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JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 3)

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Bonjour friends…… KEHKASHA is back with part 3 of….. JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA….WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI…..

Thank you so much for your amazing support…..and I will be posting in two ways……either both the ff’s on one day ……..or both separately on alternate days…..

I guess Ruksy asked me in previous page……that is Anika coming back…..
Then this is my question to you all…..what do u think…..or what do u want……… Do u want Anika to come back to the MANSION so soon…..or not….. If yes then why and if no then why……???

Ok enough of my talks…..but plz do tell me ur views on the above question…..

RECAP- Anika leaves oberoi mansion with Sahil…… Shivaay falls unconscious……

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PART 3…
SCENE @ Oberoi mansion…

OmRu were sitting on either sides of shivaay holding his hands tightly in their grip………..as if their grip is soooo strong………that even death cannot apart them with his brother……..they were having tears……..but were trying their best to compose themselves……….as they recalled doctor’s words……

FLASHBACK-
OmRu takes shivaay to his room…..and they immediately called doctor…..
Doctor after examining Shivaay completely comes out……..and told OmRu….

Doc- This was a close call…….if u have delayed in calling me for even a sec…..then…..

Om- Doc ab shivaay kaisa hai….. (how is shivaay….??)
Rudra- Han doc bhaiya ab theek to hain na…….unhe hosh kab aayega……. (Doc is bhaiya alright…..when will he get consciousness……)

Doc- he is better……and will soon get conscious…….but u all have to be careful…….
Om- matlab…….(meaning…..??)

Doc- matlab yeh……that I have seen him in such condition for the first time…….. I mean he never get such attacks coz….he takes proper precaution……….but today……..today…… I was not treating Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi……….who is ready to bear any problem……….but today I met Shivaay…….just shivaay……..who is having………no…….who is burying pain deep inside his heart………..

Rudra- Doc……mai kuch samjha nahi……(doc I didn’t get anything…..)

Om- (confused)Yes doc…..shivaay…..shivaay Singh oberoi……..what do u mean……

Doc- look I am ur family doc…..hence I know all four of u……..since ur childhood……..
And shivaay is the one who was the strongest………..but his heart problem was making him weak……..and he never let this problem overpower him…….
All u have to know is……that u have to be careful………and keep him away from any kind of stress……………at least untill he recovers properly…….

Om- Yes doc……we will take care of him………..
Doc- then I must leave…….as I have to examine few reports…..

Rudra- doc…..i will drop u…..

FLASHBACK ENDS….

Rudra by now had slept after crying a lot…..and Om was also sleepy…… Just then Om notices movement in shivaay’s hand…….

Om immediately get up in the hope that now shivaay would wake up………but all he can hear and see was…….. Shivaay constantly muttering Anika’s name……….he was sweating badly…….as if he was seeing a bad dream………..this continues for about fifteen minutes………..and all the while…….shivaay kept on murmuring Anika’s name………….while Om tried hard to pacify him……..relax him…….but all went waste……..as there was no betterment in shivaay’s condition……..

Om took the jug kept at side table……..in order to sprinkle few water droplets……….that could help shivaay with his mental state…………….but he found it empty……….so he rushes to kitchen……….

On the other hand……. Rudra by now has realized whatever was happening in the room………..as he get disturbed with his sleep………… As soon he got up………all he find was…………shivaay getting up from his unconscious state……….with a jerk……calling out Anika’s name………as loud as he can………

Fear was visible in his eyes…….as his eyes grew completely red…………and the shiver in his voice……….was more than enough for other’s to gather in his room…………..

Om came back rushing with the water……….and made him drink……..while continuously rudra was patting his back…..gently………in order to make him feel better……..

Everyone was hell terrified with shivaay’s state………… Dadi goes bear shivaay……..and simply caressed his hair……..as he was lying down………and without speaking a word she left……..accompanied by terrified and sobbing……..soumya……and prinku………

Pinky- O my mata…..iss ladki ne na jaane kaun sa kala jadoo kar diya hai mere shivaay par………dekho toh neend mein bhi ussi ka naam liye jaa raha hai……… (OMM don’t know what black magic has that girl did on shivaay………look he is calling her name even in his sleep……)

Listening this OmRu starred her with angry eyes…….which was a signal fir Jhanvi…….who immediately dragged Pinky outside the room………..

Om asked Rudra to stay back with shivaay until he returns………and he left…..

Outside the room pinky was as usual……….blabbering against Anika……..(don’t know what Anika has done to her)

Om came out and closed the door calmly……and as soon as he found Pinky……..again omitting bad words for Anika…….he shouted…….

Om- Enough Choti maa…….enough……of ur talks……..aapko kya lagta hai…….duniya mein har koi paison ke liye jeeta hai……..nahi Choti maa……..duniya mein sab ek jaise nahi hote…………….

(what do u think Choti maa is everyone in the world……….behind money………no Choti maa……no two people are same in this world…..)

Jhanvi and Pinky were shocked as for the first time on has said something to them…….and that too he has shouted………..the calm and soothing personality of Om has now vanished……….as the Om standing in front of them was having fire in his eyes………fire for wrong and care for his brother……….

Om continued…….
Om- Aur aap Anika Bhabhi ko blame kar bhi kaise Sakti hain…….
(and….how could u blame Anika Bhabhi…….)

Aap ke hisab se sahil ne Tia ka diamond necklace churaya……….arre jis bachche ko chori ka matlab hi nahi pata……..jisse HEERON ki keemat hi nahi pata……..woh kaise chori…..kar sakta hai……

(According to u sahil has stolen the diamond necklace of Tia……… Arre the kid who don’t know the meaning of theft………who don’t know the PRICE…..VALUE of DIAMOND…………how can he steal………..??)

Jhanvi- even I agree Pinky……..how could u believe Tia………and how could you blame that lil kid………agar mujhe Zara bhi ehsaas hota ki baat itni badh jayegi……ki Anika sach mein ghar chod kar chali jaayegi…….toh main tumhe ussi waqt thappad (slap) markar sahi karti…..bina mummyji ki parwah kiye……

(if I would have lil idea about the situation……if I would have guessed that situation may get worseb then I would have slapped u then and there……….i would have corrected u…..without caring about mummyji…..)

Pinky- What do u means…..jethaniji…….why would I believe that half bahu Anika instead of my Diamond bahu Tia……
Jhanvi- Kyunki Tia jhoot bol sakti hai but Anika nahi……(coz Tia can lie……but not Anika…..)

Pinky- O my Mata…..jethaniji……kab se aap uss Anika ki tarafdaari karne lagin…….. (when did u started favouring Anika…..)
Jhanvi- Hamesha se…. (always…)

Pinky- And……kahan Gaya aapka…..trust…..wo trust jo aapko…..tia par karna chahiye tha…..
(and where did ur trust on Tia gone….)

Jhanvi- Tia par Maine ussi din se bharosa karna chodd diya…..jab usne Tej ko clear nahi kiya tha……ki Maine Svetlana ko seedhiyon(stairs) se dhakkanahi diya…….she was there Pinky…….tia ne sab dekha tha……
(My trust on Tia lacked from the day….when she didn’t cleared tej that I have not pushed Svetlana off……the staircase………)

Pinky- jethaniji……toh ab aap meri bahu ko blames karengi……..lekin jo bhi ho……….anika…..aur uska bhai…….hamare paison ke peeche hain……..aur koi bhi baat……..iss sachchai (truth) ko nahi badal sakti……..
(so…jethaniji now u will blame my bahu……..but anyways…….anika and sahil are behind our money and no talks can deny this TRUTH…….)

Om- TRUTH……doesn’t sound good form u……..choti ma aap sach ki baat na hi Karen toh achcha hai……..janti hain kyun…..kyunki agar Maine aapko….aapka sach dikhaya……..toh aap seh nahi paayengi………aur usse badi baat ki mujhse kaha nahi jayega……..

(Choti maa it’s better that you don’t talk about TRUTH…..coz if i told u ur truth……then u won’t be able to bear that…….and more than that…….i won’t be able to say that………

Pinky was having tears in eyes….but she was constantly starring omkara…
Om- being calm………and composing himself………choti maa…..mai aapko……hurt nahi karna chahata tha…….bas itna samjhana chahata tha ki……..iss baar Anika sahi hai………..aur yeh shivaay bhi janta hai…..par accept kyun nahi kar raha………..ye koi nahi janta…..
(Choti maa…….i didn’t want to hurt u……i only want u to understand that…..this time Anika is right……..and shivaay also know this……..but why is he not accepting…….this only he knows…….)

Pinky- she was having tears in her eyes………pata nahi ki kaun sahi hai…..aur kaun galat…..bas itna pata hai……..ki aaj pehli baar……mere bachche ne mujhse iss tarah baat ki hai……….aur mujhe bahut bura laga……..
(Don’t know what’s right and what’s wrong…….all I know is that for…….the first time my son has talked with me like this……..and it hurts me……)

Saying this she left……and Om signed his mom to explain her his perspective………. Jhanvi also leaves…….

Rudra who have overheard the whole conversation……..was in tears……..but he was ok with whatever om and jhanvi told Pinky………as this was right………

OmRu left to their room after checking shivaay…….

As soon as OmRu had left……..shivaay opened his eyes………as if he was never sleeping………but he was acting soo…….

The TEARS were flowing like stream from his eyes…….as if they r originated from there…….and they have to flow……..in order to sooth his heart……..his paining heart…….. This was when he get into deep thinking………this was when he started his IMAGINATION………..this was when he saw Anika with his eyes open……….he was still lying on his bed……..he was stilll weak to stand or to sit………but he has a shine in his eyes………as those were reflecting his SOUL……….his ANIKA………

She was coming to him from the window near poolside……..asif she was there……..always……as if she has never gone……….she appeared out of nowhere……….from that window…………behind those……..white cutains……..her angelic beauty………yes she was looking like an angel………who was completely dressed in white…………the smooth wind helped shivaay with the vision…….as those were helping him…….to completely admire his angle………….

She was coming slowly to him……..and he…..he was feeling relaxed…….as if he is the one…….who owned……….the most beautiful place on the universe……….as he is the owner of HEAVEN……….

Music was playing in bg…..

She moved close to him……..and kept her hand on left side of his face………and started caressing his head……..his hairs……..his face……….they were completely lost in each others eyes………..they were lost in the depth…….that their eyes possessed………..they were lost in the emotion that was on the upper most layer………of their eyes……..they were lost in the feel……..of each other………..and this was giving peace……….alot of strength………..and this was nourishing his mental state………….they kept on being lost in each other’s essence……….

Oh Jana………plays in bg……

This was when Anika break that long eyelock……and she turned to leave……..but shivaay held her hand tightly………and dragged her into his tight hug………his warmth…….as if he will protect her from every bad………….

He keeps on murmuring……
Shivaay- Anika……i won’t leave you this time……….i won’t let u go……..i won’t repeat my mistake……..i won’t……….

And slowly he was driven into a peaceful and deep slumber…………imaging his ANIKA in his beautiful DREAMS…………as he slept hugging the pillow tightly……

TO BE CONTINUED…
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So friends done with the update……..for today….. A big…..bigger……..and….biggest thank you for your amazing support……… I am really grateful to each of u who have supported me……

And those who read O SAATHIYA……. I will be posting the next part by tomorrow…….

Till then enjoy this….and plz give me ur pov regarding Anika’s reentry in oberoi mansion……..

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ZAKHM THA GEHRA DIL MEIN MERE…
DARD UTHA THA PHIR KYUN TERE…
KHIL UTHA EK ROZ MAI…
MIL GAYI TU JAB EK SAVERE…..

With this…
Signing off..
KEHKASHA..

74 Comments
  1. Diyaa

    Beautiful!!

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Diyaa

  2. Fabulous

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Charitha

  3. Vincy

    Loved it… Waiting for next part

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Vincy…
      I’ll post next by tomorrow….

  4. Awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Debdutta

  5. Lisaaa

    Superb..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Lisaaa

  6. Sairan

    Ohh goodddd…It was really fantastic…So deep and emotional..It was sooo indulging…Plz bring anika back soon..I really don’t like story dragging honestly..Let shivay come back in SSO avatar and trace Anika and convince her by hook or crook with a bunch of your imagination but don’t plz drag it 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Sairan….and don’t worry dear…..i won’t drag it coz its a short story and I have not decided the no. of episodes yet…
      And Anika will be back….

      1. Sairan

        Plz post soon the next episode…Can’t wait muchhh

    2. Kehkasha

      I’ll post the next by tomorrow…..pakka…..dear…..just wait till then….

  7. U have to brought anika back because we all cannot see this anymore coz in the real ib anika is not treated well so I want that u should clear all the misunderstanding between shivika and pinky and plzzz tia ko nikalo😅😅😅😅it’s a request😅😅😅😅😅😍😍😍😍😘😘😙otherwise it’s fantastic dear love it.😊 😍😍😍😍😍and sorry if I said something bad😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😢😢😢😢

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you stutii….and Anika will be back…..and u have not said anything wrong…….or bad…..and about Tia……then u will get to know….as the story progress…..

  8. Gangu

    Plz bring Anika back to Mansion

    1. Kehkasha

      Yup dear Anika will be back….for sure

  9. Shivika

    I really admire the part……i m just gone numb and speechless …….i dont even have a word to express my feeling……i can just say that i touched strings of heart deeply…….i wish anika come back…..y i even have answer for that……i know that all the love stories are not meant to be having the unity part in them but…..the glance and feel of unity of two pure souls is mesmerising…….love is the feel which can’t even be expressed but can be done through soul to other soul…………
    I request u to unite this souls in ur ff who are inconplete without each other..becoz when a story ends with a note that the souls can’t get united…..it somewhere stabs the heart…and tears make their out to come……yaa but even if u complete the tears will come but that tears will not prick the heart…………..
    I just loved the episode…….
    Love u dear…….😊😊😊😊
    Hoping the best to arrive their way……

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much shivika….

      And I really loved ur explanation……and I will surely add this explanation in any of the part where it gets its real feel….
      Luv u dear…

  10. Awesome..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks setu

  11. it was fab post soon
    shivika should be united soon as they look good together

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you safaq….
      Shivika will be united…..
      For sure….even I agree they look good together….

  12. make shivika unite i like their khidkitod romance

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks aliya..
      And shivika will be united…

  13. it was superb post soon
    anika comeback soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Zain..
      I’ll post the next by tomorrow…
      And Anika would be back…

  14. Superb…keep Going on. .waiting for next part

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Adhya..
      Just wait till tomorrow…

  15. Wow (y)

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Kamalika

  16. Sriya

    dear i don’t have no words just want to say the best writer in tu who perfectly described the painful and emotional words/moments love you loadsssssssssssssssss

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey sriya……thank you so much…..and this is really a big compliment for me……..but I can’t take the whole credit alone…….as I was zero before I read any ff here on tu……..so all the writers r amazing……

      Thanks dear….

  17. Dheemahee

    Hi kehkasha how are you dear sorry for not commenting before as you know I am having exams as usual you rocked I loved it a lot it was awesome please post next one soon and again sorry for late comments I promise after exams that will not happen anyway I want to tell that lets shivaay search Anita for some time then bring her back Chalao now buy see you soon till than take care cya😆😆😘🙋✌

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey dear I am good………and how many times I have to tell u that don’t be sorry for anything……..coz I really understand…….and how r ur exams going…….and what r u studying right now…….i mean class or course…..

      Anika will be back….
      And thank you so much dheemahee

      1. Dheemahee

        Ya I know that u know that dear but still I was telling u and ya exams r going good I m in college and in IT first year . Chal gn now will see u in your next part TC😊

    2. Kehkasha

      That’s great dear…
      Gn….tc….

  18. Make Anika’s entry as soon as possible so that Pinky could realise her mistake.
    I have a Q how are you so philoshical?? I know it sounds weird, but I wanted to ask you for a long time. How did you right such things i tried many times but i can’t. Zakham tha ghara dil mein… . it is a sad shaayri. I liked it. And also your status kabhi kabhi jazbaatoon… . really liked it.
    Please post the next episode soon.

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Shalini…….don’t worry Anika wil be back……but in my style……

      And about me being philosophical then…….no I am not……i am a girl who is very talkative……and who never stops…….in anything………and about these shayaris…….then when I end the epi…….anything which comes in my mind……..is written as I love literature…….and these all r result of my all time thinking……..it happens…..how…..even I don’t know…..

  19. Amazing update

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks lilly

  20. Anah

    fantastic episode….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks anah

  21. No words….seriously…… Owsmm…….so beutiful..there were tears in my eyes…..by reading …i could visualise all those..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much sneha…..and plz don’t cry……coz its not allowed….
      I will post the next by tomorrow…

  22. Amazing….waiting fr d nxt…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks shivika….
      I’ll post next by tomorrow…

  23. Really superbbbb…. I think its better if pinky saw tia ND swetlana talking about their plan nd reveal truth of them both.keep rumi aside for new twists

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Ruhi……
      And Anika will be back….

  24. Pooja26

    wow !!!!!!!
    just loved it !!!!!!!
    last part just awwwww amazing…….
    post asap……
    tc……….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Pooja
      And I’ll post next by tomorrow..

  25. Amazing one !!!!!!!

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks mansi..

  26. JanviSingh

    U left me speechless dear… I can’t tell what was better the story or the thought of the day…. U r such an amazing writer sissy.. I hope u don’t mind me calling u that…😊😊☺👌👌👌

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much dear….
      And why would I mind…..that’s my pleasure dear….

  27. Ruksy

    Totally loved update and about anika she should come back when shivaay excepts his mistake so not so soon.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks ruksy….
      And Anika will be back…..but in my style….

  28. Aditi9

    Nice but I thought omru would go and get anika ASAP for shivaye’s sake

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Aditi….
      And Anika will be back…

  29. Amazing update…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks ankita..

  30. Jaya

    Why does this happens to me! 🙁 . Kal raat ko hi garmagaram comment kiya tha…pta nahi kon kha gaya. Anyways…as always mindblowing, painful epi. In One hand i want anika to take stand for her self respect , in OM she gets humiliation. Another hand…it’s really painful to see shivay in such condition. No idea dear. You decide it…ok! This pinky drama is too much…uske dimag me gobar bhara pada hai kya! She doesn’t want to understand. And…in prev epi…in comment you asked me 1 question, i have replied there…hope you read that.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you dear and it happens coz of this network……..and yes I read that and I have replied u there…..

  31. Anika KO vapis le aao

    1. Kehkasha

      Yup sso….anika will be back..

  32. Mrunal

    Mind blowing…
    Fantastic…
    Superb…
    Fabulous….
    Khidaki… Darwaja.. Sab tod epi….
    👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

    Abhi words nahi hai mere pass aur.. Toh samaz lo…

    And about annika’s reentry..
    I want her to be strong.. Confident
    And fight for her self respect…
    Bakki jo tumhe thik lage woh..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much di….and I got ur emotions……and feelings……and also ur pov….
      I’ll try to satisfy everyone’s wish regarding this…..
      Thank you so much dii..
      Luv u…

  33. Nita D

    It’s just lovely kehkasha….. n the shayris u write at the end r really toooooo good……

    Well abt anika’s re entry……I was thinking that it should be slow and steady progress. I mean not like in general daily soaps where last do episodes mein sab kuch suddenly thik ho jaata hai.
    Maybe u can show a scene where omru come to anika n tell her to come back n tell abt shivay’s condition.
    But then I also want that it should be shivay to bring her back home
    Ugh….this is so confusing…..
    But I guess whatever u have thought must be the best. As I have read your these two ffs, I can at least tell this much for sure.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Nita……
      And I got ur point……don’t worry the story will justify ur points ……and emotions……i hope so….

  34. Really kehkasha
    I loved it….
    You nailed it….
    Fabulous job……!

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks dear…and next part uploaded…
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/jab-dil-khud-par-aayegawoh-wala-hissa-baki-hai-kehkasha-part-4/
      Check out…..hope u will like this…

  35. Samm

    poor shivaay. oh! the feels that come with your ff! 🙂

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks samm

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