Jaanemaan Part 9

Hey guyzzz this z supriya once again……thanx for your too good comments……. I love you people soo much…..now let’s proceed with the part 9……

Radhika brought adi to the cafe where Mr diwan was waiting for them to come……
Seeing Mr diwan adi got angry…….
Adi……why have you brought me here radhu?
Radhika….. I wanted you to meet your father….
Listening this he was about to leave when Radhika grabbed his hand stopping him from leaving…..
Radhika….. Plz adi don’t leave…..just meet your dad once……listen to him once….
Adi……there z nothing left to listen now….
He was about to leave when radhika blocked his way……
Radhika….. You have my swear adi…..if you love and care for me even a bit then plz just talk to your dad once….I have never asked anything from you…..first time m asking something please just talk to your dad once…..
Adi…..only for you but only five minutes…..
She took his hand and made him sit beside his father…..
Mr diwan…. Thank you beta….
Adi….don’t thank me….thank radhu…I can do anything for her….I hate you but I love her more….you just have 5 minutes so better don’t waste your time……
Mr diwan…..I know you hate me but just listen to me once…..
He narrated adi his past…..
Adi had tears in his eyes….
Adi…..so this z the story you have framed to deflame my mom in my eyes….I will not believe you….for me my mom z next to god….I will not believe anything…..
He turned to radhika…. I never expected this from you radhika….I thought you understand my pain but no you don’t….
He got up to leave when radhika grabbed his hand….
Radhika….. Enough adi what you think of yourself ?everytime you hurt your dad by your harsh words…..adi you just don’t want to believe the truth…..adi your mom was at fault…..you think she loved you….no she never did….because the people we love we never use them against anyone…. she always made you believe that your dad was having a affair…..but your dad was just helping sarika aunty…..now you just answer my one question…. If your mom was really thinking that your dad was having a affair then why she didn’t ended her marriage….. any sensible lady would have done it…..but she provoked you against your dad…..she never loved you neither your dad…..one more thing she was mentally ill…..she was suffering from multiple personality disorder……this are her medical reports….
She handed him the reports…..
Adi glanced through them and was shocked…..
He was about to collapse on the floor when radhika grabbed his shoulder…..
She made him sit and offered him a glass of water….
Adi was shattered today…..the woman he loved,worshipped was indeed something he had never imagined…..
Mr diwan…..beta I know how it feels when the person you love most hurts you the most…..
Adi…..I am sorry dad….I am such a bad son….I never gave you the respect you deserved….before he could speak anything further Mr diwan pulled him in a hug….
Mr diwan…..adi,it was never your fault and now we don’t have to look back at our past…..I got you back now I don’t want anything else….
He turned towards radhika…..beta,you srsly a true friend of adi….I was not willing to tell him anything but you believed in me…..
Adi…..thanks radhu….
Radhika…..I did nothing…. adi….all I did was I trusted Mr diwan….
Mr diwan…..I am so much happy today…..I think this day we should celebrate….. I am throwing a party tomorrow because I got my son back….now guyzzz sorry but I have a meeting…. I need to leave now…..but you guyzz carry on….
He left adi and radhika alone…..
Adi…..radhu I also wanted to say sorry….first time all these years I raised my voice infront of you…..I never wanted to hurt you….
He had tears in his eyes saying all this…..
Radhika placed her hand on his…….adi,I know you can never hurt me…..
For their badluck arjun entered the cafe with his business associate……
He had planned a meeting in this cafe….this days he was doing his work from rishikesh itself….
Arjun was shocked to see Radhika with adi…..
His jaw hardened….he was furiously staring at them….he did not fail to notice that radhika had kept her hand on adi’s hand…..
In his meeting too he was not able to concentrate…..
So he thought to end the meeting and meet the associate later…..
Once he left,arjun walked towards radhika and adi who were busy talking to each other……
Seeing arjun there radhika was shocked….she got up from her chair…..her expression clearly indicating tension and fear……
Arjun in a furious voice……radhika are you going to come out on your own or I have to drag you…..
She knew it was a warning…..
She just followed him outside the cafe……
Once outside…..
Radhika….. It z not what you are thinking….
Arjun in a authorized voice…… Sit in the car….
She did exactly what she was told to do…..
He drove off from there…..
They reached his farmhouse in just 10 mins all thanks to his driving speed….
Arjun farmhouse……..
Arjun pulled her closer to him by grabbing her waist tightly…..
He pulled her closer until their breaths collided with eachother…..their heartbeat mingled with together….
Radhika was about to say something but he captured her lips in his…..
He kissed her hard….his tongue invaded her mouth capturing all her sweetness there…..it was a hard,passionate….kiss which had love,passion,possession in it……he gave her a bite on her lower lip which made her moan….
This was radhika’s first and the most passionate kiss of her life…..
He broke apart when she was out of breath…..
She was breathing heavily trying to catch more air….
Radhika….. Arjun what was it?
Arjun…..a punishment which you had to bear for hurting me……next time you will remember this and think wisely….
Radhika…..arjun,you said you will trust me….
Arjun…..I do but I was hurt so decided to do something different…..
Radhika….. you are crazy…..
She turned her back towards him…..
Radhika touched her lips….still it was painful due to his hard bite….she closed her eyes to feel the kiss again…..it was something she could have never imagine…. Her face turned crimson…..
Arjun turned her towards him…..still she had her eyes closed and face bend down in her shyness….
He lifted her chin up…..
Arjun…..open your eyes radhika….
She opened her eyes to look in his passionate eyes……
His eyes had love,passion and madness in them….
Arjun cupped her face and placed a light and soft kiss on her lips….
He whispered against her lips….I love you radhika…. you are only mine……..
She hugged him…..
So guyzzz this z it hope you liked it…do comment and let me know your reviews.I am eagerly waiting for them…I will update next one soon….
Precap…..Grand party of Mr diwan……adi gets upset seeing aradhika together…… Dilip talks to him about his and radhika’s alliance……

42 comments

  1. Loved it 🙂 🙂 🙂 I want arjun to b good n win delip heart 🙂 🙂 🙂 wat delip s doing ????? Omg :O nice dear 🙂 🙂

  2. Rg

    Hi supriya finally Glad to c ur update today. I was waiting for this one. Ardhikas moment ws too gud. Though it was a bit short I suppose. You do write beautifully so plz if possible try to write slightly bigger updates. Why is dilip obsessed abt getting radhika married to Adi. Am sure some other sweet gal can come along 4 Adi.. Will Adi accept it? I hope not…. Pls update soon . I can’t wait… May u write such beautiful stories always… Take care. Stay blessed and happy.

    • Supriya

      Thx for ur comment Rg…..sorry for the short update…. next one will be long…..promise…… abt dilip u don’t worry becoz arjun will handle him……abt adi loving someone…. I hav never thought abt it….will update soon…..love u tc????

  3. aastha

    Superb superb superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love u sooooooooooooooooo much……………I knew you would update today……that’s y I came here ignoring my growling stomach………..and guess what ??? after reading ur story my hunger vanished………….anyway u rocked it my dear !!!!!!

    Finally Adi came to know the truth……..but just like Arjun he too dint believe at 1st……..but our Rads was prepared this time coz she knew ” now or never ” ……….so she brought along with her his mom’s medical certificates………..and when give all the proof’s he realized his fathers innocence………..and hugged his father………..oh the father-son hug was the most colourful scene………..and once again you showed us how beautiful the bond of friendship is !!!!!!!!!!!!!! ………and the party to celebrate reminds me the parable of the prodigal son…….. but alas….our hero entered and came to claim his wife………..how murderous he looked !!!!! Rads very well knew the outcome of his anger…..so she immediately went with him bcoz she knew that otherwise she would be dragged into his car…………and as expected he took her to his farm house………but the punishment that awaited her was least expected……..I too dint expect that this would be the punishment …………oh how hot it was…….he vented out his emotions into her………..and the final ” I love you ” was very sweet…………..so all together you deserve a loud round of applause…………

    Love u………….TC………….muah……….

    • Supriya

      My darling assthu u remained hungry for my update….. How shd I thank u?thanx for such a lovely analysis….. I really loved it to the core dear….. m on the moon after reading ur comment…. darling hats off to u…..will update soon…..even u deserve a round of applause for being sooo sweet…..love u loads tc???????

  4. Gauri

    Hi SUpriya dear…awesome update…happy for Adi when will this Arjun calm down….he is seriously too much…will dilip agree in coming chapters or more hurdles to come…pls post soon 🙂 love you

    • Supriya

      Ohh my beautiful di…..dilip will surely agree and abt new twist they r surely going come….will update soon……love u soo much….muaaaaahhhhhh… Tc???

  5. Dev

    Hey supriya….a vry nc 1 and i lovd it…..bt in precap i think dis dilip is literally mad 2 go on with adi n radi match making even tgough radu is against it….
    Vry vl lovd 2des epi….. N eagrly waiting 4 d nxt…..lots of bear hugs n lovve

    • Supriya

      Hi dev…..u made me smile today…..dilip can’t do anything…… adi wants radhu to be happy….. will post next one soon dear…..loads of love……tight hug….tc??

  6. Wo…..oooow..amazing punishment….we want punishment once more ..two more …three more…more..more..u r really too good..iloved it..keep it up Jaan…finally adi problem solved good..waiting for next one…love u loads. ..tc..

    • Supriya

      Ohh my janu……lovely comment….I m on the cloud nine r8 now….if rads bears punishment again and again then arjun will not leave her even for a second….. poor girl…..will update next one soon…..loads of love tc????

  7. manju

    hi supriya
    awesome update dear
    wow what a punishment arjun babu…

    i know u r writing other ff’s but i loved this ff to the core pls update next part soon
    waiting ur next update

  8. Gianna

    Great going…… Happy for Adi…… Loved Radz punishment.!……… Waiting for the party. Take care

  9. Abi

    hey supriya…

    no comments…..its just superb…serously i dont know that wat i hav to comment….becoz i was shocked abt arjun…i didn’t expect this kind of attitude from him….it reminds me the hero of coffee princess (korean serial)…but its really nice.

    i usually like this kind of possessivness from our loved ones….but from arjun at this much…….i m sorry to say this but don’t like it….becoz…..arjun ,who has some level,attitude…this kind of possession ….i don’t lke it seriously…it really reduces the reputations of arjun…so pls dont make arjun as a foolish man….after all he s our hero,i mean ,u know about our manmarziyan arjun right..he s an uncomparable person….so pls…

    this plot gives an emotional fool appearence to our smart arjun yaar…so don’t like it…pls don’t mistake me….i m saying,wat i have in my mind…if it hurts…i m really sorry yar…but i love ur story narration….by the way where s sam nd neil….they are fav…i want them…

    PLEASE CONSIDER MY REQUEST

    bye….waiting for nxt epi

    • Supriya

      Hii abhi….
      Thx for the comment….. OK I will consider your request in next one…..promise…. I felt good that you talked freely to me…..will update soon….stay blessed stay happy

  10. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww, superb episode. …just loved it to the core…..adi n his father misunderstandings cleared…yippee. …lovely emotional scene……ardhikaaaaaa….omg it was soooooooo beautiful…arjun so possessive n passionate kiss…..rads next time you hurt him then think about the consequences. 😉 …ahhh when this dilip uncle trust arjun?…adi needs love too…plz bring someone special in his life toooo…I’m addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your stories dearrrr…. you’re amazing writer….keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh 😉

    • Supriya

      Thx for the marvelous analysis…… Dear u rocked it…..abt adi then I will just say that we can love only once…..and darling even adi z one of the main characters….. Still I will c what I can do…..will update soon….love u alot….tc???

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