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JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Part 2)

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Bonjour friends…. This is KEHKASHA reporting with part 2 of “JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WO WALA HISSA BAKI HAI…”

Ok let me clear one things friends that this is not a long story…..its just a lil part….or journey of one part…..of SHIVIKA’S life….

RECAP- Shivaay says, ” Anika… Sahil ko yahan se jana hoga”….. Leaving everyone shocked…..

SCENE continues…..

Anika was standing still as soon as this statement registered her mind…..she was thinking…….no….she was recalling…..all the times when Shivaay has favoured her…..and more than that……he has trusted her…….she was broken from within……..but she gathered her courage to face him……..to face those……who questioned……her brother’s honesty…..

She came forward…….with a determination clearly visible on her face………she hold her brother’s hand……and traced the path to the stairs……….and directly entered her room………followed by worried OmRu……..and she shut the door with a bang……

OmRu kept on knocking……but that was all useless…….she didn’t reply…….she didn’t spoke……even a word…..

There in the hall…… Pinky was constantly blabbering against SaahiKa……..which was not bearable to dadi…….so she left……along with Jhanvi……as a support……

Pinky- O my mata……Tia u don’t worrys…….aaj toh iss ladki ko yahan se jana hoga……main abhi dekhti hun ki ye kab tak shivaay ke kamre me khud ko band kar ke baithegi…….u waits….i comes…..

And she moved towards Shivaay’s room……. Leaving behind Tia with an evil and victorious smile………..and shivaay……..in a shocked…..and still state……

Shivaay didn’t moved a bit……..he was standing like a statue…….without letting his body reveal his breath…….in short he was standing like a lifeless body…..with heart…….with heartbeats……..but without soul…..

As soon as Pinky reached the room…..she find OmRu standing there with a lots of tension visible on there face……….but soon she murmured that….

Pinky – (murmuring) zaroor uss Anika ke liye pareshaan honge…….inhe kya farak padta h…….ki shivaay ki lifes me Anika hi sabse badi problems h………..and gives an annoyed look…..

But her murmuring was clear audible………and this pricked OmRu’s heart…….but they neglected that….

Pinky started beating the door as if behind the door were most wanted criminals……….
But as before no reply came back……

Rudra comes forward and kept his hand on Pinky’s shoulder saying…..
Rudra- Choti ma plz……plz…. Anika didi galat nahi…..hain…..plz unhe kich mat kahiyega…..
Om- Han Choti ma……aur Sahil chota sa bachcha hai…….usse kya milega…….kuch bhi chura ke………aur sabse badi baat Choti maa…….. Sahil aisa nahi kar sakta…..

These words of OmRu added fuel to Pinky’s anger…….and she again started…..
Pinky- Toh ab uss ladki ne tum dono par bhi jadoo kar diya……..rab hi bachaye…….iss ladki se hamare ghar ko………
Waise tum dond sahi keh rahe ho….. Sahil toh bachcha hai……wo ye sab nahi kar sakta……….lekin usse karaya toh ja sakta hai na…..
OmRu- shocked……..choti ma…..
Pinky- in a scolding tone……..whats……..choti ma…….sahi keh rahi hun Mai……..iss Anika ne apne chote bhai se hi chori karne ko kaha hoga……kyunki usse pata hoga ki koi uss par shaq nahi karega……..par nahi chori ek na ek din saamne aa hi jaati hai……..aur Mai aisi ladki…….jo ki paison ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai………mai aisi ladki ko apne ghar mein nahi rehne de sakti……….de sakti kya……..mai isse yahan rehne hi nahi doongi……

OmRu feels disgusted on such thinking……..that too of their Choti maa……while Pinky again started to beat the door……..and she was constantly shouting……..

But this time…….the door gets unlock from inside……and Anika along with Sahik and their luggage fully packed come out……

Anika- uski koi zaroorat nahi hai auntyji…….itna sab kuch hone ke baad……mai khud hi iss ghar mein nahi rahungi………isliye…..mai apne bhai ke saath yahan se ja rahi hun…..

And she started leaving with the same determination and confidence that was visible in her eyes when she was coming up……..

Pinky from behind shouts….
Anika- O my Mata………dekho toh iss maharani ki akad…..ek toh Galati ki …….phir usse manne……ke bajaye……..itni shaan se jaa rahi hai……..jaise hum par ehsaan kar rahi hai……

But Anika…….she didn’t payed any heed to bitter words of Pinky……..and she silently moved down….with no traces of getting hurt………although her eyes were saying something else…..

She found no change in Shivaay’s position……..as if he hadn’t moved a bit…….even for taking breath………

But she goes on……without letting her heart think…….or without letting her heart find anything bad in this changed behaviour……..of shivaay…..

But this was the time when she felt that someone had hold her from behind………someone don’t want her to leave……..so she turned……and guess what she found…..

She found her favourite BRACELET neatly tangled with the WATCH of Shivaay………who was still standing the same way he was……..this was not a deliberate incident……..the tangling of bracelet and watch………..but this was a destined accident……..which was trying to justify the feels of TWO individuals………unable to express……… She untangled them with a jerk……resulting in the bracelet breaking into pieces…..and she turned away…

OmRu from side……came to her…..and….
Om- with tears in his eyes………..pata hai uss din jab Maine…….. Mr. Oberoi se jhagda(fight) kiya tha….aur Mai…….apne kamre mein chup-chap baitha tha……..pata hai….uss waqt tumse pehle…… Shivaay bhi mujhe ek baar khane ke liye manane aaya tha……but Maine uski baat nahi Mani……kyunki usne mujhe kuch samjhya hi nahi……..
Phir tum aayi……aur tumne woh kaha…….jo Mai sunna….chahata tha……ya ye keh lo……jo mujhe pata tha…..but Mai sunna nahi chahata tha…..
Uss din pehli baar Maine tumhe Bhabhi kaha tha……..kyunki Maine dil se tumhe Bhabhi mana tha……..tum mein uss din pehli baar mujhe…….wo parchaayi(shadow) nazar aayi…….jise Mai…….mere parents mein dhoondh raha tha……..aur Mai ab meri Bhabhi ko kahin jaane nahi Dena chahata……

Rudra- Han Bhabhi….aap kahin nahi jaaogi……kyunki hum OmRu……hum dono jante gain…..ki aap galat nahi ho……aur na hi sahil………he was literally crying………

Om- aur sabse badi baat……hum jaante hain ki Shivaay bhi yehi cahata hai…..
Rudra- Par pata nahi bhaiya kuch keh kyun nahi rahe…….

Pinky- O my Mata…….mujhe pehle hi pata tha ki ye sab iska natak hai……sach toh yeh hai ki yeh yahan se Jana hi nahi chahati…….aur tum dono ko dikhta nahi ki ye jaan-boojh kar aisa kar rahi hai…..

Rudra- Bas Choti maa….
Om- Hum hamari Bhabhi se baat kar rahe hain…….
Rudra- aur hume pata hai…….ki kaun sahi hai (looking at Anika)
Om- Aur kaun galat (looking at Tia)…..

But Anika was determined…..and by each word of Pinky……her determination was getting stronger and stronger……

She again started to leave…….but OmRu…..stopped her…..
Om- plz Bhabhi……plz don’t go….
Rudra- Han Bhabhi mat jaao……after all aap toh meri patner in all crime ho na…..plz mat jaao….
They both were crying…..

Anika- OmRu……chodo mujhe…..pehli baat Mai tumhari Bhabhi nahi hun………kyunki…..mera aur tumhare bhaiya ka divorce ho Gaya hai……….aur doosri baat…….aaj tak Mai………meri har insult ko sehti rahin…..apni self-respect ko ek kone mein dal kar…….sab kuch sunti rahin……kyunki baat meri thi……..aur sabse……badi baat…..kyunki mujhe……..sabki ankhon mein……VISHWAS (TRUST)……..dikhta tha…..
Par aaj baat alag hai……..aaj na hi yahan meri baat ho rahi hai……aur na hi…….kisi ko bhi mujh par vishwas hai…….. So plz mujhe Jane do….. (she said all this while starring shivay)

OmRu- par Bhabhi…….
Anika- mera yahan se jaana aur mushkil mat banao…….omru……mujhe yahan se jaane do…..

And she again started………but this time OmRu pleaded shivaay…..to stop her…..but shivaay was standing numb………

Om-shivaay…..rok le usse….agar wo chali gayi…..toh phir laut kar nahi aayegi……shivaay tu sun raha (he said in anger and frustration with tears)…

Rudra- bhaiya…..plz Bhabhi ko rok lo……plz…… I promise I’ll be a good boy……mai baat- baat par nahi rounga……(I will not cry on minor things)…..

But shivaay he didn’t moved a bit………. His eyes were continuously glued on Anika………he was internally wishing…….that she should stop……..although he knew……..that she won’t…… He tried hard to move……he tried hard to go to her…..to tell her…..that he TRUST her…….to tell her that she is not at fault……..to tell her that he was helpless and so he said all that………and more than that he wanted to tell her…….that his heart is paining…….that his heart is paining as if someone is stabbing him continuously at the same point……….but all that he could do is……….he could stare her leaving with determination on her face……..with anger…….which was for him…….just for him…….
He still stand numb……starring the door where there were no traces of Anika……..as she had already left………

Soon everything in front of him………started revolving in his eyes……..the pain in his heart was clearly visible on his face……..which increased by one statement…….which came out from…….his mother’s mouth……

Pinky- Chalo……shukr hai (thank god) Bala tali…….finally yeh ladki gayi toh sahi…..

Shivaay now completely lost his senses……..he started feeling as if someone has snatched his reason……the reason because of which he was just SHIVAAY without any suname………without any tag……any bloodline……any lineage……

All the incidents from morning were revolving in front of him……he was witnessing all that again…………he was going through all the pain again……..he started getting disbalanced…………..he holded the table kept aside………..his mind was occupied with numerous of feelings………actually incidents………….his heart was beating faster……….his heartbeats were clearly audible……….but he was lacking behind coz of something……….

Something called soul……soul which had left his home…….no his body………soul was the thing for which he was in need……in an urgent need……..but what to do he was the one who didn’t stopped her…….even once………..

OmRu were constantly trying to make him feel better…….but he……he was just loosing control on himself………..he was just loosing his soul…….it pained him……pained him a lot………and after a lot struggle he fall on the ground unconscious…….

TO BE CONTINUED…….
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So friends done with the update……and thank you so much as I got really unexpected response on the previous part…….. I am typing the dialogues in Hindi only to create the feel of the emotions and the expressions…….coz I guess Hindi is our mother tongue……and we can express thousand times better in Hindi…….. I am sure u will love this….

One more thing friends I am the only one who is writing O SAATHIYA……plz comment on that as well……as I felt that I got attention of many of u here in this story…….and undoubtedly coz of SHIVIKA…….but plz support me there as well……
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DARD KAISA HAI UTHA….
BAYAN KARUN MAIN AAHON MEIN……
LAUT KAR AANA PADEGA …..
TUMKO DIL KI RAAHON MEIN……

With this….
Signing off..
KEHKASHA…

57 Comments
  1. Awesome…waiting eargerly for next post

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Anaya..

  2. Aditi9

    Loved it

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Aditi…

      1. Aditi9

        Send me the link when you upload next part of this

    2. Kehkasha

      Yeah dear I have send u…

  3. Jaya

    Just loved the way you make us feel the pain…painful pain. Although i’m not indian …i love hindi language…language itself speaks. Oh god! Pinky toh rukneka naam hi nahi leti…i would love to watch her expression during tia’s parda faass. And i felt that this shil’s accussation scene probably gonna happen in upcoming epi of ib.

    1. Kehkasha

      Yes dear this scene is gonna to happen in real ib……and I watched the promo then only I decided to start it from this point….

      Thank you Jaya….
      And if u don’t mind then can u tell me that where are u from……??
      And that’s really great that u love Hindi…..

      1. Jaya

        Why this much formality hmm? Aren’t we friends! Why should i mind dear! Afterall…we are neighbours also 🙂 . I’m from Nepal.

    2. Kehkasha

      Oh dear….let it be…..anyways neighbours r always good friends….

  4. Awesome

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks charitha…

  5. Vincy

    Love the way u express it

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you vincy..

  6. Wow……u portrayed shivaay’s pov…so nicely …awsm…..beautiful…….. Just loved it..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks sneha..

  7. Shivika

    Beautiful…..amazing. …..loved it to the core……just went speechless…..splly after reading the lines at last……

    1. Kehkasha

      That’s really sweet of u shivika….
      Thank you so much…

  8. Awesome I really love ur writting skill…im eagerly waiting for next episode..but pls translate in English if u can..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you ranisha….
      And I’ll try to translate the diction…..as rest is in English itself….
      Thank you so much….

  9. Aparna Godekar

    Sooo..good ur an awesome writer

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Aparna….it means a lot…..

  10. JanviSingh

    I agree wid u dear tht we can express better in our mother younger… Well coming back to update it was marvelous,awsm , amazing,superb,mindblowing n every such word that r in the vocabulary.. it was simply magical.. u portrayed all the emotions effortlessly… I’m just speechless… Just in love with this story… Thanks for writing this story dear…
    N I’ll surely read Ur other ff too…. ☺☺☺

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much dear…..this is really an amazing compliment for me…..
      Thanks for your support….

  11. Awesome….
    plxx upload d nxt 1 asap…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you dear….
      And I will try too upload next soon…

  12. Ruksy

    I totally loved the update. Is anika coming back. Just asking.

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey ruksy….this I leave on u all….what do u think……should Anika come back or not……

      Thanks a lot dear….

  13. Amazing…sooo emotional….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much…lilly

  14. Wow..this was superb..fantastic ..fabulous .. !!!!

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Mansi…

  15. While reading it one can the feel the pain Anika went through. You are an incredible writer. Pls post the next episode soon.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you soooo much Shalini…

  16. Nithu

    Briliant

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks dear…

  17. Nita D

    Lovely episode kehkasha….just loved it…..n this shayri was also lovely….where do u find those Yaar…. n eagerly waiting for the next episode….

    N I don’t know if you remember but I read your other ff also.

    1. Kehkasha

      Yes dear….. How can I forget u….u r a regular reader of my ff o saathiya….. And I remember that…..

      Well I get all the above stuff in my own head……brain….and thank you so much…..

  18. Superb episode..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Ankita…

  19. Pooja26

    loved it !!! yr……..
    amazing part…….
    post asap………
    tc………

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Pooja…

  20. Amazing yrr nice update. . . . . . . . 😍😍😘😘😙😘😍😍😍aur plz tia ko jaldi se jaldi nikalo ab hm real ib walo ko to bol nahi skte but tum plz tia ko get lost bolo

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much stutii….
      And I’ll try to do so….

  21. Nita D

    Ok now tell me sacchi sacchi that are u connected with the IB team? Cause there is actually gonna be some theft drama n blame being put on sahil but the only difference is here shivay will support him.

    N plz post the next episode ASAP. Today oh if possible. I just can’t wait for it

    1. Nita D

      *today only if possible.

      1. Kehkasha

        Hey dear I have posted the next part…

    2. Kehkasha

      Hey dear that’s really sweet of you…..but trust me I have nothing to do with real lB…… I have seen a promo….and then only I started writing this…..so this was something that is originally planned by REAL IB and not me…..

      And so sorry dear…..but I will definitely try to post the next by tomorrow…..

  22. Love it. It was just awesome. Pls post the next one asap dear 😇

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you Sofiya.

  23. Wow…its beautifully written…nxt one asap plss..😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you sabhya….

  24. Awesome amazing superb episode

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you sso…

  25. Mukta

    Amaaazinggg….. Fabulous!!! I’m loving your ff very much!!! Sorry for not commenting in last episode… I was busy so couldn’t read it… but it’s awesome!!!! And you said it right that we can more nicely express in our mother tongue and so I’m loving it more… Hindi me padhte waqt hum har feeling ko mehsoos bhi kar pate hai..!!! Lovely ff…. post the next part asap😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey mukta….thank you so much….and plz no sorry……coz I never expect my friends to say sorry……and its ok….u read that’s enough for me……..and if u comment then its amazing….

      Thank you dear and I have posted the next part…

  26. Mrunal

    Hey kuhu….
    Meri akhon se toh aise aasu aa rahe hai jaise kisi ne nal khula chod diya ho…
    Ekdam sahi episode… The pain u wanted to show reached our hearts with ur words…
    U r such good in writing.. And i have said u this many times.. But still i wanted to say it again…
    U r fabulous dear…..

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