Jaanemaan Part 12

Hey guyzz this z supriya…… Thanx for all your positive comments and sorry for late update…… Here z the part 12…….do read and let me know how it was….
Happy Reading?

Khanna residence,Mumbai….
Manya was bored in Mumbai without Sam because when she was around half of her time was spend setting scores with her sister….actually deep in her heart she was missing Sam but she was too much egoistic to admit the fact…..she loved Sam but was always slightly neglected in Sam’s presence this was the thing which kept her away from Sam all these years……
She was walking miles in her room thinking about how to pass her time…..there was nothing to do when Sam was not there because she lost her golden chance to grumble about Sam….
Manya POV……This z so boring….srsly my life sucks….I don’t have anything to do…..papa won’t send me with my friends to enjoy on some resort and I can’t stay like this….I feel I m stuck at one place just like some mountain which z never going to make a move…..I need to do something otherwise I will bang my head somewhere in some days….

She marched towards her parents room and kept on knocking till samrat didn’t open the door…..
Samrat….can’t you wait for a minute…
Manya….No I can’t wait even for a second pups….
Sam…..What you want….if you are here for permission to go out with your friends then you will be terribly disappointed….. I m not going to entertain your kiddish demands anymore….
Manya with grumpy face…..pups answer this….will you give the same reply to your favourite daughter Sam?
Samrat in a rather worried voice….. Why do you always have to compare yourself to Sam?I don’t know what bad she has done to you that you hate her so much…..
Manya….she snatched my parents love and affection and many more things…. if I start saying then the day will end but my list won’t…..
Samrat tenderly touched her shoulder…
Samrat…..baby Sam z your sister….she loves you dearly and she has not snatched anything from you…..what she has belongs to her….about our love and affection then we both love you equally….
She just jerked his hand away and replied stubbornly……all what you just said z a big lie…..you love Sam more and in that you forgot that you also have a younger daughter who craved for your love since childhood but you kept chanting sam’s name every time….

He tried to hold her but she distanced herself….
Manya…..when I wanted to stay with my family then you had send me to boarding school when I came back to experience your love….you urged me to go to US for high school and there I learned to stay without our so called family….it z just a word for me…..everything z fake….
Samrat in pained voice…… Baby you were always there in our thoughts even if you were not present physically….
Manya…..I don’t believe you and I am not here to waste my time discussing your fake love for me….I want to go back to US….
Samrat…..baby I think you should stay here with us……I don’t want to send you away….please believe I love you as much as I love Sam…..if you are bored then visit rishikesh….it z a very beautiful place and m sure you will enjoy there….
Manya POV….I think I can scheme against Sam better if she z around….. I want to snatch everything from her-friend,family and even Neil…..I will also meet radhika…. she z a good friend of mine….it z beneficial to visit rishikesh….
Manya……book my ticket pups…..I want to go….
Samrat…..Sure baby…
Samrat POV…..I just wish this rishikesh visit brings two sisters close…..I can’t see my one daughter hating other…..
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Sometimes we mistake our dislike for hatred…..siblings can never hate each other……they are not only bound by same blood but also a strong bond of heart…..I don’t know how people make it without a sister….. I can’t stay without talking to her once in a day…..Who needs misters when we have sisters……
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Mishra House….
Arjun was really nervous today because dilip had invited him for lunch which meant there z something cooking in his father-in-law’s head…..
He knocked on the door and radhika who was eagerly waiting for his arrival hurriedly opened the door to receive him….
Her smile showed that she was on cloud nine today….
Arjun gently caressed her cheek with his hand and tucked her hair strands behind….he lovingly slipped his fingers in her thick hair to enjoy the feeling…..
Arjun…..were you waiting for me?I bet you were standing near the door,you doorkeeper….. He added teasing her…
Radhika with a annoyed face…..I am not a doorkeeper….. so stupid of me waiting for a husband like you……
Arjun clutched her waist tightly and pulled her to his chest…..
Arjun…..What you mean by husband like me?
Radhika….. I don’t mean anything…. Leave me what if anyone watches us like this….
Arjun caressed her cheek….let them….I don’t care…..you answer my question….
Mala entered the hall at that time and after seeing them like that she smiled thinking everything z good in her daughter’s life now….thanking god million times…
She coughed to make them aware of her presence….
Radhika pushed Arjun away and gave a embarrassed look to her….
Arjun also was continuously shifting his gaze around the hall to avoid his mother in law gaze….
Mala sensed how uncomfortable they were after being caught like this so changed the topic by greeting arjun….
Mala…..why are you standing there still beta?come inside….
Arjun moved forward and touched her feet….
Arjun….I hope I m not late….
Mala…..no you are not….why are you so much tensed? It z not some board exam….my husband z not a demon to eat you up….
Arjun chuckled…… I am worried maa….he does not like me that much…
She touched his cheek and answered….. I m sure you will impress him….
Radhika pouted her lips and said….you forgot that even I am present here….
Mala….How could I ever forget you…..moreover all this z happening only for your happiness…
Radhika intertwined her hand in arjun’s……ready Mr pati dev…..
Arjun…..yes…
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Sam was trying to cook something because Neil had taunted her about her cooking skills….
Just then there was a noise which made Neil fall from his bed….
He hurriedly walked towards the kitchen….
He got a sign of relief when he saw Sam out of the kitchen…
Neil…..Sam this z the fifth cooker which you have burst…..please drop the idea to learn cooking….. otherwise this house will catch fire someday…..you are not chashni who has magic in her hands…..arjun z very lucky that his wife knows everything…..if I eat your this food whole my life…..then my whole life I will be spending in the washroom….
She made a annoyed face…..I m atleast trying idiot…..no one learns in one day..
Neil….you are torturing me with your food since two weeks…..Sammy please I am kk with the fact that my wife z not a good cook…
Sam…..then why you taunted me that day?
He folded his hands infront of her…..I m sorry Sammy but please stay away from the kitchen…
Sam with a pained voice…..I m sorry Neil…..you are a perfect husband but look at me….I don’t even know to make a tea properly….
He cupped her face and replied….. Sammy I love you and I love you the way you are…..I never wanted a maid to cook for me…..I wanted a wife and for me you are perfect….. I m sorry for taunting you that day…..for me you are the best and you will always be…
She hugged him and kissed his cheek…..
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If you love someone….. Love them the way are……if you try to change them then what you have for them z not love…..accept a person with his capabilities and incapabilities…… That z true love…..
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A girl in her early 20s was playing sitar and a old man was sitting opposite to her…..
She was singing and chanting praise of Krishna….
He Mannmohan He Damodar….
Krishnamurari….
He Natnagar…..
Bhul gaye kya binti sunnkar….
He Mannmohan…
He karunadhar….
He Mannmohan…. He Damodar….
He Natnagar….
Heeee kanha….

The old man praised her……Arpita beti today there was so much perfection in your singing today……I wonder why your family stops you from pursuing your wonderful talent…..
Arpita with a pained face…..Guruji you know baba will never allow me to sing…..he thinks that girls are only made to cook in kitchen….. you know I have been hiding this fact that m learning singing since 12 years…..I can’t stay without music…..I feel I forget to breath if I don’t sing even for a day…..I want to hear people cheering my name when I stand on the stage…..but I know this z impossible…baba will never approve my dream….
The old man just patted her hand and replied…… Believe in your dreams beta…..I am sure your dream will come true….
Arpita…..I just hope so for now I am satisfied that I atleast get to sing secretly….
He replied….don’t marry someone who z a reflection of your father…..I am sure my Arpita will get the best guy ever…..
Arpita….. I don’t want to marry anyone guruji….I just want to fulfill my dreams….
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Manya had reached rishikesh…..
She was enjoying the scenic beauty of the place….
Clutching all her baggage and shopping bags tightly was manya walking on streets of rishikesh….
She had send the driver back because she wanted to explore the place on her own….
Just then she collided with someone which made her fall on that person….
It was none other than adi…..he was here for some consert….
She got up and started wiping the dirt from her body….
Without looking at his face…..hello mister you should put on some big glasses….. you can’t see a girl walking on the road or let me guess you did this intentionally to feel me…..I don’t believe guys can be this cheap in rishikesh….
Adi angrily answered…..it was your mistake miss smart mouth…..you should be the one to be sorry…..
She looked towards him to give it back but she was mesmerized by his looks….
Manya in hesitant voice….. I m sorry…
Adi with a bored face…..you should be….
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Here arjun having his food…..he was so nervous to say anything infront of dilip…
Radhika could read his expression…..she mischievously brushed his feet with hers….touching them sensuously….
He was shocked by her act….he had never expected this from her….
Arjun whispered….. stop radhika…..
Radhika gave it back…..arjun mehra z scared but radhika mehra z not…..
Arjun pleaded her to stop and she mischievously grinned looking at him….
Dilip was observing them…..anything wrong arjun?
Arjun…..no I am fine….
Dilip could watch them talking through their eyes….he just smiled…
Dilip…..i want to talk to you arjun….
Arjun….sure…whenever you want papa…
Dilip….. After lunch if you are free….
Arjun…..yes…
So guyzzz this z it hope you liked it…..plz plz do comment…. and give me your suggestions…. Next one on Wednesday…

Precap….adi meets Arpita…..radhika plays a prank on arjun…..more romance…….dilip and arjun reconcile…..

47 comments

  1. ammu

    nice epi.finally u came with adi’s girl..but manya.. Hope dat sisters will unite.. N Naughty rads.

  2. Gianna

    Good one Supriya loved it especially your line “who needs mistets when u have sisters” so true my dear I wouldn’t trade the bond I have with my sisters for anything. Post soon tc

    • Supriya

      Thx dear….dat line z from frozen movie….I have watched it many times….love you.?

  3. Shree

    Funny funny funny!! Damn !! This one as too good!! Nesam are crazy!! Ardhika. Hahahahaha.. Manya is insecure… Loved it!! Precap is amazing

    Post soon.. Love you ??

  4. NeSam part s really cuteeeeeeeeeee 🙂 🙂 🙂 really they r awesome together 🙂 🙂 arjun n rads part ha ha ha rads naughty 😛 😛 poor arjun 😛 😛 waiting for next update 🙂 love u 🙂

  5. Ohhh suppu dr its long update yup I like nesam part too much & new character too…pls tell me arpita going to be adi’s luv ??? Whn ur going to update devil’s child????…..luv u darling tc

  6. Gauri

    Loved it today it was all romantic…Arjun fearing Dilip…Radhika all naughty….Sam and Neil were cute…now wats wrong with Manya…pls give her some guy so she stops disturbing nesam…love you now how about the other updates….post them soon 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

    • Supriya

      Thx di?was eagerly waiting for your comment…… yes I will update devil today….I promised u…..loads of love tc?

  7. Wow jannu ….this one is marvelous…..radhu naughty girl..poor arjun…ardhika always rocking…nesam part too cute..this new girl arpita intro superb… Adi arpita perfect jodi yaar….I think adi fulfil her dream…waiting for their first meet…precap can’t wait…I loved it core.. …pls upload soon dear…love n tight hug fr u sweety…tc..stay blessed…

  8. aastha

    I know Adi is going to be paired with Arpita ri8 ???????? I loved ur decision my cutie pie…………I could imagine all those scenes……..I loved her personality and character at first sight….she is just perfect for Adi…………I too hate her father’s perspective abt girls being tied to the four walls of the house………………..Manya is just impossible…..how can she hate her own sis ??????? I love my sis very much…..even though at times I get irked by her actions I love her sooooooooooooo much………….I always trust her decisions abt me……….I always ask her opinions abt everything which she dislikes….she wants me to take decisions by myself wich I dont like…..I always look for her nod when I select a dress…if she says perfect I’ll choose that one………………sorry for the blabbering…bt I cud nt stop myself…..I know u will understand coz u too have a sis…………………rads is very naughty….poor Arjun……I loved all the ardhika scenes today……………..the precap is very very interesting….nesam was very funny……I loved Neil’s dialogue a lot……..I was laughing ….thanks for this wonderful epi my cutie pie…………when’ll you post ” love has no limits” and “devil’s child ” ?????????…..love u a lot……………..TC……………is your sis elder or younger than you ????? I guess its the former………do reply……………

    • Supriya

      My swt hrt assthu how shud I thank u for these wonderful comment…….. Darling I love u srsly…….I hav elder sis….she z 6 yrs elder to me…..I m the naughtiest of our house…… I do something and she bears the punishment…… but she never utters a word……I m the apply of her eyes…..I love my sister alot…….yup even I wait for her approval…… now abt love has no limits that’s on Monday……abt devil u will c it by evening…….. Sweety u r a very good person….. Be like this whole your life…..abt Arpita she z little like radhu so yes she will capture adi’s heart someday…….. will update next on Wednesday……. Loads of love……tc????

      • aastha

        Thanks for the reply my cutie pie( u cant escape frm that name coz I love calling you that)……my sis is 3 years older than me….and we are equal equal….no more no less……

  9. subha

    awesome episode .nesam are crazy…ardhika part super………eagerly waitng next one..tc

  10. Rg

    Hi it’s beautiful. Rads and arjuns antics r gud. I loved it. Nesam bonding is gud….. Pls bring in more ardhika moments…well is d new gal going to get Adi or manya ? Pls tell me….

  11. feby

    well…it was awesome…good tat new characters r coming….and i was laughing whn i read ur comment with aastha…the reverse used to happn in my house…my elder sis does naughtiness always and i bear it punishment..lol…and we just fight for her untidyness..i hate untidyness and she intentionally makes me irked spreading her things here and there in our room once she come for weekends…lol.. no one aftr coming to my house wil say tat my sis is a professor wh otaches master degree students…lol….

    • Supriya

      Dear ur elder sis irritates u nd I irritate my elder sis……she z disciplined nd I hav dat chalta hai attitude……but still whatever I do she hides my mistakes from my mom nd dad……she says to me dat m a gift to her from god because she was very lonely before me……she loves me the most in this world…..I could never be like her even if I try……enough of my blabbering…… will update asap……loads of love

      • feby

        same here….my parents always say tat i am the result of her prayers…tat i was born whn she was 10years…lol.. i dont hide frm parents coz she is a mastr mind for making me to get scoldings…hahahaaa…..but as she is sooo older than me..i have to keep quiet… she is very gud… but is very naughty with me…lol….

  12. Roma

    Hi supriya…soooooooo sorryyyyyyy for late comment. …now I could finish reading this marvellous episode. …just loved it to the core..ardhika n nesam were very cuteeeee. …manya too much, now want to take everything form sam…ufff very negative thinking….it’s all in her mind but I’m sure sam love her very much…I loved arpita entry she is very mature before her age…looks like good match for adi….manya mesmerized by adi’s looks…hmmm….I hope dilip accept arjun soon…..wowwww awesome, lovely episode. …thx supriya for updating it…i saw aastha n feby’s comment n your reply…i was smiling….my bond with my sisters is very strange…im the naughy one….now I’m very far from them and still fighting on phone n don’t talk for months but then again start talking…that’s very cute…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh 😉

    • Supriya

      Darling Roma sisters may be far from each other but they r close by heart…..even m the naughtiest in my fmly…..I love my sis a lot……thanks for the ossum comment…. really grateful for ur wonderful words……..will update soon….love u dear….tc

  13. Niharika

    Di please update soon. I waiting from morning for your update. Every 5 10 mi i am looking at the phone for your update and my mom and goma and nana is getting very angry because I am the eldest girl child in the family and my younger cousin bros b day today and i am with the phone or laptop or computer and not helping them. Please update fast di take care.

    • Supriya

      Darling thank u soo much for loving my ff this much…..will try my best to update soon…..will mention the day for next update from next time to save u from scolding from ur mom…..loads of love…tc

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