JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 10)

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Hello dear friends…. KEHKASHA is back with LAST PART i.e. PART 10 of JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA… WOH WALA HISSA BAAKI HAI.. And before startimg this part i would like to thank each and everyone of u all….. And today this part is dedicated to all those who have ever commented on this story…….and to all the silent readers…… Since i really don’t know that do i have any silent reader or not….. But all i can do is i can mention the names of each and every one of u who have supported me throughout this story……

And today u all have to bear this stupid talk of mine as the credit for my achievement belongs to u all……. So a very big thankyou to….
Dheemahee, Mrunal di, Renima di, Samm, Nita D, Janvi, Shivika, Shivika22Kapoor, Chandini, Kavya, Luna, Jaya, Sairan, Ruksy, Nithu, Diyaa, Manu24, Yashu, Setu, Shivika123, Pooja 26, Shivika(G), Pri, Lisaaa, Shalini, SSO, San, Adhya, Sweetuishkara, Mansi, Ankita, Kavya347, VJey, Tany, Anaya, Aditi9, Charitha, Vincy, Sneha, Ranisha, Aparna Godekar, Lilly, Stutii, Sofia.S., Sabhya, Mukta, Debdutta, Gangu, Safaq, Aliya, Zain, Kamalika, Sriya, Anah, Ruhirachel, Faizaf, Shainaya, Nikitajai, Aish, Shuklarashi, Chikoo, Akshaya, Naisha, Ally, Bindu, Rozin, Lalitha, Shivanya, Sslachu, Anshika………

So done with my list…. I hope i have not missed anyone…..and if it is so……then plz comment and scold me for not including ur name…..hahaha….. anyways….. this full part is for u all friends…… And if u all commented today then it is gonna to be a record…. Now i am applying break to my nonstop chat…..

FAIR WARNING*- This part is extra LONG + extra EMOTIONAL…….written with lots of love……for all my dear readers……..

RECAP- Anika calls Pinky “MAA”…….leaving everyone shocked……all the oberoi ladies and youngsters return to mansion…..in order to plan a grand welcome of Anika and Sahil……… and Anika lost in her own thoughts…..

PART 10 (LAST PART)
Anika was all alone in the house….lost in her own thoughts…. those thoughts…..which were not letting her stay relaxed……she was not able to figure out the reason behind pinky’s regret……no. of questions were ringing in her mind……like……why was Pinky in that state……or how did she get to know the truth…….actually she had an answer for this……..may be Shivaay must have done something to bring out the truth…….but how……..she again drifted into the deep thoughts……of the morning…..

FLASHBACK….
Scene continued…..
After Pinky had apologised formally……..to Anika…..and Anika was in an utter shock as she had no idea what had happened……
RV left the place as he wanted to give them privacy to them…..as he knew the whole situation…….he excused himself from there saying that he had to report at crime branch…..in time…..
Anika held Pinky and made her sit…….she forced her to have water and relax for a while…..there was complete silence…..in the room…..the only voice that was piercing out from the deep silence was…….of sobbing…..as Pinky was genuienly sobbing……

After few minutes anika got up to go to kitchen and bring something to eat for pinky…….as she was looking completely exhausted……..but she freezed at a point……again after listening to pinky….

Pinky- (she was saying all this with eyes continuously starring at one point……and with voice completely guilty) Anika mujhe maaf kar de…..mai janti hun mujhse bahut badi galati hui…….ki maine tujh par vishwas nahi kiya……par tujhe mujhe maaf karna hoga……kyunki mai sach mein apni harkaton par sharminda hun………
[Anika forgive me…….i know that i have committed a big mistake…..by not trusting you……but u have to forgive me….as i am feeling really guilty for all my deeds……]

Anika- (goes to her and sit on her knees…..near the….bed on which Pinky was sitting….) Auntiji….aap yeh kya keh rahi hain……aur aap….aap aise kaise…..(she starred her with worried eyes….looking at her condition…) aap bas aaram kijiye……mai abhi shivaay ko call karke yahan bulati hun…..
[Auntiji what r u saying…..and u….u like this…… u just relax…….i’ll just call shivaay……and ask him to come here soon…..] And she turned to leave….but Pinky hold her hand…..and ask her to listen to what she is saying…..as she is here to talk to her and not to shivaay……Anika compiles…

Pinky- (she was saying all this with wet eyes) Jab tu shuru-shuru mein hamare ghar aayi thi tab mai tujhse nafrat nahi karti thi……kyunki tu dil se saaf hai……yeh baat mujhe pata thi……tere har kaam mein ek alag andaz hai……yeh mujhe pata tha…..(with full frustration) par pata nahi kaise tere lliye mere mann mein zahar bhar gaya……..
[When in the starting u came to our house……at that time i was not having any kind of problem with u……..coz i knew that u r good at heart……..i knew that u have a different style in each work of urs………..but don’t know how my heart got filled with hatered for u………..]

Anika- (with teary eyed) auntiji yeh aap kya keh rahi hain……
[auntiji what r u saying…..]

Pinky- (signing her to stay quite) shh….shh…. tu kuch nahi kahegi……chup ho ja……aur meri sun…..
[U will not say anything…….be quite…..and listen to me……]

Pinky- jab se tu mere Shivaay ki zindagi ka ek zaroori hissa ban gayi…….teri baaton ko woh samajhne laga……….teri baatein……teri ek jhalak uske liye zaroori hone lagi……..tab se mere mann mein darr baith gaya……..ki kahin mai apne bachche ko kho na doon………kahin woh teri wajah se mujhse door na ho jaye………aur jab se mere dimag mein yeh baat aayi ki tu mere Shivaay aur uske paison ke peeche hai……..tab se sab kuch badal gaya…….(and she literally cries…)
[when u became an important part of Shivaay’s life…….when he started understanding ur talks…….ur talks…….ur one look became so important for him…….from then a fear developed deep inside my heart…….that…..that i may not loose my son……..that he might go away from me because of u……. and the moment my mind registered the fact that u r behind my son and his money………….from then everything changed………..]

Anika- (she was also crying) Anutiji…..plz….plz aap mat roiye….mai aapko iss tarah nahi dekh sakti…….plz…..yehi bahut badi baat hai….ki aap ne mujhse…..khule mann se apne dil ki baatein share kari…….par plz….ab bas…..ab aap aur kuch nahi kahengi…..
[auntiji…..plz……plz….don’t cry…..i can’t see u like this…..plz……….this is a big thing that u r sharing ur heart out with me……..but plz…..now enough……now u will not say anything…….]

But Pinky didn’t listen…….she continued……as she had made her mind clear with the fact that today she is going to clear all the misunderstandings………..in her relation with Anika……..as today all the aporia of their relations r gonna to get untied because of this conversation………

Pinky- (crying) Maine tujhe kya-kya nahi kaha………kabhi sadak ka kooda kaha…….toh kabhi……kisi ka ganda khoon…….kabhi zameen ki dhool……to kabhi paison ki lalchi……..par mujhe yeh ehsas hi nahi hua ki tujhe ye sab kehte hue……..mai khud kitna neeche girti jaa rahi thi………mai khud kitna neeche girti jaa rahi thi………mujhe yakeen nahi hota hai………ki mai uss raeesi ka ghamand kar rahi thi………jiska hona na hona sab ek barabar hain……..jisse rishtey toottey hain……..jisse khushiyan door chali jati hain…….main paison ke…..ameeri ke ghamand mein itna andhi ho gayi thi ki mujhe mere bete ki dil ki baat bhi nahi pata chali…………(sarcastically) ya yun kahun ki maine usse bhi nazarandaz kar diya…..’

[what not have i said to u……..sometimes….road thrash……..then sometimes…….bad blood of someone………sometimes…..dust of the ground…….and sometimes…….greedy for money……….but i didn’t realised that by saying all this………i myself was stooping soo low……..i can’t believe that…..i was proud of that richness……….which in itself has no identity…….because of which relations break……..because of which…….we all get distanced from happiness………i was so blinded in the richness of money…….that i couldn’t get the heartiest wish of my son………….or should i say that i ignored them……]

Anika- (crying a lot….) nahi Auntiji…..plz aisa mat kahiye…plz…
[no auntiji plz..don’t say this….]

Pinky-(continued in the same flow) aur mai yeh bhool gayi……ki mai khud ek chote se pariwar se iss bade khandan ka hissa bani…….mujhse kitni badi galti ho gayi……(and she stood up)….
[And i forget…….that even i was from a small family…….who became a part of this big khandan…….i have done a big mistake…….]

As soon as Pinky stood up…..she started feeling dizzy…….and Anika again tried to make her sit…….but Pinky holded herself……and she again turned to Anika….and…
Pinky- Tu plz mujhe maaf kar de…….dekh….mai tere liye teri MAA jaisi hun………….MAA se galati ho gayi……yeh samajh ke hi maaf kar de…..
[ plz forgive me…….look…..i am like ur MAA…….and MAA committed a mistake……..plz forgive me thinking that…….]

And she bend down in order to hold her feet to apologise…….but Anika holded her hand in between and made her stand properly…….and almost in a tone of scolding she continued….
Anika- Aap kya samajhti hain…..han….ki jab marzi……mujhe kuch bhi suna dein…..jab marzi mujhse maafi maang le…….aap chahein toh main ghar chod kar chali jaun……aap chahein toh mai aapko maaf kar doon……….sirf aapki hi sunu…..hai na yehi chahti hain na aap…….(taking a pause) Aur abhi-abhi jo aap karne jaa rahin thi……uske liye aap kya kahengi…..
[what do u think of urself…..han……that when u like……u can scold me for any reason……when u like……u ask me for forgiveness…….when u like i must leave house…….when u like…..i must forgive u……….i must listen to u only……right…..this is what u want……… And just now what have u done……..do u have something to say about that………..]

Pinky was shocked and more than shocked…….she was feeling more and more guilty……as Anika was right…..and she knew that….. She was expecting that Anika would forgive her…….not easily…..but yet there was hope…….and scope………but now……..

Anika- (faking anger) aap khud ko meri MAA ki tarah kehti hain………(folding her hands across chest….and with full confidence….)……..toh zara yeh bataiye…….ki kaun si MAA apni beti ke paiir chuti hai……..han…..bataiye….
[u say that u r like a mother to me……..then tell me…..which mother touches feet of her daughter…..han…telll…..]

Pinky- (in the same flow) woh jisse bhi galati hoti hai….woh aise hi maafi mangta hai (she said all this in one go)…..
[Actually…..the one who did mistake…..ask sorry like this only…….]

But soon Pinky realises that what Anika said and what she replied…….she mentally said to herself “PHILA DIYA RAITA” and then looked at Anika who was smiling hard controlling her laughter……….
Pinky- (with complete innocence) toh tune mujhe maaf kar diya…..
[so u forgave me…..]

Anika nods in positive…..but didn’t said anything……to which Pinky replied…
Pinky- toh iska matlab ki aaj se tu mujhe MAA bulayegi……hai na…
[then that means……from today u will call me MAA….right…]

Anika stands confused out of happiness…….which Pinky noticed……and so she hold her and cupping her face she said……
Pinky- Tu mujhe abse MAA hi bulayegi……aur yeh ek MAA ka order hai……aur tera haq……ab kyunki mai apni galatiyon ko sudharna chahati hun…….toh tujhe waisa hi karna hoga jaisa teri maa……yani ki mai kahungi…… Pinky ki buri side tune ab tak dekhi…….lekin……ab tu iski maa wali side dekhegi……aayi baat samajh mein…….
[u will call me MAA from now……….and this is an order of a mother…….and ur right too………now since i am going to mend my mistakes……..so u have to do as ur maa says…i.e. me………. u have seen the bad side of Pinky…..now u will see the mother side of hers……..did u get that…….]

Anika- (super happy) Ji MAA…
[ yes MAA…]

Pinky- (in a proud tone) badi samajhdaar beti hai meri….
[my daughter is intelligent…]

And both smiled with satisfaction…….. After that Anika made her sit as Pinky was still tired…..and now after talking soo much she was completely exhausted…… So she went to kitchen (finally) to bring something for her to eat………but when she returned…she found Pinky lying unconscious on the bed…………
And rest we all know………
FLASHBACK ENDS…..

There was a pleasant smile on Anika’s face…….. She packed rest of her and Sahil’s luggage………and was waiting for SahAay to return from their so called short shopping……which was more than long………

As soon as SahAay returned they settled in car……to drove back to their mansion……..
SCENE in car…
Anika and Shivaay were quite…..while Sahil was listening music through earplugs…….soon the silence was broken by Anika………
Anika- (shouts) gaadi rokiye….
[stop the car]

Shivaay- what..??
Anika- maine kaha gaadi rokiye…
[i said stop the car…]

Shivaay- par kyun….??
[but why..??] Anika- aap kitni behas karte hain…..agar maine kaha ki rokiye….toh ro dijiye na…
[how much u fight……if i said to stop…..then stop….]

And shivaay stopped the car….
Shivaay- Now what…
Anika behind only to find Saahil enjoying music…..without caring for their surroundings….. And then she signed Shivaay to get down of the car….. and they did so…

outside the car….
Anika- tell me what u did last night….
shivaay- meaning….??
anika- i mean what u did to expose Tia…..coz of that all this happened today….
Shivaay- Did u tell me what happened between u and maa….?? No…. so why should i tell u……what happened last night……..

Anika- Ok fine…..neither u r gonna to tell me that what u did…….nor am i going to tell u what happened….. DEAL..??
Shivaay- Deal… But u stopped for such a silly reason…….

Anika- Nope…. I have to give u a proper reply ……..
Shivaay- About what….??
Anika- Ur proposal….
Both smiled looking at each other…..

Shivaay- So….what’s ur reply…..??
Anika steps closer to him……and whispers near his ears…….
Anika- YES…….(in the same whispering tone..) Even i love u a lot…….Shivaay……
Both smiles looking at each other……

Anika- U know what even i didn’t realised when i fell in love with my KANJI AANKHON WALA BAGAD BILLA……..
They again smiled….
Shivaay- OK….then today…..one more revelation…..
Anika- (confused) what…??

Shivaay- That day when we got married…….that day when i forced u to marry me…….. Have u ever thought…..why i searched u instead of Tia……. I mean like i found u……..blackmailed u……. l could have done the same with Tia also………but no……. Did u ever thought why….??

Anika- (remembering those moments) NO…
Shivaay- Coz when Daksh proposed u on my engagement day……. Om congratulated him with a shaayari……..with hidden message……..whose meaning now got down my head…….
Both travels through a FLASHBACK…..when Om congratulated Daksh…..

FLASHBACK
Om- Khatam nahi hua afsana..
abhi toh kissa baaki hai…
Jab dil khud par aayega…
woh wala hissa baaki hai……
FLASHBACK ENDS…

Anika- But i didn’t get anything…
Shivaay- I’ll explain….. That day i forced u to marry me……coz i was loosing u for no reason…….coz i was somewhat realising the fact that i can’t live without u…….coz in a dark corner of my heart…….there was a feeling…….that u r spoiling ur life by marrying Daksh……and so the only thing that came into my head at that time of curse was………..not to loose u at any cost…….

Anika was smiling with teary eyes…..
Shivaay- Till date i myself didn’t got an apt answer for my deeds…….but when i realised…..more than that when i accepted…….that i love u……the only thing flashing in my mind was……….Om’s words……….yeah that shayari with hidden message………(and he smiled…)….

Shivika were so engrosed in their convo……that they didn’t even noticed the lil, and cute devil……….whom they had left inside the car thinking that he is busy listening music………..
Yup Sahil……who was not himself witnessing the whole senario……….but was giving a live telecast of all this to his buddies……… OmRu…….along with the whole family………through video call….

Shivika when came out of their dream land……they realised that they have to go to the mansion………to continue their JOURNEY…….. and when they turned our smart lil detective immediately put on the ear plugs and turned to other side……and whispered as low as he can…..
Sahil- (to OmRu) Over and out…..aaj ke liye itna hi…..sahi salamat bacha……..toh aisi hi kai rochak kahaniyan aur kisse sunne ko milte rahenge……jude rahiye….agent sahil se…….

To which OmRu laughed out loud…..and Sahil disconnects the call……. On the other hand Shivika took their respective seats…..in the car in order to CONTINUE THEIR JOURNEY………. Not before having a look of Sahil continuously giving a naughty smile…….to both of them……

Although this remained as a secret for shivika…… That besides Khanna…….there was Sahil also……who was lil detective of OmRu……..

The car started………and they drove of FOR A NEW JOURNEY……….leaving behind all the worries……all the bad……all the secrets (which were now open secret)……..all the misunderstandings………towards a life filled with pure LOVE………complete CARE……….heartiest SATISFACTION………..never-ending RELATIONS……….a spoonful of RESPECT………..a new bond of TRUST…………a cared bond of FRIENDSHIP……………and a LOT OF SENSE…….

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So friends……..finally we reach to the end…….by supporting each other……… Hope u will like the ending part too……. plz shower ur love and views………if not through comments……..then through hearts…………trust me all ur love and wishes will find my way……….when send through heart………as this is the last part………

l don’t wanted to give this a proper end……..coz this SHAYARI is really heart- touching……and personally for everyone……..and for every situation this is simply PERFECT………..

So whenever i found a need of a comeback…….that too with a shivika story……..then definately………i’ll pick up the same title……….and the same story…….from where i left…….now……..with a different background……..

I don’t know that this end is appreciable…….or it goes with the reason i have given……..or not…… But i have a better explanation……..and that is………
“There is never an end……..for anything……..even i don’t have one for this……..but all i have is…..to leave this at the point……..such that if it is again started……..it seemed to be a fresh one……..with a proper starting……..”

LIFE IS A RACE…..WITH NO END…..
ONLY CHARACTERS CHANGE…….
BUT THE STORY IS ALWAYS THE SAME……..
JUST EMOTIONS AND PERCEPTIONS R DIFFERENT……

Till then enjoy the ending note……
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ZAKHM SE KEH DE….PAAS NA AA…….
ABHI TOH KHUSHIYON SE HUMNE DILLAGI KI HAI…….
KANTON KI ISME JAGAH KAHAN HAI……..
KI ABHI TOH BAHARON SE HUMNE DOSTI KI HAI……..

With this…
Signing off….
KEHKASHA..

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68 Comments
  1. Fantastic

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou setu….
      Sorry for the late reply…
      And I’ll posting next part of O Saathiya within two days….

  2. Love you dear….. Thanks for this sweet and beautiful ending update and also for mentioning me in your special note… I am just a little support…. It is only your talent and skills through which you give such a sweet.. Awesome…. Lovely.. Ff. With lots of love.. Come soon…..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Nikita…..
      U know what without ur all’s support I may not have reached till this point……
      So it is both our collaboration……which has resulted in this…..
      Luv u dear….and no need to thank me……we r friends right…..
      I am so glad u liked it……thankyou so much……
      And sorry for late reply…….and I’ll be posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  3. Pooja26

    aww u end tis !!!!!! 🙁 🙁
    gonna miss shyaris yr !!!!!!
    loved d shyaris & ff also 😉 😉
    amazing one ……
    come bck soon dear !!!!!
    bubye
    tc…… !!!!!

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Pooja……thankyou so much……
      And yes I’ll be back soon with something new……….but before that let me tell u that I am gonna to post next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

      And sorry for late reply….

  4. Sairan

    Superb ..Just superbbbbb
    Loved it…Each and every part of this episode..

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey sairan…….thankyou so much……..and let me tell u that I am gonna to post next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

      And sorry for late reply….

  5. Wow…the om’s shayri and shivaay’s realisation part made justice to your ff…and the last shaayri by you was too good…❤

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey sabhya…….thankyou so much……..and let me tell u that I am gonna to post next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

      And sorry for late reply….

  6. Dheemahee

    Bas that’s all Yar tune ye decide kar ke episod likha tha ki AJ to sab logo ko emotions me baha Dena he . ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥As u said comment Nahi to heart SE he Sahi I m expressing my views to u as u know is Dil ko bohut khena he but Kay Kare dimag SE nikal ta hi Nahi kese Naya Kare ye safar suhana tere hamara ye sath Zindagi bhari yad Rahe ga … Ya so this much is there in my word list to express zayda baya karna Nahi ATA I mean by emotions and words ya so just ASE he express Karne ka socha…. And ya one more thing which I never told u is that u r a pakki shayarbass Yar such a mind blowing shayari u write Everytime it just simply awesome one and u know what I have just saved all of them ??.

    And ya see if u get time na then surely think about my punishment to u (yad he na ????)?? but seriously I m going to miss it a lot?? love u a lot dear see I soon with our existing and hope so new one ?.. Chalo bye cya.♥?????

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey dheemahee …….thankyou so much……..and let me tell u that I am gonna to post next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

      And about ur punishment then yes I’ll definitely think……and I am thinking even……..its just let me complete a plot in my mind and may be any day u will get surprise………

      And yes I understand that sometimes its difficult to express through words……and so whatever u told me through ur words…….from ur heart it directly reached me……thankyou so much for supporting me like this…….. Its my pleasure to have a friend like u…..

      And sorry for late reply….

  7. The end didn’t hv a finished touch

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Priya……and yes I agree with u…..as I myself was not willing to give this story a finished end…..
      And one more thing…….I’ll be posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..
      And sorry for late reply….

  8. Dheemahee

    Of ho I hate this auto correction Yar bohat mistake he hope still my comment will Conway the message I wanted. And ya last line me FF likhna bhul gai???chal now bye tc .

    1. Kehkasha

      Ya ya……i got each and every thing u wrote…..and expressed…
      Thankyou so much….

  9. Mukta

    Aww… that’s so sweet of u to remember me & mention my name. Sorry exams r there but today I finished reading all the parts.. by god.. aapne to khidki darwaze sab tod diye.. what a fabulous ff yar.. I totally loved each & every part of it.. fabulous updates.. hats off to u yar ?

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Mukta….and how will I forget my friend…..thanks for reading all the parts……even when ur exams were going on….how r ur exams going on…….and how r ur preparations……

      All the best for ur next exam…..if any….

      And one more thing…….I’ll be posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..
      And sorry for late reply….

      1. Mukta

        Actually my exams gonna start after 7 days ? and no sorry in friendship, right ?!! Love ya ?

  10. Mukta

    This part was amazingly fantastic… u know what apart from story, even ur talks & ur thoughts touch my heart a lot. I mean the way u justified the ending was appreciable.. I read many ffs here.. and I would love to say that ur ff is one amongst my favorites. Just keep writing & do come with a new & ya fresh story. Till then take care. Hope we’ll remain in contact till u come back with a bang… ???

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey dear thanks again…..and that’s really sweet of u……and yes I’ll soon come up with something for Rumya…….as Dheemahee has asked me……till then do read O Saathiya……when I will post…..

      Luv u dear……take care…..and yup we’ll be in contact……definitely…..

  11. Lovely update dear… aww so sweet of u… thanx for mentioning my name in your beautiful update.. ?? I’m gonna miss ur ff & shayari… come back soon… tc…

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Ankita…..thankyou so much……and sorry for the late reply….

      And no need to say thanks……as u r one of them who supported me throughout this story……
      And I’ll be posting O Saathiya within two days…… Sorry for the delay……

  12. JanviSingh

    Awwwwwww sissy…
    U really made me emotional with Ur note in the starting……
    It was a perfect end to an extra perfect story…..
    This story is just perfect without any flaws cuz it didn’t show any happy ending… Bt it showed something more than just a happy ending… It showed a beautiful bond of unbreakable trust n end of misunderstanding which is very important in every relation….
    N I want to conclude by the note that….
    “Alag Nahi huye hamare raste…
    Bas Nazariye Badal gaye h….
    Kyuki kahi Na kahi ja ke ye do rahe….
    Ek dusre m mil gaye h…”
    Or issi k sath meri lame shayari bhi end hoti h…
    Till then take care sis….
    Love u…

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Janvi……..thankyou so much…..and lame…….no not at all ur shayari is awesome……and trust me this was a new style of urs…..for complimenting me……..thankyou so much……..so sweet of you….

      And I’ll be posting O Saathiya within two days…… Sorry for the delay…..
      And sorry for late reply….

      1. JanviSingh

        I’m so glad that u liked it….???

  13. Thankuuu for mentioning my name..?????….love uuu cutie….bdw epi was soooooo gd….i will miss this ff like anything ??..plzz come back wid another fantastic ff lyk dis…nd loved sahil’s convo wid omru….plzz come back fast lyk rajdhani…

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Sneha……that’s so sweet of u…..thankyou……and for a new ff…..u have to wait…….
      And I like that “come back fast like rajdhani”…..thankyou dear….all I can say is…..
      That I’ll be posting O Saathiya within two days…… Sorry for the delay…..
      And sorry for late reply….

  14. Nithu

    Uperbbb just amazing mindblowing….di ur title is from the shayari of om….loved it….big teddy hug..miss u soo much…luv u…soo much n evn ua ff……and evn try to update another ff of urs…di….love you…

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey nithu…..thankyou so much dear….luv u too dear…..and yes I know that I am getting more and more late in posting the next part……..but all I can say is…..
      That I’ll be posting O Saathiya within two days…… Sorry for the delay…..
      And sorry for late reply….

  15. Diyaa

    Everything in this update was beautiful. I loved agent Saahil? Your words and the feelings that come through them are so pure that they touch the heart. I was overwhelmed when you included the shaayari from Om and the title of this FF in the update. The ending was perfect as there is no ending as long as there is life. We just have to keep starting on new journeys…Thanks for the lovely ending note. Chalo, bahaaron se thodi dosti kar lete hain aur zakhmo se dillagi…?

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Diyaa……and u know what I am flying on cloud nine…….after getting such an amazing response from u all……
      Being me…..i will say thankyou for getting what I want to convey……. I am glad that my words reach ur heart……..this is my achievement…….and thanks for letting me achieve something……

      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days………sorry dear…..just that I am busy with some works…..

  16. Ending was superb amazing…. Appki shayari to khidki tod or emotional hoti Hai

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much sso….and isi baat par…….if u don’t mind…..plz tell me ur real name……

      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  17. Param Vashishtha

    Hello kehkasha I am a silent reader your fan fictions are awesome and the love story of shivika really good. Your fan fictions ending was really good will miss your ffs . Please comeback with a nice ff will wait for it.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Param…….that’s so sweet of u……that u came up to present ur views…….thanks a lot……this is really a big thing for me…….and yes I’ll surely write something new and innovative……once an idea struck my mind…..till then….all I can say is wait……

      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  18. Aditi9

    Loved it dear seriously and I am waiting for your next one

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou aditi……
      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  19. This was wonderful..!! Ending note was as usual so emotional ..awesome !!!
    Pinky and Anika were great..loved Anika’s sarcasm when she said she won’t do as pinky wants all the time.. and sahil is so cute..that line ki agar sahi salamat bacha to… ??? and shivika were the best ..loved it ..come back soon with another story !! Will miss u …

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Mansi…….that’s so sweet of u……and miss me just for two days more……as then I’ll be posting the next part of O saathiya…..
      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  20. Hi dear kehkasha ?. Today’s episode was awesome! specially where u showed ani- pinky conversation. I really loved this journey of ‘jab dil khud par ayega woh waala hisaa baki hai’. I loved those beautiful shayaris you always wrote at the end.I even used to read another ff of yours ‘o saathiyaa’ and that to was amazing. I hope u would bring more such beautiful ff of yours. Keep writing dear!?

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Sofiya…….it really means a lot…..and sorryfor gettingso late in everything……for replying.,then posting update……and sometimeseven commenting…… I am thinkinga new story……hope will shape it soon….
      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  21. Ruksy

    It was an amazing ending to the story and an amazing beginning to the lives of shivika.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Ruksy…..
      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  22. Superb…. just awesome….will miss ur ff nd shayari too…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Lilly….
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  23. Lisaaa

    awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Lisaaa….
      And sorry for late reply…….also for posting next part of O Saathiya within two days…..

  24. Lalitha

    Kya update hai yar…..em dhum kidkithod… Its awesome dear… Loved it to the core… The whole ff was wonderful dear… but will be missing this ff… Pls come back with one more kidkithod ff dear.. Love you

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Lalitha…..even u r demanding for one more…….
      Ok then I am thinking one story…….more…..hope it get proper shape…..
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  25. Awesome…..Superb…..
    waiting fr ur nxt 1…..keep writing…..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Shivika…..and yes wait for two more days…..
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  26. Wow ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Radhika…..
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  27. Archisha

    That was an awesome ff.. I love reading your ffs alot. And I hope you make a COMEBACK soon. And this was an emotional episode and was FLAWLESS ! I will surely misd you ! ??

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Archisha……so sweet of u….yes dear I’ll come back soon……with next part of o saathiya…..
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  28. Nice,superb,fantastic episode and also mention when is your next ff .and thank you for mentioning my name

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou Gangu….and no need to say thanks…..dear….we r friends right…..
      And sorry for late reply…..and also for posting O saathiya within two days……more….

  29. Mrunal

    Hey kuhu….,

    perfect pause see my words I’m saying pause not end… bcoz as u said there is no end to any story.. and specifically in this story’s case then not at all…. it’s a new start…. so much perfection… so much proper amount of emotions and perfect dialogues…. wow….??? take a bow dear……?

    i always say that u r the best…. but u r not best u r the more than best…. u nailed it yaar…. each thing of this ff is fabulous….. ???????

    what a perfect justification to the om’s shayari… u really made it meaningful and connected it with story in a very amazing way… u just gave proper meaning to ur title with ur story…??????

    anniky’s changed relation was like a bliss to read….? saahil the little naughty devil… his words and smartness yaar just loved it…? and what to say about shivika yaar…. bcoz of u i again fall for them and this time more madly…???

    as i asked u earlier to give epilogue for this story… but now I’m saying it’s not needed… i understood ur point… it’ll be best if u paused it here only… and came after sometime with fresh start…
    ” I’LL BE MORE THAN HAPPY IF U STARTED IT AGAIN WITH A FRESH START AS U HAVE PLANNED IN UR MIND…”

    I’LL BE WAITING TO SEE IT AGAIN….

    AND THANKS FOR MENTIONING MY NAME… AS I PROMISED I’LL BE ALWAYS THERE FOR U & WITH U IN EACH MOMENT THEN WHATEVER IT’LL BE…

    LOVE U A LOT DEAR…….
    ????????????????????????????

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey Mrunal Di thankyou so much…….this was the longest compliment I have ever got……..and that too by u…..this is making me fly……although I am just sitting……

      U have said a lot……and this simply means that now it would be hard for me to break my own record……thankyou for encouraging me…….always through ur words………and trust me…… I’ll keep on improving myself more and more……

      1. Kehkasha

        And plz at least thousand times I have told u not to say thankyou……then why……and that too just for mentioning ur name……

        And yes I’ll start this story again if again I felt like coming up……..and till then one ff is already going on……and now I’ll try to concentrate on that….

        Thankyou so much di…
        Luv u….
        Tc….

  30. Nita D

    Roshni se bhari kehkasha tu meri, kehkasha tu meri…….
    First of all a very big sorry for such a late comment. Actually my exams are going on……
    Well u know why I started reading this episode, I thought I’ll tell u to continue this. But towards the end I changed my mind completely. The ending couldn’t have been more perfect than this. N last few lines, or rather paras, were so emotional….I loved it to the core…..N chota agent is just to good……luv ya…..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Nita……..and no need to be sorry……as i understand……and exams first……and thanks for letting me ur views on this part……taking time from ur busy schedule…….as I was really unsure about the reaction…..so this was just a risk……but it got appreciation…….to the extent which I have not even thought about…….

      Thankyou so much…..and next part of O Saathiya……. I’ll be posting within two days…..sorry for late reply….

      1. Nita D

        No problem dear. No sorry. U must be tied up with something. Eagerly waiting for o saathiya.

  31. Samm

    simply wow. i can’t believe i haven’t commented on this one yet. but it was really nice. i loved it when pinky asked anika for forgiveness. my fav moment was anika-shivaay convo at the end which was heard and conveyed to omru by sahil. he really stole the show at the end! 🙂 i’m sad that it’s the end, but at least you’ll be around to come up with another. 😀

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much Sammie……u know what I eagerly wait for u to comment……and since this part….was the one about which I was most unsure…….that how will everyone react……so I finally send u the links……but I really got a lot of appreciation…..

      Thankyou so much…..and next part of O Saathiya……. I’ll be posting within two days…..sorry for late reply….

  32. Renimarenju

    Wow…..wow….wow……….Superduperfantabulous………baby………no more words 2 describe it……it made be speechless……….and thanks 4 mentioning my name…..yaar u made me cry with this part…….because just touched my heart……….a lot….and am not able 2 type……..words……
    excellent…….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thankyou so much di…..and I really didn’t meant to make u cry……and plz…..don’t do so…..
      Sorry for late comment…..and also for posting O Saathiya late…..i mean it will take two more days….

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