tumane toh aur badha diya…
    I’m very happy with ur decision regarding annika bcoz this is what i always wanted…
    so loved it to the core episode was fantastic….

    love u dear…
    and so sorry for being late….😐

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