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JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA…WOH WALA HISSA BAKI HAI.. by KEHKASHA (Ishqbaaz) Part 1

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Hello dear friends…. This is KEHKASHA……and I am here to present a new idea that popped into my mind…… Last night when I was typing my ff O SAATHIYA it striked my mind……that how Shivika r neglecting their feelings…….just because of their so called ego…….or self respect…..

I just wanna portray few emotions and thinking of these two through this story….. I just wanna let these two talk to each other…….and clear their mu……or we can say…….to open their heart out…….in front of each other……..and the journey how they r gonna to accept that they both love each other………amd they can be together…….keeping aside their fight…..or the so called class linage…..blood line….etc…

So fingers crossed for ur response……..
And lets start with “JAB DIL KHUD PAR AAYEGA WO WALA HISSA BAAKI HAI”……….by KEHKASHA……

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PART 1

SCENE @ Oberoi mansion….
As we entered inside the mansion…..we found negative vibes……overpowering the cheerful atmosphere……there was sadness……there was depth…..there was accusations……..there was evilness…….there was tears…….but there was no trust……no humanity…….no care…….no sympathy…….and above all that there was no traces of self realisation…….or LOVE…..

Anika was standing in the middle in order to support her only reason to live……..her brother…… The little boy was crying vigorously………as he was not at fault……..and each and every eye was seeing him…….either he was a criminal……..or he is the only person in the world who needs pity of everyone………

This was when Anika managed herself to stand and face her……so called dear ones……

Anika- she goes to shivaay…….and almost shooked him……..
Shivaay kuch to kahiye…….plz……sabko bataiye na ki sahil aisa nahi kar sakta……..wo kaise……..aur kyun…….kyun kuch bhi chori (theft) karega…… Shivaay sahil aisa nahi kar sakta….. Shivaay aap sun rahe hain na…….and she again shooked him….

Shivaay who was in his own trance…….had now realised that Anika was continuously saying something to him…….rather…..she was asking something from him…….and that was TRUST………but soon he remembered something…….due to which the only ray……that could provoke Shivaay to stop all the utter nonsense…..that was going on…….completely vanished……….in the darkness……the darkness in…..hearts…….and the darkness……in souls…..

Before he could say anything……. Pinky comes forward…..

Pinky- O my mata……dekho toh…..its likes……ek toh chori upper se seena zori…..and gives a disgusted look to SahiKa……..

Tia- Anika…..tumhe mujhse kya….problem hai……pehle tum mujhe galat samajhti rahin……aur ab…..ab tumne apne bhai ke saath milkar………kyun Anika…….agar tumhe kuch chahiye tha…..to maang leti…..and sheds crocodile tears………

Anika- still hoping that Shivaay will be at her side………she again ask him……
Shivaay……plz…..aap kuch toh kahiye…… Sahil aisa nahi kar sakta……mai mere bhai ko achche se janti hun…….wo kuch bhi galat…..nahi kar sakta aur chori toh bilkul nahi…….

Pinky- O my mata…….kyun nahi kar sakta……….aur waise bhi yeh hai toh tera hi bhai……..jo khud paisa……aur propertys……..paane ke liye mere bete se jhooti shaadi kar sakti h……..uske bhai se hum kya ummed karen……

Dadi shouts at Pinky…..
Dadi- Pinky…….chup ho ja……rab ke waaste……chup ho ja……tujhe pata bhi hai ki tu kya bol rahi hai…….. Anika ki na tab koi galti thi…….aur na aaj h…..

Pinky- Yes mummyji……u r rights…….aaj Anika ki koi galti nahi h…….aaj toh iske bhai ki galti h………aur ab ye ladka……yahan nahi reh sakta…….

And she pushes Anika aside……and took hold of sahil……and almost dragged him…..towards the door……without noticing his leg………or better……without caring for it…..

Anika who could not tolerate this behaviour of pinky……..pushed her literally and hugged her brother tightly………..
Anika- Pinky aunty………ho sakta hai ki ek baar ko aap sahi ho…….jo ki bilkul nahi h………par aapko koi haq nahi banta mere bhai se iss tarah pesh aaye(behave like this)……

Pinky- Jo bhi ho par iss ladke ko yahan se jana hoga……..
She turned towards Tia with a smile……..as they know that……. Sahil is Anika’s weakness………..and Anika is Shivaay’s……. So they targeted innocent kid…….for throwing Anika out of the house……….but Anika. …….again asked Shivaay to say something….

Anika- shivaay aap jante hain ki mai jhooth nahi bol rahin hun…….phir bhi…..phir bhi……aap kuch nahi keh rahe……..plz aise chup mat rahiye……..kuch toh kahiye shivaay…….

Now Pinky got a lil tensed……..as she believed that shivaay will obviously be at Anika’s side……..as he was few days back……..when Pinky told him that Anika tried to kill Tia’s baby…….and shivaay cleared her that he believes Anika……and she can’t do anything like that……….but to her surprise……

Shivaay- Anika Sahil ko yahan se jana hoga…….

And this statement pierced deep down in Anika’s heart…………who by now was thinking idiotically that shivaay will at least TRUST lil kid…..at least…..

This statment was also a shock for dadi…..jahnvi……and for OmRu who just entered the scene……

To be continued…

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So friends this was just an intro……or u can say…….a quick background to the story……..that will lead to the actual storyline……..

I really hope that u all will like it…..plz share ur comments or queries…..anything……but plz give response…..

This one is specially for shivika fans……so there will only be shivika and their inner turmoil…..along with their journey of achieving true love……..

Other characters r same as show……

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DARD WO EHSAAS HAI…
JISKO KOI BAYAN NA KAR PAAYE……
GHUT JAATE HAIN ALFAAZ TAB…..
DIL KI CHOT JAB NAZAR AAYE….

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With this….
Signing off…
KEHKASHA….

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49 Comments
  1. Awesome.. update next part soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  2. Awesome dear continue

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks dear😊

  3. Pooja26

    superb
    loved it !!!!!!!
    post asap……

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks dear..
      Submitted the next part…

  4. Jaya

    One more? Wow! Good idea…you’ve picked state of mind of shivika’s for each other…so perfectly,would love to read. Honestly…i’m not shivika’s die hard type of fan but love them. i’m just fedup with this tia named alien …really hate her crocodile tears and fake expressions from chambers of my heart…and pinky arrghh…she deserves tia bandaria. πŸ˜‰ . 1 thing …your hindi version is really amazing dear! Actually…in most ff i found…english literature so awesome… but hindi , very pΓΆor …yours is crystal clear. πŸ™‚ .

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much Jaya….
      And I have submitted both the parts….
      And one thing I know only these two languages….so I just convey what I feel…

  5. Amazing….waiting fr d nxt

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  6. Sairan

    It was awesome… Sometimes like that is also gonna happen in the story.. Waiting for ur next update ..Loved this intro cum epi 1

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you dear….and yes its gonna to happen….
      Posted the next part…

      1. Sairan

        Ohhh..That’s great…But it’s not updated yet.. Waiting for it

  7. Amaazing one……pinky was too harsh….so cheap…..& Annika was supperbbbb….wtng 4 d nxt….

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  8. Lisaaa

    Awesome… Plz with English sub

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  9. Always loved your ff and wi always live it. I liked your shayri on dard. I even made it my WhatsApp status.

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much dear its so sweet of u..

  10. Shivika

    Wowww……….brilliant……speechless……..post soon

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  11. Chandini

    One more from I am glad and super excited to read this…keep going kehkashaπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  12. Wow..fabulous sounds very interesting plz continue dear..awaiting for next update

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks..
      Submitted the next part..

  13. Sweetuishkara

    love your ff dear please carry

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  14. JanviSingh

    It’s just awsm dear…. U left me speechless… Hatts off dear…πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ί

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you so much dear…
      Posted the next..

  15. Ruksy

    Amazing loved it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks ruksy

  16. Awesome !! Please post soon ..

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊
      Submitted the next part..

  17. Amazing… loved it… Waiting for the next update…

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊
      Submitted the next..

  18. Kavya347

    It’s fabulous Kehkasha. You picked up state of mind of Shivika very well. The intro is awesome and loved the title.😍. The story is beautifulπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’Waiting for next

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks Kavya….
      And plz send the link of ur ff to Renima di’s pm…..she has asked me to tell u and samm to do so….as she was busy…

      And submitted the next…

  19. VJey

    Wow… Amazing

    1. Kehkasha

      Thanks 😊

  20. Dheemahee

    Wow I was really excepting some thing related to new promo and u gave that it’s really interesting please continue and Post soon and ya sorry for the late comment vo I m having exams na so late ho gaya sorry and ya post soon your both the articles till then tc bye.😊😊

    1. Kehkasha

      Thank you dear….look I read ur mind…..
      And not to worry dear…..all the best for ur exam…
      And submitted the next parts…

  21. Nita D

    Wow another ff…It’s lovely….awesome storyline…. Plz post next one soon…

    Nice lines in the end…omkara ki shayri tum hi likhti ho kya….

    1. Kehkasha

      Hey dear thank you so much….
      And no nothing like that…i didn’t write for omkara…..in the show….but in my ff….i write for u all….

  22. Mrunal

    Kuhu…..
    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    THANKS A TON DEAR…
    FOR WRITING A SHIVIKA FF…

    DIN BADIN TUM BHI BADI SHAYRANA HOTI JAA RAHI HO RAAZ KYA HAI BATAO JARA…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    THIS WAS AMAZING… FANTASTIC… MARVELOUS…. FABULOUS…. SUPER DUPER KHIDAKITOD STARTING…

    LOVE U A LOT….😘😘

    ( AUR HAAN CAPS MAI GALATI SE NAHI JAAN BUZ KE LIKHA HAI.. MERE WORDS KI INTENSITY BATANE KE LIYE… )

  23. Tany

    superbbbb….

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